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Technical Report
Writing
By
Dr. Aly El-BahrawyFaculty of Engineering,
Ain Shams University
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Contents
Engineers and Writing
Characteristics of TechnicalStyle
Organization of Formal Report
Example of Complete Report
Word Processing formatting, tables
Computers and Graphics
Spreadsheets
pie and line charts
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Characteristics
of Technical Style
Objectivity
neutrality, absence of bias
Precision concrete language, exact dimensions
and units, well-defined terms
Clarity
word choice, completeness, correctness Economy
fewest words for the desired meaning
Audience
general, technicians, experts, executive,mixed
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Objectivity
Means neutrality or the absence ofbias
Subjectivity means personal
perception, with emotions
Denotative (as in dictionary) vsconnotative (subjective meaning)
Impersonality not required
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Precision
Concrete language Exact dimensions of size,
weight, volume, etc.
Well-defined technical terms
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Clarity
Completeness
Journalists mind: where, when,who, why and how?
Correctness
usage, punctuation, grammar
Examples
Misplaced modifiers
Careless punctuation
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Clarity Examples
Misplaced modifiers Training sessions will be offered
at several sites covering the
operational characteristics of the
equipment. Training sessions covering the
operational characteristics of the
equipmentwill be offered at
several sites
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Clarity Examples
Careless punctuation The proposal which deals with
administrative computing was
discussed at todays meeting.
The proposal,which deals withadministrative computing,wasdiscussed at todays meeting.
The proposal dealing with
administrative computing was
discussed at todays meeting.
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Economy
Fewest words for the desiredmeaning
Hints to make concise writing:
Delete unneeded words or phrases
Substitute single words for phrases
Avoid there is, it is constructions
Limit use of passive voice
Revise indirect sentences into direct
forms.
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Redundant Expressions
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Phrases versus Verbs
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Economy Examples
Wordiness There are three assumptions on
which this proposal is based.
This proposal is based on three
assumptions.
Passive voice
Many of these tasks are now
performed by office computers.
Office computers now perform
many of these tasks.
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Economy Examples
Indirectness In an article that was published in
Computerworld, there is an
explanation of this phenomenon
that has been so puzzling to somany.
A Computerworld article explains
this puzzling phenomenon.
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Adaptation to Audience General
define technical terms, use graphics, focus on
how to use
Technicians focus on construction, installation and
servicing, use graphics
Experts design or evaluation of technology
Executives costs, personnel, company politics, summary
and conclusions
Mixed
clear summary, non-technical language, detailsin appendix
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Checklistfor Effective Technical Style
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Organizing a Formal
Report
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Cover/Title Page
attractive and informative includes four pieces of
information
Project title
Clients name (prepared for)
Your name (prepared by)
Date of submission
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Letter/Memo ofTransmittal
immediately after title page includes major point from
report
single spacing
ragged edge
one page
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Table of Contents
very readable white space, indenting, page
numbers
specific and concise
low-level headings may be left
list appendices
use parallel form
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Formatting
Font (style, size)
Paragraph
Alignment: left, center, right,
justified (left and right)
Line spacing: adapts to size of font
Indentation: temporary setting of margins
Format/Paragraph or Ruler
Special indentsFirst line indentHanging indent
Tabs setting:Default every inchLeft, right, center and decimalLeaders (Format/Tabs/Leader)
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List of Illustrations
may be on separate page number, title and page number
separate the list of tables and
figures
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Executive Summary
for decision makers free of technical jargon
one page
important conclusions andrecommendations
no reference to body of report
paragraph format
written last
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Introduction
project description physical setting, reasons for the
study
scope information
objectives, necessary details
report format
preview of main sections
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Discussion Sections
from facts to opinions collect, verify and analyze data to
develop recommendations
headings and sub-headings
listings to break up long
paragraphs
illustrations
excessive details in appendices
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TableCreating a Menu and toolbars/ruler
Gridlines
Moving around
Entering text
Selecting in a table (cell, row, column)
Changing column width
Menu or ruler (column dividers)
Adding/deleting rows and columns Merging and splitting cells
Adding borders and shading
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Conclusionsand Recommendations
exhaustive list for technical and
management readers
conclusions and
recommendations can beseparate
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References
A Guide to Writing as an Engineer,D. Beer and D. McMurrey, John
Wiley & sons, Inc., 1997.
Technical Writing: A PracticalApproach, William S. Pfeiffer,
Prentice Hall, 1997.
Technical Communication: ThePractical Craft, Maris Roze,
Prentice Hall, 1997.