My Poetry Journal Irene Jessie Tania Friday, May 4, 2012
My Poetry JournalIrene Jessie Tania
Friday, May 4, 2012
Table of contentsPage 4, Feelings about poetry
Page 5-6, The Tiger Poem and impression on the Tiger
Page 7, Sandeul Poem
Page 8, Choco Chip poem (so much depends upon)
Page 9-11, Stopping By Woods Poem, something about the poem, pictures and reasons
Page 12-15, What dogs look like when they’re asleep, Dog poem, Dog sleeping and Phrased poem about Dog
Page 12-15, What dogs look like when they’re asleep, Dog poem, Dog sleeping and Phrased poem about Dog Page 16-17, Ny poems, The Cupcake and The Flower
Page 18-19, Reflection Questions and Answers
Page 20-21, Love that Fam’ly Poem and Street Nusic Poem By Ne
Page 22-24, Question and Answers About Poetry
Page 25, Dion Poem By Ne
Page 26-27, Haiku by me
Page 28, Limerick
Page 29, Dedications
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Introduction
Hello, I am Jessie and I made
this book based on different
types of poetry. This is an
interesting book and I hope you
enjoy it. Thank you :D
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My feelings about poetry
I like rhymes. It can tell a story by using
rhymes :]
You have to watch out for the beats or
not the poetry will be weird :[
But sometimes its hard to make poetry and
use the correct tone and stuff like that :[
Poetry has to have this some sort of
moral or something
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“THE TIGER” BY WILLIAM BLAKE 1757-1827
TIGER, tiger, burning brightIn the forests of the night,
What immortal hand or eyeCould frame thy fearful symmetry?
In what distant deeps or skiesBurnt the fire of thine eyes?
On what wings dare he aspire?What the hand dare seize the fire?
And what shoulder and what artCould twist the sinews of thy heart?And when thy heart began to beat,
What dread hand and what dread feet?
What the hammer? what the chain?In what furnace was thy brain?What the anvil? What dread grasp
Dare its deadly terrors clasp?
When the stars threw down their spears,And water'd heaven with their tears,
Did He smile His work to see?Did He who made the lamb make thee?
Tiger, tiger, burning brightIn the forests of the night,
What immortal hand or eyeDare frame thy fearful symmetry?
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IMpression on “the tiger”
The person used old
words and he used some
words that I don't
understand, so I don't
really get the poem
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♥ Sandeul♥
Sandeul, Sandeul, you’re so cute,sweeter than my loved star fruit.Oh how oh how you should rejoice,Because we love your angel voice
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COOKIESo much depends
uponA chococookie
With chocolatealmonds
On a plate painted silver
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Stopping by woods on a snowy evening by robert frost
Whose woods these are I think I know.His house is in the village though;He will not see me stopping hereTo watch his woods fill up with snow.
My little horse must think it queerTo stop without a farmhouse nearBetween the woods and frozen lakeThe darkest evening of the year.
He gives his harness bells a shakeTo ask if there is some mistake.The only other sound's the sweepOf easy wind and downy flake.
The woods are lovely, dark and deep.But I have promises to keep,And miles to go before I sleep,And miles to go before I sleep.
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About the poem “stopping by woods on a snowy evening”
Someone is in the forest and he saw a house that is covered
in snow. He was riding his horse and he thinks that the horse
will find it weird if they suddenly stop in the forest and maybe
he is there when the sun is going down.
He stopped the horse again and asked himself if he is lost but
no one answered him, he can only hear the wind. He is praising
the woods beauty but he has something else to do so he has
to go home but his house is miles away.
So the point is, I think he was thinking of passing the forest
but the he got lost with his horse in the forest at night time.
He tried asking someone/himself the way home but he can only
hear the wind that sounds like bells and his home is far away.
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Pictures and reason
<--picture 1
picture 2-->
Picture number 1 fits better because it's a scary forest
and the sun is going down and it is getting dark and
there is also like shadows. But there is no horse and
no person in it. Also, it fits the poem well because the
poem is mysterious and the picture is also mysterious.
So they are compatible for each other.Friday, May 4, 2012
what dogs look like when they’re asleep
When my dog is asleep,His tail is still and his face is calm.
He is a heavy sleeper.He sleeps easily and it’s hard to wake
him up.He has his own bed.
His ears seem to be always up and he never have his ounge out
when he sleeps.
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dog by valerie worthUnder a maple treeThe dog lies down,Lolls his limpTongue, yawns,Rests his long chinCarefully betweenFront paws,Looks up, alert;Chops, with heavyJaws, at a slow fly,Blinks, rollsOn his side,Sighs, closesHis eyes: sleepsAll afternoonIn his loose skin.
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dog sleeping
When I read the poem, it reminds me of my
dog but he doesn't sleep under a tree. He sleeps
on the cold floor and his bed. I think the poem
shows that the dog likes to sleep a lot and
maybe the dog is going to be fat because it
looks likes he doesn't exercise and he only
eats and sleeps. The poem describes a lot about
a dog sleeping and is sort of accurate. Maybe
the author is a dog lover and have a lot of
dogs, thats why he or she wrote a poem
about a dog.
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Phrased poem of dogI’m in the playgroundPlaying in the swings
With ElaineAfter school
Going to the slides,Going to the monkey barsBoth of us are laughing,Both of us are smiling,
After a whileWe went home
And we both saidour goodbyes
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my poem, flower
Every flower is unique,their petals, colors, and shape.Different kinds of flowers,
Everyone loves them.It is amazing how some of themare seen on different seasons.
United,giving us joy.
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my poem, cupcake
Cupcakes are sweet and yummyCan be decorated and look so cute
Can be shared, or eaten aloneEveryone loves them and I love them too
Cupcakes are bundles of joyHave lots of cupcakes,and make people happy
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reflection questions1. What poem was the easiest to write? EXPLAIN
2. Which was the most difficult to write? EXPLAIN
3. Which poem do you feel most proud of?EXPLAIN
4. Were there any poems you just don’t care about? That are not worth keeping? EXPLAIN
5. How has your attitude to writing poems changed these last few weeks?
6. Do you want more challenges or are you going nuts? EXPLAIN
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reflection answers1. The choco cookie is easiest to write because it is about something we like and there’s not a lot of words.
2. The hardest one is the one that is inspired by the dog because there has to be lots of sentences.
3. I like the flower poem the most because I love flowers.
4. No, I care for all of them. Because they are my work and they all have some kind of meaning.
5. I learned more about poems.
6. I am going nuts because we already learned this last year and I can’t rhyme.
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❤I love that fam’ly ❤I love that fam’ly,
like a cow loves to moo
I said I love that fam’ly
like a cow loves to moo
Love to call them in the morning
love to call them
“I love you!”Friday, May 4, 2012
Street musicMotorcycles go vrummm vrummm
Trying not to be lateIt makes a good harmony with the aircon
That goes whoosh whooshCars pass us by and said ‘beep beep’ to us
The plants and the flag pole danced in the windAs it goes creak creak and swish swosh
Trucks go brummmmAs it sped up
As the guards talk,the walkie talkie goes bshh
Everything combined makes street music
Onometopia: 12Friday, May 4, 2012
What impact did it have on you whilst you read?
It is an interesting book but for me, it’s good just to read it once.
When did it begin to get your attention?
The book got my attention on the first page
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How did you feel about the main character?
I think he is shy and I can relate to him because I’m shy when I read my poem but I’m not shy if I’m making poems.
How effective was the layout of the book?
I like the layout because it is easier to read and when you look at it, it’s not confusing.
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was it a good idea to read sections of the book after being exposed to the poems?
Yes.
How did the strategy help you in getting interested in the book?
The book got my attention on the second page because I don’t know whats happening on the first page
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DION, MY DOG………………………..❤He was a puppy
From my other dog
He was so cute
And so happy
With us
When he was
Still a puppy,
He learned to walk,
And he wig – wig - wiggled
As he was walk - walk - walking
We took walks together,
Also with his mom.
They tried to eat frogs
At the playground
And I will always laugh
When they did that
But then
One day,
In a stormy night,
It was raining hard
And Dion was sick
He got a cold
The vets came
They told me he couldn’t be saved
He was brought
Inside my house
As I sat beside him
He was so quiet
He barely moved
But I had to go sleep
And before I slept
I kept wondering
What they will
Do to him,
If he’s okay
The next day
I have school.
Before I got home,
My mom picked me up
And she said
Dion died
My heart sank
But when I got home,
I was too late
He was already buried
So I made him a drawing
And some writings
To rest in peace
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the cherry blossomThe cherry blossomLooks elegant in the
windCalling the spring time
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The meadow
The spring-time meadowWith the beautiful blue sky
and the pretty grass
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Limerick
There was an old lady in Jakarta
Who loved to shout the word Sparta
People thought she was weird
And the old man with a beard
Doesn’t want to barter in Jakarta
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Dedications...❤This book is dedicated to some special people that I love. Such as,
My parents, Jeffry and Suzie,
My aunts, Lis and Sally,
My sister, Stephanie Clarissa,
My bestfriends, Elaine, Thalia, Melissa, and Priska,
The Asian famry, Ivan, Melvin, Sherry, Ivonne, and Rendy
And last but not least,
My madu and my honay, Marina and MinYeong.
I dedicated my book to them because they helped me everyday and
they love me, just like I love them. Thank your for everything~
I love you guys~ ❤Friday, May 4, 2012