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Page 1: Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D. EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY.

Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English

Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved

Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D.EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY

Technical Writing and Presentation - Graduate English

of Mechanical Engineering(7)

Comments on Proposal Writing

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Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English

Copyright © 2003 CheMech. All Rights reserved

Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D.EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY

Introduction of InstructorZhengdong Wang, Ph.D., Professor

王正东 —— 实验十七楼 316 室; 电话 : 64253149 E-mail: [email protected]

English name?‘ZD’ in the States‘Dong’ in AustraliaI prefer ZD or Zeady

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Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English

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Professor Zhengdong Wang, Ph.D.EAST CHINA UNIVERSITY OF SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY

A Sample for Technical Writing

A Famous Literature Writing

清明时节雨纷纷,

路上行人欲断魂。

借问酒家何处有?

牧童遥指杏花村。

Change into a Technical Writing

清明雨纷纷,

行人欲断魂。

酒家何处有?

遥指杏花村。

Summary for a Technical Writing

清明雨,

人断魂。

何处酒?

杏花村。

Key Words and a Title

Keywords: 雨,魂,酒,村After googling, I got 45,200 results 6 years

ago and the first 3 or 5 were the poem.

This time 5,660,000, and 11,600,000 , results last year.

The title may be:

清雨断魂问酒村

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Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English

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Comments on Your Homework

• Advertisement?

• Product Brochure?

• Technical Report?

• Scientific Paper?

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Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English

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Title Beginning with

• Design, Solve, Develop, … (10 cases in 141)

• Research, Study(11 cases)

• Introduction, Development (5 cases)

• Proposal of (42 cases)

• Guide to (13 cases)

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Scientific Paper• Introduction

• Theoretical Model

• Experimental Results

• Discussions

• Conclusions

• References

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Contents for Typical Proposal

Project Title

Client

A Picture Provided

Brief Project Description (Background)

Main Tasks (Target)

Main Findings and Benefit (Possible Results)

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Pictures Provided

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Technical Writing and Presentation – Graduate English

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Homework Sample 1A Proposal to Research about Microreaction

Scale Continuous Synthesis of CdS Quantum Dots

A Continuous Synthesis of CdS Quantum Dots at Microreaction Scale

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Homework Sample 2Analysis on the effect of temperature variation

in piezoelectric

Analysis of the Effect of Temperature on Performance of Piezoelectric Stick-slip Actuator

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Homework Sample 3The Applications of Stainless Steels In

Petrochemical Industries

Application of Duplex Stainless Steel in Petrochemical Industry

00Cr18Ni5Mo3Si2

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Homework Sample 4Reducing Air Pollution from Urban Transport

Reduction of Air Pollution from Urban Transportation

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Homework Sample 5research on fracture toughness of duplex

stainless steel using analytical transmission electron microscopy

Investigation of fracture toughness for a duplex stainless steel using transmission electron microscopy

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Homework Sample 6Analysis of Magnetic Driven Pump Bearing

Failure and Remake

Failure Analysis of Bearing for Magnetic Driven Pump and Its Improvement

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Homework Sample 7A Proposal to Research Characherastics of

single-phase and Two-Phase Boiling Heat Transfer and Flow Resistance in Tube-bundle Channels

Characteristics Analysis of Boiling Heat Transfer and Flow Resistance in Tube-Bundle Channels for Steam Generators

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Homework Sample 8Analysis of The Crack Produced Reason and

Residual life of a 2000m3 spherical tank

Analysis of Crack Initiation and Assessment of Residual Life of a Spherical Tank

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Homework Sample 9Predict 9Cr-1Mo pipe residual life

Prediction of residual life for a 9Cr-1Mo pipeline

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Homework Sample 10The Research Of 3D CAD Modeling System

Applied In New Type High Efficient Heat Exchanger

Dynamic Assembly Simulation of a High- efficient Heat Exchanger with 3D CAD Modeling System

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Homework Sample 11Preparation and Tribological Behavior of New

Nanocomposite Coatings

Preparation of a Nanocomposite Coating and Measurement of Its Tribological Behavior

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Homework Sample 12Performance Analysis of centrifugal

compressor

A Similarity Theory to Describe the Performance of Centrifugal Compressor

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Homework Sample 13Automobile Recycling Based on Life Cycle

A New Concept of Total Life Cycle for Automobile Recycling

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Homework Sample 14Research on the control technology of Wall-

climbing robot for cleaning

Design of Motion Control System for a Wall-climbing Robot

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Typical Classroom in Rowan Univ.

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