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The Art of Writing Great Headlines - Len Penzo

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Page 1: The Art of Writing Great Headlines - Len Penzo

How to Write Great Headlines

Len Penzo Len Penzo dot Com

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Why Should I Care About Headlines?

They’re the most important part of your article!

Blog visitors take 8 seconds to decide whether they are going to stay or leave (LorelleOnWordpress.com)

Fact: On average 4 out of 5 people read a headline, but only 1 out of 5 will read the rest (copyblogger.com)

Great posts with bad headlines don’t get read

Well-written headlines greatly increase the odds of getting your post read

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Why Should I Care About Headlines?

You never get a second chance to make a first impression!

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6 Examples of Recent Headline FAILS

Here are six recent blog headlines. Would you click on any of these articles? On Opportunity Being Rich Managing or Paying Off Debt Stories of the Unemployed We Have to Eat Healthier Did You Know?

If your headline doesn’t communicate the benefit you’ll deliver to the readers, most of them won’t bother to give you their time.

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So … Which Headline Would YOU Click?

1) MSN

New stunning images from Hubble

2) Space.com

Astronomers discover new spiral galaxy

3) Fox News

Hubble space telescope spies a UFO

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FOXNews.com - The Hubble Space Telescope has found a UFO, but this one is filled with stars instead of little green men.

The iconic space telescope snapped an amazing new photo of the “UFO Galaxy”— a galaxy 35 million light-years from Earth that is officially known as NGC 2683.

"NGC 2683 is a spiral galaxy seen almost edge-on, giving it the shape of a classic science fiction spaceship," NASA officials wrote in a recent image description. © 2012 FOX News Network

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Cosmopolitan

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Weekly World News

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Great Headlines …

Convey a message

Get out of debt fast, no matter how much you owe!

Are compelling

20 Ways to get richer in 1996 – without even trying!

Painless way to save thousand$ -- with ease!

Are specific

Cut mortgage payments IN HALF!

Cut income taxes IN HALF!

Take charge of your finances … TODAY!

Are intriguing

The secret fortune in your garage!

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6 Reasons Why “List” Headlines Work

They build your authority as a blogger

They get right to the point

They’re usually quick and easy to read

They encourage dissenting opinions

Large lists dare the reader to verify your claims

They make a specific promise to the reader about what they are going to learn

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Promises, Promises

Like it or not, a headline is a promise

If people think you can’t deliver, then they won’t read your post

Words like “almost” or “some” increase credibility

When it comes down to writing good headlines, credibility is king

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Of course, you can’t please everyone …“You are an idiot. You had to use the lawn three times in order to get to 21 reasons. Also, you say there is no privacy, lots of pedestrians and cars, but then you go on to say that it is more vulnerable to burglary? At least have legitimate reasons if you are going to criticize. I just wasted 3 minutes of my life.” – Tim Sanders

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“How to” Write a Great Headline

The easiest way is to write a “How to” headline

Remember, it’s virtually impossible to write a bad “How to” headline

“How to” headlines work because they focus on benefits the reader will receive if they read the post

Examples:

How to Avoid Being Audited by the IRSHow to get the Most from Your Gym Membership

How I Save $1400 Annually by Eating LeftoversHow to Become a Millionaire in 28 Days!

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Why Say “Why”? Because It Works!

Using “why” at the beginning of your posts (as a declarative statement) allows the reader to focus on the benefits of reading your article

Some Examples:Why You Should Never Cosign a Loan for Anyone

Why Not All Debt Is a Four-Letter WordWhy Lazy People Shouldn’t Automate Their Finances

Why Miracle Whip Doesn’t Belong on a Tuna Sandwich

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Adjectives Make Good Headlines Better

Good:4 Truths You Must Learn Before You Can Be Rich

Better:4 Surprising Truths You Must Learn Before You Can Be Rich

Good:9 Financial Tips for Teens & Twentysomethings

Better:9 Indispensable Financial Tips for Teens & Twentysomethings

Adjectives are a great way to make your headlines stand out in the crowd.

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You Can Never Be Too Specific

General words and vague phrases make for boring headlines

The more information you can convey in your headline, the more interest you generate

Personal finance headlines with precise dollar figures perform very well on my blog (but your mileage may vary)

Instead of “Save Money Eating Leftovers” try:

“How Eating Leftovers Saves Me $1400 Annually”

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You Can Never Be Too Specific

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What’s the Common Theme Here?

My 5 All-Time Most Popular Black Coffee Columns…

1. Threesomes, Facebook Stock & Other Dubious Ideas

2. Why Sex and Personal Finance Don’t Mix

3. Why I Never Tweet Suze Orman

4. Kim Kardashian, the Federal Gov’t & Other, Um, Big Stuff

5. Shoplifting Tips, Poor Financial Decisions & Schweddy Balls

The moral: Sexy headlines sell – even in the world of personal finance.

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6 Proven Headline Formulas

1. Say it simply and directly2. State the big benefit3. Appeal to the “how to”

instinct4. Pose a provocative

question5. Bark a command6. Offer useful information

The Ultimate Tax ShelterGet Out of Debt Fast How to Make Money Working from HomeDo You Make These 7 Common Tax Mistakes?Become a Famous Blogger in 60 Days!The Best Kept Secrets in America

Source: Copyblogger.com, “9 Proven Headline Formulas That Sell Like Crazy” by Dean Rieck, 19 June 2009

Formula Headline Example

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What About Keywords? Placing keywords in your headlines help search

engines help readers find your article

Long-tail keyword phrases often write themselves:

“How to Get a Free Credit Report”

Avoid minimalist keyword titles ( be specific!)

Instead of “Car Loans” try:

“Car Loans: How to Find the Lowest Rates”

It’s one thing for search engines to find you, but if you don’t write headlines that grab the readers’ attention, your posts will never get read!

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Closing Tips

The headline is the most important part of your post; so spend at least 15 minutes on each one

Try to keep your titles to 65 characters or less

Pithiness counts; being concise is a virtue when it comes to writing headlines

Don’t be afraid to use a thesaurus

Speak the language of your audience

Don’t shy away from being provocative

Whenever possible, be painfully specific

Don’t be a bore! Use adjectives to your enhance headlines and make them stand out.

Like it or not, sex sells

Writing headlines for search engines gets you discovered, but writing headlines for readers gets you page views – and hopefully, loyal fans!

Don’t feel pressure to hit a headline home run every time

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That’s All Folks!

Thank you for listening!!!

Any questions?