Lose now, pay later… Written by: Carol Farley

By: Natalie S, Jessie X, and Sarah E. Alaina B.

6th hour

Imagine a futuristic version of our world the year 2041. In this story, Two girls, Trinja and Deb go to the mall. They pass this store and it has machines lined up on the wall. With a sign that says FREE. They decide to go in and they try free "Smoodies.”

Can you Eat a lot and be skinny the next minute?

Initial characters: Deb, Trijna, Trevor, and the woman with the green turban

Initial Setting: At the mall and the mall parking lot.

Initial Conflict: They eat ice cream and they do not want to turn fat.

A. Deb and Trijna find smoodie machines.

B. They eat a bunch of smoodies C. They feel bloated. D. They find the slimmer and try it

out.

The climax/turning point is whenThey just eat and eat the smoodies. Then they do not stop and they fear That they are gaining weight.

Soon around the world gets smoodies machines and slimmer machines.

This Short story fits in with science fiction because they have no idea who sells the Slimmer's or the Smoodies. The Slimmer’s also leave a blue dot on their wrists. But no one cared.

“This short story is a great science fiction phenomenon.”

-anonymous

“it was a great sci-fi story!” -anonymous

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