Draft 3 part 2

Chosen Conventions and how it developPart G

Convention Use/Develop/Challenge Description and Purpose

Examples from film with still shot

Conflict and Arguments

Use- this convention of conflict in a drama film is kind of predictable, as most drama films have arguments between characters. Develop- We will develop this convention in our opening sequence by using close ups and extreme close ups with an addition of gestures and movements of the characters.

This is the scene where Precious and her mum were fighting after Precious gets home with her new baby. This challenges the convention as it have high violence between characters.

Precious

Love Triangle Use- this convention of love triangle is rarely scene in a drama film, but in a drama-romance films are possibly have a love triangle or a challenge for the couples. Develop- we will develop this convention by using another girl, so that the girlfriend of the boy will think he’s cheating. However, there will be a twist and it was just a misunderstanding

This scene is when she told her husband that she’s seeing another guy. This uses the convention of love triangle, because it is a confession that she’s seeing another man.

Closer

Who are the Characters & who they represent Draft 1

Ramina: NevaehThe Boyfriend’s close friend

Clothes: Black clothes to show jealousy, and dark

Neil: JohnThe Boyfriend/ Fiancée of his girlfriend

Clothes: Semi Smart clothes when proposingJeans and Hoody when going out with

other girlfriend

Ina: LilyJohn’s Fiancée

Clothes: Semi formal clothes while he’s proposing to her

Jogging bottoms and Top when she saw them holding hands

Part H

Who are the Character and who they represent Draft 2

Name: Neil GuevarraAge: 17Character Name: JohnCharacter Age:

Character Clothes•Wears semi-formal clothes when he’s with Lily on their date•Wears jeans and hoody when he’s with Nevaeh in the park

John’s Semi Formal Outfit- For their Date with Lily

John’s Non- Formal Outfit- When he is with Nevaeh

Part HPhone when Lily calls him The necklace that he will

be wearing throughout the film


Name: Ina BaysonAge: 17Character Name: LilyCharacter Age:

Character Clothes•Wears semi-formal clothes when she’s with John on their date•Wears jogging bottoms, and top when she saw John and Nevaeh in the park

Lily’s Semi Formal Outfit- For their Date with John

Lily’s Non- Formal Outfit- When following John to the Park with Nevaeh

Part H

Phone that she will be using

The ring that John will give to her

Jewellery that she will wear ing their date


Name: Ramina ArlauskaiteAge: 18Character Name: NevaehCharacter Age:

Character Clothes•Wears black clothes throughout the scenes Nevaeh’s Casual Outfit

- When she is standing outside the Café - When she is with John in the Park

Part H

Part H

Who are the Character and who they represent for (draft 3 & 4) opening sequence

Name: Neil GuevarraAge: 17Character Name: JohnCharacter Age:

Character Clothes• Grey and Black hoody• Black Jacket• Grey/ blue jeans• shoes Both pictures represent an

average teenager with normal clothes

Part H

Who are the Character and who they represent for (draft 3 & 4) opening sequence

Name: Ina BaysonAge: 17Character Name: InaCharacter Age:

Character Clothes• Dark blue skinny jeans• Pink hoody• Black jacket• Thick Scarf• Shoes• Pink top• Blue and red polo• Necklace • Mack up

Both pictures represent an average teenager with normal clothes

Location/Setting Draft 1

• Cafe: where John proposes to Lily, while Nevaeh is outside looking at them.

Part I

Location/Setting Draft 1

• Round wood Park: When Lily saw John and Nevaeh holding hands

Part I

Location/Draft 2

We are going to use the Park (Roundwood Park) for our whole Opening Sequence.

We chose this place, because we want to make the audience think that why would he be with Nevaeh in the same place, where he proposed to Lily.

This is the place where John will propose to her

This is the place where Lily would see Nevaeh and John

Part I

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