Q3

By Dean SmithCandidate num:4823

What have you learnt from audience feedback?

Positive feedback

• Good use of black and white editing to create meaning.

• They also liked the idea of me having a parallel narrative, e.g. when the police officer is on the phone to women little video clips of how it happened is on the full screen and the voice of the police man is in the background.

Positive feedback

• They also like it when the drug deal was happening and I was walking down the alley speeded up and then it went into slow motion as we was exchanging drugs.

Positive feedback

• Also they loved the editing on the colours in the clips, e.g. I changed the colour of the alley way I dulled each colour to give it dull place which give a meaning to the scene.

Thing to be improved

• No punctuation for example (?!”) in my title cards

• More diegetic sound, when I get punched and when ash shuts the door of the car just creates realism

Things to be improved

• Finally someone also suggested that I should change the song half way through to something much more up beat after the car crash.

• I think this is a good idea however it would mean a lot of time spent on it to first find a song that fits then to move everything around the beat.