It’s a Warm Day in Kansas Mentally Challenged Guys Incorporated Alex Wright, Sang-yun Kim, Brian Jones, Jun-hoi Kim
It’s a Warm Day in Kansas
Mentally Challenged Guys Incorporated
Alex Wright, Sang-yun Kim, Brian Jones, Jun-hoi Kim
Research:
The first thing that we did for research was just some basic
geography/geology information gathering on Kansas and caves in
general. Kansas isn’t known for having caves, but this worked out to
our advantage in our plotline. Since the Wal-mart in our story just
so happens to fall into this cave system, it wasn’t supposed to be
anything that anyone knew about.
Next we began writing the script with this knowledge in mind,
although it didn’t change too much about our general, original idea.
We just did a quick Google search for different ideas of what we had
each character looking like, and clothing ideas. Finally, for ideas
for monsters, we just searched for images of different types of
creatures we could potentially use various aspects from.
The basis for the whole thing is actually based on discoveries found
by geophysicists. The discoveries are just convoluted theories, but
there have been recordings of heavy magnetic fields around the Bermuda
Triangle, which disrupted radio and navigation equipment. Same goes
for Afghanistan. Some areas the army can’t go into because they lose
communication.
It is a warm day in Kansas. We see TOM NELSON smoking a Lucky Strike next to his 1955 Ford pick up truck. He throws his cigarette on to a Prius. We see his burly walk through parking lot into the sliding doors of Wal-mart. He winks at the sexy greeter. The greeter smiles and punches him in the arm. We see him proceed to aisle 5-B: the toy isle. He picks up a pregnant Barbie doll and scoffs. We see from behind him LIN LEE entering the aisle. He notices that she’s inspecting a G-I Joe. They have mutual conversation over their children. We learn that they are divorced with children and their birthday is today. We see the shelves shake and hear a low grumble. The toys begin to drop off the shelves. We hear a large crack, the lights shut off and the store begins tipping in 1 direction. Carts go sliding. People frantically grab for safety. Through the window, you can see the horizon turning perpendicular to the window frame. Tom takes Lin and locates a restroom. They lock themselves in the bathroom. They begin to hear screams and feel a lot of shaking. There is a rough jolt that throws them against the wall followed by more screams and the camera slowly fades to black. 2 weeks later, supplies are low, a sewage line has leaked into the building. The smell vile, and spurs debate whether people should stay in the store or look for a way out. We see a person dead, with a knife in their back. Lin and Tom decide this is the finally straw and they now are set on looking for a way out. They seek other people to join them because they do not want to go out alone. We see light beams erupt out of the doors on the Wal-Mart. The group, hefting Mag-light flashlights, inspect the glossy surface of the cavern before them. They spot an opening in the wall containing several ominous stalactites. Tom gives a wary look to Lin. They inspect further and we see Lin point with her flashlight to a glowing dot on the ground. They find another exit of bigger proportions, covered with moss and efflorescent flowers. We see them proceed into the dim-lit tunnel. We see Tom and Lin emerge first from the mossy tunnel. Their Mag light beams suggest that this is another – much larger- cavern. In the distance lights (similar to the ones in the tunnel) fade in, and the cavern is illuminated. Before them is a gorge that spans into darkness. Floating in front of them are illuminated islands with an assortment of alien vegetation and vines hanging-connecting. Lin points out that there are additional
islands that move. She begins to ramble about the possibility of this geological phenomina. Flux magnetic vortexes is brought up. The group explores on the floating/moving islands, continuing to discover the alien features. Florescent squealing bugs crawl over the ground, making Lin shriek. They come to a cave entrance in the biggest island they’ve explored. We see a deep blue glow eminating from inside. They decide to go in and inspect. We see a silhouetted small figure approach from the depths. When it comes into full view we notice its some sort of bald monkey with 3 glowing-blue eyes and sharp teeth. It utters a screech that sounds like speech. The team panic and begin to run. Overhead they see thousands of small blue dots appear. Flying creatures hail them from above, killing ________. We hear one say to run back to Wal-Mart. With the aliens in hot pursuit, the team dashes to the Wal-Mart. Tom throws himself against the sliding doors, demanding JACK MINNS, the manager, to unlock. The group is forced to fight the creatures while the others inside react slowly due to amazement. Tom, Lin, and a few others make it in, and they explain what they went through. We see what is left of walmart flood out of the side door, running to the only escape they know is possible: the cave covered in stalactites. We see the group arrive at the end and we notice it’s the same cavern from before!
Name Personality/Past Appearance
TOM Has a daughter, divorced, never re-married. Gulf War veteran. Daughter is most precious to him. Smokes. He lives an easy life, doesn’t travel much. His occupation is a construction worker. He drives a 1988 Ford pickup truck. He usually goes to Wal-Mart to seek out women. Has no problem with showing authority. He writes short storys.
Rough, but handsome. He has good muscular structure. Baseball cap. Short, scruffly beard. Blue denim jeans, shit-kicker boots. Beige working shirt. Dirty/dusty. Wears cologne. Green eyes.
LIN Has a son, just divorced recently. Had 4 husbands- has connection issues. Second husband left her because she was raped, caused the birth of son. She is incredibly smart. PHD in geology and tectonic plates, magnetic fluxes. Her sister is a pop star in Japan. Quirky. Father lives in Japan.
Average build (not beautiful or ugly). She wears post-modern glasses. Japanese-American. Short with long legs. Long coat. Converse shoes. Colorful Skirt. Hazel eyes. Blue satchel.
JACK Conservative. Has a loud voice because he’s slightly deaf. Has 4 sons in the army. Patriotic, has faith in the integrity of the government. A little racist. He is a retired EMT. Deeply religious.
Chubby, old, whiter hair, pocket-protector. Plaid shirt, cowboy hat. Brown cowboy boots. Loose jeans. Big head, and short.
EVA HOCKETT
Six year old girl. Mom died in Wal-Mart. Very curious in different things. Very active. Grown up in very urban area with wealthy family. Therefore, very curious about things she see in the floating island and walks around herself, making TOM and LIN to search for her in the middle of the forest. Has an asthma.
Long brown hair. Brown eyes. Average 6 year old height. Has no two front teeth. Wears pink one-piece. (I’m thinking of “Connie Talbot” as her image). Have very red lips. Relatively cute face.
MORAN MILLER
Has an age of 37. Has no job. He acts very powerful and courageous, but it can be easily seen that he is very weak hearted, and a coward. Calls himself to be a former part of Mafia, but actually he was just a normal person who graduated in a small community college. He doesn’t want to reveal his past. Never had a girl friend before and never even kissed a girl before. His afraid to go out, so decides to stay in. He lies a lot. Thinks him before others. Does not want to die, and he can do anything to live even if it is sacrificing others.
Very thin, dark brown curly short hair. Very very white (not tanned). Tall. Wearing a white shirt, but little bit loose for him. Has relatively small face. Big green eyes, thick eye brow. And a relatively small mouth. Wearing a semi-formal grey pant. Wearing thick glasses that have no frames. Wearing a New Balance running shoes.
Mary Stay at home “soccer mom” whose one main concern is the well being of her kids. She is more worries about her children than her own safety. Good at budgeting time because she has several children.
Brunette mom who doesn’t have the time, or the care for makeup/neat hair.
Joanne Middle school teacher who hates her job because the kids never seem to care about what she has to say.
Marshall 15-year-old boy, who is having an inner struggle of trying to become a man.
Scrawny teenager. Messy colicky, red hair.
Karl Age 45, struggling musician whose music isn’t quite taking him where he would like to be.
Tall, average build with longish shaggy brown hair.
Jason 47 years old. He’s homeless. Murdered his wife after their divorce. He is
Burly, overcoat, unkempt beard and hair. Gray eyes. Boots. Wife-beater under jacket.
bi-polar. Jailed for 22 years, released on “good behavior.” Anti-social behavior, not talkative, silent. Does heroin.
Swastika tattoo on arm. Full sleeves with dragons. Sickle and hammer tattoo on the tongue.
Marc Beever Soldier, on leave from duty. Marine division, Sgt. JUST came back from Iraq. He’s getting his wife ice cream while she’s in hospital after giving birth. He passes time playing chess. He is “the good ol’ boy from out West.”
Military Uniform. Short red hair. Deep-blue eyes. Physically fit and huge. Carries handguns at all times, one in belt and other in boot. Commando knife in belt. Marine tattoo of a naked woman sitting on a bomb, and the woman is his wife, on shoulder.
Bill Garrison Pastor for Babtist Church. Has youth group he brings to Wal-Mart weekly to buy clothes for the poor. He is a reformed criminal. He spent his youth stealing from Wal-Mart.
Has a tattoo of a cross on the back of his neck. Muscular body. Tight black button-up shirt with white collar. African-American. Sleek black belt with black business pants, black shiny shoes. Gold cross on necklace.
ANDY SULLIVAN
On the run from the cops. Killed a friend over drugs in Alabama. Never married, spent times in strip clubs. He is a sociopath. His mom killed herself because his dad was so abusive. Has OCD.
Well-dressed. Orange-blue plaid shirt tucked in. Jeans, black boots. Brass belt buckle with a fish on it. Aligator belt. Trimmed black goatee, black hair. Haggard complexion. Wears glasses.
SUSAN MILHOUSE
Went to University of Kansas. Professional Runner. At Wal-Mart to pick out running shoes. She comes from a Mormon family. She enjoys outdoor climbing and travel/adventure. Climbed Mt. Everest at age 21.
Wears her hair in a braid going down back. Wears a visor.
JACKIE HUDSON
Geography student attending MIT. Came to Kansas because of small fluctuations in satellite images of Kansas over the past decade. At Wal-Mart buying food.
Scene Shot Description Elements
1 1 HA LS Toms Car Other cars driving and in parking lot
1 2
HA CS Tom through windshield.
Person pushing carts in parking lot
1 3
EL LS Tom lights cigarette head on to camera
1 4
EL LS follows behind tom walking
Random shoppers, and women tom tries to talk to.
1 5 EL MS tom winks at greeter
1 6 EL MS on greeter Tom gets slapped
2 1
BE LS Tom wanders the aisles Other shoppers
2 2
EL MS Tom in toy aisle parallel to shelves
Lin Lee in background directly to toms left.
2 3 EL CS Lins perspective tom in shot
2 4 EL CS Toms perspective LIN
2 5 EL MS Behind both
2 6 EL CS Lins perspective
2 7 EL CS Toms perspective
2 8 EL MS both
3 1 HA LS Cashier customers in distance water glass on counter
3 2 HA CS Glass of water ripples
3 3 BE MS Tom and Lin Kitchenware on shelves
3 4 EL MS behind tom and lin see kitchen ware rumble
3 5 EL LS zoomed out from previous
see kitchen ware fall off shelf
3 6 HA LS Behind Tom and Lin
See stuff rumbling on more shelves.
3 7
EL LS Follows behind tom and lin running to bathroom
other customers looking frantic and running around
3 8 LACS Toms face in bathroom
3 9 LACS Lins face
3 10 HA MS Tom grabs lin bathroom
3 11 LACS Toms face
in bathroom
3 12 LACS Lins face
Scene #/ shot # Setting:Night -
location Shot type Description
4/1 Bathroom Long Shot, high angle Nothing can be seen
4/2 Bathroom Long Shot, High Angle
Tom and Lin exit bathroom. Bathroom door somewhat illuminates.
4/3 Aisle outside
bathroom Long shot, eye-level.
Tom and Lin exit into long aisle. Capture from one end of aisle
4/4 Aisle outside
bathroom Close shot, medium angle. Jack arrives
4/5 Aisle outside
bathroom
180deg Long shot, Over-the-shoulder
Sowing dark area of the back of the store.
4/6 Aisle outside
bathroom Close shot Introduction
4/7 Aisle outside
bathroom Medium shot Flashlights exchanged
4/8 Wal-Mart security
perspective Long shot, High Angle
Time-lapse of store, as if being fast forwarded.
4/9 Wal-Mart security
perspective Medium shot, high angle
Focus in on Andy, Karl, and Tom. Hold until shelf is being lifted.
4/10 Grocery Aisle Medium Shot, Medium Angle Shelf lifted.
4/11 Grocery Aisle Close Shot Behind Tom as he rushes forward
4/12 Grocery Aisle Close shot, aerial Tom runs into camera from right and pulls Eva away
4/13 Grocery Aisle Medium Shot, medium angle
Andy’s random outburst. Andy to left, Tom, Karl, and Eva on right. Dead mom in center.
4/14 Wal-Mart security
perspective Long Shot, High angle
Time lapse of store being repaired/prepared in fast forward.
4/15 Front of Store Long Shot, high angle
Capture crowd around the registers.
4/16 Front of Store Close shot, medium angle
Bill’s outburst, he’s on right of frame.
4/17 Front of store Medium shot, medium angle
Jack is in the right of frame, crowd cuts out of frame.
5/1 Wal-Mart security
perspective Long shot, high angle
Store well-lit, people going around store.
5/2 Wal-Mart security
perspective Medium shot, high angle
Toy aisle with Marc, Joanne, Mary, and kids.
5/3 Toy aisle Medium Shot, medium angle
Marc pulls out chess set. Marc left of frame, Mary and
Jo on right.
5/4 Outside toy aisle, facing electronics OSS, long shot
Marc yelling to Marshall. Marc left frame, Marshall right frame.
5/5 Electronics
section Medium Shot, medium angle
Marc holding box in right frame, facing to left of frame. Responding to Marc.
5/6 Electronics
section OSS, long shot Marshall talking back, taking up right frame, Marc in left.
5/7 Electronics
section Medium Shot, medium angle
Marshall responding to Marc, same as 5/5.
5/8 Toy Aisle Medium Shot, medium angle Marc turning to Jo.
5/9 House/cleaning
section/pharmacy Long shot, medium angle
Tom, Lin, and Eva walking on right frame, coming up aisle.
5/10 House/cleaning
section/pharmacy Medium shot, low angle
Tom, Lin, and Eva walking on right frame, coming up aisle, talking.
5/11 House/cleaning
section/pharmacy Close Shot, medium angle
Tom talking to Lin. Frame is from shoulder to head.
5/12 House/cleaning
section/pharmacy Pan, close up Tom bends down to console Eva.
5/13 House/cleaning
section/pharmacy
Medium Shot/medium angle
Walking, approaching pharmacy on left.
5/14 House/cleaning
section/pharmacy Medium shot, OSS
Tom jumps from center, Lin and Eva on the right.
5/15 House/cleaning
section/pharmacy Medium shot, low angle Tom on right, body on left.
6/1 Wal-Mart security
perspective Medium Shot, high angle
Jack in center with crowd around.
6/2 Wal-Mart security
perspective Long Shot, high angle Tom stands up.
6/3 Wal-Mart security
perspective Medium shot, high angle Tom gives speech.
6/4 Front of store Medium shot, medium angle Bill says something
6/5 Front of store Medium Shot, low angle
Tom asking for followers on left.
Scene #/ shot # Time of day -
location Shot type Description
7 Day – Wal-mart Montage
8/1 Day – Near the
end of the tunnel Low angle close shot
We see Tom walking and talking at the same time
8/2 Day – Near the
end of the tunnel Low angle close shot
We see Joanne walking and talking at the same time
8/3 Day – Near the
end of the tunnel High angle full shot
We see the cave getting little bit brightened, and we see the entire group. Among the
group with see Lin talking
8/4 Day – Near the
end of the tunnel Eye Level Medium shot
We see TOM, LIN, and talking JACKIE in the shot. Lin interferes Jackie.
8/5 Day – Near the
end of the tunnel High angle full shot.
We see a white dot, which assumes to be where the light comes from. The group runs to the light
8/6 Day – Near the
end of the tunnel High angle medium shot
We see Joanne talking to Eva and holding her hands.
8/7 Day – Near the
end of the tunnel Eye Level medium shot
Joanne and Eva follows the rest of the group.
8/8
Day – End of the cave/ near the
cliff Low angle medium shot.
Tom comes out the cave and holds still. He talks. Lin joins him and talks. The shot zooms out and shows the massive and uncountable floating islands.
8/9
Day – End of the cave/ near the
cliff Eyelevel close up.
Eva is seen on the shot, expressing about the thing she sees.
8/10
Day – End of the cave/ near the
cliff
Eyelevel
Medium shot
We see Joanne asking a question and Susan answering the question. We also see Eva next to her saying something.
8/11
Day – End of the cave/ near the
cliff
Eyelevel Full shot zoom to Lin that makes a closeup
We see Lin speaking and people around are listening t her. The camera zooms to her. We see her awkward facial expression.
8/12
Day – End of the cave/ near the
cliff Low angle medium
We see Jackie talking, on the other half of him, we can see the view of the islands.
8/13
Day – End of the cave/ near the
cliff Eyelevel close up We see Tom speaking
8/14 Day – End of the cave/ near the
Eyelevel close up We see Jackie annoyed. This zooms out and we see Tom in the shot too. I can
cliff notice that Jackie is annoyed at Tom. Tom chills him down.
8/15
Day – End of the cave/ near the
cliff Eyelevel full shot
We can see Tom near to the camera and we can see the group little bit away from him. Tom tells them to do something.
8/16
Day – End of the cave/ near the
cliff High angle full shot.
We see the group finding a spot to seat down.
8/17
Day – End of the cave/ near the
cliff Eyelevel medium shot
We can see Jackie going towards Tom to argue
8/18
Day – End of the cave/ near the
cliff Low angle close shot
We see Lin thinking
8/19
Day – End of the cave/ near the
cliff Low angle close shot
We see Tom talking
8/20
Day – End of the cave/ near the
cliff High angle full shot.
We see Tom, Lin and Jackie discussing.
8/21
Day – End of the cave/ near the
cliff Low angle full shot.
Continuing discussing.
8/22
Day – End of the cave/ near the
cliff Eyelevel medium shot
We see Tom, Lin in the shot and Toms tells the group something.
9/1 Day – floating
island High level full shot
Cameraman is filming this from the helicopter. He is filming this widely and zooms in the middle of the island slowly and we see the group exploring the island.
9/2 Day – floating
island Eye level medium shot We see Tom and Lin talking.
9/3 Day – floating
island Eye level Medium shot.
We see Eva pointing to this big bug. Joanne enters the shot and tells something to
her.
9/4 Day – floating
island Eyelevel close shot
We see Jackie warning the group.
9/5 Day – floating
island High angle full shot.
We see the group exploring. We see Tom joking to Lin and Lin hugging Tom.
9/6 Day – floating
island High angle medium shot.
We see Susan pointing at a cave and saying something.
9/7 Day – floating
island Eyelevel full shot
Tom and Lin says something to each other, Jackie joins the shot and saying something that agrees them.
9/8 Day – floating
island Low angle medium shot
We see Eva and a shadow of something passing by really rapidly.
9/9 Day – floating
island Eye level full shot
We see the group. We see Eva and Joanne having conversation.
9/10 Day – floating
island Eye level close shot
A monkey like creature shows up from the cave.
9/11 Day – floating
island high level full shot. There are tons of them.
9/12 Day – floating
island Eye level medium shot
We see TOM LIN Susan in panic and we see them running off from the shot. We see the creatures following them.
9/13 Day – floating
island High level full shot.
We see the group running away and creatures chasing them.
9/14 Day – floating
island Eye level medium shot We see Joanne falling down
9/15 Day – floating
island High level full shot.
We see the creatures killing Joanne and eating her up. We see her head getting separated from her body.
9/16 Day – floating
island Eyelevel medium shot
We see Lin and one more in the back running away from the monsters. Lin says something.
9/17 Day – floating
island Eyelevel full shot
We see Lin asking people something and we see Tom shouting back.
9 1 Long Shot Pan of Floating islands
Group on the islands in the distance.
9 2 Medium Shot eye level
Tom with floating islands in background
9 3 Long shot Behind Tom looking at Lin from the front
9 4 Close Shot
Susans face when she notices another cave to go through.
9 5 Medium shot Tom and Lin from the side facing the rest of the group.
9 6 Camera pan to longshot
Silhouette coming from behind the group.
9 7 Medium Shot eye level
Medium shot of joanne and eva
9 8 Longshot Silhouettes turned to “monkey monsters”
9 9 Track out zoom in long shot Group starts to run
9 10 Long shot, head on
Shaky camera, groupo running towards it, then over it
9 11 Pan to follow group
9 12
Close shot on “monkey monster”
Shaky close up on face.
9 13 Track out zoom out
Move to see the whole scene
9 14 Camera swings to left
Shows the monster chasing susan, and tom continuing to run.
9 15 Close Shot Long shot
Susan We see group arive bake at walmart from behind
10 1 Long Shot We see group arrive at Wal-Mart from behind
10 2 Medium Shot We see all of the faces of the people. Tom gets
slapped
10 3 Medium Shot Facing tom, Lin’s Back, the rest of the group behind
Tom.
10 4 Medium Shot Facing Lin, no one in background.
10 5 Long Shot Whole group
10 6 Close Shot Lin’s face
10 7 Medium Shot Jackie with group around her.
11 1 Low Angle, Medium Shot
Eva pointing off camera, walks OC
11 2 Low Angle, Medium Shot
Eva walks back on camera, pan to Lin
11 3 EL, MS Tom talking to Lin
11 4 Bird’s Eye Lin talking to Tom
11 5 EL, LS Jackie arrives
11 6 EL, MS Jackie chatting
11 7 EL, CS Tom’s face
11 8 EL, MS Behind Tom, showing Lin and Eva. Lin and Tom talking
11 9 EL, MS Behind Lin, Lin and Tom talking
11 10 Low angle, CS Eva tugging on Lin’s pants.
11 11 LA, MS Lin comforting Eva
11 12 EL,MS Picking up bags, pan to leaving the cave
12 1 EL,LS Group walking down tunnel, towards camera
12 2 EL, MS Group talking
12 3 EL,MS Pan, go 180 degrees, behind group as they see the
cavern.
Song Tracks
· 1. ACDC – back in black (in the truck at beginning)
2. Kingdom hearts sound track – end of the world (after collapse)
3. Louis Armstrong – what a wonderful world (first see floating island)
4. oh fortuna (getting chased)
5. bach – chaconne (in the end)