The Father – Final Assignment A rewrite from the son’s (Johnny)point of view By Kristin McElroy.

The Father – Final

AssignmentA rewrite from the son’s (Johnny)point of view

By Kristin McElroy

Compare and Contrast

Perspectives

Old Perspective

• Third person point of view

• In perspective of the narrator

New Perspective

• First person point of view• In perspective of the son,

Johnny

Atmosphere

• Awkward• Unloved • Neglected • Embarrassed

These are some of the emotional settings from the son’s perspective

Events

At the boy scouts banquet, from the dads point of view, he thinks this is a good chance to become close until the end when the boy starts to cry. On the other hand, the son thinks this whole night was a complete embarrassment from his dad being a foolish drunk.

Summary

My rewrite is just a quick snippet of The Father short story. It is during the part when the father and son are at the banquet. Then he gets called up for the awards, up until when the boy is running blocks away from his father, sobbing.

The End