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Analysis of pitches
Jacob’s Pitch
Kieran’s Pitch
Tafi’s Pitch
Connor’s Pitch
Sophie’s Pitch
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Megan’s Pitch
Adam’s Pitch
Paige’s Pitch
Alfie’s Pitch
Hannah Duncan’s Pitch
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Hannah Goodman’s Pitch
Marakesh’s Pitch
Max’s Pitch
Sahil’s Pitch
Libby’s Pitch
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These screenshots show me analysing the rest of my classmate’s pitches by posting a comment on their blog. I have given them good feedback as I have explained in detail what I think was good about their pitch for their magazine, as well as mentioning negative criticism on their idea so they can make amendments to their idea when it comes to designing it.
Jasmine’s Pitch
Emily’s Pitch
Jess’s Pitch
