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  1. 1. Editing by: 1-Hussain al-Ghawi 2. Eman al-Zawwad 3. Mohannad Alnsour 4. Diego Auvert 5. Houda Jarid Parallelism
  2. 2. Contents What is parallelism? Use similar structures to express similar ideas. Use parallelism in the following cases. Use parallel structure on both sides of coordinating conjunctions. Exercises
  3. 3. Parallelism: 1.means that similar parts of a sentence have the same structure: nouns are with nouns, verbs with verbs, and phrases with phrases In other word:- 2. Parallelism in writing means that similar parts in a sentence (2 or more) must have the same structure. Their parts are comparable and balanced. Allows writing to flow smoothly and helps avoid misunderstandings. Note: When similar parts do not follow the same structure, you have created Faulty Parallelism.
  4. 4. For examples:- 1.Not parallelism : I like singing, kayaking, and to dance. 2. parallelism: I like singing, kayaking, and dancing Incorrect:- Angry ants, munched the marshmallows, crumbling coffeecake, and sipping syrup, headed off across the countertop. Correct:- Angry ants, munching marshmallows, crumbling
  5. 5. Use similar structures to express similar ideas. Put nouns with nouns Faulty (F): I enjoy basketball more than playing video games. Correct (C) : I enjoy basketball more than video games. Put verbs with verbs (and use same tense) F: On our anniversary, we ate, danced, and were singing. C: On our anniversary, we ate, danced, and sang. Put adjectives with adjectives F: My history class was both interesting and a challenge. C: My history class was both interesting and challenging.
  6. 6. Make sure to use parallelism in the following cases. When joining two or more items with and or or: 1.The party featured a four-foot cake and a singing gorilla. 2.I am doing well in my English class, in my math class, and in my history class. In comparisons: Taking the train is as fast as driving. Driving to Austin is as fast as flying With certain paired words (like both/and, either/or, and neither/nor): Marlize both bakes bread and fixes cars. My history course is both interesting and challenging
  7. 7. Use parallel structure on both sides of coordinating conjunctions (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so) FANBOYS For example, 1. She possessed all the wizards charm yet none of the wizards insight. 2. Consult a doctor if your coughing persists or if your coughing worsens over the weekend. 3. In English class, Diego learned to read poems critically and appreciate good prose.. 4. A swimmer was attacked by a shark, but he scared it away by poking it in the eye.
  8. 8. Paired Conjunctions: (Bothand; not only. . . but also; either. . .or; neither . . . nor) For example,, Both my mother and my sister are here. Not only my mother but also my sister is here. Neither my sister nor my parents are here. We can have either broccoli or cauliflower for dinner. Note: 1.When we use (both. . . and) the verb is always plural. 2. When we use (not onlybut also; neither. . . nor; either. . . or) the verb is always in the form of the word directly before it
  9. 9. Choose the correct answer to fill in the blank. 1. Ellas job responsibilities include ____, training, and informing workers of company policies. A) to hire B) hired C) hire D) none of the above
  10. 10. Choose the correct answer to fill in the blank. 1.Ellas job responsibilities include ____, training, and informing workers of company policies. ANSWER: A) to hire B) hired C) hire D) none of the above; hiring is the correct answer.
  11. 11. More Exercises:- 2. Henry likes pizza more than _______. A) spinach B) to eat spinach C) to be eating spinach D) none of the above
  12. 12. More Exercises:- 2.Henry likes pizza more than _______. ANSWER: A) spinach B) to eat spinach C) to be eating spinach D) none of the above
  13. 13. More Exercises:- 3.He drove to the store to buy milk, eggs, and _______. A) to get bread B) bread C) getting bread D) none of the above
  14. 14. More Exercises:- 3.He drove to the store to buy milk, eggs, and _______. ANSWER: A) to get bread B) bread C) getting bread D) none of the above
  15. 15. More Exercises:- 4.Tom jogs, swims, and _________. A) he is kick boxing B) kick boxes C) he kick boxes D) none of the above
  16. 16. More Exercises:- 4.Tom jogs, swims, and _________. ANSWER: A) he is kick boxing B) kick boxes C) he kick boxes D) none of the above
  17. 17. More Exercises:- 5.The film had many stars, used various special effects, and ________. A) violence B) featured graphic violence C) it was violent D) none of the above
  18. 18. More Exercises:- 5.The film had many stars, used various special effects, and ________. ANSWER: A) violence B) featured graphic violence C) it was violent D) none of the above
  19. 19. More Exercises:- 6.I think that learning a new language is harder than ____. A) math B) to learn math C) learning math D) none of the above
  20. 20. More Exercises:- 6.I think that learning a new language is harder than ____. ANSWER: A) math B) to learn math C) learning math D) none of the above
  21. 21. More Exercises:- 7.For some very shy people, giving a speech can be as frightening as _________. A) having a serious illness B) illness C) to have an illness D) none of the above
  22. 22. More Exercises:- 7.For some very shy people, giving a speech can be as frightening as _________. ANSWER: A) having a serious illness B) illness C) to have an illness D) none of the above
  23. 23. More Exercises:- 8.Id rather be lucky or hardworking than ________. A) to have talent B) having talent C) talented D) none of the above
  24. 24. More Exercises:- 8.Id rather be lucky or hardworking than ________. ANSWER: A) to have talent B) having talent C) Talented D) none of the above
  25. 25. More Exercises:- 9. That football team has both a good offense and ______. A) it has a good defense B) a good defense C) having a good defense D) none of the above
  26. 26. More Exercises:- 9. That football team has both a good offense and ______. ANSWER: A) it has a good defense B) a good defense C) having a good defense D) none of the above
  27. 27. Last Exercises:- 10. Bob is not only loyal to friends but also ________. A) he is friendly to strangers B) to be friendly to strangers C) friendly to strangers D) none of the above
  28. 28. Answer last Exercises:- Bob is not only loyal to friends but also ________. ANSWER: A) he is friendly to strangers B) to be friendly to strangers C) friendly to strangers D) none of the above
  29. 29. Sources 1. http://esla199.pbworks.com/w/page/23276972/Pa rallel%20Structure,%20Paired%20Conjunctions, %20Coordinating%20Conjunctions. 2. arkcs.arkansas.gov/pp.../parallel_structure.ppt. 3. Parallelism ppt, Brenham Writing Room, Created by D. Herring.