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    The Scots Revenge

    By: Jonathan Fobes

    Jonathan Fobes

    Original Screenplay by: Jonathan Fobes

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    INT. BEDROOM, A WOMEN IS LAYING IN BED

    We start off in a dark room the only light is coming from awindow, Susan Phillips, 38 is laying in bed she is dyingfrom lung cancer. We pull to a corner in the room there is afigure of a man standing there, staring at Susan. Susan

    begins to cough softly.

    The figure walks towards the bed, it reaches the bed andlooks down at Susan, she starts to cough a little louder.The figure then disappears. Five seconds later Susan beginsto cough violently and starts to shake, she then dies.

    We pull away from the bed and suddenly a picture on anightstand flies across the bed and hits a wall. The camerahover over the picture showing a smiling family, the pictureof Susan a cut running through it. The title The ScotsRevenge appears.

    INT. BEDROOM, ANDY PHILIPS

    Three months later. Andy Philips, 38 is sitting ins achair with boxes surrounding, he is one the phone.

    ANDYWe only have a few more boxes topack and then well start driving,hopefully the traffic isnt tobad.

    (Pauses)

    Yeah, I arranged for her body to bemoved to Ohio,I was surprised herparent are allowing me. I found acemetery close to the house.

    (Pauses)

    The kids are still upset, Jerry ismore upset about moving, him andhis friends were going to make amovie over the summer. I keeptrying to tell them that its goingto be ok and that she is in abetter place but I feel that I amonly making it worse.

    (Pauses)

    Their just kids Dad, their mom justdied they have a right to be upset!This is way Susan never wanted youto see the kids, it is also way webarely ever came to Ohio for the

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    ANDY (contd)holidays. You cant treat them thesame way you did to me when I was akid, there more sensitive than mewhen I was a kid.

    (Pauses)

    Not this again! Ever since youheard about the house I bought youhave been trying to get me to finda different one, why dont you wantus to move to that house?

    (Pauses)I never thought you of all peoplebelieve in that type of stuff. Didyou a Dave bring the stuff I sentto the house?

    (Pauses)Thanks, well I have to get goingnow, Ill call when we get to our

    first hotel. Bye.(Hangs up)

    INT./EXT. A VAN, DRIVING

    Inside the van is Andy who is driving and the Kids Alex 15,Jerry 11, Billy, 12, Jim 10, and Amy 13. All the kids exceptfor Jerry who is on a laptop with headphones in his ears arescreaming and arguing with each other.

    AMYAre we almost there Dad?

    ANDYYes, when we get to the house youcan go in a check it out for fiveminutes after that I want everyoneto start unpacking the car.

    The van pulls into a driveway, Andy parks the car and theyget out of the car. All the kids except for Jerry run to thehouse trying to get in.

    ANDYIts locked

    CUT TO WINDOW INSIDE THE HOUSE.

    Camera is looking outside through the window showing Andywho is standing in the middle of the driveway looking at thewindow.

    CUT TO ANDY

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    Andy is still looking at the window, suddenly a figure of aman steps into view of the window and then quicklydisappears. Andy Jumps.

    BILLYHurry up Dad!

    ANDY(continues to look at window)I am coming.

    Andy walks to the door and unlocks the door. The kids runinto the house and run up the stairs, opening and closingdoors. . Jerry and Andy walk into the house. Jerry looksaround the room.

    ANDYWhat do you think of the house?

    JERRY

    (Shrugs his shoulders)I dontknow yet we just got here. Iwould rather be in Floridastill.

    JIMI want this room!

    AMYWell I already called it!

    JIMDad! Tell Amy that I can have thisroom!

    ANDY(Walks up the stairs)I alreadyhave your rooms picked.

    KIDSAw! Really Dad!

    ANDY(Smiles)yes really. Amy youhave the first door on the

    left, Alex first door on theright, Jim second door on theright, and Jerry and Billy youwill share the basement. Nowthat you know your rooms goget the car unpacked.

    The kids go down the stairs. Andy looks around the room.There is then a soft whisper, he doesnt hear it but we do.

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    WHISPERGet out of here now!

    INT. BASEMENT

    Camera at is at the bottom of the stairs, pointed at a doorat the top of the stairs. The door opens and Jerry walks incarrying a box.

    Jerry walks down the stairs, once he is down the stairs, wepull away behind hind him.

    Jerry walks to the middle of the room and places the box onthe floor. He looks around the room. There again a soft butlouder whisper. Jerry hears it as well.

    WHISPERGet out of here Jerry Now!

    INT. KITCHEN, NIGHT

    Later that night the family is in the kitchen having dinner.

    ANDYSo, how do guys like the house?

    KIDSIts ok.

    Family continues to eat.

    JERRYI dont want to sleep in thebasement.

    ANDY(Takes a drink from hiscup)Why dont you want tosleep in the basement?

    Jerry plays with his food.

    ANDYJerry why dont you want to sleepin the basement?

    JERRYWhen I was in the basement it feltlike someone or something was

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    JERRY (contd)watching me, and keep hearing thesestrange noises.

    ANDYWell thats just because this is anolder house there is nothing to

    worry about. Now finish eating andget ready for bed.

    INT. BASEMENT, NIGHT

    Later that night while everyone is asleep Jerry gets up frombed to go to the restroom. He is about to walk up the stirswhen there is a banging noise from the laundry room.

    Jerry walks into the laundry room but doesnt see what wasmaking the noise. Suddenly the basement door opens and slamsclosed.

    Jerry runs outside the rooms and looks at the top of thestairs, he then looks at the side of the wall and a sentenceforms in blood. Get out of here Jerry, you will die for whathe did to them.

    Jerry runs and hinds under his sheets.

    EXT. MORNING

    Andy is outside playing basketball with the kids. Jerrycomes running outside slamming the door.

    JERRY(speaks very fast) Dad I dontwant to stay here anymore la-!

    ANDYJerry calm down and tell me whatswrong.

    JERRYLast night I went to use therestroom when I heard a noise

    coming from the laundry room, Iwent in there to see what wasmaking the noise when there wasanother loud noise from outside theroom. I went outside and didnt seeanything I looked at the wall andthere was a sentence formed inblood telling me that I was goingto die! We have to go now!

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    ANDYYou were just having a bad dream.

    JERRYIt wasnt a dream Dad it happened!

    ANDYAnd I am telling you that it was adream. This is why I tell you notto watch horror movies yourimagination runs wild.

    JERRY(starts to speak but stops, heruns into the house and slamsthe door.)

    CUT TO EXT. CEMETERY, NOON

    The family is standing near the grave of Susan Philips. Andyget on his knees and places a flower on the grave, he whipshe eyes and stand up.

    Jerry walks away from the grave. Jerry starts to walk to thevan when he sees seven graves each with the last name Scot,he walks closer to read the grave. He then hears a softwhisper. Wind begins to blow.

    WHISPERYou have to leave the house Jerry,their going to kill you.

    ANDYJerry its time to go!

    Jerry turns from the grave and walks to the van.

    EXT/INT VAN, EARLY AFTERNOON

    Andy is sitting in the van, crying. He puts his forehead onthe steering wheel. He looks up into the rear window andsees a man standing across the road looking at him.

    Andy gets out of the car, when he looks where the man wasstanding, he is now gone.

    CUT TO INT. AMYS BEDROOM

    Amy is laying on her bed reading a book. Something calls hername, she looks around the room.

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    AMYHello?

    VOICEAmy!

    AMYHello, whos there?

    VOICEYou shouldnt have come here Amy!

    AMYAlex, stop trying to scare me!

    VOICEThis isnt Alex Amy, you and youfamily are going to die just likeyour mother!

    Amy screams and runs to the door, the door then slams shut.Amy screams again.

    AMYPlease stop!

    A object then flies across the room and hits her in thehead. She continues to scream.

    Andy runs into the room and sees Amy laying on the floor,holding her head.

    ANDY(Helps Amy to her feet andsees a gash on her forehead)Amy what happened!

    AMYI heard a voice saying that we weregoing to die like mommy, and thensomething hit me in the head.

    ANDYDid Jerry tell you to say that?

    AMYNo, it really happened I swear!

    Andy then grabs her by the arm and brings her down stairsinto the living room.

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    ANDY(Points to a couch)Sit!

    Amy sits on the couch, Andy then walks over to the basementdoor and opens it.

    ANDYI want everyone to come upstairsnow!

    The rest of the kids runs up the stairs, Andy points to thecouch and they sit. Andy steps in the middle of the room andfaces them.

    ANDYLet me very clear there are no suchthing as ghost, spirits, demons oranything else you think your seeingor hearing.

    (Pauses)For the rest of the summer there isbe no more horror movies in thishouse! Now I am going to the storeand when I get back I dont want tohear a single thing about ghosts,Dracula, or anything.

    (Goes to the front door andslams)

    EXT, OUTSIDE A STORE, AFTERNOOT

    Andy starts to walk to the entrance to the store. Andy stopswhen he hears someone calling for him. The camera shows awomen, Alice 29 walking up to him.

    ALICEHi, my names Alice your new hereright?

    ANDYAndy, yeah me and my kids justmoved here a few days ago.

    ALICEAnd did you move into the old Scothouse?

    ANDYI think so, why?

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    ALICEThen you dont know anything aboutthe history behind that house doyou?

    ANDYNo, what history?

    ALICE(Steps closer and lowers hervoice to a whisper) I canttell you her people dont likehearing about the Scots housebecause of what happenedthere. Ill come to the housetonight and tell you.

    ANDYOk, come around ten, Ill have thekids in bed by then.

    She walks away and gets into her car. Andy then enters thestore.

    INT. DINNING ROOM

    The kids are in the dinning room playing a board game.Camera is on the side of the table facing the kitchen. Alexpicks up the dice rolls the dice and then moves his piece.

    BILLYSo, Amy have anymore ghosts visit

    you lately? (laughs)

    Amy ignores him and takes her move.

    ALEXHey Jerry anymore blood appear onthe walls?

    Billy, Jim, and Alex start mocking them by making ghostnoises. They stop and continue to play.

    Five seconds later the board flies across the room and hitsthe wall. Then there are loud angry whispers.

    WHISPERSGET OUT OF HERE NOW!!

    They scream and run into the kitchen. The table is pushed infront of them. The then run back into the dinning room. Afigure then appears in the doorway.

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    FIGUREYou all are going to die in thishouse!

    They continue to scream, the front door opens, the figuredisappears. Andy walks into the house and drops the bags.

    ANDYWhat is going on here!

    AMYWe were playing a game and it flewand hit the wall, there were theseterrible loud whispers. We tried toescape but a figure stopped us! Iam so scared Daddy can we pleaseget out of here!?

    ANDY

    Show me the board game.

    They walk over to the table and the game is back on thetable with all the pieces.

    ANDY(Laughs)This doesnt look likeit was thrown against thewall. I also dont hear anywhispers, or see any ghosts.

    JERRYIt happened though, why wont you

    believe us?

    ANDYJust go to your rooms and staythere for the rest of the night.

    They go to their rooms. Andy looks at the board, smiles andshakes his head.

    INT. LIVING ROOM, NIGHT

    Later that night, Andy is sitting on the couch on a laptop.Someone knocks on the front door, Andy closes the laptop andwalks to the door he opens it.

    Alice walks in.

    ANDYDid you find the place easily?

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    ALICEYes, Ive been to this house plentyof times. Used to come here a lotas a kid.

    They walk into the kitchen, Alice sits at the table.

    ANDYDo you want anything to drink?

    ALICENo thank you. Where did you movefrom?

    ANDY(Pours himself adrink)Florida.

    ALICE

    Why did you move from Florida toOhio? If I lived there I would wantto stay there.

    ANDYMy wife died from Lung Cancer inApril, we moved here because of myparents.(Takes a sip from hisdrink) Susan for some reason didntlike my dad so she wouldnt letthem visit my parents, so I figuredif we were going to move that itwould be best to move here.

    ALICEI am sorry I did realize that yourwife died.

    ANDYIts not your fault. You said thatyou know something about thishouses history, what do you know.

    ALICE(sighs)Before I tell you, Iwant you to know somethingthis house as a lot of darkand gruesome history but youneed to know. You also need toknow that the Scot family wasthe last people to live inthis house. You are the firstones to live here since thatnight.

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    (Pauses)April, 28th 1992 it was a dark andrainy night, the Scot family, wassleeping and around midnight a manslipped through the basementwindow. Two of the kids weresleeping there. (pauses and

    sighs)The man bruatally murderedthem.

    Flashback shows a shadow of a knife and some blood on thewalls.

    ALICEHe then went up the stairs andkilled the rest of the family. Aweak later the police showed up attheir house, they had receivedphone calls from the kids schoolthat they hadnt been to school for

    a week and couldnt talk to theirparents. When the police went intothe house there was a terriblesmell, the walls were covered inblood, their was a trail of bloodleading from the top of the stairsto the basement. They went down tothe basement and found the familylaying on the floor next to eachother each of them were dead andeach of them had their right handcut off.

    (Pauses)Workers were sent to clean up allthe blood and replace the carpet,they said that while they workingthey could hear voices andwhispering. One of them said thatthey saw blood in the basement andwas attacked by something. On thelast day blood covered all thewalls and they saw a man in thedining room. From that point on noone has ever lived in this housesince until now. Please you must

    leave this house before somethinghappens to you or one of your kids.

    ANDY(Finishes his drink)Well thatwas a nice little story, justwhat I needed before I went tobed a ghost story, I hear itenough from my kids.

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    ALICEThis isnt a story, it all happenedthere is something extremely evilin this house, you must leavetomorrow.

    ANDYI think its time for you to go,there is nothing wrong with thishouse, and there is nothing evil init.

    Alice gets up from the chair, Andy leads her to the frontdoor and opens the door. She steps out.

    ALICEPlease leave, do it for your kidsyou guys are not safe here.

    ANDYwere not leaving, goodbye Alice.(closes door)

    Andy smiles and walks up the stairs making ghost noises. Thekitchen light turns off.

    INT. NIGHT, BASEMENT

    Jerry and Billy are asleep in the basement,Billty wakes upand climbs down for the top bunk. Jerry hears him and wakesup.

    JERRYWhat are you doing?

    BILLYWhat does it look like? I am goingto the bathroom.( Starts to walkthe stirs, he hears a driping soundand stops, looks at Jerry)

    Do you hear that?

    BILLYNo, now go to the bathroom beforeyou pee your pants.

    Billy slowly turns around and starts to slowly walk up thestairs. Dripping sound continues and becomes louder. Billyis standing outside the door to the bathroom, dripping soundis louder.

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    Billy places he hand on the doorknob and opens it, lightturns on. Billy laughs and turns off the sink.

    Billy then opens the toilet seat, looks down and then covershis mouth with his hand. Billy runs out of the bathroomslamming the door.

    Camera hovers over the toilet, inside the water is blood andthere is a severed had floating in the blood. Camera cutsaway and the toilet flushes.

    INT. BATHROOM, MORNING

    Andy walks in to the bathroom, he covers his face in shavingcreme and then picks up a razor, he drops the razor Andybends down to pick it up. A figure of a ghost then appearsin the mirror, it disappears.

    Andy begins to shave, he then cuts him self, blood starts torun down his chin, he walks out of the bathroom and opensthe cabinet, he puts his hand into the cabinet.

    ANDYWhat the-

    He pulls his hand out, he is holding a severed hand, Andylooks at in shock, and then throws it on the floor. The doorthen start to open and close by themselves, the lightsstarts to flicker.

    VOICE

    Do you still think that this is astory Andy? She told you leave whydidnt you listen?

    ANDYThis isnt happening!

    VOICEWhy are you still in denial Andy?Why cant you listen? You need toleave, you are all going to die!

    ANDYGet out of my house!

    The voice then stops, Andy closes his eyes and then shakeshis head.

    WISPIERLeave this place now!

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    CUT TO INT. KITCHEN

    Andy is in siting at the table in the kitchen, reading abook. There is then a knock on the front door. Anny gets upfrom the table and walks to the door. Andy opens the doorand there is a cop standing outside.

    COPAre you Andy Phillips?

    ANDYYes, what is going on?

    COPDid Alice Jackson come to yourhouse last night?

    ANDYYeah, she came around nine. Is she

    in any type of trouble?

    COP(Sighs) She was found deadinside of her house, we stillcant figure out how she died.What did you two talk aboutlast night?

    ANDYNothing really, just talking. Youdont think that I had anything todo with this?

    COPNo, I just need to gather as muchinformation as possible. Thank youfor cooperation, if you think ofanything else, call this number.(hands him a card.) You have a goodday.

    ANDYYou too officer. (closes door)

    KITCHEN, NIGHT

    The family is sitting at the table eating.

    BILLYDad what are we going to do? I amreally scared.

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    JIMMe to dad. Are the voices going tohurt us?

    ANDY(Takes a sip of his drink)No,

    their not going to, I wontallow them to. I dont knowwhat we are going to do, Ithink we are just going tohave to wait it out.

    JERRY(Looks up from his plate)Waitit out? You think we shouldjust wait it out? This isnt astorm Dad, you cant wait thisout, they will continue to dothis until we are all dead!

    ANDYWhat do suggest I do then Jerry?

    JERRYI dont know, if you would havejust listened to me from thebeginning then this wouldnt behappening!

    There is then a loud bang from the basement. They all jump.

    AMY

    What was that?

    ANDY(Gets up from his chair andwalks towards the door.) Youguys stay here I am going tocheck it out.

    And opens the door to the basement. He starts to walks downthe stairs. Camera is at the bottom of the stairs. Andyreaches the bottom and then starts to walk to the middle ofthe room, he looks around. There is then another bangingsound.

    VOICEAndy you know what happened to us,you will soon realize why we aredoing this to you and your family.In the end you find out that thiswas all because of you.

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    ANDYI dont know what you are talkingabout, what do you want from me?

    Loud laughter and then a force knocks him to the ground.Andy passes out.

    Andy wakes, the kids are surrounding him, looking down athim.

    ALEXDad are you ok?

    Andy grunts and then throws up.

    AMYWhat happened Dad?

    ANDYI dont know but it isnt safe

    here, I am going to start lookingfor a new place to live.

    CUT TO INT. BATHROOM, AFTERNOON

    Andy is sitting by the toilet, throwing up. There is then aknock on the front door. Andy slowly gets to get feet, andwalks to the front door.

    Andy opens the door and there is a man with an eye patch..

    MANHello Andy, I am Tim Roach we need

    to talk.

    ANDYHow do you know me?

    TIMIll explain that but we need totalk somewhere private.

    Andy walks outside and closes the front door. They walkto the backyard.

    ANDYWhat exactly do you want to talkabout?

    TIMI dont even know where to begin.Well do you remember anything fromApril 29th 1992?

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    ANDY

    All I remember is waking up in afield I couldnt remember a singlething that I did the night before,I still cant remember. After

    waking up I tried to call my Dad,but got his voice mail. Ten minuteslater he called back, he askedwhere I was at. He then said for meto stay where I was and that he wasgoing to send someone to pick me upand take me to Florida. I tried toask him why I was going to Floridabut my battery on my phone died. Hewas about to tell me something elsebefore it died.

    TIM

    I know about everything thathappened the night before.

    ANDYWhat happened?

    Tim sighs and shakes his head.

    ANDYWhat happened to me Tim!

    TIMok, you know about what happened at

    this house right?

    ANDYThe family that used to leave herewas murdered by some man.

    TIMYour the one who killed the Scotfamily.

    ANDYWhat are you talking about, Ididnt kill anyone, your lying!

    TIMLet me explain, it wasnt just youthat killed them, it was me aswell. You wanted to kill them, Mr.Scot worked for in a company thatwe owned. He found out about allthe money fraud that you had been

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    TIM (contd)doing, and was going to report him.You felt that the only why to stophim was to kill him.

    We thought of a plan and went to

    their house in the middle of thenight, our original plan wasnt tokill the entire family but we hadto get rid of any evidence that hehad against you he was keeping it asafe and the only why to open itwas by a thumbprint. There wasseven prints on there safe, that iswhy we killed all of them.

    ANDYBut why did I wake up in that fieldwhat else happened?

    TIMI was getting to that, during themurder Mrs. Scot hit you with alead pipe in your head. I thoughtyou where dead. I finished what wehad started, after I cut off theirright had, and then left you in thefield. I called your dad and toldhim everything that happened, hetold me if anyone asked where youhave been to tell them that youleft the company to me and moved to

    a new state.

    I have been living across from thishouse ever since that night makingsure no one bought the house, Iknow that there is something evilin that house, I dont know whatbut ever since you moved there Ihave felt it get stronger.

    ANDYYou knew that I moved here and youare now just telling me about this,we have been here for about a weeknow, why didnt you tell me aboutthis sooner?

    TIM

    I tried but every time I tried tocome over here I couldnt even step

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    ANDY (contd)on the driveway, it was likesomething didnt want me to go nearyou. I got this (points at eyepatch) trying to warn you, I triedone more time the other day to warn

    you but something flew at me andstabbed me in the eye. This is thefirst time since you moved herethat I have been able to approachthe house, I just hope it isnt tolate. (starts to walk away.)

    ANDYHow do I stop this, and what do Itell my kids?

    TIM(continues to walk) Stop what?

    The Scots from haunting you? Idont think there is a way tostop them thye will never stopuntil you lave or are dead.Dont tell you your kids athing, especially about youmurdering the Scots.

    INT. KITCHEN, NIGHT

    Andy is standing at the window in the kitchen, Jim walksover to.

    JIM(Grabs Andys arm) Dad.

    ANDY(pulls his arm away)Donttouch me!

    Jim walks to the table, starts down and starts to cry.

    Camera shows a reflection of Andys face. His lips aremoving very fast and his eyes are rolling back. The camerathen moves slowly down to his arm and the word Scot appearsin blood.

    Andy walks up to his room, he opens the door and then facesthe camera, as he his closing the door his face changes.Door closes.

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    INT. HALLWAY, NIGHT

    Three days later appears. Camera is at the top of the stair,the kids are at the bottom looking towards the camera. Thereis then a banging noise, they start to walk up the stairshalfway up the banging noise get louder.

    They get to Andys door, Billy knocks on the door and thebanging sound stops.

    BILLYDad are you ok, you have been uphere for three days.

    Banging noise starts again and then the door opens. Theywalk into the room, Andy is laying on the bed, they walkover to the bed and look at him.

    Amy moves closer to him and bends down.

    AMY(Whispers) Dad

    Andys eyes shoot opens and then grabs Amy.

    AMYWhy are you doing this dad?

    ANDY(Sits up and looks up ather)This isnt dad anymore!(He then throws Amy against

    the wall.)

    Andy stands up, looks at them and then screams. The kidsthen run out of the room. Andy then picks up a knife andstarts to follow them, he closes the door laughing.

    We then show the kids hiding behind couch in thebasement.The basement door then opens, footsteps are heard,Jim starts to cry and Amy puts her hand over his mouth. Andyapproaches the couch. He is about to look behind it when thefront door opens.Andy then walks towards the basement door.

    We then show Tim Roach walk into the house.

    TIMHello is everything ok? I heardscreaming.

    Basement door then opens. Tim walks into the living room andlooks into the kitchen and doesnt see anything.

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    VOICEWe know what you did Tim we haventforgotten. We are coming for younext.

    TIM

    Your not going to scare me thiseasily.

    Tim then hears a noise coming from the dining room, hestarts to walks to the dining room. He is about to go intothe dining room when Andy pops out in front of him and thenstabs him with the knife.

    We then show the kids behind the couch again.

    ALEXWhat are going to do? Why is Daddoing this?

    JERRYShut up, that isnt dad anymore.

    The basement door then opens again. Andy walks into thebasement. They then slowly come out of hiding and runtowards the door. Once the exit the basement they start torun towards the front door.

    They open the door and Tim Roachs body falls down in frontof them. The kids then scream and turn around, Andy is aboutto stab them, Billy grabs his arm and kicks him.

    Andy drops the knife, Billy picks it up and runs at Andy, hepushes Billy to the ground. Billy falls and drops knife,Andy picks up the knife; he walks over to Billy. Billytrips him Alex helps Billy up to his feet; they run to theback porch. They put a chair to keep the door from opening.Andy then bangs on the door with the knife.

    ANDYOpen the door, I promise Ill makethis quick, it was quick for mykids. (He then turns around andwalks towards the front door.)

    They then run out the back door and runs to the front yard.They get into the car. Jerry finds the keys in a cup holder.He tries to start the car but it wont start.

    AMYHurry up Jerry!

    (CONTINUED)

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    JERRYI am trying!

    ALEXDo you even know how to drive acar?

    JERRYNo, buy we have to leave thisplace.

    Andy then slams on the window, they scream.

    ANDYPlease open the door, or you willbe grounded. (laughs)I can waithere all night.

    Andy walks into the house. Five minutes later, Jerry looksout the window to see where Andy is at, he doesnt see him

    anywhere.

    JEEYI am going out there and try andfind some help, once I get out ofthe car lock the door.

    Jerry gets out of the car and starts to walk in the yard.Once he reaches the middle of the yard, the front door opensand Andy come out. Andy look at the car and puts the knifeto his lips.

    They bang on the window trying to get Jerrys attention he

    doesnt hear them, Andy continues to walk towards Jerry.

    Andy is standing behind Jerry with the knife in the air, asthe knife is coming down, Amy opens door.

    AMYLook behind you!

    Jerry turns around the knife catches his face, cut appears,Jerry punches Andy. Jerry starts to run and Andy grabs hisshirt. Jerry turns around and kicks Andy, Andy falls causingJerry to fall; the knife cuts Jerrys leg. Andy gets up andstarts walking to Jerry, Jerry is crawling faster.Andy getsto Jerry before he can reach the car. Alex gets out of carand goes around back.

    Andy picks up Jerry by the shirt laughing, he raises theknife. Alex runs over with a shovel before Andy can stab himAlex hits him the head. The rest of the kids get out of thecar and walks over to Andy.

    (CONTINUED)

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    BILLYIs he dead?

    ALEXNo, I didnt hit him hard enough.

    A car the appears.

    AMY(points to the car)Car!

    They turn around and start to run towards the car, the carsees them and stops, they get in. Before they can drive awaythe car door opes and Andy grabs Jerrys leg he raises theknife laughing. Jerry kicks Andy, he lets go and then falls,the door closes and the car drives away.

    INT. NIGHT, KITCHEN

    One month later. Jerry is the kitchen of his grandparentshouse, he hears and dog barking. Jerry walks over to thedoor and looks out the window, Andy is standing on theporch.

    JERRYThis is just I dream, thats all itis, we beat him.

    Father walks closer to the door.Jerry closes his eyes, openshis eyes. Andy is gone. Jerry laughs and then turns around,Andy is in front of him and grabs his neck.

    Ending credits appear.