Thesis statements

Thesis Statements

Presented by Joe Hodali and John Henry Evans

Student Learning Outcomes

Students will understand…

how a thesis is critical to a paper

what kind of thesis will best suit a paper

how to write a thesis

how to build an essay from the thesis

how a thesis relates to the structure of an essay

what a strong thesis statement looks like

What is a thesis statement?

A thesis statement is…

A sentence that goes at the end of your introductory paragraph.

The reason you are writing your essay!

A debatable statement, typically your own opinion.

Introduction

Body

Conclusion

THESIS

Essay man is a visual representation of the structure of an essay. Notice that the thesis

is the neck, connecting the

opening ideas with the proof presented

in the body.

What does a thesis statement do?

A thesis statement…

provides the point you want to prove.Presents your argument in a concise form.

gives the structure your essay will follow.

can provide the opposite point of view.

An Open Thesis does not contain the body points.i.e. Everyone should drive a hybrid car.

Are there different types of thesis statements?

Thesis statements that depend on essay types

Narrative- Gives a one-sentence summary of a narrative essay.

Expressive- Expresses a personal feeling about the topic.

Informative- Gives an overview of the information in the essay.

Argumentative- Argues a specific, debatable point.

Exploratory- Makes a point, but does not argue that it is true.

Open vs. Complete

A Complete Thesis includes the body points.i.e. Everyone should drive a hybrid car because they

pollute less, they get better mileage, and they help reduce gasoline costs.

Your thesis is the foundation of your

essayThe entire essay attempts to prove that your thesis is correct.

Constantly refer back to your thesis to make sure that your essay is staying on track

If you used a Complete Thesis, each of your body paragraphs should cover one of the points mentioned in your thesis.

Your body paragraphs should go in the same order as the points they cover were mentioned in the thesis.

What does a strong thesis statement look

like?Remember that a strong

thesis statement makes a definite point.

That point should be your own opinion.

A Few Examples

The Adventures of Tom Sawyer was written by Mark Twain in 1876.

Some people think that The Adventures of Tom Sawyer is Mark Twain’s best novel.

The Adventures of Tom Sawyer is Mark Twain’s best novel.

The Adventures of Tom Sawyer is Mark Twain’s best novel because of its use of satire, imagery, and symbolism.

WEAK

WEAK

STRONG

STRONGER

Try it out!Work with your group to decide which thesis statement is the best.

How do I write a thesis statement?

A Simple Thesis Formula

Although ,

because

, , and

.

gasoline-powered cars are popularpeople should drive hybrid cars

they cut down on pollutionthey will save you money on gas

hybrid owners receive special tax breaks

This formula is useful for the standard five-paragraph essay

format.When you are arguing a large number of

points, you will need to use an Open Thesis.

An introductory paragraph with a weak

thesis

Many people believe that Dominican Republic is a wonderful vacation spot. It

offers great beaches with beautiful sands and lots of attractive activities for people of

all ages. That’s why people from all over the world make this part of the world their favorite vacation spot. My opinion of it is

not quite the same.Weak

Vague

Try it out!With your group, discuss the topic you have been given. Then on your own, write a Complete Thesis based on the prompt.

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