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    SENTENCE PROBLEMs

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    Sentences are made when we string words

    together to convey a complete thought.

    There are some types of sentence errors thatoccur more frequently than others.

    It's important to know the most common

    types of errors and to avoid them in yourwriting.

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    FRAGMENTS

    RUN-ON SENTENCES

    COMMA SPLICE

    FAULTY PARALLELISM

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    A statement that cannot stand alone as a

    sentence

    A sentence fragment may be lacking a

    subject, a verb, or both

    It might even contain words that look like

    subjects and verbs

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    Common Causes of Sentence Fragments

    When using "ing" words, you must have a helping verb and a

    subject. An "ing" word is not a definite verb; therefore, it will

    not function by itself to form a complete sentence.

    Example:

    Fragment:

    A cure for the disease being researched.

    Sentence:

    A cure for the disease was being researched.Reminders: A helping verb joins with the main verb to express an action or state of being.

    Am, are, be, been, is, was, and were are some common helping verbs.

    A subjectis the person or thing which does the action in the sentence.

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    An infinitive form of a verb will not make a complete

    sentence. Like "ing" words, an infinitive is not a definite

    verb either. An infinitive is the combination ofto and the

    base form of a verb: to see, to be, to do. Infinitives are

    used in sentences, but they require a definite verb tofunction as the action in the sentence.

    Example:

    Fragment:

    The center to plan a mission statement.

    Sentence:

    The center plans to develop a mission statement.

    Common Causes of Sentence Fragments

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    An explanatory phrase or group of explanatory words

    does not make a complete sentence on its own.

    Example:

    Fragment:The teenagers like to watch sports. Such as hockey,

    when they are on television.

    Sentence:The teenagers like to watch sports, such as hockey,

    when they are on television.

    Common Causes of Sentence Fragments

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    Consists of two or more main clauses that are

    run together without proper punctuation

    Is a sentence in which two or

    more independent clause are joined without

    appropriate punctuation or conjunction

    Are sentences that contain several clauses

    connected by coordinating conjunctions such

    as: and, or, but, yet, for, nor, and so

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    Common Causes Of Run-ons

    When an independent clause gives an order

    or directive based on what was said in the

    prior independent clause:

    This next chapter has a lot of difficult information

    in it, you should start studying right away.

    (We could put a period where that comma is and start anew sentence. A semicolon might also work there.)

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    When two independent clauses are

    connected by a transitional expression

    (conjunctive adverb) such as however,

    moreover, nevertheless.Mr. Nguyen has sent his four children to ivy-league

    colleges, however, he has sacrificed his health

    working day and night in that dusty bakery.

    (Again, where that first comma appears, we could have

    used either a period and started a new sentence or a

    semicolon.)

    Common Causes Of Run-ons

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    When the second of two independent clausescontains a pronoun that connects it to the first

    independent clause.

    This computer doesn't make sense to me, it came

    without a manual.(Although these two clauses are quite brief, and the ideas are

    closely related, this is a run-on sentence. We need a period

    where that comma now stands.)

    Most of those computers in the Learning Assistance

    Center are broken already, this proves my point aboutAmerican computer manufacturers.

    Again, two nicely related clauses, incorrectly connected a run-on.

    Use a period to cure this sentence.

    Common Causes Of Run-ons

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    A comma splice occurs when two

    independent clauses (clauses that could be

    sentences on their own) are jammed togetherwith a comma.

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    EXAMPLE:

    His family went to Australia then they

    immigrated to Canada.

    His family went to Australia; then they

    immigrated to Canada.

    The experiment failed, it had been left

    unobserved for too long.

    The experiment failed; it had been leftunobserved for too long.

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    Are parts of a sentence which are listed

    as a sequence, but do not follow the

    same grammatical or structural principle

    Parallelism in writing means that each

    item in a list or comparison should

    follow the same grammatical pattern.

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    Examples of Faulty Parallelism

    The teacher wanted to know which country

    we came from and our future goals.

    The teacher wanted to know which countrywe came from and what our future

    goals were.

    He liked to play basketball and riding horses.

    He liked to play basketball and ride horses.

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    What is the difference between a

    clause and a phrase?

    Clausea group of words that have a

    subject and a verb that must always agree

    Phrasea noun, verb, or preposition with

    all its modifiers- does NOT have a subject and verb which

    agree

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    Noun Phrase

    Definition:-A nounwith all its modifiers

    -A complete subject is always classified

    as a noun phrase.

    Example:

    The frustrated, irritated teachers...

    Noun: teachers

    Modifiers:

    the, frustrated, irritated

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    Verb Phrase

    Defined as a verb with all of its modifiers

    EXAMPLE:

    completely frightenedthe seventh grade students.

    Verb - frightened

    Modifier - completely

    EXAMPLE:would like to improve her grammar skills.

    Verb phrase - would like to improve

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    Defined as the preposition,

    the objectof the preposition (preposition who or what),

    and all its modifiers

    Example: The frustrated, irritated teachers enrolled

    in Mr. Ruffs Grammar for Dummies class.

    preposition - in

    object of the preposition - classmodifiers Mr. Ruffs, Grammar for Dummies

    Prepositional Phrase

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    Adjective Phrase

    A prepositional phrase used as an adjective

    is called an adjective phrase.

    ADJECTIVE: Rosa chose the blue one.

    ADJECTIVE PHRASE: Rosa chose the onewith blue stripes.

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    Adjective Phrases

    An adjective phrase

    modifies a noun or a

    pronoun.

    Adjective phrases

    generally come after the

    words they modify and

    answer the same

    questions that single-work adjectives answer:

    What kind? Which one?

    How

    many?

    How much?

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    Adjective Phrases

    The store with the neon sign is open.

    We bought a CD by Janet Jackson

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    Adverb Phrase

    A prepositional phrase used as an adverb iscalled an adverb phrase.

    ADVERB: The cavalry will reach the fortsoon.

    ADVERB PHRASE: The cavalry will reach thefortby noon.

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    Adverb Phrases

    Adverb phrases answer the same questions

    that single-word adverbs answer:

    When? Where? How? Why?

    Howoften?

    Howlong?

    To whatextent?

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    Adverb Phrases

    We got our new puppy at the animal shelter.

    A puppy is always ready for a game.

    He barks loudly for a puppy.

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    Gerund Phrase

    Definition?

    Has a gerund, plus any complements ormodifiers

    It acts as a noun Examples:

    By swimming daily, Sue hoped to improve herbackstroke

    Swimming dailyis the gerund phrase

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    Participial Phrase

    Definition?

    Has a participle, plus any complements or modifiers

    It acts as an adjective

    Examples:

    Disappointed by his best friend, Roger refused tospeak to him

    Disappointed by his best friendis the participialphrase

    PUNCTUATION NOTE Introductory ones are set off by commas

    Non-essential ones are set off by commas

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    Infinitive Phrase

    Definition?

    Has a infinitive, plus any complements ormodifiers

    It acts as a noun, adjective or adverb Examples:

    She has a plane to catch at eight oclock

    To catch at eight oclockis the infinitivephrase

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    Appositive Phrase

    Definition:A noun phrase that renames the noun it

    follows.

    Also known as a parenthetical phrase

    Example:

    Brad Ruff, the grammar guru, empowers teachers.

    Appositive phrase?

    - the grammar guru

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    Definition:

    Words that contain a subject and a verb

    which must always agree.

    Two types of clauses:

    Independent Clause Dependent Clause

    CLAUSES

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    Independent Clause

    An independent clause MUST HAVE a subject and a

    verb which agree.

    Example:

    The frustrated, irritated teachers finally understood

    the basic grammar concepts.

    All the words in an independent clause can act alone

    as a sentence.

    They are a complete thought.

    I d d l b d

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    Independent clauses can be connected

    in a variety of ways:

    1. By a comma and little conjunction (and, but, or, nor, for,

    yet, and sometimes so).

    2. By a semicolon, by itself.

    3. By a semicolon accompanied by a conjunctive adverb(such as however, moreover, nevertheless, as a result,

    consequently, etc.).

    4. And, of course, independent clauses are often not

    connected by punctuation at all but are separated by a

    period.

    http://cctc.commnet.edu/HP/pages/darling/grammar/conjunctions.htmhttp://cctc.commnet.edu/HP/pages/darling/grammar/marks.htmhttp://cctc.commnet.edu/HP/pages/darling/grammar/transitions.htmhttp://cctc.commnet.edu/HP/pages/darling/grammar/transitions.htmhttp://cctc.commnet.edu/HP/pages/darling/grammar/marks.htmhttp://cctc.commnet.edu/HP/pages/darling/grammar/conjunctions.htm
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    Dependent Clause

    The subject and verb agree, but the words CANNOTstand alone as a complete sentence.

    also known as subordinate clause or relative clause

    Examples:

    since the teachers seekproficiency in grammar

    which shelteredthe children from the storm

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    NOUN CLAUSES

    Noun clauses do anything that a noun can do. They can

    be subjects, objects, and objects of prepositions.

    What Turveydrop has forgotten about American politics

    could fill entire libraries.

    President Johnson finally revealed what he had in mind

    for his congressional leaders.

    Sheila Thistlethwaite has written a marvelous bookabout how American politics and economic processes

    often run counter to common sense.

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    ADVERB CLAUSES

    ADVERB CLAUSES tend to tell us something about the sentences

    main verb: when, why, under what conditions.

    After Jubal Early invaded the outskirts of Washington, Congressional

    leaders took the southern threat more seriously.

    Lincoln insisted on attending the theater that night because it was

    important to demonstrate domestic tranquility.

    Notice how the dependent clauses begin with dependent words, wordsthat subordinate what follows to the rest of the sentence. These words are

    also called subordinating conjunctions.

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    ADJECTIVE CLAUSE

    Dependent clauses can be identified and classified according totheir role in the sentence.

    ADJECTIVE CLAUSES modify nouns or pronouns in the

    rest of the sentence..

    The Internet, which started out as a means for military and academic

    types to share documents, has become a household necessity.

    Tim Berners-Lee, who developed the World Wide Web, could never

    have foreseen the popularity of his invention.

    The graphical user interface (GUI) that we all take for granted

    nowadays is actually a late development in the World Wide Web.

    Notice, now, how the subject is often separated from its verb by

    information represented by the dependent clause.

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    MODIFIER

    A word or phrase that

    qualifies (modifies) aword, phrase or clause.

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    Adjectives (modify nouns and pronouns)

    (for example: the red house)

    Adverbs (modify verbs)

    (for example: he ran QUICKLY)

    Modifier phrases (modify an action or an actor)(LOOKING AT THE CLOCK, he noticed that hewas late)

    TYPES OF MODIFIER

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    MISPLACED MODIFIER

    A misplaced modifier is a word or

    word group whose placement

    suggests that it modifies one wordor phrase when it is intended to

    modify another.

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    Misplaced Modifiers

    i. More beautiful than any human being,

    the explorer noticed the mermaid.

    ii. Wild and untamed, Jack entered the

    jungle.

    iii. Moaning in haunting voices, the house

    contained many ghosts.

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    Examples:

    Incorrect: More beautiful than any human

    being, the explorer noticed the

    mermaid.

    Correct: The explorer noticed the mermaid,

    which was more beautiful than

    any human being.

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    Examples:

    Incorrect: Wild and untamed, Jack entered

    the jungle.

    Correct: Jack entered the wild and

    untamed jungle.

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    FIXING MISPLACED MODIFIERS

    A: Revise the sentence, taking care to

    put modifying words, phrases, and

    clauses in a position that clearlyidentifies the headword and that does

    not awkwardly interrupt a sentence.

    HINT: Usually, you can just expand the

    main clause.

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    Examples:

    Incorrect: Moaning in haunting voices, the

    house contained many ghosts.

    Correct: The house contained many ghosts

    that moaned in haunting voices.

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    DANGLING MODIFIER

    A dangling modifier is a word or

    phrase that cannot logically

    describe, limit, or restrict anyword or word group in the

    sentence.

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    Dangling Modifiers

    i. Using a variety of pedagogical

    techniques, the students were taught

    grammar.

    ii. To improve his essay, each page was

    proofread.

    iii. While reading the novel, the pages that

    contain important information shouldbe marked.

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    FIXING DANGLING MODIFIERS

    A: Add a word or word group that

    the dangling modifier can logically

    modify. HINT: You must usually change the

    subject of the main clause.

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    Examples:

    Incorrect: Using a variety of pedagogical

    techniques, the students were

    taught grammar.

    Correct: Using a variety of pedagogical

    techniques, the teacher taught the

    students grammar.

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    Example:

    Incorrect: To improve his essay, each page

    was proofread.

    Correct: To improve his essay, David

    proofread each page.

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    Examples:

    Incorrect: While reading the novel, the

    pages that contain important

    information should be marked.

    Correct: While reading the novel, you

    should mark the pages that

    contain important information.