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MANY FACES OF ALBUS DUMBLEDORE IN THE SETTING OF FAN WRITING:
THE TRANSFORMATION OF READERS INTO “READER-WRITERS” AND THE IMPLICATIONS OF THEIR PRESENCE IN THE AGE OF ONLINE FANDOM
by
Midori Fujita
A THESIS SUBMITTED IN PARTIAL FULFILLMENT OF THE REQUIREMENTS FOR THE DEGREE OF
This thesis examines the dynamic and changing nature of reader response in the time of
online fandom by examining fan reception of, and response to, the character Dumbledore in J.K.
Rowling’s Harry Potter series. Using the framework of reader reception theory established by
Wolfgang Iser, in particular Iser’s conception of textual indeterminacies, to construct my critical
framework, this work examines Professor Albus Dumbledore as a case study in order to
illuminate and explore how both the text and readers may contribute to the identity formation of
a single character. The research examines twenty-one selected Internet-based works of fan
writing. These writings are both analytical and imaginative, and compose a selection that
illuminates what aspect of Dumbledore’s characters inspired readers’ critical reflection and
inspired their creative re-construction of the original story. This thesis further examines what the
flourishing presence of Harry Potter fan community tells us about the role technological progress
has played and is playing in reshaping the dynamics of reader response. Additionally, this
research explores the blurring boundaries between authors and readers in light of the blooming
culture of fan fiction writing. The themes that Harry Potter fan writers have addressed imply that
subjects of morality, sexuality, failures, amend-making, and questions of individual agency
versus societal constraints are important issues with which contemporary readers of Harry Potter
stories are drawn to explore. Harry Potter, by virtue of being one of the most fervently read text
in the last decade provides a valuable insight what reading and literature may mean to ordinary
people in their everyday lives.
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Preface
This Master’s thesis is original, unpublished, independent work by the author, M. Fujita.
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Table of Contents
Abstract ........................................................................................................................................... ii
Preface............................................................................................................................................ iii
Table of Contents ........................................................................................................................... iv
List of Tables .................................................................................................................................. v
Acknowledgements ........................................................................................................................ vi
Dedication ..................................................................................................................................... vii
1. Origin of Research Interest, Rationale and Significance .......................................................... 1
2. Research Statement ................................................................................................................... 3
3. Literature Review...................................................................................................................... 5 3. 1. Iserʼs Reader Response Theory .......................................................................................... 6 3. 2. The Rise of Social Media and its Implication to Reader Response Theory ..................... 15 3. 3. Dumbledore the Philosopher-King ................................................................................... 20 3. 4. Dumbledore’s Fall from the Pedestal ............................................................................... 22 3. 5. Dumbledore’s Sexuality ................................................................................................... 27 3. 6. Reader-reception and the Question of Authorial Ownership ........................................... 33 3. 7. Reader-reception Observed through Henry Jenkins’ Study on Fan Fiction Writing ....... 35
4. Methodology ........................................................................................................................... 43 4. 1. Dataset and Analysis ........................................................................................................ 45 4. 2. Fan Sites Under Discussion .............................................................................................. 47
5. Examination of Selected Analytical Writings by Fans ........................................................... 50 5. 1. Omnipotent and Benevolent, God-like Dumbledore ........................................................ 52 5. 2. Dumbledore as a Moral Icon ............................................................................................ 53 5. 3. Secrets and Lies, Authority and Control—Dumbledore’s Moral Ambiguity .................. 56 5. 4. Dumbledore For the Greater Good ................................................................................... 60 5. 5. Concluding Thoughts on Fans’ Analytical Writing ......................................................... 65
6. Examination of Selected Creative Writings Posted by Fans .................................................. 67 6. 1. Dumbledore—A Friend and a Protector .......................................................................... 71 6. 2. Dumbledore – the Young and the Restless ...................................................................... 74 6. 3. Dumbledore and the Price of his Love ............................................................................. 76 6. 4. The Gay Dumbledore ....................................................................................................... 81 6. 5. Concluding Thoughts on Fans’ Creative Writing ............................................................ 82
7. Conclusions and Opportunities for Further Studies ................................................................ 85 7.1 Implications of the Study: The Controversy of Authorship and Authority ........................86 7. 2. Concluding Thoughts ....................................................................................................... 96
Works Cited .................................................................................................................................. 99
“powerful opportunities for learning” (“Convergence” 177) beyond the traditional formal
education setting of adult-teachers and child-learners (“Convergence” 177). For example, The
Daily Prophet, an online school newspaper for the fictitious Hogwarts, was launched by the then
thirteen-year-old Heather Lawyer, who was inspired by news reports regarding how Harry
Potter series was encouraging children to read (Jenkins, “Convergence” 171). Wanting to make
her own contribution in support of literacy, Lawyer created The Daily Prophet less than a year
after her first reading of Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone (Jenkins, “Convergence”
171). The Daily Prophet has grown since then and currently (at the time of Jenkins’s research in
2006) hosts a staff of more than one hundred children worldwide, with Lawyer working as the
chief editor of the whole operation (Jenkins, “Convergence” 171).
Jenkins sees Lawyer as a visionary who understood the online realm as a place where
children could explore reading and writing outside the confines of adult supervision as well as a
place where adults, in turn, could access the articulated thoughts of children (“Convergence”
171-4). Understanding this particular nature of online fandom, Lawyer seized her opportunity to
reach out to both children and adults and in the process, attempted to help adults understand how
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children think and what they care about (Jenkins, “Convergence” 171-4). In Lawyer’s own
words,
[The Daily Prophet was launched with the goals of] bringing the world of literature to
life. . . . By creating an online “newspaper” with articles that lead the readers to believe
this fanciful world of Harry Potter to be real, this opens the mind [of children] to
exploring books, diving into the characters, and analyzing great literature. By developing
the mental ability to analyze the written word at a young age, children will find a love for
reading unlike any other. By creating this faux world[,] we are learning, creating, and
enjoying ourselves in a friendly utopian society. (Heather Lawyer qtd. in Jenkins,
“Convergence” 172)
Jenkins asserts that the example of The Daily Prophet supports his initial point that online
fandom contributes to enriching reading experiences for children (“Convergence 176”); Jenkins
suggests further that an exploration of a fictional realm with its rules and limitations leads
children to deepen their understanding of the culture and the society in which they live and
ultimately of themselves (“Convergence” 176).
Jenkins’s observation of fan fiction and online fandom can be tied back to Iserʼs reader
response theory. For example, Iser’s theory of indeterminacies within texts is quite relevant in
discussing some of the popular genres of fan fiction writing, because many fan fiction stories
take advantage of textual indeterminacies Iser refers to. For example, some of the genre
classifications that Jenkins applies include “Alternative Points of View,” “I Wonder If-s,” and
“Missing Moments” (“Convergence” 181). These genres deal respectively with the following: 1)
events that the original texts cover, looked through an alternative point of view other than that of
the protagonist’s;; 2) imagining an alternative path a significant event mentioned in the original
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texts could have taken; 3) writing unwritten parts of Harry Potter stories by filling in the gaps
left in the original texts (Jenkins, “Convergence” 181). Regarding why fan writers are interested
in exploring indeterminacies and gaps left in the original text, one of The Sugar Quill’s editors
explains the process of fan fiction writing as follows:
I don’t write fanfic (sic) to “fix” things, I write it to explore corners that [the
original Harry Potter stories] . . . didn’t have the opportunity to peek into, or to
speculate on what might have led up to something, or what could result from
some other thing[s]. A story that leaves these wonderful corners isn’t a story that
needs fixing, it’s a story that invites exploration. (emphases in original;; qtd. in
Jenkins, “Convergence” 181-2)
No matter what route one takes to explore creative possibilities texts offer, comments from this
fan fiction writer suggest that fan stories are written both in homage to and in criticism of the
original text, or canon, in question (Jenkins, “Convergence” 181-2;; “Textual” 86). While some
fan fiction websites mandate contributors to remain consistent with the facts Rowling sets up in
the texts, other sites have more a liberal understandings of fan fiction, with contributors posting
stories with contents that diverting from or even blatantly contradict the facts established in the
canon (Jenkins, “Convergence” 181).
Fan fiction writing inevitably raises the issue of copying and Jenkins suspects that some
adults may be concerned with the fact that children engage in the act of copyingas opposed to
creating something originalthrough fan fiction writing (“Convergence” 182). Jenkins counters
such criticism, however, by noting the historically established practice of apprentice artists
learning their craft by copying the works of great masters before they would start developing
their own styles and thus began to create their original pieces of art (“Convergence” 182).
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Jenkins, at the same time, acknowledges grey areas surrounding fan fiction writing that tread on
an ambiguous boundary in terms of intellectual property and copyright laws (“Convergence”
189). He maintains that it is not clear whether fan fiction writing, which he coins as “amateur
creative expression” (Jenkins, “Convergence” 189), falls under the clause of fair-use protections
under the current U.S. copyright law (“Convergence” 189). Additionally, Jenkins argues that the
laws of society are not current enough to deal with the reality of this culture of participation that
has been established within the realm of online fandom (“Convergence” 189). At this point in
time, it is safe to surmise is that the issue of what is fair use under the copyright and intellectual
property law will certainly continue to be one of the focal points of dialogue between authors and
readers when discussing online fandom and fan writing.
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4. Methodology
This thesis follows the path suggested by Vandana Saxena in examining how readers
employ writing in response to their acts of reading as a method of critiquing the original text, or
perhaps as a method of complementing and extending the text, and readers do so in exploration
of their own potentiality as writers (Saxena). More specifically, the points of examination are on
1) how readers’ online postings reveal multiple interpretative potentialities of an original literary
text as well as 2) what could be discerned from such postings, specifically with regards to the
aspects of the Harry Potter story that resonate with contemporary readers. In order to narrow
down the scope of this investigation, the examination of reader postings is restricted to postings
that look at the Harry Potter books through the lens of a single character: Professor Dumbledore.
There are a plethora of Harry Potter related fan sites and diverse possible avenues for fan
creation—be they fan videos, music, podcasts, fan fiction, or fan art—that I can turn to for the
investigation of fan responses; however, for the purpose of this Master’s thesis, the focus is
placed on longer pieces of writing by readers, both analytical and imaginative, submitted to
selected fan-sites. While there are a number of fan sites that offer places for readers to submit
their writing, this study is limited to samples of writing from two sites for critical writing
(Mugglenet and The Leaky Cauldron), and one site for creative writing (FanFiction.net). I
selected these sites from a range of candidates because they are fan-driven, offer some degree of
an editing process, are easy to navigate, and include extensive fan submissions. Rowling’s own
official Harry Potter websitePottermoreis intentionally excluded from the selection because
the focus of this thesis is placed on reader-initiated activities and communications as opposed to
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writer-driven initiatives. 1 The focus of analysis is on longer submissions rather than, say,
dialogic and chat-based forum discussions. Longer written submissions enable readers to express
and develop their personal or analytical response, and to offer their own narrative extensions of
the story. Finally, the analysis is limited to submissions that include substantive response to the
character of Dumbledore.
The particular focus is placed on the examination of how reader-writers attempt to bridge
textual indeterminacies. In terms of the nature of submissions, there are two broad genres that I
considered: 1) critical or analytical responses rely on textual analysis for interpretations of
Dumbledore’s character;; 2) fan fiction writers imaginatively explore many different potentialities
of Dumbledore’s character. In regards to the latter, preliminary investigation suggested that some
fan writers have used the incident of three Muggle boys’ taunting Ariana (Dumbledore’s sister),
her resulting mental instability, and her father’s reaction and subsequent incarceration as a source
of inspiration for narratives about how this trauma may have affected Dumbledore in his
childhood. Other fan writers, inspired by Rowling’s extra-textual statement about Dumbledore’s
sexuality, endeavour to write love stories, focusing on the romantic relationship between
Dumbledore and Grindelwald. Stories created by these fan writers reveal their interpretation of
the character as well as how carefully they have analysed the original text in order to fill in some
of the textual indeterminacies. Explicit in these narratives may be answers as to the why Harry
Potter series is so captivating for many.
1. For further review of Rowling’s Pottermore site, one could refer to Savanna Sharp’s “J.K.
Rowling’s Innovative and Authoritative Online Presence” in Teaching with Harry Potter: Essays
on Classroom Wizardry from Elementary School to College.
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4.1. Dataset and Analysis
As noted earlier, the investigation of reader writings is limited to the following three
sites: The Leaky Cauldron, Mugglenet, and FanFiction.net. Preliminary analysis shows that, at
the time of investigation in the spring of 2014, there were more than a few thousand fan fiction
stories and a total of eleven pieces of analytical writing with a substantive focus on Dumbledore
posted on these three sites. The inclusion criteria for the chosen postings are: 1) either the writer
includes Dumbledore as an active character in a fan narrative or Dumbledore is discussed
extensively in writers’ reflective analysis;; and 2) writing pieces are 500 words or more for
analytical writing and between 3000 and 8000 words for creative writing. Twenty-one
submissions that meet these criteria comprise my data set. All works are published and freely
available to read outside of any password-protected communities and therefore it is not necessary
to obtain consent from the writers to analyse this set of writings.
The mode of analysis is textual hermeneutics, entailing identification of key issues and
recurring themes across the collection of fan writings (e.g., Kinsella, “Hermeneutics and Critical
Hermeneutics”). Kinsella expands on the critical understanding of critical hermeneutics and
describes it as a study of “the art of interpretation” (n.pag.) often employed in empirical
qualitative research. Kinsella observes that critical hermeneutics directs researchers to approach
an act of interpretation “not to develop a procedure of understanding, but rather to clarify the
interpretative conditions in which understanding takes place” (n.pag.). The conditions Kinsella
mentions include “the roles of language and historicity in interpretation” (n.pag.) as well as “the
prejudices individuals bring to the interpretive event” (n.pag.). Given these conditions and the
subjectivity each interpreter brings to an interpretive event, critical hermeneutics asserts that
there can never be one single interpretation that is objective and authoritative (Kinsella n.pag.).
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Consequently, theorists of critical hermeneutics acknowledge and are reconciled with the
limitations of human beings to attain complete understanding of a text (Kinsella n.pag.). They
are interested to know what historical and social conditions contribute to shaping an interpreter’s
particular interpretive response (Kinsella n.pag.). From a critical hermeneutic standpoint,
therefore, “the uniqueness of each [interpreter’s] vantage point” (Kinsella n.pag.) is valued, and
“interpretation is seen as an inescapable feature of all human efforts to understand” (Kinsella
n.pag.) what is unknowable in its entirety.
To reiterate, the study of critical hermeneutics derives its roots from “an area of
philosophy that deals with the theory and practice of interpretation” (Philips and Brown 1547).
In its practical application, a particular attention is paid towards a transformative as opposed to
an informative nature of communication as a recipient of communications interprets what is
received (Philips and Brown 1548). A critical hermeneutic approach is often used by scholars of
social studies in an examination of organisational communicationsfor example, (1) how a
system of shared meanings can be produced and maintained within an organisation among
employees at different level of hierarchy or (2) how an advertisement with a marketing purpose
is received and interpreted by a consumer (Philips and Brown 1548). Philip and Brown argue
that critical hermeneutics directs scholars to approach a given text or communication from both
textual and socio-historical perspectives with a strong focus on how these two analyses come
together (1554-55). According to Philips and Brown, a critical element of a critical hermeneutic
approach is augmented by its attention to power relations and power dynamics within an
organisation as well as between creators and receivers of the communication (1554-55).
Researchers who employ a critical hermeneutic approach are engaged in an empirical
examination of a text or communication in question (Philips and Brown 1548). I incorporate this
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empirical approach to communications that critical hermeneutics takes, with an understanding
that fan writing is a form of communication between a reader and a text (and perhaps, by
extension, an author), and within this communication lies power dynamics.
Preliminary analysis of both the analytical and creative writing showed and later
investigation confirmed that the following issues are important to readers: 1) Dumbledore as God
figure; 2) Dumbledore’s stance on destiny and free will; 3) Dumbledore’s early childhood and
his relationship with his family; 4) Dumbledore’s authority and control over other characters; 5)
the trauma and a sense of guilt Dumbledore carries over his sister’s death; 6) Dumbledore’s
sexuality; and 7) authorial intervention post-publication. These themes imply that issues of
morality, sexuality, subjects of remorse and atonement, as well as questions regarding individual
agency versus societal constraints are some of the important issues with which contemporary
readers of Harry Potter stories struggle. In order to track the extent at which particular themes
are explored by critical versus creative writers, I created an interpretive matrix, which can be
found in the Appendix A. One challenge of examining reader response via social media sites is
that it is not possible to determine the respondents’ gender or age beyond what is reported, and
what is reported may be part of the given fan writer’s constructed Internet identity. In light of
this particular challenge, I have not factored in how particular demographics might correlate with
forms of response; rather, I focus on broader themes and issues taken up by readers with a view
to understand what they find striking or evocative about the texts and how they interpret these
features.
4.2. Fan Sites Under Discussion
Mugglenet was created by Emerson Spartz in 1999, when Spartz was just twelve years
old (Novosel 55). According to the “About Us” section of the website, the site has team members
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who work as managing editors, creative and marketing directors, content supervisors, as well as
social media coordinators (Mugglenet). Mugglenet offers a plethora of avenues for readers to
participate in fan activities (e.g., podcasts, blog entries, discussion boards, and chat rooms to
name a few). Mugglenet covers broader aspects of the Harry Potter phenomena and its attention
is not solely on the original books but also includes the movie versions, as well as the author
herself. My focus for this investigation is on Mugglenet’s editorial section, “The Quibbler,”
where readers post their analytical essays. The primary reason for choosing this section is due to
the existence of submission guidelines and editorial processes. The submission guidelines dictate
that essays submitted must be between 500 and 2,000 words and quotations from the original
texts are properly cited.
Another major Harry Potter fan site—The Leaky Cauldron—was launched in July 2000,
shortly before the publication of The Goblet of Fire (The Leaky Cauldron, “Timeline”).
According to “A Brief (Believe It Or Not) History of The Leaky Cauldron,” the essay section for
The Leaky Cauldron, “Scribbulus,” was born out of the website’s forumThe Leaky
Loungewhen frequent lengthy and in-depth discussions among the fans led the organisers to
realise the potential for an editorial section to which readers could submit their longer critical
pieces. There are 28 issues from May 2006 to September 2011 and editors of the website are
closely involved in the process of choosing and editing the essays submitted by readers (The
Leaky Cauldron, “Scribbulus”). As with “The Quibbler” on Mugglenet, “Scribbulus” has
submission guidelines, which dictate that essays must be at least 1,000 words, and the editorial
team offers peer reviews to ensure quality of writing (The Leaky Cauldron, “Scribbulus”).
While other fan sites, including Mugglenet, have published large numbers of fan fiction
stories, I have chosen FanFiction.net for an investigation of fan writing for the purpose of this
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study. I made this choice because FanFiction.net appeared to offer quite a deep pool of fan
fiction stories. Alexandra Alter reported in 2013 that FanFiction.net was the largest fan fiction
site on the Internet in 2013 and, at the time of Alter’s article’s publication, offered over 600,000
creative writings based on Harry Potter stories (Alter). Secondly, Fanfiction.net offers by far the
least challenges with regards to navigating the website due to the website’s search engine and
filter systems, which allow users to search quite easily for fan fiction stories involving a
particular character. In comparison, while Mugglenet allows a straightforward search for stories
that fall into particular categoriessuch as stories that take place in an “Alternative Universe,”
stories that explore romantic pairings of characters, or stories with “Dark/Angsty (sic)”
elementsthere are limitations when searching for stories related to a particular character.
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5. Examination of Selected Analytical Writings by Fans
In this section, I examine analytical essays posted by fans to the two selected fan
sitesspecifically, one from Mugglenet and ten from The Leaky Cauldron. Among the 119
editorial essays published by Mugglenet, there were three that featured Dumbledore at the time
of analysis in June 2014. Of those three, two were excluded, one because it was well below the
minimum word length stipulated for selection and one because, on closer examination, it turned
out that the piece was incorrectly categorised as featuring Dumbledore. Among the 194 stories
published in the course of 28 issues of editorial essays by The Leaky Cauldron site between 2006
and 2011, there are 11 essays that feature Dumbledore as the primary focus of analysis. Among
the 11, Gumshoe’s essay titled “Dumbledore is Not Dead” was eliminated from the dataset
because the focus of the essay turned out to be on the examination of Slughorn rather than
Dumbledore.
The main focus of this investigation is to study what aspects of Dumbledore’s character
prompted readers not only to write about Harry Potter but also to publish their creations online.
Some ask critical questions about Dumbledore’s character, rethinking certain previously held
perceptions about the character and shedding light on some of the relatively less explored
territories regarding his disposition. Some of the key themes analytical reader-writers explore are
somewhat different from those addressed by creative reader-writers. In order to illuminate what
common threads could be observed among readers’ analytical essays, the following examination
is divided into four sections according to the prominent topics and sub-topics that reader-writers
examine. The divisions of themes are as follows (see also Table 1 below and Appendix A for
details):
1. Dumbledore as an almost omnipotent and benevolent God-like figure.
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Appearing in essays by birthday twins, Caltheous.
2. Dumbledore as an embodiment of the story’s morality.
Appearing in essays by Mary Wanguard, Rosamond Bane.
(Sub-topic of Wanguard: the value of online fandom as it related to reader response).
3. Dumbledore’s moral ambiguityhis propensity for secrecy and lies in order to
maintain authority and control.
Appearing in essays by Emma; Sly_Like_Slytherin; Riley Leonhardt; Ib4075;
TRC07.
4. Dumbledore as a war general working for the greater good.
Appearing in essays by Theowyn; Sarah Putnam Park.
The last point offers an interesting standpoint in examining the character of Dumbledore, for the
principle of “for the greater good” is the very one Dumbledore uses in his youth, alongside
Grindelwald, to justify the desire for establishing wizard dominance over Muggles. It is also the
principle he renounces after his friendship with Grindelwald results in the death of a sister.
Ironically, in his effort to defeat Voldemort, Dumbledore faces the questions of what is necessary
for the greater good. He is struck with the dilemma of protecting the peace and freedom of
society as a whole, while at the same time striving to protect a few whom he loves. This question
becomes a point of contention for Dumbledore when faced with a possibility of having to let go
of his determination to protect the life of loved ones in light of what must be done to save those
who are persecuted by Voldemort and his minions.
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Table 1. Details of fan’s critical essays examined.
Author Word Count Title
1 birthday twins 2547 words The Amazing Invisible Dumbledores. 2
Caltheous 2950 words St. Dumbledore’s Feast: The Secret Identity of Albus Dumbledore Revealed.
3 Mary Wanguard 3400 words
Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows and Me. The Causes of Crying and Squee-ing.
4 Rosamonde Bane 2800 words
Love as a Weapon: The Moral Choices at the Heart of Harry Potter.
5 Emma 5146 words Harry Potter and the Distinction Between Good and Evil. 6
Sly_Like_Slytherin 582 words The Dumbledore-Severus Relationship, Was it Really Loyalty Between Them?
7 Riley Leonhardt 2712 words
It is Out Choices, Harry, That Show What We Truly Are, Far More Than Our Abilities’: Harry Potter and Values.
8 Ib4075 1704 words Albus Dumbledore: Saint, Sinner, and Harry’s True Father. 9
The Rotfang Conspiracy ’07 6183 words Still Got Your Wand in a Knot?: Wandlore and The Elder Want Examined.
10 Theowyn 4287 words The Life and Lies of Albus Dumbledore. 11
Sarah Putnam Park 3572 words Dumbledorian Ethics: How Albus Dumbledore Combine Utilitarianism and Compassion.
11 stories examined in total
5.1. Omnipotent and Benevolent, God-like Dumbledore
Two of the essay contributors focus their attention on Dumbledore’s good-heartedness
and his apparent invincibility. These writers are birthday twins and Caltheous. Their writings
appear to represent a more simplified view of Dumbledore’ character; however, it should be
noted that birthday twin’s opinion piece was posted before the writer’s reading of the seventh
book, which informed many of the readers of Dumbledore’s multifaceted and more intricate
identity. A brief review of birthday twins and Caltheous’ writings reveals that regardless of when
the essays were written, Dumbledore’s goodness is an important quality of his character.
birthday twins’ comment in “The Amazing Invisible Dumbledores” summarises the author’s
respect for the integrity and benevolence of Dumbledore, of which feeling, I suspect, was shared
by many of the readers uniformly before the publication of The Deathly Hallows: “Dumbledore
has always had an omniscient quality, knowing more than [he lets on]” (birthday twin n.pag.).
The author goes on to speculate the extent of Dumbledore’s magical ability without delving
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deeper into the workings of his heart and mind. Yet, it is worth noting that this essay, written
before The Deathly Hallows, asserts general reader perception that Dumbledore is someone
extraordinary who is capable of achieving the impossible.
In “St. Dumbledore’s Feast: The Secret Identity of Albus Dumbledore Revealed,”
Caltheous suggests that Dumbledore has a secret identitySanta Clausby using image
comparisons from illustrated book covers featuring Dumbledore to portrayals of Dumbledore by
actors in film versions. Although the playful and whimsical comparison of Dumbledore to Santa
Clause may detract from the seriousness of Caltheous’ analytical piece, this essay justifiably
suggests how some readers view Dumbledore as someone who protects and celebrates children,
delivering valuable gifts to them in the process, just like St. Nicholas, “the patron saint of
schoolchildren” (Caltheous n.pag.).
5.2. Dumbledore as a Moral Icon
Two of the eleven analytical writers perceive Dumbledore as an embodiment of the
story’s morality, revealing the motif of Dumbledore as a God-like figure. For example, in her
essay, “Love as a Weapon: The Moral Choices at the Heart of Harry Potter,” Rosamonde Bane
identifies herself as an adult reader and observes that Harry Potter offers “over 3,000 pages of an
increasingly sophisticated and mature saga that deals frankly with matters of war, torture, and
death” (Bane n.pag.). Bane perceives the concept of love that Dumbledore represents as
something with many layers, such as “kindness toward strangers” or “acts of self-sacrifice”
(Bane n.pag.). While awaiting the publication of the seventh book, Bane observed, “[t]here is a
time-honored place in children’s literature for fairy tales, in which the princess is awakened with
a kiss and true love saves the day, . . . [t]he way she [Rowling] has handled the subject thus far
suggests that she intends for the Harry Potter books to reflect an intellectually and morally
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complex understanding of love” (Bane n.pag.). Bane further observes that Dumbledore’s
teaching would most likely resonate with readers’ sense of morality as they witness how Harry
learns from Dumbledore that one’s moral fibre is gauged by choices one makes to do good upon
navigating a difficult moral terrain.
Like Bane, Mary Wanguard perceives Dumbledore as the chief emissary of the books’
moral messages. In “Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows and Me: The Causes of Crying and
Squee-ing,” Wanguard states that Dumbledore is her favourite character and describes him as her
role model“an ideal of whom I thought when trying to help my friends with maths (sic)”
(n.pag.). She also describes how she appreciates and admires Dumbledore’s knowledge,
humanity, his sense of humour, and his approach of not taking himself too seriously (Wanguard).
Wanguard identifies herself as a high school student from Eastern Europe on her way to
becoming a university student. Perhaps, Wanguard made such a strong personal connection with
Dumbledore because the social and political turmoil that she experienced in her own life brought
her attention to the importance of a honourable leader. Reflecting back on her childhood,
Wanguard remembers growing up in a country under tremendous pressure to establish newly
gained independence from the USSR (Wanguard). While the new system brought many
improvements for citizens such as civil and political freedom, Wanguard states, the stress of a
capitalist society made many people angry and exhausted by the pressure to become successful
and prosperous (Wanguard). Rowling’s words regarding how people choose what is easy over
what is right appear to resonate with Wanguard’s own experience. Connecting the book’s
message with her own life, Wanguard acknowledges that the Harry Potter books have provided
the courage and guidance for her to recognise what is immoral in her society, in particular, how
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easily a person disregards his or her own principles in order to achieve material gain and success
in a newly re-organised society (Wanguard).
Having firmly established high respect for Dumbledore, Wanguard admits she was “most
shocked” when Dumbledore’s character turned “controversial” (n.pag.) in The Deathly Hallows.
She confesses that the seventh book “shook [her] image of Dumbledore so violently” (Wanguard
n.pag.) that she struggled to reconcile the idealised image of Dumbledore—the mirror of
goodness—with what was revealed about him in the last book (Wanguard). Upon some
reflection, Wanguard’s focus shifted from Dumbledore’s benevolence and moral authority to
“his sadness, his loneliness” (n.pag.) in the knowledge of the mistakes he made and the secrets
he kept. Wanguard shares her youthful acknowledgement with regards to Dumbledore’s failings
that perhaps benevolence does not equal perfection and a flawed individual could still try to do
some good in the world. What Wanguard indirectly indicates in her essay is how drastically the
atmosphere changes when the series progresses to book seven. Alongside Harry, Ron, and
Hermione, who leave the protective walls of Hogwarts, the seventh book demands emotional
maturity from readers, asking them to likewise leave the safety of childhood and the comforting
certainty of a happy ending (Wanguard).
Wanguard makes another illuminating point in her essay with regards to the pre-
eminence of online fandom when she explains why she decided to share her stories through this
specific venue. Wanguard states: “I know that I probably felt nothing too unique, nothing
different from many other readers. And yet I share those feelings here and now because I’ve got
few other places where I can hope to be understood” (Wanguard n.pag). Wanguard states that
school did not offer spaces for students to share their feelings about their literary experiences and
her family members were not keen on discussing literature. Wanguard confesses in her essay, the
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encounter with online Harry Potter fandom enabled her to share her literary experiences with
others for the first time in her young adult life. She describes other participants in the online
realm as “always welcoming” (Wanguard n.pag.), respectful, and ready to invite likeminded
readers to join in the discussions (Wanguard). What can be observed through Wanguard’s
personal experience is how the inclusiveness and non-hierarchical atmosphere of online fandom
can be attractive to young readers
5.3. Secrets and Lies, Authority and Control—Dumbledore’s Moral Ambiguity
The remaining seven writers delve deeper into the intricacy of Dumbledore’s character
and, while acknowledging his apparent benevolence, examine Dumbledore’s actions in light of
his failings revealed in The Deathly Hallows. For example, having the advantage of writing after
the publication of The Deathly Hallows, Emma focuses on the moral ambivalence Dumbledore
displays. Emma sets out to answer this question: “[Is] Dumbledore a wise loving wizard or [an]
unemotionally calculating [one]?” (n.pag.). Emma justifies Dumbledore’s actions in his youth—
his fervent obsession with the Hallows as well as his darker desire to establish wizard
dominance—as “a boy’s mistake [rather] than . . . an unforgivable failure” (Emma n.pag.).
However, Emma strongly criticises Dumbledore’s treatment of Snape. She argues that while
Snape shows unfailing loyalty to Dumbledore, Dumbledore does not return the courtesy by, for
example, trusting Snape with vital information even when the lack of knowledge is likely to
jeopardise his ability to protect himself (Emma). Emma questions why Dumbledore does not
have the decency to warn Snape of the danger the Elder Wand brings, when Dumbledore clearly
expects Voldemort to go after Snape as the last possessor of the Elder Wand. Emma infers that
while Dumbledore repeatedly emphasises the importance of loyalty and trust in the first six
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books of the series, the seventh book reveals how Dumbledore himself might have fallen short of
living up to his own standard (Emma).
Emma concludes that while some of Dumbledore’s actions can be excused on the
grounds of keeping vital information safe from Voldemort and his supporters, Dumbledore’s
choice to put Snape’s life in mortal danger without his consent reveals “a callous lack of caring
for a man who has shown him outstanding levels of loyalty” (Emma n.pag.). Sly_Like_Slytherin
(SLS), who writes in the editorial section of Mugglenet, points likewise to this apparent lack of
concern for Snape’s life on Dumbledore’s part as an indicator of his moral failings. SLS argues
that Dumbledore is undeserving of Snape’s trust, because although Snape is often represented as
a morally grey character, he exhibits strong moral fibre by upholding the memory of Lily Evans
and remaining truly loyal to Dumbledore. SLS asks: if remorse is a cure for a maimed soul
according to Rowling, where in the texts do we see Dumbledore’s remorse for putting so many
of his allies and friends in danger (SLS n.pag.)?
The following three writers seem to take a similar view to Emma and SLS, all
highlighting the hypocrisy of Dumbledore’s conduct. In the essay, “‘It Is Our Choices, Harry,
That Show What We Truly Are, Far More Than Our Abilities’: Harry Potter and Values,” Riley
Leonhardt questions Dumbledore’s propensity for withholding valuable information, information
without which the individual’s life can be jeopardised, from the person in question (Leonhardt).
The first part of the title of Leonhardt’s essay is a direct quote from Dumbledore in The Chamber
of Secrets (Rowling, Chamber 245), and the reference is a little ironic because it is the choices
Dumbledore makes that are under scrutiny in the essay. It appears that one of the common
threads found in fan’s critical essays focusing on the character of Dumbledore is this following
point: in the name of the greater good, Dumbledore plays God, manipulating others and keeping
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the grand plan only to himself. In his secrecy, Dumbledore appears to defy the moral compass he
imposes on others, thereby challenging the validity of his principles by his own duplicity.
One other repeated point reader-writers make is Dumbledore’s predisposition for privacy
and reserve, his control of appearance under the façade of wit and eccentricity. A notable
exception to the detachment and distance Dumbledore maintains from others is Harry. In the
essay, “Saint, Sinner, and Harry’s True Father,” Ib4075 observes how Dumbledore matures in
his understanding of himself through his relationship with Harry. Ib4075 perceives the
relationship between Harry and Dumbledore as one that is mutually nurturing. For Harry,
“Dumbledore’s concern . . . becomes a healing part of his growing up at Hogwarts” (Ib4075
n.pag.), whereas for Dumbledore, Harry becomes more to Dumbledore than just a pawn who fits
into his great plan of defeating Voldemort (Ib4075). Ib4075 suspects that as Dumbledore grows
to know Harry deeply, “Harry’s happiness becomes [Dumbledore’s] chief concern [because
while] the ‘greater good’ is nameless and faceless . . . Harry is a real boy who needs his
protection and yet has more heart and soul than Dumbledore ever imagined” (Ib4075 n.pag.).
As Ib4075 maintains, at the outset of the story, readers see, through Harry’s eyes, only
the best side of DumbledoreDumbledore as a man of great wisdom, whose intelligence is
supported by his incredible capacity for kindness and compassion (Ib4075). What Ib4075 is
interested in examining is not the earlier relationship between Harry and Dumbledore, where
Dumbledore is perceived to be Harry’s great mentor, but their later relationship where
Dumbledore’s fallibility and flaws are made known to Harry, and with him, readers (Ib4075).
The Deathly Hallows indeed paints a rather sinister picture of Dumbledore as a man who plays a
dangerous game, a game in which people’s lives are at stake. For example, certain events imply
that Dumbledore is prepared to risk Harry’s life without his consent when Dumbledore
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“gambles that he has guessed rightly how to get Harry to that moment [of his ultimate
confrontation with Voldemort]” (Ib4075). Observing Dumbledore to be “a very shrewd
tactician” whose brilliance is marked by “its coldness not warmth” (Ib4075 n.pag.), what Ib4075
finds disturbing here is how seemingly easy it is for Dumbledore to risk Harry’s life.
Nevertheless, Ib4075 argues that Dumbledore succeeds at regaining both Harry and readers’
trust, when he humbly admits his failings to Harry in The Deathly Hallows at the imaginary
King’s Cross station. In Ib4075’s own words, “Dumbledore disarms us all again, not with his
skill but with his humility and humanity” (Ib4075 n.pag.). Lastly, Ib4075 concludes that the
relationship between Dumbledore and Harry parallels that of parent and child, in which parents
dream that their child “will succeed where they have failed” (Ib4075 n.pag.) and “the lessons
they learned will permit their children to move forward” (Ib4075 n.pag.). In light of this view,
Ib4075 suggests that while Dumbledore may not have been a saint, he might have done right by
Harry. Ib4075 suggests this because the most important message Dumbledore tries to convey to
Harry—“the power of love and the consequences of life without it” (Ib4075 n.pag.)seems to
be embodied by Harry to the point that he has greatly surpassed his mentor (Ib4075). As an
example of this, one could refer to how Harry succeeds at uniting the Deathly Hallows acting out
of love for his family and friends without falling in the trap of advancing his selfish interests
using the Hallows (Rowling, Deathly 21-24, 288-293, 571-579).
Likewise, The Rotfang Conspiracy ’07 (TRC07) defends Dumbledore’s treatment of
Harry, while agreeing with other fan writers of their accusations of Dumbledore’s treatment of
Snape. TRC07’s essay challenges fellow readers to examine another complex layer of
Dumbledore’s character. TRC07 acknowledges, in agreement with Ib4075, that one possible
exception to Dumbledore’s habit of keeping emotional distance from others is his protégé Harry.
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Yet, in regards to the chief accusation many fan writers place on Dumbledore—the planning of
Harry’s opportune death—TRC07 presents an interesting case by suggesting that perhaps it was
essential for Dumbledore to plan exactly how Harry should be killed in order to protect Harry’s
soul. TRC07 argues that had Dumbledore not planned for Voldemort to attack Harry with a
Killing Curse, Harry’s soul would have been at risk of remaining “conjoined with Voldemort’s
parasitic soul fragment” (TRC07 n.pag.). The point TRC07 makes here is this: while
Dumbledore may have appeared careless about protecting Harry’s life, what Dumbledore cared
for more than Harry’s life was the integrity and wholeness of his soul. While TRC07 pardons
Dumbledore on this front, he or she concurs with other reader-writers such as Emma and SLS
with regards to Dumbledore’s treatment of Snape. TRC07 observes that Dumbledore left Snape
in extreme danger, failing to foresee certain events that complicated and jeopardised his great
scheme. By making allowances for Dumbledore’s genuine concern for Harry even in light of his
cold, calculating Machiavellian side, TRC07’s analysis consequently adds more intricacy to the
understandings of Dumbledore’s character.
5.4. Dumbledore for the Greater Good
To further the discussion of Dumbledore’s moral ambiguity, Theowyn and Sara Putnam
Park present an interesting angle, which could be described as the angle of “General
Dumbledore.” In Theowyn’s analytical contribution to The Leaky Cauldron, “The life and Lies
of Albus Dumbledore,” Theowyn analyses Dumbledore by situating him in a position of a
wartime commander and a strategist. To an extent, The Order of Phoenix gives more dimensions
to Dumbledore’s character by providing readers a glimpse into the lives of the members of the
Order of Phoenix and how they see its leader, Dumbledore. This added adult perspective on
Dumbledore helps us perceive Dumbledore not only as a teacher but also as a rebel leader. In this
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role, Dumbledore exhibits a great level of secretiveness and strong reservations towards
revealing the details of his plans to his comrades (Rowling, Deathly 65, 174, 549). Perhaps, it is
the necessity of being a leader not to be on equal ground with common soldiers; yet, it is
noticeable that Dumbledore is largely isolated from the rest of the Order members. Theowyn
questions whether Dumbledore’s apparently heartless decision-making can be viewed simply as
a wartime general making the best decisions he can under the pressures of war, whose
ruthlessness is a necessity of that condition.
Theowyn calls Dumbledore “[t]he most enigmatic character” (n.pag.). Once an “epitome
of goodness” (Theowyn n.pag.), his youthful attraction towards wizard supremacy as well as
some of his actions in his later years revealed in the seventh book challenges readers to re-
examine his character (Theowyn). Theowyn views that Dumbledore’s care for Harry is genuine
despite his willingness to prepare Harry for a path that may lead to his premature death. With
regards to this certain ruthlessness about Dumbledore, Theowyn calls Dumbledore a
“Machiavellian” (Theowyn), for he is prepared to “use others without compunction, even to the
point of plotting a child’s death” (Theowyn). Like many of the other analytical fan writers,
Theowyn finds the ability of Dumbledore to compartmentalise so that he can plan a war strategy
involving a high probability of the death of a child whom he genuinely cares for “chilling”
(Theowyn n.pag.). Theowyn also notes that for all his scheming and cleverness, one of the most
important pieces of information almost does not get delivered because it is entrusted with Snape
to be delivered to Harry at the pre-arranged moment (Theowyn). Looking back on The Deathly
Hallows, Snape barely has time to commit his final act of passing on this entrusted
communication to Harry as he lies fatally injured (Rowling, Deathly 529).
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A further concern of Theowynʼs is how Dumbledore gains a position of authority under
the façade of a gentle and wise mentor situating himself perfectly to mould Harry into becoming
someone who does not recoil at the thought of sacrificing his own life in order to defeat
Voldemort (Theowyn). Theowyn notes that in his manipulation of others, Dumbledore takes full
advantage of his ability to uncover the core moral fibres of those nearest to him. For example,
Dumbledore has “laid out an enticing road” (Theowyn) for Harry to follow, knowing how strong
Harry’s desire to protect those whom he loves is (Theowyn). As Theowynʼs blunt description
suggests, it has been a pattern for Dumbledorethe master manipulatorto set up a path for his
lieutenants to follow without disclosing the full extent of the danger that the mission entails.
Theowyn explains: once Dumbledore knows that his lieutenants are “gone far enough that he
[knows] they [will not] turn back . . . [t]hen he step[s] aside and point[s] the way to the cliff . . .
[for] them to jump off” (Theowyn). Theowyn suspects Dumbledore predicted that even if Harry
had realised he was deceived in the particulars, once he understood the end goalthe destruction
of Voldemorthe would accept the responsibility and would want to follow it to the end
(Theowyn). As Theowyn observes, Dumbledore does not “[give] his followers all of the
information they [need] to make a free choice” (Theowyn);; instead, he “[gives] them only
enough [information] to manoeuvre them into doing what he [wants] them to do” (Theowyn
n.pag.).
Joining in Emma, SLS, Leonhardt, Ib4075, and TRC07, Theowyn reviews Dumbledore’s
relationship with his two most trusted lieutenants, Harry and Snape. On this point, Theowyn
maintains that both Harry and Snape have remained loyal and honourable in their respective
relationships with Dumbledore, while Dumbledore has done disservice to both of them by not
being forthcoming in return. In light of this observation, Theowyn eloquently notes that, “[f]or
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all his insight into human nature, [Dumbledore is] . . . often oblivious to the emotional needs of
others around him” (Theowyn n.pag.). While recognising Dumbledore as someone who is
“capable of great patience and greatness” (Theowyn n.pag.), Theowyn makes quite a compelling
argument to expose Dumbledore’s hypocrisy in his manipulation of and control over others.
In “Dumbledorian Ethics: How Albus Dumbledore Combines Utilitarianism and
Compassion,” Sarah Putnam Park poses similar questions to Theowyn about the morality of
Dumbledore’s actions. Park subsequently attempts to rationalise Dumbledore’s actions by using
the principle of utilitarian theory. It is important to note here that it is not my intention to
evaluate the validity of Park’s assessment and understanding of utilitarian theory. I aim, rather,
to understand how Park evaluates the morality of Dumbledore’s actions using the theory at hand.
Park argues that all of Dumbledore’s decisions and actions can be explained by the principle of
utilitarian ethics, which champions the notion of achieving the greatest good for the greatest
number and stipulates that an individual action cannot be assessed for its morality until the action
in question is measured against an end result (Park).
Park points out that readers could only speculate Dumbledore’s motives and thoughts
behind his actions using the limited information the texts reveal because Rowling does not
disclose Dumbledore’s inner thoughts in details (Park). The main question Park poses is this:
when one applies the utilitarian theory to Dumbledore’s strategy, does the end (Voldemort’s fall)
justifies the means (the possible death of Harry)? To this question, Park answers that while it is a
hard and seemingly impossible decision, “the end of Voldemort’s reign of terror would justify
the sole death of one boy—Harry Potter” (Park n.pag.). Park argues when we weigh the possible
consequences of Voldemort’s prolonged control over the magical world, which means a
continued persecution of thousands of Muggles and Muggle-born wizards and witches,
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Dumbledore’s plan to have Harry sacrifice himself is “not cruel or self-serving, but it is the
appropriate ethical decision for this particular situation” (Park n.pag.).
Park presents a counter-argument to this conclusion and further argues that while the
above conclusion may be valid from a utilitarian perspective, Dumbledore’s plan does not
respect Harry as a person (Park). Park acknowledges that one of the major objections towards the
utilitarian ethics is raised on how the theory allows for an individual to be considered as a means
to an end, denying their humanity to be respected as an end in itself (Park). In light of this
objection, Park concludes that Dumbledore is culpable of not respecting Harry enough to confide
the complete plan in him, while he is not guilty of seeing Harry as a useful instrument given the
gravity of the alternative, which is, Voldemort continued existence. Dumbledore guides Harry to
become a young man capable of assuming the task of the Chosen One, destined to defeat
Voldemort. Dumbledore does this not by changing Harry’s nature, but by “fostering Harry’s own
innate loving kindness, thereby moulding a man capable of making great personal sacrifices,
even sacrificing his own life, to save the lives of others” (Park n.pag.). Here, Park seems to
suggest that, while Dumbledore shows Harry the path he believes to be right, it is Harry himself
who ultimately chooses to take that path.
In the books, Harry wonders why it had never been important enough for Dumbledore to
entrust his plans with Harry and questions whether Dumbledore had ever truly cared for Harry as
more than just a pawn in the war plan (Rowling, Deathly 147, 267). Park wonders at this point
and is puzzled as to why Dumbledore often kept distance from Harry when it was potentially
quite damaging for Harry to experience such temperamental demeanours of Dumbledore,
someone Harry has known, respected, and sought approval and returning affection of. It is
evident from the questions fan writers raise in their critical opinion pieces that there are many
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textual indeterminacies surrounding the character or Dumbledore. In other words, upon the
conclusion of the series, the character of Dumbledore remains elusive and consequently some of
the mysteries surrounding his character have become a source of inspiration for further
speculation and critical examination on readers’ part.
5.5. Concluding Thoughts on Fans’ Analytical Writing
One of the most interesting points stemming from the eleven analytical essays is the way
in which fans take Dumbledore’s moral failings quite personally. Fans also appear to establish
strong moral understanding through their evaluation of Dumbledore’s conduct. It is perhaps safe
to speculate that by making moral judgments in respect to Dumbledore’s actions, in a way,
readers are prompted to face and question their own moral principles. Some of the key themes
that are repeated across the eleven writings include 1) readers’ expressions of respect and trust
for Dumbledore’s goodness, 2) readers’ perception of Dumbledore as the voice of morality in the
story, and most importantly, 3) readers’ initial assessment and later re-evaluation of
Dumbledore’s manipulation and control of others, revealed most prominently in the seventh
book. With regards to the last point, some readers criticise Dumbledore’s conduct towards Harry,
while some perceive greater demonstrations of moral failings in Dumbledore’s conduct towards
Snape.
Dumbledore is a complex character comprised of often contradicting elements such as
wisdom of age, solid moral principles, propensity for secrecy and lies, as well as common human
weaknesses for power. Further, as eight of the eleven analytical reader-writers point out, for all
his visions as a master manipulator and for all his aura of omniscience, Dumbledore’s power and
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control reached only so far in changing the course of history.2 This contrasting representation
that Dumbledore signifies seems to fascinate some readers such as Theowyn.
In the in-between place where the author, the text, and the readers meet, Dumbledore’s
character comes alive as his actions earn censure as well as passionate responses from readers. It
is evident that Dumbledore is an important character for these reader-writers because, if he were
not, they would not have taken the time to make sense of his character. If we consider reading to
be an activity that exposes readers to life experiences that cannot be attained in their everyday
lives, then online fandom allows readers to create an open forum in which they can exchange
their thoughts, thereby deriving not only personal but social value from their literary experiences.
2. Theowynʼs observation, especially, suggests that there is a parallel between free will and
destiny within the text. For example, does Harry freely choose the path of being the Chosen One
or does he do so because Dumbledore often carefully guided him to take a particular path by
controlling the flow of information? For more discussions on the issue of control and agency,
readers may refer to Drew Chappell’s “Sneaking Out After Dark: Resistance, Agency, and the
Postmodern Child in JK Rowling’s Harry Potter Series.” This parallel is mirrored by the question
of literature as changeable or determinedis a text fixed in the written words of the author or
can it be understood to be something more organic, something that can take a life of its own
through reader response?
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6. Examination of Selected Creative Writings Posted by Fans
As mentioned above, reader-writers who take up creative writing as their method of
expression appear to approach the exploration of Dumbledore’s character a little differently from
analytical fan writers. Drawing upon Henry Jenkins’ genre classifications, most of the fan fiction
stories examined below can be classified as “Alternative Points of View,” “I Wonder If-s” and
“Missing Moments” (Jenkins 181). What these classifications signify is how fan fiction writing
is founded in readers’ desire to bridge textual indeterminacies and break out from the limitation
of the original text. The three genres respectively refer to stories that address textual
indeterminacies 1) by telling the stories from someone other than Harry’s point of view, 2) by
exploring other outcomes of a decisive event, and 3) by writing unwritten parts of the Harry
Potter stories (Jenkins 181).
I examined ten fan fiction stories posted by reader-writers. Instead of conducting an in-
depth analysis of each story, I focus on some of the key themes fan writers explore. Additionally,
particular attention is paid to personal comments fan writers leave which offer insight into what
inspired them to publish the stories, as well as what they wished to accomplish by writing and
sharing their creative pieces. On first examination, it appears that the ten fan writers that
comprise the dataset take up, as entry points for creating their own stories, the following themes:
1. Dumbledore’s little revealed childhood and family relationships,
2. Dumbledore’s sense of guilt and the trauma he endured over his sister’s death, and
3. Dumbledore’s sexuality.
To present an apparent point of observation, it appears that while readers’ analytical opinion
pieces focused more on close textual analysis, fan fiction writers, due to the nature of creative
writing, use the “facts” presented in the text as a foundation upon which build their imaginative
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stories. In other words, one could say that analytical writers focus on what is written (yet
problematic or unclear), whereas creative writers pay particular attention to what is not written.
One of the great merits of creative stories lies in how those stories call other readers’ attention to
the unwritten parts of the original Harry Potter stories.
There are an exponential number of postings on the Fanfiction.net that include references
to the stories of Harry Potter. For example, a key word search within the site in June 2014
revealed that there were more than 2500 stories featuring Dumbledore as at least one of the
primary characters (Fanfiction.net). My method of selection was as follows: 1) I searched
Fanfiction.net for stories featuring Albus Dumbledore under the category of books and the sub-
category of Harry Potter. 2614 stories came up in this search. 2) I categorised these by relevance
and excluded “cross-overs” (e.g., stories including characters from literary source texts beyond
the Harry Potter series). 3) I limited the selection to substantive stories with word counts
between 3000 and 8000 that would comprise a manageable dataset for this study. 4) I limited the
stories to English language only. Abstracts of over 1000 stories were reviewed. Sixty stories
appeared to meet the inclusion criteria and were selected for further examination.
For the purpose of this study, I wanted the number of creative texts for analysis to be
roughly equivalent to the number of analytical texts analysed in the earlier section. The purpose
of this study is in part to illuminate how readers bridge textual indeterminacies with the
understanding that indeterminacies do not open doors to infinite possibilities for meanings, for
the text imposes certain limitations with the facts that it establishes (Freund 146; Iser 51). In light
this limitation, I therefore omitted stories dealing with settings and situations too distanced and
disconnected from the original text—for example, stories implicating characters into situations
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well beyond the content of the original texts or stories that directly contradict facts set up in the
original series.
Of the final sixty stories, approximately thirty stories were omitted on the following
grounds:
1. The story was incorrectly identified by filters and in fact features someone other than
Dumbledore.
2. The story includes events incompatible with the events in the original series (e.g.,
Dumbledore is in fact James Potter in disguise; in short, stories that can be classified
as being set in an alternative universe).
3. The majority of the characters do not appear in the original series.
4. A story by the same fan author already appears in the dataset.
Of the stories meeting all of the inclusion criteria, the first ten were chosen for the examination.
As is the case with the examination of analytical writers, the following examination is
divided into four sections according to the topics and sub-topics that reader-writers take up (see
also Table 2 for further details).
1. Exploration of Dumbledore as a friend and a protector.
Appearing in stories by RobynElizabeth; CyborgNinjasInLove; AngelMoon Girl; The
Half Mad Muggle.
2. Exploration of Dumbledore as an arrogant and somewhat selfish young man.
Appearing in stories by biopotter; estuesday.
3. Exploration of how guilt over the death of Ariana affected and shaped Dumbledore’s
character.
Appearing in stories by MissPadfoot100; Kilara25; Wuff.
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4. Exploration of Dumbledore’s arguably romantic relationship with Grindelwald.
Appearing in a story by Sahara Storm.
Table 2. Details of fan fiction stories examined.
Author Word Count Title 1 RobynElizabeth 3044 words Scars and Sherbet Lemons 2 AngelMoon Girl 6152 words Wolf in Friend’s Clothing 3 CyborgNinjasInLove 6978 words Recollections 4 The Half Mad Muggle 3115 words Dear Albus 5 biopotter 5573 words Albus Dumbledore and the Deathly Hallows 6 estuesday 6574 words Love and Other Childish Ways 7 MissPadfoot100 3422 words Albus’ Recollections 8 Kilara25 5428 words Wonderful Tragic Mysterious 9 Wuff 6561 words Believe in Love
10 Sahara Strom 7229 words Love Letters
In illustration of the ambiguity surrounding Dumbledore’s character in the original texts,
certain “facts” about his past are revealed through a third party who may be considered an
unreliable narrator. In the obituary for Dumbledore, for example, Dumbledore’s school friend
Elphias Doge reminisces about his youth and states that he and Dumbledore became close
friends due to their common identities as outsiders (Rowling, Deathly 21). Doge explains that
while the idiosyncrasy that excluded him from the crowd was his medical condition, what
separated Dumbledore was “the burden of unwanted notoriety [due to his father’s] savage and
well-publicised attack upon three young Muggles” (Rowling, Deathly 21). Doge recalls that
while many of his classmates pressed him to speak of the matter, Dumbledore refused to speak
of it except to confirm his father’s guilt of the charges laid upon him (Rowling, Deathly 21).
Doge observes, despite Dumbledore’s rocky start at Hogwarts, “[i]n a matter of months . . .
Albus’s own fame had begun to eclipse that of his father[,] . . . never again [to] be known as the
son of a Muggle-hater, but as nothing more or less than the most brilliant student ever seen at the
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school” (Rowling, Deathly 22). Judging from Doge’s obituary, Dumbledore’s life at Hogwarts
was, perhaps, a journey that of finding acceptance and friends, as it was for Harry (Rowling,
Prisoner 258-61). These circumstances presented in The Deathly Hallows suggest the possibility
that Dumbledore also spent a lonely and somewhat abandoned childhood akin to that of Harry,
Snape, and Tom Riddle, whom Harry calls “the abandoned boys” (Rowling, Deathly 558).
Markedly, Doge can be considered an unreliable narrator, since his friendship with Dumbledore
is likely to make him silent on matters that can cast shadows over his famous friend’s character
and reputation. Secondly, it is also evident that there are no particular details given in the original
text as to what Dumbledore felt and how he responded to his father’s arrest or his school years.
Nevertheless, the fan fiction stories examined below offer an interesting model as to how textual
indeterminacies are bridged and how the original text is transformed in the hands of a reader.
6.1. Dumbledore—A Friend and a Protector
The following four creative writers examined below RobinElizabeth, AngelMoon Girl,
CyborgNinjasInLove and The Half Mad Muggleexamine Dumbledore’s actions and emotions
in relation to his relationship with other characters. In so doing, these writers give voice to
Dumbledore’s inner thoughts and contemplate the workings of his heart and mind in places
where the original text remain silent. In the story titled “Scars and Sherbet Lemons,”
RobynElizabeth imagines the role Dumbledore could have played in ensuring James and Lily
Potter’s continued safety. RobynElizabeth envisions in what manner Dumbledore could have
been involved in the rescue of baby Harry on the Halloween Day when James and Lily were
murdered by Voldemort. RobynElizabeth pictures Dumbledore making arrangements with James
so that the latter could inform the former of his family’s safety every night at a set time.
RobynElizabeth’s story depicts the growing anxiety Dumbledore feels during the Hogwarts
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Halloween Feast when he notices that James has not checked in for the evening, wondering
whether the silence is caused by James’s carelessness or whether it means genuine trouble.
Itching to rush to Godric’s Hollow to ensure their safety, RobynElizabeth envisions Dumbledore
feeling restless. Eventually, Dumbledore’s gut feeling of something being terribly wrong is
confirmed when he senses the Fidelius Charm break, and Dumbledore rushes in fear to the Potter
residence, knowing too well that he is too late to save them (RobynElizabeth). In the story,
RobynElizabeth fills in the textual gaps by imagining how Dumbledore was involved in the
Potters’ protection as well as in the discovery of both Harry’s survival and Voldemort’s
disappearance, and portrays Dumbledore in a positive light by having him show genuine care
and concerns for the Potters.
In “Recollections”, CyborgNinjasInLove (CNIL) imagines that Dumbledore left a letter
to Harry imparting to the younger man the memories of his life, especially his association with
Grindelwald that affected Dumbledore deeply. Dumbledore in CNIL’s story is sensitive to the
possibility that his life may come under scrutiny after his death and Harry might be hurt and
confused to discover his mentor’s past mistakes and failures (CNIL). Giving voice to
Dumbledore regarding matters about which he remained silent in the original texts, CNIL has
Dumbledore reach out to Harry to assure him of his loyalty and trust, and that with his “very
human body and mind, one entirely capable of missteps and misdeeds” (CNIL n.pag.),
Dumbledore tried to help Harry the best he could (CNIL).
In the story “Wolf in Friend’s Clothing,” AngelMoon Girl (AngelMoon) looks at the
events that follow the third task of the Triwizard Tournament in The Goblet of Fire through
Dumbledore’s eyes. The author’s note suggests that AngelMoon decided to create this story
because she “often wondered what happened beyond Harry’s perspective on the night he
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returned, Cedric’s Diggory’s dead body in tow [at the end of the Triwizard Tournament]”
(AngelMoon n.pag.) AngelMoon states, “[a]ll we got was a blurred vision from a barely
conscious Harry, and I’m left wanting . . . [therefore, I decided to] write it myself . . . my creative
take on the events that transpired after the Third Task, from Dumbledore’s point of view”
(AngelMoon n.pag.). AngelMoon’s story examines Dumbledore’s inner thoughts, especially his
genuine concern for Harry’s safety, as Dumbledore waits for the result of the third task in
growing anxiety, sensing that something is terribly wrong. Following Dumbledore’s inner
thoughts, AngelMoon turns readers’ attention to what ferocious fury courses through
Dumbledore under his outward façade of self-control, as he begins to realise that he was
outsmarted by Barty Crouch Jr. and failed to protect Harry (AngelMoon).
The Half Mad Muggle further contemplates the more human side of Dumbledore by
exploring his relationships with his trusted friend and ally, Severus Snape. In “Dear Albus,” The
Half Mad Muggle brings readers’ attention to Dumbledore’s generous and attentive nature
through the friendship between him and Snape. There is one particular scene that The Half Mad
Muggle creates that illuminates how Dumbledore’s past failures and disappointments led him to
demonstrate a great deal of understanding towards the failings and errors of others. In the scene
in question, Dumbledore speaks to Snape who is crushed under the weight of his evil dealings
that ultimately led to the death of Lily Potter, and offers him a piece of wisdom: “What you have
done before is in the past—we cannot change it—but we also cannot continue to live in it. We
both have dark parts in our past—but we have to move on from those and walk toward the future
instead” (The Half Mad Muggle n.pag.). Dumbledore in The Half Mad Muggle’s story continues
to console Snape: “I did not say forget [the past sins]. Learn from [them], indeed. But do not
allow your past to control your present” (The Half Mad Muggle n.pag). In short, The Half Mad
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Muggle imagines what conversations and connections Dumbledore and Snape could have shared
beyond what the original texts disclose. In the process, the author reinforces the representation of
Dumbledore as someone to look up to and rely on in time of need—an image initially established
from Harry’s perspective.
6.2. Dumbledorethe Young and the Restless
The two following writers fill in the textual indeterminacies by imagining the details of
Dumbledore’s youth that are only briefly mentioned in the original text. In the creative story
“Albus Dumbledore and the Deathly Hallows,” biopotter draws readers’ attention to the chain of
events that took place in the summer shortly after Albus’s graduation from Hogwarts, most
particularly the circumstances that brought Dumbledore home to Godric’s Hollow. As depicted
in the original text, Dumbledore was forced to cancel his plan of travelling around the world
when he was called upon to return home upon his mother’s untimely death in order to take care
of his unstable sister (Rowling, Deathly 573). biopotter portrays the workings of Dumbledore’s
heart at the time of his returning home by closely imagining Dumbledore’s disappointment at
having to forgo his chance of a big adventure, as well as resentment towards his sister and
brother whose presence keeps Dumbledore in their little village. biopotter examines
Dumbledore’s loneliness upon finding himself in a place without the company of an intellectual
equal, and his feeling of being slighted upon realising his brilliant talents and intelligence are
being wasted upon household chores. Dumbledore, as mentioned above, exhibits these feelings
in the original text, and biopotter highlights and expands on Dumbledore’s rare exhibition of
ungraciousness, sulking in the face of a circumstance that is beyond his control that befell upon
him. biopotter portrays the youthful Dumbledore as someone with a great sense of entitlement in
the world, and as someone who is capable of harbouring a strong sense of bitterness and
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resentment. This antipathy stems from his dreams being quashed by family obligations and the
portrayal of a young and rebellious Dumbledore provides readers with a different perspective of
the man who acquired gentlemanlike, yet reserved manners later in his life (biopotter).
The particular circumstances that expedited the close relationship between Dumbledore
and Grindelwald is explored in estuesday’s story, “Love and Other Childish Ways.” Imagining
the first encounter of Dumbledore and Grindelwald, estuesday depicts spars of wit between the
two, making it quite clear to readers what drew Dumbledore and Grindelwald together and how
powerful their magnetism was to each other. In a joint interview for The Leaky Cauldron and
Mugglenet, Rowling makes a following comment on Dumbledore and friendship: “being very,
very intelligent might create some problems and it has done for Dumbledore, because his
wisdom has isolated him . . . where is his equal, where is his confidant, where is his partner?”
(Rowling qtd. in accio-quote.org n.pag.). This premise is important in examining, as estuesday
does, why Dumbledore became so infatuated with Grindelwald who was his intellectual match
when he knew very well that Grindelwald had a darker desire for power and control.
Both biopotter and estuesday bring Dumbledore to a more human level (albeit in a
different way from the first four writers examined), showcasing the intricacy of the workings of
his heart where egoism and conceitedness coexist with compassion and thoughtfulness. Neither
altruistic nor malicious, their stories emphasise all too human aspects of Dumbledore through his
shortcomings, allowing readers to have a second and a third look at Dumbledore’s character with
compassion and understanding. In one of the scenes in biopotter’s story, Dumbledore
acknowledges the feelings of pity towards both himself and for his sister and reflects: “the only
help he could provide her was superficial, and clumsy at best. When he sat alone with Ariana he
had no ease with her, no comfortable companionship” (biopotter n.pag.). biopotter illustrates
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Dumbledore’s frustration at not being able to love his sister as he ought to and this feeling is
accompanied by his desire for a companionship with someone of equal intelligence.
6.3. Dumbledore and the Price of his Love
The next three stories—MissPadfoot100’s “Albus’ Recollections,” Kilara25’s
“Wonderful Tragic Mysterious,” and Wuff’s “Believe in Love”—address the period of time
where Dumbledore meets Grindelwald, their meeting ending in Ariana’s death, and how the
whole chain of events has affected and changed Dumbledore. MissPadfoot100 has a more simple
way of writing and only a very short analysis follows below. MissPadfoot100’s story takes place
on the eve of James and Lily going into hiding from Voldemort. Significantly, MissPadfoot100
imagines Dumbledore to have lived all his life without ever being able to disconnect himself
from his past; MissPadfoot100 illustrates this point by using the Mirror of Erised and the
Pensieve, the two instruments that allow Dumbledore to travel back to the memories of his past.
Identifying Dumbledore’s past as something that continues to shape and affect his actions,
MisPadfoot100 depicts Dumbledore working hard in order to protect the Potter family from the
hands of Voldemort, especially because he himself failed to save and protect his own family. In
short, MissPadfoot100 is one of the many fan writers who strive to connect young and somewhat
egocentric Dumbledore and aged and wise counterpart the original texts depict by filling in the
gaps between the two.
In “Wonderful Tragic Mysterious,” Kilara253 transports Luna Lovegood, whose present
time seems to be situated sometime after the Battle of Hogwarts, via Time Turner so that she
3. While it is not my intention to offer criticism to the quality of writing of the fan fiction
stories that are examined, Kilara25 should be noted for a good writing style that is particularly
notable in the story’s representation of Luna Lovegood’s speech pattern and her characterisation.
Appendix A. Themes covered by fan writing across analytical and creative writing
author type of writing
Word count
source Albus Dumbledore as the God figure
Albus as a father/ mentor
Destiny & free will
childhood & family
Trauma & sense of guilt
Albus’ moral ambiguity
Authority & control, secrets & lies
Sexuality Author authority & Authorial control
1 birthday twins critical 2547 L x 2 Caltheous critical 2950 L x 3 Mary Wanguard critical 3400 L x x x 4 Rosamonde Bane critical 2800 L x x 5 Emma critical 5146 L x x x 6 Sly_Like_Slytherin critical 582 M x x 7 Riley Leonhardt critical 2712 L x x x x 8 Ib4075 critical 1704 L x x x x 9 The Rotfang
Conspiracy ’07 critical 6183 L x x x
10 Theowyn critical 4287 L x x x x 11 Sarah Putnam Park critical 3572 L x x x x 1 RobynElizabeth creative 3044 F x 2 AngleMoon Girl creative 6152 F 3 CyborgNinjasInLove creative 6978 F x x x x 4 The Half Mad Muggle creative 3115 F x x x 5 biopotter creative 5573 F x x 6 estuesday creative 6574 F x 7 MissPadfoot100 creative 3422 F x 8 Kilara25 creative 5428 F x x 9 Wuff creative 6561 F x x x x 10 Sahara Strom creative 7229 F x x x Angua critical 8867 L x M=Mugglenet, L= The Leaky Cauldron, F=Fanficion.net