This is part of an email you have just received from a friend.

This is part of an email you have just received from a friend.

Write an email of between 120-150 words in an appropriate style.

Find the following information from the task.

Type of text .

Recipient.

Register.

Email

Informal

What information do they want to know?

Aim. Give information

If you want to share a flat.

If you have any ideas of where they should live

As we’ll both be studying English in York next year, why don’t we share a house or a flat together? Do you have any ideas about where we could live? The language school’s in the city centre, I think.

You have seen this advertisement below and decide to write to your friend about them. Read the advertisements and the notes you have made. Then, using all your notes, write an email to your friend. Say which property you would prefer to rent and why.

Your friend (invent a name)

Other important information from the taskThe school is in the city centre.

/ compare / suggest

This is part of an email you have just received from a friend.

Write an email of between 120-150 words in an appropriate style.

What information do they want to know?If you want to share a flat.

If you have any ideas of where they should live

As we’ll both be studying English in York next year, why don’t we share a house or a flat together? Do you have any ideas about where we could live? The language school’s in the city centre, I think.

You have seen this advertisement below and decide to write to your friend about them. Read the advertisements and the notes you have made. Then, using all your notes, write an email to your friend. Say which property you would prefer to rent and why.

Other important information from the taskThe school is in the city centre.

What information are you going to give?That you want to share a flat.

That you have some ideas. (the adverts)

Details of the house

Rent is cheap (only 540 per month)In a quiet area by the river

3 km from city centre (and school)

Details of the flat

Above a pub

Very near to the school

More expensive

Conclusion / which you prefer

Hi Ana,

I think it’s a great idea to rent somewhere together. I’ve found two places that might be alright.

One is a house in a quiet neighbourhood by the river, which is an advantage, because I have trouble sleeping if there is too much noise. The advert says you can walk to the centre, though I looked on the map and it’s about 3 kilometres away.

The other place is a modern flat. It’s more central and really close to everything, including the school, so we wouldn’t have to get up early for class. The problem is that it’s above a pub and that could be a bit noisy for me.

Let me know what you think.

All the best

Sarah

Is everything included in the example?

That you want to share a flat.

That you have some ideas. (the adverts)

Details of the house

Rent is cheap (only 540 per month)In a quiet area by the river

3 km from city centre (and school)

Details of the flat

Above a pub

Very near to the school

More expensive

Conclusion / which you prefer

Hi Ana,

I think it’s a great idea to rent somewhere together. I’ve found two places that might be alright.

One is a house in a quiet neighbourhood by the river, which is an advantage, because I have trouble sleeping if there is too much noise. The advert says you can walk to the centre, though I looked on the map and it’s about 3 kilometres away.

The other place is a modern flat. It’s more central and really close to everything, including the school, so we wouldn’t have to get up early for class. The problem is that it’s above a pub and that could be a bit noisy for me.

Let me know what you think.

All the best

Sarah

Is everything included in the example?

That you want to share a flat.

That you have some ideas. (the adverts)

Details of the house

Rent is cheap (only 540 per month)In a quiet area by the river

3 km from city centre (and school)

Details of the flat

Above a pub

Very near to the school

More expensive

Conclusion / which you prefer

Hi Ana,

I think it’s a great idea to rent somewhere together. I’ve found two places that might be alright.

One is a house in a quiet neighbourhood by the river, which is an advantage, because I have trouble sleeping if there is too much noise. The advert says you can walk to the centre, though I looked on the map and it’s about 3 kilometres away.

The other place is a modern flat. It’s more central and really close to everything, including the school, so we wouldn’t have to get up early for class. The problem is that it’s above a pub and that could be a bit noisy for me.

Let me know what you think.

All the best

Sarah

Is everything included in the example?

That you want to share a flat.

That you have some ideas. (the adverts)

Details of the house

Rent is cheap (only 540 per month)In a quiet area by the river

3 km from city centre (and school)

Details of the flat

Above a pub

Very near to the school

More expensive

Conclusion / which you prefer

Hi Ana,

I think it’s a great idea to rent somewhere together. I’ve found two places that might be alright.

One is a house in a quiet neighbourhood by the river, which is an advantage, because I have trouble sleeping if there is too much noise. The advert says you can walk to the centre, though I looked on the map and it’s about 3 kilometres away.

The other place is a modern flat. It’s more central and really close to everything, including the school, so we wouldn’t have to get up early for class. The problem is that it’s above a pub and that could be a bit noisy for me.

Let me know what you think.

All the best

Sarah

Is everything included in the example?

That you want to share a flat.

That you have some ideas. (the adverts)

Details of the house

Rent is cheap (only 540 per month)In a quiet area by the river

3 km from city centre (and school)

Details of the flat

Above a pub

Very near to the school

More expensive

Conclusion / which you prefer

Hi Ana,

I think it’s a great idea to rent somewhere together. I’ve found two places that might be alright.

One is a house in a quiet neighbourhood by the river, which is an advantage, because I have trouble sleeping if there is too much noise. The advert says you can walk to the centre, though I looked on the map and it’s about 3 kilometres away.

The other place is a modern flat. It’s more central and really close to everything, including the school, so we wouldn’t have to get up early for class. The problem is that it’s above a pub and that could be a bit noisy for me.

Let me know what you think.

All the best

Sarah

Is everything included in the example?

That you want to share a flat.

That you have some ideas. (the adverts)

Details of the house

Rent is cheap (only 540 per month)In a quiet area by the river

3 km from city centre (and school)

Details of the flat

Above a pub

Very near to the school

More expensive

Conclusion / which you prefer

Hi Ana,

I think it’s a great idea to rent somewhere together. I’ve found two places that might be alright.

One is a house in a quiet neighbourhood by the river, which is an advantage, because I have trouble sleeping if there is too much noise. The advert says you can walk to the centre, though I looked on the map and it’s about 3 kilometres away.

The other place is a modern flat. It’s more central and really close to everything, including the school, so we wouldn’t have to get up early for class. The problem is that it’s above a pub and that could be a bit noisy for me.

Let me know what you think.

All the best

Sarah

Is everything included in the example?

That you want to share a flat.

That you have some ideas. (the adverts)

Details of the house

Rent is cheap (only 540 per month)In a quiet area by the river

3 km from city centre (and school)

Details of the flat

Above a pub

Very near to the school

More expensive

Conclusion / which you prefer

Hi Ana,

I think it’s a great idea to rent somewhere together. I’ve found two places that might be alright.

One is a house in a quiet neighbourhood by the river, which is an advantage, because I have trouble sleeping if there is too much noise. The advert says you can walk to the centre, though I looked on the map and it’s about 3 kilometres away.

The other place is a modern flat. It’s more central and really close to everything, including the school, so we wouldn’t have to get up early for class. The problem is that it’s above a pub and that could be a bit noisy for me.

Let me know what you think.

All the best

Sarah

Is everything included in the example?

That you want to share a flat.

That you have some ideas. (the adverts)

Details of the house

Rent is cheap (only 540 per month)In a quiet area by the river

3 km from city centre (and school)

Details of the flat

Above a pub

Very near to the school

More expensive

Conclusion / which you prefer

Hi Ana,

I think it’s a great idea to rent somewhere together. I’ve found two places that might be alright.

One is a house in a quiet neighbourhood by the river, which is an advantage, because I have trouble sleeping if there is too much noise. The advert says you can walk to the centre, though I looked on the map and it’s about 3 kilometres away.

The other place is a modern flat. It’s more central and really close to everything, including the school, so we wouldn’t have to get up early for class. The problem is that it’s above a pub and that could be a bit noisy for me.

Let me know what you think.

All the best

Sarah

Is everything included in the example?

That you want to share a flat.

That you have some ideas. (the adverts)

Details of the house

Rent is cheap (only 540 per month)In a quiet area by the river

3 km from city centre (and school)

Details of the flat

Above a pub

Very near to the school

More expensive

Conclusion / which you prefer

Hi Ana,

I think it’s a great idea to rent somewhere together. I’ve found two places that might be alright.

One is a house in a quiet neighbourhood by the river, which is an advantage, because I have trouble sleeping if there is too much noise. The advert says you can walk to the centre, though I looked on the map and it’s about 3 kilometres away.

The other place is a modern flat. It’s more central and really close to everything, including the school, so we wouldn’t have to get up early for class. The problem is that it’s above a pub and that could be a bit noisy for me.

Let me know what you think.

All the best

Sarah

Is everything included in the example?

That you want to share a flat.

That you have some ideas. (the adverts)

Details of the house

Rent is cheap (only 540 per month)In a quiet area by the river

3 km from city centre (and school)

Details of the flat

Above a pub

Very near to the school

More expensive

Conclusion / which you prefer

Hi Ana,

I think it’s a great idea to rent somewhere together. I’ve found two places that might be alright.

One is a house in a quiet neighbourhood by the river, which is an advantage, because I have trouble sleeping if there is too much noise. The advert says you can walk to the centre, though I looked on the map and it’s about 3 kilometres away.

The other place is a modern flat. It’s more central and really close to everything, including the school, so we wouldn’t have to get up early for class. The problem is that it’s above a pub and that could be a bit noisy for me.

Let me know what you think.

All the best

Sarah

Is everything included in the example?

That you want to share a flat.

That you have some ideas. (the adverts)

Details of the house

Rent is cheap (only 540 per month)In a quiet area by the river

3 km from city centre (and school)

Details of the flat

Above a pub

Very near to the school

More expensive

Conclusion / which you prefer

Hi Ana,

I think it’s a great idea to rent somewhere together. I’ve found two places that might be alright.

One is a house in a quiet neighbourhood by the river, which is an advantage, because I have trouble sleeping if there is too much noise. The advert says you can walk to the centre, though I looked on the map and it’s about 3 kilometres away.

The other place is a modern flat. It’s more central and really close to everything, including the school, so we wouldn’t have to get up early for class. The problem is that it’s above a pub and that could be a bit noisy for me.

Let me know what you think.

All the best

Sarah

Is everything included in the example?

That you want to share a flat.

That you have some ideas. (the adverts)

Details of the house

Rent is cheap (only 540 per month)In a quiet area by the river

3 km from city centre (and school)

Details of the flat

Above a pub

Very near to the school

More expensive

Conclusion / which you prefer

Hi Ana,

I think it’s a great idea to rent somewhere together. I’ve found two places that might be alright.

One is a house in a quiet neighbourhood by the river, which is an advantage, because I have trouble sleeping if there is too much noise. The advert says you can walk to the centre, though I looked on the map and it’s about 3 kilometres away.

The other place is a modern flat. It’s more central and really close to everything, including the school, so we wouldn’t have to get up early for class. The problem is that it’s above a pub and that could be a bit noisy for me.

Let me know what you think.

All the best

Sarah

Is everything included in the example?

That you want to share a flat.

That you have some ideas. (the adverts)

Details of the house

Rent is cheap (only 540 per month)In a quiet area by the river

3 km from city centre (and school)

Details of the flat

Above a pub

Very near to the school

More expensive

Conclusion / which you prefer

Hi Ana,

I think it’s a great idea to rent somewhere together. I’ve found two places that might be alright.

One is a house in a quiet neighbourhood by the river, which is an advantage, because I have trouble sleeping if there is too much noise. The advert says you can walk to the centre, though I looked on the map and it’s about 3 kilometres away.

The other place is a modern flat. It’s more central and really close to everything, including the school, so we wouldn’t have to get up early for class. The problem is that it’s above a pub and that could be a bit noisy for me.

Let me know what you think.

All the best

Sarah

Is everything included in the example?

That you want to share a flat.

That you have some ideas. (the adverts)

Details of the house

Rent is cheap (only 540 per month)In a quiet area by the river

3 km from city centre (and school)

Details of the flat

Above a pub

Very near to the school

More expensive

Conclusion / which you prefer

Hi Ana,

I think it’s a great idea to rent somewhere together. I’ve found two places that might be alright.

One is a house in a quiet neighbourhood by the river, which is an advantage, because I have trouble sleeping if there is too much noise. The advert says you can walk to the centre, though I looked on the map and it’s about 3 kilometres away.

The other place is a modern flat. It’s more central and really close to everything, including the school, so we wouldn’t have to get up early for class. The problem is that it’s above a pub and that could be a bit noisy for me.

Let me know what you think.

All the best

Sarah

Is everything included in the example?

That you want to share a flat.

That you have some ideas. (the adverts)

Details of the house

Rent is cheap (only 540 per month)In a quiet area by the river

3 km from city centre (and school)

Details of the flat

Above a pub

Very near to the school

More expensive

Conclusion / which you prefer

Hi Ana,

I think it’s a great idea to rent somewhere together. I’ve found two places that might be alright.

One is a house in a quiet neighbourhood by the river, which is an advantage, because I have trouble sleeping if there is too much noise. The advert says you can walk to the centre, though I looked on the map and it’s about 3 kilometres away.

The other place is a modern flat. It’s more central and really close to everything, including the school, so we wouldn’t have to get up early for class. The problem is that it’s above a pub and that could be a bit noisy for me.

Let me know what you think.

All the best

Sarah

Is everything included in the example?

That you have some ideas. (the adverts)

Details of the house

Rent is cheap (only 540 per month)In a quiet area by the river

3 km from city centre (and school)

Details of the flat

Above a pub

Very near to the school

More expensive

Conclusion / which you prefer

That you want to share a flat.

Hi Ana,

I think it’s a great idea to rent somewhere together. I’ve found two places that might be alright.

One is a house in a quiet neighbourhood by the river, which is an advantage, because I have trouble sleeping if there is too much noise. The advert says you can walk to the centre, though I looked on the map and it’s about 3 kilometres away.

The other place is a modern flat. It’s more central and really close to everything, including the school, so we wouldn’t have to get up early for class. The problem is that it’s above a pub and that could be a bit noisy for me.

Let me know what you think.

All the best

Sarah

Is everything included in the example?

That you have some ideas. (the adverts)

Details of the house

Rent is cheap (only 540 per month)In a quiet area by the river

3 km from city centre (and school)

Details of the flat

Above a pub

Very near to the school

More expensive

Conclusion / which you prefer

What is missing?

CONCLUSION !

That you want to share a flat.

Hi Ana,

I think it’s a great idea to rent somewhere together. I’ve found two places that might be alright.

One is a house in a quiet neighbourhood by the river, which is an advantage, because I have trouble sleeping if there is too much noise. The advert says you can walk to the centre, though I looked on the map and it’s about 3 kilometres away.

The other place is a modern flat. It’s more central and really close to everything, including the school, so we wouldn’t have to get up early for class. The problem is that it’s above a pub and that could be a bit noisy for me.

All in all, I think I’d rather live in the house – it’s quieter and £75 cheaper than the flat, and the walk to school would be good for us!

Let me know what you think.

All the best

Sarah

Is everything included in the example?

That you have some ideas. (the adverts)

Details of the house

Rent is cheap (only 540 per month)In a quiet area by the river

3 km from city centre (and school)

Details of the flat

Above a pub

Very near to the school

More expensive

Conclusion / which you prefer

What is missing?

CONCLUSION !

That you want to share a flat.