Steps of writing a good article Read the instructions carefully and decide the style. Follow typical patterns List the key points. Put the key points.

Steps of writing a good articleSteps of writing a good article

Read the instructions carefully and decide the style. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

Follow typical patterns 　　　 List the key points. 　　　 Put the key points into sentences.

　　　　　　　（列提纲）

（明审题）

（选句型）

（妙联句）( 细复查 )

Develop the sentences into passage.

Check your work.

09 浙江卷书面表达5 月 1 日。高二（ 3 ）班的学生志愿者 Li Yue 和 Zhang Hua 去阳光敬老

院（ Sunshine Nursing Home) 开展志愿者活动（送水果、打扫、聊天等）。假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则 100~120 个词的新闻报道。

• 1.       时间、地点、人物、活动；• 2.       老人们的反应；• 3.       简短评论。• 4.       注意：报道的标题和记者姓名已给出（不计词数）。• Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly• ——————————————————

• By Chen Jie, School Newspaper

命题特点：▲坚持“半开放”的命题思路；▲话题贴近学生生活，有话可写，有感可

发 ;▲有一定的发挥空间

Style: News report( 半开放式）Theme: Student volunteers work for Sunshine

Nursing Home.

Event:whenWhereWhowhat

The outline of the passage （提纲）：

On May DaySunshine Nursing HomeLi Yue and Zhang HuaThey did some voluntary work

The reaction of the elderlyComment on the event.

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work. Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people. When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness. They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever. What Li Yue and Zhang Hua did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives. In addition, it is we youngsters’ duty to care for the elderly, who have devoted a lot to our society.

Skills of writing a good article

Transition Words Varied sentence patterns

A good passage

高级词汇

丰富的结构 恰当的过渡词

Advanced vocabularies

They gave the elderly flowers and fruits.They presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.

What Li Yue and Zhang Hua did has made others happy and is also good for their own lives.What Li Yue and Zhang Hua did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.

Advanced vocabularies

1.That is a difficult job.

2.We all think he is a great man.

3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.

I. 怎样使用较高级的词汇

We all think highly of him .

A good idea occurred to me.

/ A good idea suddenly struck me.

That is a challenging job.

4. He is good at English.

5.There is an increase in the number of women’s jobs.

6.Some students who live in remote areas can’t have listening material easily.

There is an increase in the number of jobs available for women.

He has a good command /knowledge of English.

available

access

Some students who live in remote areas have no easy access to listening material.

Varied sentence structuresUpon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, Respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.They started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.It was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.What Li Yue and Zhang Hua did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.It is we youngsters’ duty to care for the elderly, who have devoted a lot to our society.

介词短语作时间状语

副词作方式状语

现在分词表伴随

独立结构作时间状语

名词性从句作主语

动词不定式作主语 / 定语从句

状语从句

To his surprise, the little girl can speak English fluently.

What surprises him is that the little girl can speak English fluently.

Practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式

The Little girl can speak English fluently, which surprises him.

He is surprised to find that the little girl can speak English fluently.

The fact that the little can speak English fluently surprises him

He is surprised ， for the little can speak English fluently.

The little girl can speak English so fluently that he is surprised.

小女孩英语说得很流利，这使他非常惊讶。一句多译

Transition words

Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.

In addition, it is we youngsters’ duty to care for the elderly, who have devoted a lot to our society.

表示对比的过渡词有： however ； on the contrary ； on the other hand ；等。表示说明的过渡词有： for example ； for instance ； such as; namely 等表示强调的过渡词有： above all ； in fact ； in particular ；等。表示总结的过渡词有： all in all ； finally ； in brief; on the whole 等。

表示时间顺序的过渡词有： firstly; first of all; above all ； to begin/start with ； first and foremost; finally; in the end; eventually; last but not least等。

表示递进的过渡词有： furthermore； in addition；moreover；what is more等。

常用的过渡词

三 . 过渡词的应用 学生习作 Online Shopping As a new way of shopping, online shopping is becoming more and more popular in our daily life. Online shopping has many advantages. Online shopping makes it easier for us to buy things. Instead of searching a crowded store, we just need to watch the computer screen and choose the things we like. It is much faster for us to do shopping. We don’t have to spend a lot of time going to shops. We can see a great deal of goods shown on the computer screen at the same time. Online shopping is not so perfect. The pictures of goods shown on the computer screen are not always what they are. We can be cheated easily. We can not see the things in detail. It is an advanced way to do shopping. So we should develop and make good use of it.

给下文加上恰当的过渡词

As a new way of shopping online shopping is becoming more and more popular in our daily life. Online shopping has many advantages. Firstly, online shopping makes it easier for us to buy things. Instead of searching a crowded store, we just need to watch the computer screen and choose the things we like. Secondly, it is much faster for us to do shopping. We don’t have to spend a lot of time going to shops. In addition, we can see a great deal of goods shown on the computer screen at the same time. However, online shopping is not so perfect. The pictures of goods shown on the computer screen are not always what they are. As a result, we can be cheated easily. What’s worse, we can not see the things in detail. In my opinion, it is an advanced way to do shopping. So we should develop and make good use of it.

当前我国政府和人民正努力把我国建设成一个社会关系和谐的国家。我们高三学生与家庭成员以及班级同学的关系处理总体上是好的，但也存在着一些问题，如容易发怒，与同学吵架，不听从家长和老师的教育等。假如我校外教 Andrew 正在调查我们高三学生与家庭成员和班级同学、老师之间的关系处理情况。作为高三学生，现在请你把以上的情况向 Andrew 反映并提出一些关于如何改进关系的意见。要点： 1 、目前的实际情况：存在的方面； 2 、你个人的改进意见 ( 至少两条 ) 。 注意： 1 、文章的开头已经给出 ( 不计入总词数 ) ，你只需接着写，可适当发挥； 2 、词数： 120 左右。 Nowadays the government and people of China are trying to build a country with a harmonious relationship. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

命题特点：▲“半开放”的命题思路；▲话题贴近学生生活，有话可写，有感可

发 ;▲有一定的发挥空间

Para.1 Phenomena

Para.2

the relationshiplose their temper

quarrel with others

turn a deaf ear to

suggestions

improve the situation.

respect

communication

relaxation…

The outline of the passage （提纲）：

用于描述现象的句型：• Recently,…has become the focus of the society/

our school.• Nowadays, there is a growing concern for…• There exists some problems in…• Nowadays it is common to hear/see…• Nowadays,…has become a problem we have to

face.用于陈述想法的句型：My own experience tells me that….In my opinion, we should attach more importance to…As far as I am concerned, I plan to…Personally, I tend to…

Finish the composition and hand it in tomorrow.

【参考范文】 Nowadays the government and people of China are trying to build a country with a harmonious relationship. Generally speaking, the relationship between us students and our family members and classmates as well as teachers is fairly good. However. there exist some problems. Some students in our grade easily lose their temper because of anxiety and study burden. What’s worse, they sometimes quarrel with others, and even turn a deaf ear to their parents and teachers, which is very disappointing. In my opinion, we middle school students should make effort to improve the situation. Firstly, we should respect our parents and teachers as well as our classmates. Secondly, when we are not feeling good or happy, we can chat with our friends or teachers or even parents. It is likely that they can understand us better and give us some reasonable advice. Finally, after a day’s hard work. we can relax by exercising, such as playing basketball table tennis and so on.