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Writing skill Tight sequencing of the sentences and meaning: ( 句句句句句句句句句句 ) 1) To the left of the entrance is a study area . In this area, there are several low bookcases and a d esk . Over the desk hangs a lamp. 2) To the left of the entrance is a dresser. Next to the dresser is a closet. Beside the closet, there is a lamp. In front of the lamp a nd beside the bed is a rug.
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Writing skill Tight sequencing of the sentences and meaning: ( 句子和意义的紧密链接 ) 1) To the left of the entrance is a study area. In this area, there are several.

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Page 1: Writing skill Tight sequencing of the sentences and meaning: ( 句子和意义的紧密链接 ) 1) To the left of the entrance is a study area. In this area, there are several.

• Writing skill Tight sequencing of the sentences and m

eaning: ( 句子和意义的紧密链接 ) 1) To the left of the entrance is a study area. I

n this area, there are several low bookcases and a desk. Over the desk hangs a lamp.

2) To the left of the entrance is a dresser. Next to the dresser is a closet. Beside the closet, there is a lamp. In front of the lamp and beside the bed is a rug.

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Practice 1

最近,李越被评为你们班的“每周之星”。请你根据她事迹(在上周六下午,不顾天气的炎热,为班级选歌咏比赛服装),用英语为班级板报写一篇短文。 Li Yue has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the

Week ” for what she did for our class ______________

a. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday , Li Yue went downtown and looked for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest . However, most of us were enjoying our leisure …

b. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday , most of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms , Li Yue went downtown and looked for

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Practice 2

你校对严惩酒驾展开讨论。1 )谈谈讨论结果以及你的看法2 )谈谈你的看法。 …We held a discussion about it . ……

• Most of us believe that drunk driving …

• In my opinion, drunk driving ….

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• The Structure of the Passage 1. the danger 2/3. the solution a. law enforcement b. publicity and education As far as I am concerned, accidents are more

likely to happen when drivers drink too much … To solve the problem , strict laws should be

passed to…. Moreover, public awareness of road safety ought to be promoted…..

To sum up , drunk driving ….Only when ….can we live a peaceful and happy life.

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结构辨别

From my perspective, drunk driving is an issue that should not be neglected. Strict laws are badly needed so as to raise awareness of traffic safety. Firstly, it is much easier for life-risking accidents to occur when the driver is drunken. Secondly, more effective measures should be taken in punishing drunk drivers. Thus, drivers will learn a more unforgettable lesson and never do it again. Thirdly, lectures concerning traffic safety and the danger of drunk driving should be held in order to avoid potential accidents.

To sum up, drunk driving is an evil that doesn’t do any good to the society. Traffic safety is up to every individual. Please do your part.

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• Useful words and expressions danger 1. 造成后果• generate consequence• cause losses/accidents• add to the possibility of 2. 造成威胁• threaten/endanger• pose a threat to3. 无视 turn a blind eye to sth. ignore/neglect/overlook sth.4. 形容词• 严重的 severe, serious, gravity (n. 严重性 ) • 紧急的 urgent, pressing• 有害的 harmful, destructive, toxic, poisonous

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• Useful words and expressions • law enforcement and education 采取措施

制定法规提高公共意识承担责任

加强惩罚力度加强执法力度

相关部门个人

take measures( actions) make regulations (laws/ rules)promote public awareness on assume/shoulder responsibilityfulfill obligationput more emphasis on punishment law enforcementrelevant/related departmentsdepartments concernedindividual

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China Daily  •    A Chinese pop singer, best known for his campus bal

lads, faces prison after he was caught drunken driving on Monday night in Beijing, police said on Tuesday. After arrested, Gao Xiaosong said to the police, "I' m illegal, I am willing to assume all responsibilities for the accident."

• drunken driving 醉驾• DU (driving under the influence) 酒驾 driving while intoxicated• designated driving service• breath alcohol test 酒精呼气测试• blood test 血液检测• hit-and-run 交通肇事逃逸• zero tolerance 零容忍

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Translation

1. 酒驾对道路交通造成极大的威胁,甚至威胁人们的生活。

2. 酒驾是个不容忽视的问题。3. 政府必须采取措施去惩罚那些酒驾的司机。4. 相关部分必须颁布更严格的法律去惩罚酒驾司

机。5. 公众对道路安全的意识必须被加强。6. 如果政府和个人都承担各自的责任,道路就会

更安全。7. 在政府和个人的共同努力之下,我们就能生活

得更安全幸福。

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Translation

1. 酒驾对道路交通造成极大的威胁,甚至威胁人们的生活。

Drunk driving pose a great threat to road safety, even threatening people’s lives.

2. 酒驾是个不容忽视的问题。 It is an issue not to be overlooked.

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3. 政府必须采取措施去惩罚那些酒驾的司机。 The government should take some measures to puni

sh those who drive when drunk.

improved version :

Measures should be taken to punish …. by

4. 相关部分必须颁布更严格的法律去惩罚酒驾司机。 Relevant departments should pass laws to punish th

ose drunk drivers.

improved version:

Laws should be passed by relevant departments to punish….

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5. 公众对道路安全的意识必须被加强。 Public awareness on road safety should be promoted/ enh

anced.

6. 如果政府和个人都承担各自的责任,道路就会更安全。 If the government and individuals shoulder their responsi

bility, roads will be much safer.

improved version:

Only when the government and individuals should their responsibility will the roads be much safer.

7. 在政府和个人的共同努力之下,我们就能生活得更安全幸福。

With the combined efforts of the government and individuals, every one in the society is able to live a peaceful and happy life.

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From my perspective, drunk driving is an issue never to be neglected, since it poses a great threat to road safety, even threatening people’s lives. In view of the seriousness of this problem , firstly, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. It is essential that the role of laws and regulations should be strengthened to punish those performing drunken driving. Secondly , education should be carried out by the relevant department. In this way, the public, especially drivers, are able to enhance their awareness of road safety. With stringent laws and alert public , it will only a matter of time for drunken driving to become things of past. (Only when the government and individuals shoulder their responsibility will we live in a safe and harmonious society.)

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one possible version

Most of us believe that drunk driving easily causes accidents and it endangers the drivers themselves and others.

To deal with the situation, it’s far from enough for the traffic police to warn the drunk drivers or simply get them fined. The solution to the problem calls for heavier punishment.

In my opinion, it’s a long way to put an end to this phenomenon. We must carry on traffic safety education quite often and make the drivers aware of the danger of drunk driving as well as the sufferings they might cause to other people. Last but not least, related laws should be strictly put into effect.

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One possible version by Zhang Jiayun

It is widely believed that driving when drunk is likely to cause unexpected accidents, endangering our lives. So many of us think it necessary for departments to bring out more powerful laws. Some students also state that basic education about safe driving and the bad influence of drunk driving should be started.

From my perspective, we teenagers can also do something to help, such as put up some reminders. Only when everyone does his own can we have a more harmonious society.

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Having witnessed numerous accidents that ruin the lives of families, the overwhelming majority of us students advocate this law, for driving after drinking can not only result in traffic accidents but also endanger the lives of citizens. Moreover, the department related to traffic should increase the strength of punishment over the issue of drunk driving, thus decreasing the number of people who dare to break the law. As far as I am concerned, education can not be ignored. It’s essential to educate the public how significant the traffic safety is and how much damage the drunk driving will do to the whole society. Only in this way can we citizens live a safe and happy life.

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拓展 环境问题日益严重。市面上出现许多一次

性货物 (disposable goods). 从政府学校和个人角度谈谈保护环境的措施。

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• environmental protection

• Background information• Environmental problems, such as global

warming and air pollution are now frequent headlines on TV and in the newspapers all over the world which keep reminding us of our obligation to protect the environment. Actions should be taken as soon as possible by the government, the community , the school as well as at the individual level.

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solutions

• The government needs to take effective measures to make people more environmentally responsible. Firstly, environmental awareness should be promoted at all levels of education, especially primary and secondary schools. Thus, people are encouraged to consume more green products instead of disposable goods that are harmful to the environment. Secondly the government can also make some regulations to offer more motivation to people who have been active in cleaning up the neighbourhood or severely punish those who have been unfriendly to the environment.

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• Some environment-related programmes can be organised by the school, such as a promotion on “green lunch” in schools, an environmental shopping bag design competition, and the Power Saving Action for Schools competition, which encourage schools and students to save energy.

• As for individuals, every contribution counts. Everyone can make changes in our daily life and adopt cleaner, greener lifestyles (habits) by doing simple things, such as turning off computers, televisions and lights when not in use, setting air-conditioners at an energy-saving temperature, using fewer disposable utensils , recycling things, and bringing our own shopping bags

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• conclusion• To sum up, if every member of the society is

aware of his responsibility and does something to reduce the negative impact of human activities on the environment, the ecological strain on the earth can be relieved and the Earth will turn into a more pleasant habitat/planet to live in.