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Analysis of "The Lottery", a Short Story by Shirley Jackson By Lori Voth Takeaways The Lottery is written by Shirley Jackson The short story is about the evil and passive side of human nature Get stoned by your friends and family Shirley Jackson's short story, "The Lottery", aroused much controversy and criticism in 1948, following its debut publication, in the New Yorker. Jackson uses irony and comedy to suggest an underlying evil, hypocrisy, and weakness of human kind. The story takes place in a small village, where the people are close and tradition is paramount. A yearly event, called the lottery, is one in which one person in the town is randomly chosen, by a drawing, to be violently stoned by friends and family. The drawing has been around over seventy-seven years and is practiced by every member of the town. The surrealness of this idea is most evident through Jackson's tone. Her use of friendly language among the villagers and the presentation of the lottery as an event similar to the square dances and Halloween programs illustrates the lottery as a welcomed, festive event. Jackson describes the social atmosphere of the women prior to the drawing: "They greeted one another and exchanged bits of gossip…" (281). The lottery is conducted in a particular manner, and with so much anticipation by the villagers, that the reader expects the winner to receive a prize or something of that manner. It is not until the every end of the story that the reader learns of the winner's fate: Death, by friends and family. It seems as though Jackson is making a statement regarding hypocrisy and human evil. The lottery is set in a very mundane town, where everyone knows everyone and individuals are typical. Families carry the very ordinary names of Warner, Martin and Anderson. Jackson's
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Analysis of "The Lottery", a Short Story by Shirley Jackson

By Lori Voth

Takeaways

The Lottery is written by Shirley Jackson

The short story is about the evil and passive side of human nature

Get stoned by your friends and family

Shirley Jackson's short story, "The Lottery", aroused much controversy

and criticism in 1948, following its debut publication, in the New

Yorker. Jackson uses irony and comedy to suggest an underlying evil,

hypocrisy, and weakness of human kind.

The story takes place in a small village, where the people are close and

tradition is paramount. A yearly event, called the lottery, is one in

which one person in the town is randomly chosen, by a drawing, to be

violently stoned by friends and family. The drawing has been around

over seventy-seven years and is practiced by every member of the town.

The surrealness of this idea is most evident through Jackson's tone.

Her use of friendly language among the villagers and the presentation

of the lottery as an event similar to the square dances and Halloween

programs illustrates the lottery as a welcomed, festive event. Jackson

describes the social atmosphere of the women prior to the drawing:

"They greeted one another and exchanged bits of gossip…" (281). The

lottery is conducted in a particular manner, and with so much

anticipation by the villagers, that the reader expects the winner to

receive a prize or something of that manner. It is not until the every

end of the story that the reader learns of the winner's fate: Death, by

friends and family.

It seems as though Jackson is making a statement regarding hypocrisy

and human evil. The lottery is set in a very mundane town, where

everyone knows everyone and individuals are typical. Families carry

the very ordinary names of Warner, Martin and Anderson. Jackson's

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portrayal of extreme evil in this ordinary, friendly atmosphere suggests

that people are not always as they seem. She implies that underneath

one's outward congeniality, there may be lurking a pure evil.

Though the story does not become pernicious until the end, Jackson

does in fact foreshadow the idea through Mr. Summers and Mr. Graves.

Mr. Summers is the man in charge of the lottery. He prepares the slips

of paper to be drawn and he mediates the activity. He is described as a

respected man, joking around with the villagers and carrying on this

foreboding event with no conscience at all. "Mr. Summers was very

good at all this; in his clean white shirt and blue jeans, with one hand

resting carelessly on the black box, he seemed very proper and

important as he talked interminably to Mr. Graves and the Martins

(282). The name Summers subtly identifies the mood of the short story

as well as the administrator himself, "jovial" (281), auspicious, and

bright. Mr. Summers is the man in front, the representative of the

lottery, as his name symbolizes the up front, apparent, tone of the

event. Mr. Graves, on the other hand, symbolizes the story's underlying

theme and final outcome. Mr. Graves is Mr. Summer's assistant, always

present but not necessarily in the spotlight. The unobvious threat of his

name and character foreshadows the wickedness of the ordinary people,

that again, is always present but not in the spotlight.

Along with hypocrisy, "the Lottery" presents a weakness in human

individuals. This town, having performed such a terrible act for so

many years, continues on with the lottery, with no objections or

questions asked, and the main purpose being to carry on the tradition.

"There's always been a lottery" (284), says Old Man Warner. "Nothing

but trouble in that," he says of quitting the event. However, the

villagers show some anxiety toward the event. Comments such as

"Don't be nervous Jack" (284), "Get up there Bill" and Mrs. Delacroix's

holding of her breath as her husband went forward (283) indicate that

the people may not be entirely comfortable with the event. Yet

everyone still goes along with it. Not a single person openly expresses

fear or disgust toward the lottery, but instead feigns enthusiasm.

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Jackson may be suggesting that many individuals are not strong

enough to confront their disapproval, for fear of being rejected by

society. Instead they continue to sacrifice their happiness, for the sake

of others. The failure of Mr. Summers to replace the black box used for

the drawing symbolizes the villagers' failure to stand up for their

beliefs. "Mr. Summers spoke frequently to the villagers about making a

new box, but no one liked to upset tradition as was represented by the

black box." The box after so many years is "Faded and stained" (281)

just as the villagers' view of reality has become tainted and pitiful. An

intense fear of change among the people is obvious.

Jackson uses the protagonist, Mrs. Hutchinson, to show an individual

consumed by hypocrisy and weakness. Though it is hinted that she

attempted to rebel and not show up to the event, Mrs. Hutchinson

arrives late, with a nervous excuse of "forgetting what day it was". It is

ironic that she, who almost stood up for her beliefs, is the one who wins

the lottery, and is fated to be stoned. What is perhaps the most

disturbing about Mrs. Hutchinson, however, is her sudden unleashing

of her true self. Before the drawing she is friendly with the other

women, pretending to be pleased to be present. The very moment that

she sees is her family that draws the black dot, though, her selfishness

is evident. "You didn't give him time enough to take any paper he

wanted. I saw you. It wasn't fair!" (284). Then she turns on her own

daughter. "There's Don and Eva," she yelled maliciously, "Make them

take their chance!" (285). She continues to scream about the unfairness

of the ritual up until her stoning. Mrs. Hutchinson knew the lottery

was wrong, but she never did anything about it. She pretends as much

as she could to enjoy it, when she truly hated it all along. Perhaps

Jackson is implying that the more artificial and the more hypocritical

one is, the more of a target they are. Mrs. Hutchinson was clearly the

target of her fears.

The situation in "The Lottery" is slightly relevant to our society today.

We tend to flock toward nasty gossip and are interested in spite of the

privacy of the subjects involved. Whether it is standing on the side to

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watch a fight, an accident, or discussing the relationship between Bill

and Monica, we as Americans seem to have no problem "butting in"

where we do not belong. We have no problem remarking on an

individuals' adultery until it is ourselves that get caught. We have no

problem stereotyping people until is we who are stereotyped. It seems

as though we sometimes condemn everyday truths that we know are

characteristics of most people, including ourselves, and being afraid to

admit them, place the spotlight on someone else. It is sad and definitely

hypocritical, but it happens all the time. And I think Shirley Jackson

makes this point without having to say a word about it. Its is the

thousands of readers who replied to "The Lottery", in disapproval and

horror that blindly proved Jackson's theories valid and unknowingly

portrayed themselves as not very unlike the villagers in the short

story. Also read Shirley Jasckon's The Lottery and Its Nostalgic

Connection to the Primitive Man.

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Shirley Jackson is a master at manipulating her reader, a tactic that

pays off as the story unfolds and all of the things that once seemed

pleasant are shown to have a very dark side. The title of the ‚The

Lottery‛ alone is a great example of how Shirley Jackson topples reader

expectations; we usually hear the word ‚lottery‛ and are filled with a

sense of hope and possibility; we are expecting it is going to be a story

about someone who wins something. Little do we know what a grim

prize it will be, of course. The title of ‚The Lottery‛ itself can serve as a

thesis statement for writing about the story. One of the other ways

‚The Lottery‛ turns readers on their heads is because of the contrast

between scenes of normal small town life—a life that is so often

idealized—versus the grim reality of what the lottery really is.

The horror of the lottery sinks in well after the reader has finished a

first pass of the text and has time to go back and revisit some of the

events. For instance, when we consider that this has been described as

a ‚civic‛ activity in the same vein as other community events like

dances or teenage clubs, we see how disturbingly ingrained and

‚normal‛ ritual violence has become. Other elements of true horror

also sink later; for example, consider young Davy Hutchinson, so young

he can barely hold the slip of paper in his tight baby fist—what if he

had drawn the slip of paper. There was no mention about who could or

could not be stoned, so who’s to say the child would not have been

immune? Is it right to consider that a child could be stoned to death (or

not—we are never told when it ends) since, after all, all children are

allowed to throw the stones along with the adults?

One of the other unspoken disturbing elements of ‚The Lottery‛ by

Shirley Jackson is that the reader is never sure what the outcome of

the lottery is going to be. We know that the unlucky ‚winner‛ of the

lottery will be stoned, but to death? Until he or she begs for mercy?

Unfortunately, given the nature of this story and the past of witch

trials in early American communities to which Shirley Jackson gives

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more than a casual nod to, we can assume that the unfortunate will be

stoned to death.

There are so many elements in ‚The Lottery‛ that are not realized for

their full horrific consequences until after the fact. Little Davy, the

children gathering stones so they can take part in group violence, the

fact that Tessie even tried to get her in-laws into the second round of

drawing so they could have an ‚equal chance‛ at getting stones thrown

at them…the horror really never ends and in fact, is magnified each

time it is read again.

If one is looking to compare ‚The Lottery‛ by Shirley Jackson to

another short story, the search would be made much quicker by simply

looking to the tales of Nathaniel Hawthorne. In fact, ‚The Lottery‛ is

so like ‚Young Goodman Brown‛ and ‚The Minister’s Black Veil‛ in

terms of themes, if one didn’t know any better, it could easily be

suggested that they were written by the same author.

The following essay was published in the New Orleans Review , vol. 12,

no. 1 (Spring 1985), pp. 27-32. Students and teachers are free to copy

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and quote it for scholarly purposes, but publishers should contact me

before they reprint it for profit. Students should discuss the essay with

each other and in their classrooms. Please do not ask me to answer

your classroom essay questions for you; it defeats the purpose of your

instructor having given you the assignment.

In her critical biography of Shirley Jackson, Lenemaja Friedman notes

that when Shirley Jackson's story "The Lottery" was published in the

June 28, 1948 issue of the New Yorker it received a response that "no

New Yorker story had ever received": hundreds of letters poured in that

were characterized by "bewilderment, speculation, and old-fashioned

abuse."1 It is not hard to account for this response: Jackson's story

portrays an "average" New England village with "average" citizens

engaged in a deadly rite, the annual selection of a sacrificial victim by

means of a public lottery, and does so quite deviously: not until well

along in the story do we suspect that the "winner" will be stoned to

death by the rest of the villagers. One can imagine the average reader

of Jackson's story protesting: But we engage in no such inhuman

practices. Why are you accusing us of this?

Admittedly, this response was not exactly the one that Jackson had

hoped for. In the July 22, 1948 issue of the San Francisco Chronicle

she broke down and said the following in response to persistent queries

from her readers about her intentions: "Explaining just what I had

hoped the story to say is very difficult. I suppose, I hoped, by setting a

particularly brutal ancient rite in the present and in my own village to

chock the story's readers with a graphic dramatization of the pointless

violence and general inhumanity in their own lives."2 Shock them she

did, but probably owing to the symbolic complexity of her tale, they

responded defensively and were not enlightened.

The first part of Jackson's remark in the Chronicle, I suspect, was at

once true and coy. Jackson's husband, Stanley Edgar Hyman, has

written in his introduction to a posthumous anthology of her short

stories that "she consistently refused to be interviewed, to explain or

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promote her work in any fashion, or to take public stands and be the

pundit of the Sunday supplements."3 Jackson did not say in the

Chronicle that it was impossible for her to explain approximately what

her story was about, only that it was "difficult." That she thought it

meant something, and something subversive, moreover, she revealed in

her response to the Union of South Africa's banning of "The Lottery":

"She felt," Hyman says, "that they at least understood."4 A survey of

what little has been written about "The Lottery" reveals two general

critical attitudes: first, that it is about man's ineradicable primitive

aggressivity, or what Cleanth Brooks and Robert Penn Warren call his

"all-too-human tendency to seize upon a scapegoat"; second, that it

describes man's victimization by, in Helen Nebeker's words,

"unexamined and unchanging traditions which he could easily change if

he only realized their implications."5 Missing from both of these

approaches, however, is a careful analysis of the abundance of social

detail that links the lottery to the ordinary social practices of the

village. No mere "irrational" tradition, the lottery is an ideological

mechanism. It serves to reinforce the village's hierarchical social order

by instilling the villages with an unconscious fear that if they resist this

order they might be selected in the next lottery. In the process of

creating this fear, it also reproduces the ideology necessary for the

smooth functioning of that social order, despite its inherent

inequities. What is surprising in the work of an author who has never

been identified as a Marxist is that this social order and ideology are

essentially capitalist.

I think we need to take seriously Shirley Jackson's suggestion that the

world of the lottery is her reader's world, however reduced in scale for

the sake of economy. The village in which the lottery takes place has a

bank, a post office, a grocery store, a coal business, a school system; its

women are housewives rather than field workers or writers; and its

men talk of "tractors and taxes."6 More importantly, however, the

village exhibits the same socio-economic stratification that most people

take for granted in a modern, capitalist society.

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Let me begin by describing the top of the social ladder and save the

lower rungs for later. The village's most powerful man, Mr. Summers,

owns the village's largest business (a coal concern) and is also its major,

since he has, Jackson writes, more "time and energy [read money and

leisure] to devote to civic activities" than others (p. 292). (Summers'

very name suggests that he has become a man of leisure through his

wealth.) Next in line is Mr. Graves, the village's second most powerful

government official--its postmaster. (His name may suggest the gravity

of officialism.) And beneath Mr. Graves is Mr. Martin, who has the

economically advantageous position of being the grocer in a village of

three hundred.

These three most powerful men who control the town, economically as

well as politically, also happen to administer the lottery. Mr. Summers

is its official, sworn in yearly by Mr. Graves (p. 294). Mr. Graves helps

Mr. Summers make up the lottery slips (p. 293). And Mr. Martin

steadies the lottery box as the slips are stirred (p. 292). In the off

season, the lottery box is stored either at their places of business or

their residences: "It had spent on year in Mr. Graves' barn and another

year underfoot in the post-office, and sometimes it was set on a shelf in

the Martin grocery and left there" (p. 293). Who controls the town,

then, also controls the lottery. it is no coincidence that the lottery

takes place in the village square "between the post-office and the bank"-

-two buildings which represent government and finance, the

institutions from which Summers, Graves, and Martin derive their

power.

However important Mr. Graves and Mr. Martin may be, Mr. Summers

is still the most powerful man in town. Here we have to ask a Marxist

question: what relationship is there between his interests as the town's

wealthiest businessman and his officiating the lottery? That such a

relationship does exist is suggested by one of the most revealing lines of

the text. When Bill Hutchinson forces his wife Tessie to open her

lottery slip to the crowd, Jackson writes, "It had a black spot on it, the

black spot Mr. Summers had made the night before with [a] heavy

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pencil in [his] coal-company office" (p. 301). At the very moment when

the lottery's victim is revealed, Jackson appends a subordinate clause in

which we see the blackness (evil) of Mr. Summers' (coal) business being

transferred to the black dot on the lottery slip. At one level at least,

evil in Jackson's text is linked to a disorder, promoted by capitalism, in

the material organization of modern society. But it still remains to be

explained how the evil of the lottery is tied to this disorder of capitalist

social organization.

Let me sketch the five major points of my answer to this

question. First, the lottery's rules of participation reflect and codify a

rigid social hierarchy based upon an inequitable social division of

labor. Second, the fact that everyone participates in the lottery and

understands consciously that its outcome is pure chance give it a

certain "democratic" aura that obscures its first codifying

function. Third, the villagers believe unconsciously that their

commitment to a work ethic will grant them some magical immunity

from selection. Fourth, this work ethic prevents them from

understanding that the lottery's actual function is not to encourage

work per se but to reinforce an inequitable social division of

labor. Finally, after working through these points, it will be easier to

explain how Jackson's choice of Tessie Hutchinson as the lottery's

victim/scapegoat reveals the lottery to be an ideological mechanism

which serves to defuse the average villager's deep, inarticulate

dissatisfaction with the social order in which he lives by channeling it

into anger directed at the victims of that social order. It is reenacted

year after year, then, not because it is a mere "tradition," as Helen

Nebeker argues, but because it serves the repressive ideological

function of purging the social body of all resistance so that business

(capitalism) can go on as usual and the Summers, the Graves and the

Martins can remain in power.

Implicit in the first and second points above is a distinction between

universal participation in the lottery and what I have called its rules of

participation. The first of these rules I have already explained, of

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course: those who control the village economically and politically also

administer the lottery. The remaining rules also tell us much about

who has and who doesn't have power in the village's social

hierarchy. These remaining rules determine who gets to choose slips in

the lottery's first, second and third rounds. Before the lottery, lists are

"[made] up of heads of families [who choose in the first round], heads of

households [who choose in the second round], [and] members of each

household in each family [who choose in the last round]" (p. 294). The

second round is missing from the story because the family patriarch

who selects the dot in the first round--Bill Hutchinson--has no married

male offspring. When her family is chosen in the first round, Tessie

Hutchinson objects that her daughter and son-in-law didn't "take their

chance." Mr. Summers has to remind her, "Daughters draw with their

husbands' families" (p. 299). Power in the village, then, is exclusively

consolidated into the hands of male heads of families and

households. Women are disenfranchised.

Although patriarchy is not a product of capitalism per se, patriarchy in

the village does have its capitalist dimension. (New social formations

adapt old traditions to their own needs.) Women in the village seem to

be disenfranchised because male heads of households, as men in the

work force, provide the link between the broader economy of the village

and the economy of the household. Some consideration of other single

household families in the first round of the lottery--the Dunbars and

the Watsons--will help make this relationship between economics and

family power clearer. Mr. Dunbar, unable to attend the lottery

because he has a broken leg, has to choose by proxy. The rules of

lottery participation take this situation into account: "gown boy[s]" take

precedence as proxies over wives (p. 295). Mrs. Dunbar's son Horace,

however, is only sixteen, still presumably in school and not working;

hence Mrs. Dunbar chooses for Mr. Dunbar. Jack Watson, on the other

hand, whose father is dead, is clearly older than Horace and

presumably already in the work force. Admittedly, such inferences

cannot be supported with hard textual evidence, but they make sense

when the text is referred to the norms of the society which it

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addresses.7 Within these norms, "heads of households" are not simply

the oldest males in their immediate families; they are the oldest

working males and get their power from their insertion into a larger

economy. Women, who have no direct link to the economy as defined

by capitalism--the arena of activity in which labor is exchanged for

wages and profits are made--choose in the lottery only in the absence of

a "grown," working male.8

Women, then, have a distinctly subordinate position in the socio-

economic hierarchy of the village. They make their first appearance

"wearing faded house dresses . . . [and walking] shortly after their

menfolk" (p. 292). Their dresses indicate that they do in fact work, but

because they work in the home and not within the larger economy in

which work is regulated by money, they are treated by men and treat

themselves as inferiors. When Tessie Hutchinson appears late to the

lottery, other men address her husband Bill, "here comes your Missus,

Hutchinson" (p. 295). None of the men, that is to say, thinks of

addressing Tessie first, since she "belongs" to Bill. Most women in the

village take this patriarchal definition of their role for granted, as Mrs.

Dunbar's and Mrs. Delacroix's references to their husbands as their "old

[men]" suggests (pp. 295 & 297). Tessie, as we shall see later, is the

only one who rebels against male domination, although only

unconsciously.

Having sketched some of the power relations within the families of the

village, I can now shift my attention to the ways in which what I have

called the democratic illusion of the lottery diverts their attention from

the capitalist economic relations in which these relations of power are

grounded. On its surface, the idea of a lottery in which everyone, as

Mrs. Graves says, "[takes] the same chance" seems eminently

democratic, even if its effect, the singing out of one person for privilege

or attack, is not.

One critic, noting an ambiguity at the story's beginning, has remarked

that "the lottery . . . suggests 'election' rather than selection," since "the

[villagers] assemble in the center of the place, in the village square."9 I

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would like to push the analogy further. In capitalist dominated

elections, business supports and promotes candidates who will be more

or less attuned to its interests, multiplying its vote through campaign

financing, while each individual businessman can claim that he has but

one vote. In the lottery, analogously, the village ruling class

participates in order to convince others (and perhaps even themselves)

that they are not in fact above everyone else during the remainder of

the year, even though their exclusive control of the lottery suggests

that they are. Yet just as the lottery's black (ballot?) box has grown

shabby and reveals in places its "original wood color," moments in their

official "democratic" conduct of the lottery--especially Mr. Summers'

conduct as their representative--reveal the class interest that lies

behind it. If Summers wears jeans, in order to convince the villagers

that he is just another one of the common people, he also wears a "clean

white shirt," a garment more appropriate to his class (p. 294). If he

leans casually on the black box before the lottery selection begins, as a

President, say, might put his feet up on the White House desk, while

leaning he talk[s] interminably to Mr. Graves and the Martins," the

other members of his class, and "seem[s] very proper and important" (p.

294). Jackson has placed these last details in emphatic position at the

end of a paragraph.) Finally, however democratic his early appeal for

help in conducting the lottery might appear--"some of you fellows want

to give me a hand?" (p. 292)--Mr. Martin, who responds, is the third

most powerful man in the village. Summers' question is essentially

empty and formal, since the villagers seem to understand, probably

unconsciously, the unspoken rule of class that governs who administers

the lottery; it is not just anyone who can help Summers.

The lottery's democratic illusion, then, is an ideological effect that

prevents the villagers from criticizing the class structure of their

society. But this illusion alone does not account for the full force of the

lottery over the village. The lottery also reinforces a village work ethic

which distracts the villagers' attention from the division of labor that

keeps women powerless in their homes and Mr. Summers powerful in

his coal company office.

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In the story's middle, Old Man Warner (an alarmist name if there ever

was one) emerges as an apologist for this work ethic when he recalls an

old village adage, "Lottery in June, corn be heavy soon" (p. 297). At one

level, the lottery seems to be a modern version of a planting ritual that

might once have prepared the villagers for the collective work necessary

to produce a harvest. (Such rituals do not necessarily involve human

sacrifice.) As magical as Warner's proverb may seem, it establishes an

unconscious (unspoken) connection between the lottery and work that

is revealed by the entirety of his response when told that other villages

are considering doing away with the lottery:

"Pack of crazy fools . . . listening to young folks, nothing's good enough

for them. Next thing you know, they'll be wanting to go back to living

in caves, nobody work any more, live that way for a while. Used to be a

saying about 'Lottery in June, corn be heavy soon.' First thing you

know, we'd all be eating stewed chickweed and acorns. There's always

been a lottery." (p. 297)

But Warner does not explain how the lottery functions to motivate

work. In order to do so, it would have to inspire the villagers with a

magical fear that their lack of productivity would make them

vulnerable to selection in the next lottery. The village women reveal

such an unconscious fear in their ejaculatory questions after the last

slip has been drawn in the first round: "Who is it?" "Who's got it"" "Is it

the Dunbars?" "Is it the Watsons?" (p. 298). The Dunbars and the

Watsons, it so happens, are the least "productive" families in the village:

Mr. Dunbar has broken his leg, Mr. Watson is dead. Given this

unconscious village fear that lack of productivity determines the

lottery's victim, we might guess that Old Man Warner's pride that he is

participating in the lottery for the "seventy-seventh time" stems from a

magical belief--seventy-seven is a magical number--that his

commitment to work and the village work ethic accounts for his

survival. Wherever we find "magic," we are in the realm of the

unconscious: the realm in which the unspoken of ideology resides.

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Old Man Warner's commitment to a work ethic, however appropriate it

might be in an egalitarian community trying collectively to carve an

economy out of a wilderness, is not entirely innocent in the modern

village, since it encourages villagers to work without pointing out to

them that part of their labor goes to the support of the leisure and

power of a business class. Warner, that is to say, is Summers'

ideologist. At the end of his remarks about the lottery, Warner laments

Summers' democratic conduct: "Bad enough to see young Joe Summers

up there joking with everybody" (p. 297). Yet this criticism obscures

the fact that Summers is not about to undermine the lottery, even if he

does "moderni8ze" it, since by running the lottery he also encourages a

work ethic which serves his interest. Just before the first round

drawing, Summers remarks casually, "Well, now . . . guess we better get

started, get this over with, so's we can go back to work" (p. 295). The

"we" in his remark is deceptive; what he means to say is "so that you

can go back to work for me."

The final major point of my reading has to do with Jackson's selection

of Tessie Hutchinson as the lottery's victim/scapegoat. She could have

chosen Mr. Dunbar, of course, in order to show us the unconscious

connection that the villagers draw between the lottery and their work

ethic. But to do so would not have revealed that the lottery actually

reinforces a division of labor. Tessie, after all, is a woman whose role as

a housewife deprives her of her freedom by forcing her to submit to a

husband who gains his power over her by virtue of his place in the work

force. Tessie, however, rebels against her role, and such rebellion is

just what the orderly functioning of her society cannot

stand. Unfortunately, her rebellion is entirely unconscious.

Tessie's rebellion begins with her late arrival at the lottery, a faux pas

that raises suspicions of her resistance to everything that the lottery

stands for. She explains to Mr. Summers that she was doing her

dishes and forgot what day it was. The way in which she says this,

however, involves her in another faux pas: the suggestion that she

might have violated the village's work ethic and neglected her specific

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job within the village's social division of labor: "Wouldn't have me leave

m'dishes in the sink, now, would you Joe?" (p. 295). The "soft laughter

[that runs] through the crowd" after this remark is a nervous laughter

that indicates, even more than the village women's singling out of the

Dunbars and the Watsons, the extent of the village's commitment to its

work ethic and power structure (p. 295). When Mr. Summers calls her

family's name, Tessie goads her husband, "Get up there Bill" (p.

297). In doing so, she inverts the power relation that holds in the

village between husbands and wives. Again, her remark evokes

nervous laughter from the crowd, which sense the taboo that she has

violated. Her final faux pas is to question the rules of the lottery which

relegate women to inferior status as the property of their

husbands. when Mr. Summers asks Bill Hutchinson whether his

family has any other households, Tessie yells, "There's Don and Eva . . .

. Make them take their chance" (p. 299). Tessie's daughter Eva,

however, belongs to Don and is consequently barred from participating

with her parents' family.

All of these faux pas set Tessie up as the lottery's likeliest victim, even

if they do not explicitly challenge the lottery. That Tessie's rebellion is

entirely unconscious is revealed by her cry while being stoned, "It isn't

fair" (p. 302). Tessie does not object to the lottery per se, only to her

own selection as its scapegoat. It would have been fine with her if

someone else had been selected.

In stoning Tessie, the villagers treat her as a scapegoat onto which they

can project and through with they can "purge"--actually, the term

repress is better, since the impulse is conserved rather than eliminated-

-their own temptations to rebel. The only places we can see these

rebellious impulses are in Tessie, in Mr. and Mrs. Adams' suggestion,

squelched by Warner, that the lottery might be given up, and in the

laughter of the crowd. (The crowd's nervous laughter is ambivalent: it

expresses uncertainty about the validity of the taboos that Tessie

breaks.) But ultimately these rebellious impulses are channeled by the

lottery and its attendant ideology away from their proper objects--

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capitalism and capitalist patriarchs--into anger at the rebellious victims

of capitalist social organization. Like Tessie, the villagers cannot

articulate their rebellion because the massive force of ideology stands in

the way.

The lottery functions, then, to terrorize the village into accepting, in

the name of work and democracy, the inequitable social division of

labor and power on which its social order depends. When Tessie is

selected, and before she is stoned, Mr. Summers asks her husband to

"show [people] her paper" (p. 301). By holding up the slip, Bill

Hutchinson reasserts his dominance over his wayward wife and

simultaneous transforms her into a symbol to others of the perils of

disobedience.

Here I would like to point out a curious crux in Jackson's treatment of

the theme of scapegoating in "The Lottery": the conflict between the

lottery's arbitrariness and the utter appropriateness of its

victim. Admittedly, Tessie is a curious kind of scapegoat, since the

village does not literally choose her, single her out. An act of

scapegoating that is unmotivated is difficult to conceive. The crux

disappears, however, once we realize that the lottery is a metaphor for

the unconscious ideological mechanisms of scapegoating. In choosing

Tessie through the lottery, Jackson has attempted to show us whom

the village might have chosen if the lottery had been in fact an

election. But by presenting this election as an arbitrary lottery, she

gives us an image of the village's blindness to its own motives.

Possibly the most depressing thing about "The Lottery" is how early

Jackson represents this blindness as beginning. Even the village

children have been socialized into the ideology that victimizes

Tessie. When they are introduced in the second paragraph of the story,

they are anxious that summer has let them out of school: "The feeling

of liberty sat uneasily on most of them" (p. 291). Like their parents,

they have learned that leisure and play are suspect. As if to quell this

anxiety, the village boys engage in the play/labor of collecting stones for

the lottery. Moreover, they follow the lead of Bobby Martin, the one

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boy in the story whose father is a member of the village ruling class

(Mr. Summers and Mr. Graves have no boys), in hoarding and fighting

over these stones as if they were money. While the boys do this, the

village girls stand off to the side and watch, just as they will be expected

to remain outside of the work force and dependent on their working

husbands when they grow up.

As dismal as this picture seems, the one thing we ought not do is make

it into proof of the innate depravity of man. The first line of the second

paragraph--"The children assembled first, of course" (p. 291)--does not

imply that children take a "natural" and primitive joy in stoning people

to death.10 The closer we look at their behavior, the more we realize

that they learned it from their parents, whom they imitate in their

play. In order to facilitate her reader's grasp of this point, Jackson has

included at least one genuinely innocent child in the story--Davy

Hutchinson. When he has to choose his lottery ticket, the adults help

him while he looks at them "wonderingly" (p. 300). And when Tessie is

finally to be stoned, "someone" has to "[give] Davy Hutchinson a few

pebbles" (p. 301) to stone his mother. The village makes sure that Davy

learns what he is supposed to do before he understands why he does it

or the consequences. But this does not mean that he could not learn

otherwise.

Even the village adults are not entirely hopeless. Before Old Man

Warner cuts them off, Mr. and Mrs. Adams, whose last name suggests a

humanity that has not been entirely effaced, briefly mention other

villages that are either talking of giving up the lottery or have already

done so. Probably out of deep-seated fear, they do not suggest that

their village give it up; but that they hint at the possibility, however

furtively, indicates a reservation--a vague sense of guilt--about what

they are about to do. The Adams's represent the village's best, humane

impulses, impulses, however, which the lottery represses.

How do we take such a pessimistic vision of the possibility of social

transformation? If anything can be said against "The Lottery," it is

probably that it exaggerates the monolithic character of capitalist

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ideological hegemony. No doubt, capitalism has subtle ways of

redirecting the frustrations it engenders away from a critique of

capitalism itself. Yet if in order to promote itself it has to make

promises of freedom, prosperity and fulfillment on which it cannot

deliver, pockets of resistance grow up among the disillusioned. Perhaps

it is not Jackson's intention to deny this, but to shock her complacent

reader with an exaggerated image of the ideological modus operandi of

capitalism: accusing those whom it cannot or will not employ of being

lazy, promoting "the family" as the essential social unit in order to

discourage broader associations and identifications, offering men power

over their wives as a consolation for their powerlessness in the labor

market, and pitting workers against each other and against the

unemployed. It is our fault as readers if our own complacent pessimism

makes us read Jackson's story pessimistically as a parable of man's

innate depravity.

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In this essay, notice especially how the writer

includes an academic title.

indicates towards the end of the introduction the story's theme and the

main ideas of each body paragraph.

creates specific topic sentences that identify each paragraph's main idea

and that contain a transition that refers back to the previous

paragraph.

refers to the theme of "conformity to tradition" not only in the title but

in the introduction, conclusion, and most of the topic sentences.

thoroughly analyzes the story.

smoothly integrates quotations.

uses the present tense.

"They Still Remembered to Use Stones": Conformity to Tradition

and Authority in Jackson’s "The Lottery"

"‘It isn’t fair. It isn’t right,’" Mrs. Hutchinson screams, yet no mercy

is shown to her (269). The townspeople kill their friend and family

member without a sense of remorse. In "The Lottery," Shirley Jackson

depicts this inhumane action as something that has become a

meaningless tradition, almost a sport. Jackson shows how seemingly

decent people may perform cruel acts in their unquestioning acceptance

of tradition, tradition that habit, peer pressure, and the children’s

upbringing perpetuate. Written in 1948, only a few years after the

discovery of how German citizens assented to Nazi atrocities, but

apparently set in an rural, otherwise average American town, the story

suggests that even normal, average people are capable of acquiescing to

evil until they are its victim.

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Even though the lottery seems without meaning, there must have

been a good reason for it to have started originally. Through Old Man

Warner and his attitude towards the towns that have given up the

lottery, Jackson gives readers an insight into the real reasons for the

lottery. Old Man Warner is the oldest man in the town, and he knows

better than anyone else about how the lottery should be conducted and

why they still do it. He is angry that people no longer appreciate the

importance of the lottery: "‘Pack of crazy fools,’ he said. ‘. . . Next thing

you know, they’ll be wanting to go back to caves . . . . Used to be a

saying about "Lottery in June, corn be heavy soon"’" (289). In other

words, they must pay back to the land what was given to them. The

land is their god that provided a good life for the community, but if they

don’t sacrifice one of their own, then there will not be good crops, and

they will become primitives living in caves. Warner states that they will

only have "‘stewed chickweed and acorns’" to eat (284). As irrational as

this may sound, this type of activity has been displayed throughout

history. In Ancient Egypt, people would search for the most beautiful

virgin girl in all of Egypt every year. When they found her, they would

throw her into the Nile out of fear that if they did not, the Nile would

not provide, because the Nile was their god as well. The Nile was the

source of their economy and the essence of life; if there were no Nile,

there would have been no Egypt. The people are willing to give up one

for the good of the whole community. It is a "necessity" because

otherwise the community will not survive. Old Man Warner symbolizes

the lottery of old and what the real reason the lottery was for. Warner

states with disgust, "Bad enough to see young Joe Summers up there

joking with everyone" (268). The lottery was originally a serious,

ceremonial time, not a casual, joking matter.

The town originally held the lottery for the good of the community,

and the people then understood what was going on and why; however,

the real reasons for the lottery have become virtually unknown to most

of the people in the present generation as they mindlessly conform to

the tradition. Even though Mrs. Adams tells Old Man Warner, "‘Some

places have already quit lotteries,’" this town continues its. The

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townspeople continue it even though most of the equipment and

ceremony have disappeared or changed: "The original paraphernalia for

the lottery had been lost long ago . . ." and "much of the ritual had been

forgotten or discarded . . ." (281). In addition, a ritual chant "had been

allowed to lapse," and a ritual salute "had changed with time, until now

it was felt necessary only for the official to speak with the person

approaching" (282). The lottery has become a casual town event,

"conducted--as were the square dances, the teen-age club, the

Halloween program--by Mr. Summers, who had the time and energy to

devote to civic activities" (281). The men tell jokes and the women

gossip while someone’s life is about to be taken. Ironically, the ultimate

victim of this lottery even takes the event so lightly that she almost

forgets what day it is.

The black box symbolizes the tradition of the lottery in its present

decayed condition. The box is said to be made of some of the same wood

from the original

box--apparently very little. In the same manner, the lottery itself is

mostly different now except for a few things like the usage of the

stones. The townspeople treat the box as casually as they do the

murder, storing the box in various places: "in Mr. Grave’s barn,"

underfoot in the post office," or "on a shelf in the Martin grocery" (282).

Not only habit but also peer pressure plays a major role in the

townspeople’s mindlessly obeying tradition. Warner says, "‘Come on,

come, everyone,’" encouraging all to participate in the slaughter (286).

They do it together; it makes it easier. As long as they stick together as

a group, seemingly decent people can commit inhuman acts in adhering

blindly to tradition. Even though the tradition has lost its meaning for

most of the townspeople, there still is an important subconscious

reason for maintaining the lottery. To do away with it would be

admitting that they were wrong about the lottery altogether; therefore,

all the hundreds of people who died in the lottery over the years would

have died in vain.

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Now the lottery is a meaningless duty to be done with or, worse, an

exciting sport rather than a meaningful ritual. Mr. Summers

emphasizes the townspeople’s desire to get the lottery over with when

he says, "‘guess we better get started, get this over with, so’s we can go

back to work’" (282). Jackson plainly portrays the lottery’s transition to

being a sport when Mrs. Delacroix, Tessie’s good friend, calls out

without any sense of remorse, "‘Be a good sport, Tessie,’" when Mrs.

Hutchinson complains about her being chosen, and Mrs. Delacroix

gamely picks up "a stone so large she had to pick it up with both hands .

. ." (286).

Even if the adult population has some notion of what is going on, for

the children the lottery is very much a game; they learn how to perform

the ritual without understanding its purpose, thus perpetuating a

meaningless tradition. Bobby Martin runs back to the prepared pile of

stones, laughing, and all the children act as though they are

participating in "boisterous play" (280). The Delacroix boys make a pile

of stones and then "guarded it against the raids of the other boys,"

obviously playing some sort of "king of the mountain" on the stones

that would eventually kill (280 ). The children represent the next

generation that will perpetuate the tradition, and they are totally blind.

The townspeople are content to continue obeying this tradition, peer

pressure, and town authority only until they are affected themselves.

Tessie’s reaction illustrates people’s willingness to allow something to

persist provided it does not touch them. Tessie’s tone changes from

unconcern to fear only when she is threatened. Then she is willing even

to sacrifice her married daughter to lower her own chances of being

chosen. Even then, however, her attitude is not that the lottery is

wrong but that the drawing in some way "‘wasn’t fair’" (285).

Is Jackson’s story ludicrous, or does it relate to any practices in

American society? For example, alcohol kills more lives than any other

drug in America, yet it is linked to all traditional holidays and

weekends as well. Alcohol kills, yet Americans still consume it. What

about hazing? There are countless incidents of death relating to

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fraternity membership, yet it still happens. And when the television set

is turned to HBO boxing, Americans scream and yell with excitement

as Mike Tyson pounds his opponent into a bloody mess. Children are

killed by razor blades and poison in candy bars every year in October,

and they are still sent out by their parents the next year. No, "The

Lottery" depicts the practice of continuing a tradition even though it is

harmful and has lost its meaning.

Shirley Jackson’s seemingly exaggerated point of view of Americans

may not be so exaggerated after all. Are Americans decent people who

perform inhumane acts in their unquestioning acceptance of tradition?

"‘It isn’t fair, it isn’t right,’" Tessie yells, but is it fair and right when an

innocent family of four is plowed down by a drunk driver on New

Year’s Eve? To Jackson, America is more pagan and immoral than

what citizens want to believe. In depicting how the lottery went from

being a meaningful ceremony to a meaningless sport, Jackson is also

trying to show how America is decaying morally and how seemingly

normal people are capable of cruelty.

Note: The Works Cited should be on a SEPARATE page. Al;so, this

essay cites an OLD edition of another anthology; you will have to use

the information from YOUR textbook when you cite the story you're

analyzing.

Shirley Jackson: The Lottery

In the story “The Lottery” Shirley Jackson’s method of using irony to get the idea across that people need to

open up to change was successful. By using ironic examples throughout the story it really made me want to

know what was going to happen next. I love when authors use irony in a story because it tricks the reader

into thinking something is going to happen but instead something else happens.

I like that Shirley used irony because it added a sense of suspense to the story. An ironic event form the

story is when Mrs. Hutchinson was encouraging her husband to pick the lottery ticket. When something bad

is going to happen to one person out of a large group of people, people tend to be so sure that it won’t be

them. Mrs. Hutchinson said to her husband, “”Get up there, Bill,” as her family name was called. She was so

confident that no one from her family, especially not her, was going to get stoned.

Another ironic event from the story is the title itself. When you hear the word “lottery”, you think of money.

Well that was the complete opposite of this story. In this story “The Lottery” the lottery was actually a raffle

that was held every year in a town. The “winner” of the lottery grand prize wasn’t money or a free vacation,

but it was death. Everyone in the town gathered together and the head of each family would go up to the box

and pull a piece of paper. Each piece of paper was blank except for one. The head of the household who

grabbed the paper with the black dot on it, his family was up for another draw and everyone else was safe

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and free to keep their life. The family would approach the box, put their hand in, and pull out a piece of

paper. Whoever pulled out the paper with the black dot would get stoned. In the story Mrs. Hutchinson was

the one who was chosen to be stoned. After she discovered she was the one getting stoned she said “”It isn’t

fair, it isn’t right,”” Mrs. Hutchinson screamed, and then they were upon her.”

Shirley Jackson did a great job at forcing the reader to predict what was going to happen because of the

irony she used. The ironic events she used, definitely kept me on my toes. I would love to read/watch

another story by Shirley Jackson. She is truly an amazing writer.

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keke lawson on July 19, 2011 at 12:44 pm said:

you thesis statement: Shirley Jackson’s method of using irony to get the idea across that people need

to open up to change was successful.

quote 1:”Get up there, Bill,”

quote 2: ” Mrs. Hutchinson screamed, and then they were upon her.”

yes Kaylan Roberson proved Shirley Jackson method of using irony. she proved her point and what

she believed.

- Special K

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Susan Boehl on July 19, 2011 at 12:45 pm said:

thesis dawg ; In the story “The Lottery” Shirley Jackson’s method of using irony to get the idea

across that people need to open up to change was successful

quotes dawg ; ”Get up there, Bill,” ”It isn’t fair, it isn’t right,”

you did a fabulous job ! keep up the good work .

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Jerrell Meads on July 19, 2011 at 3:28 pm said:

Your thesis statement stated that Shirley Jackson’s method in “The Lottery” was irony to get the

point across that people of the village need to open up and change. You stated that it was successful,

and it was.

Quote 1: “Get up there, Bill”

Quote 2: ” Mrs. Hutchinson screamed, and then they were upon her.”

Yes Kaylan did a excellent job her facts and statement were both correct!

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masaddiq on July 19, 2011 at 3:34 pm said:

Your thesis statement was “Shirley Jackson’s method of using irony to get the idea across”.

2.”Get up there, Bill” is a form of irony because he went up there and got the wrong card and got

mad and started saying things like ”It isn’t fair, it isn’t right,”. It is irony because she was joking

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around then she died.

3. You did a good job proving your point

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keke lawson on July 18, 2011 at 12:11 pm said:

Lottery Analysis

Shirley Jackson used the methods sarcasms in the story the lottery by wanting people to change their views

on some of the religious rituals or traditions that they participate in. She uses the story the lottery to show

that some practices are just dreadful. Like for the ones that like to have rituals that puts somebody in danger

or even kills them. Like some rituals should be illegal to do because of the sickening stuff that occurs.

The rituals that religious groups practice puts people in danger and even kills them. Like the ones that

involve sacrifice, blood and the use of murder weapons. In the story “The Lottery” every year they would

have a lottery but it wasn’t for money it was for your life. The town would gather around each other in the

street, and when your name got called you would have to pull a piece of paper out of the box and if yours

had a black dot on it then you were the one who had to get stoned. Shirley used sarcasm by making Tessie

the last person to show up to the lottery and when she got there Mr. Summers said “Thought we were going

to have to get on without you, Tessie.” And she answered “Wouldn’t have me leave m’dishes in the sink,

now, would you. Joe? Not know that she was going to be picked. That type of stuff shouldn’t be allowed to

happen. Why would you want to have a ritual that could kill you, I don’t understand what would make you

join a suicidal religious group.

Some rituals should be illegal to do because of the brutal activity that is involved. In the Lottery Tessie was

the one that was chosen and as she yelled “It isn’t fair,” they still stoned her. I mean I understand that some

people do it because its apart of their religion, but why would you want to give blood or sacrifice yourself

because you think that’s what your god want you to. No that’s stupid if you think you’re going to heaven

because you offered to kill yourself.

Shirley Jackson used the method of sarcasms to show people that some religious activities are completely

despicable. If it means that’s I have to hurt myself to be a part of a group then they can forget it cause I

won’t be joining them, I’m going to join the people with enough since not to kill there self. In the story the

people didn’t even care all they said was “Let’s finish quickly.” Like they were writing a paper and they

wanted to get done with it. But no they were in a rush to murder somebody and that is completely insane.

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Delana Cook on July 18, 2011 at 12:39 pm said:

The Lottery Ticket

Picture your self being hit with big heavy rocks because your name was pulled from a box. The Lottery is a

short story by Shirley Jackson where she reveals her views on traditions and how ridiculous they can be. The

story was about a community pulling pieces of paper to determine who will get stoned to death. In this story

she is trying to tell readers that some traditions are ridiculous. One literary term Shirley Jackson used to

make her point in the story was exaggeration.

Exaggeration is part of this short story. Shirley Jackson’s short story is explained by using this literary term

along with other ones. First, when the people where standing around they knew their lives were in jeopardy,

but when Mrs. Hutchinson came she’s all laughs and giggles. Then once her family was the one with the

piece of paper she flipped out saying to Mr. Summers “You didn’t give him time enough to take any paper

he wanted. I saw you. It wasn’t fair!” Also, she kept trying to get them to start the drawing over again.

Second example of exaggeration was mostly shown in the movie. Then when they showed the rocks, they

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exaggerated on how big the actually rocks where. “Delacroix selected a stone so large she had to pick it up

with both hands and turned to Mrs. Dunbar.” They were big for no reason. Then they tried to give the

youngest Hutchinson a rock to throw at his mother. The movie was more of an exaggeration because of the

fact you seen the actions.

Shirley Jackson was just trying to make a statement by writing this short story. The statement she made was

that, some traditions that people do are ridiculous. She saying that some traditions should be changed. By

using sarcasm, exaggeration, and some other literary terms, she successfully got her point across. That was

all she wanted to do, was to let people know of the crazy traditions other people do.

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Kaylan Roberson on July 19, 2011 at 12:39 pm said:

- Your thesis statement is, “Shirley Jackson used to make her point in the story was exaggeration.”

- Two quotes from the story that supported your thesis statement are, “You didn’t give him time

enough to take any paper he wanted. I saw you. It wasn’t fair!” and “Delacroix selected a stone so

large she had to pick it up with both hands and turned to Mrs. Dunbar.”

- You did a very good job proving your case in this story. Nice quotes!

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keke lawson on July 19, 2011 at 12:49 pm said:

thesis statement: he Lottery is a short story by Shirley Jackson where she reveals her views on

traditions and how ridiculous they can be.

quote 1: “You didn’t give him time enough to take any paper he wanted. I saw you. It wasn’t fair!”

quote 2: “Delacroix selected a stone so large she had to pick it up with both hands and turned to Mrs.

Dunbar.”

yes Delana Cook did proved Shirley Jackson writing method of exaggeration. she proved her point

very well and did a good job.

- Special K

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Jerrell Meads on July 19, 2011 at 3:32 pm said:

Your thesis statement was, “Shirley Jackson used to make her point in the story was exaggeration.”

Two quotes that help support your thesis statement is, “You didn’t give him time enough to take any

paper he wanted. I saw you. It wasn’t fair!” and “Delacroix selected a stone so large she had to pick

it up with both hands and turned to Mrs. Dunbar.”

You did a fantasitc job because everything you said shows good reasons and examples of how this is

exaggeration.

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Susan Boehl on July 18, 2011 at 12:41 pm said:

Susan Boehl

1st hour College Writing

Silly Traditions

Every culture has different traditions. In America, we set cookies out for Santa Claus the night before

Christmas. In some countries people eat the placenta after a child birth. Many traditions are only preformed

simply because they are a tradition. In the short story The Lottery, our customs are exposed for what they

really are, silly traditions. Shirley Jackson successfully portrayed her message by over exaggerating.

The short story tells in the beginning of a town of hard working people, coming together on the same day

every year. They are having a lottery and the winner dies. During the ceremony, Old man Warner comments

on how everything is being done wrong. He is speaking as the generations before who believe that it is the

traditions way or the high way. He is over exaggerating the effect the Lottery has on the community, quoting

an old saying “Lottery in June, corn be heavy soon”.

When the “winner” of the Lottery is chosen, they are stoned to death. All parts of the community take part in

this affair, from infant to elderly. Warner could be heard above everyone saying, “Come on, come on,

everyone!” The chosen method of murder is exaggerating how horrific traditions are. Traditions don’t

encourage children to commit murder. However, traditions do sometimes hurt people and Jackson’s method

of exaggerating pointed that out.

The Lottery has gotten a lot of attention because of it’s over exaggerated situation. People have become both

offended and aware of the wrong in some traditions. Jackson successfully made people think about what

they do just because their father’s father has done it. If a person really thinks about it, Jackson’s

exaggerations aren’t so far fetched after all. The times are changing and its time for some traditions to

change too.

Anthony Murphy on July 18, 2011 at 12:53 pm said:

Literary Analysis of The Lottery

Anthony Murphy

1st hr

Shirley Jackson used sarcasm as tools to show that it is ok to move on from tradition. She wrote the story

The Lottery in the sixties and it has had and huge effect on Americans at the time. She wrote this story with

such a shocking and unexpected ending made her story stick out.

Mrs. Hutchinson, the women who gets stoned to death later in the story, displays her carelessness by coming

later than everybody else. Everybody seems seems to know that Mrs. Hutchinson was lying about her

excuses for being late because Mr. Summers, who had been waiting, said carefully “Though we were going

to have to get on without you, Tessie,” as if getting stoned was an honor which it isn’t if you’re the one

getting stoned. One way Shirley Jackson used sarcasm is by making Mrs. Hutchinson late because no one

really wants to be there for the lottery drawing. Mrs. Hutchinson even cracks jokes and gives excuses in the

story proving the sarcasm. For example “Clean forgot what day it was,” and “Thought my old man was out

back stacking wood,” or “Wouldn’t have me leave m’dishes in the sink, now, would you. Joe?,”. What

makes these quotes sarcastic is that they don’t really make sense and they send off a goofy kind of tone.

Another example of sarcasm is when Mr. Summers, the conductor of every major event in the village, says

“Hi. Steve.” And “Hi. Joe.”, While people drew their cards as if they were not facing death. The tone and

mood that the author set while Mr. Summers called up the names of villagers was serious and anxious but

Mr. Summers seems to tease the participants as they grabbed a card. I believe that when Mr. Summer said

“hi” he meant” bye” because that may be their last time he sees them. In conclusion his greeting was more

like a good-bye.

These are ways Shirley Jackson used sarcasm and effectively communicated to the read that some traditions

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are not worth practicing and people need to move on tradition. Shirley Jackson did a very well job using

sarcasm to give this story meaning. The moral of the story is its ok to move on.

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was making sarcastic jokes about the lottery.