Run-On Sentences Take a breath!
Dec 14, 2015
Run-On Sentences
Take a breath!
What?
Two independent clauses that have been run together without a proper conjunction, and/or mark of punctuation between them.
Run-On Sentences
What?!
clause: a part of a sentence
that has its own subject and verb
We ran inside.
Vocabulary
subject verb
conjunction: a joiner word that
connects parts of a sentence coordinating conjunctions:
simple conjunctions for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so
FANBOYS!
Vocabulary
The Rocky Mountains were
dangerous people needed a clear path to the west.
In 1803, America bought the Louisiana Purchase the new territory was huge.
Let’s Look at Run-On Sentences!
A. People were curious about the
wild country, and they dreamed of adventure.
B. They had a Native American guide her name was Sacajawea.
C. Lewis needed a partner, and he hired William Clark.
Which is the Run-On?
A. The king was proud he never
smiled.B. His best friend plays the
piano.C. I like funny songs and serious
ones too.
Which is the Run-On?
1) Separate clauses using punctuation.2) Separate clauses using a conjunction.3) Separate clauses by using a semicolon.
Three ways to fix the Problem.
Identify the two clauses, and
insert proper punctuation to separate them. Run-On - Cristina had no plans
she felt restless. Correct – Cristina had no
plans. She felt restless.
Separate clauses using punctuation
The scientist yelled he was very
upset. The scientist yelled. He was very
upset. They played fast songs I danced all
evening. They played fast songs. I danced all
evening.
Separate clauses using punctuation
Your Turn!!
Identify the two clauses and
separate them by inserting a comma and then a conjunction after the first clause.
sentence, conjunction sentence.
Separate clauses using a conjunction
For – use to show cause
I drank some water, for I was thirsty.
And – connects matching ideas He was tired, and he had a
headache
Coordinating Conjunctions
Nor – negative form of
She doesn’t drink milk, nor does she eat butter.
But – connects opposing ideas Tom studied a lot, but he
didn’t pass the test.
Coordinating Conjunctions
Or – connects two choices
He can buy the book, or he can borrow it from the library.
Yet – connects opposing ideas Tom studied a lot, yet he didn’t pass
the test. So – connects problem with solution
I ran out of milk, so I went to the store.
Coordinating Conjunctions
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FANBOYS!
used to connect independent
clauses and show a closer relationship than a period does. Gabby is a skilled carpenter she
single-handedly built a two-story log cabin.
Gabby is a skilled carpenter; she single-handedly built a two-story log cabin.
Separate clauses by using a semicolon
The book was very interesting
the main character died in the last scene.
The book was very interesting; the main character died in the last scene.
Separate clauses by using a semicolon
Separate clauses by using a semicolon
WARNING: YOU CAN ONLY USE A SEMICOLON IF THE
TWO SENTENCES ARE CLOSELY RELATED!!
INCORRECT!!
It was wonderful weather on Monday; the boy flew a kite.
Separate clauses by using a semicolon