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S.K.H. St. Clement’s Primary

School Good People Good Deeds Writing

Competition

2016-2017

Winners Scripts

S.K.H. St. Clement’s Primary School 2016-2017 Good People Good Deeds Writing Competition

Champion Name:_______________ ( ) Class: P.3 ___

In Chinese New Year holiday, I helped my mum do housework, fold the

clothes, sweep the floor and tidy up my room every day.

One day, I went shopping with my mum. On the way, Mum saw a

beautiful handbag. Mum said, “You stay here. I will buy this handbag.”

When Mum was still shopping in the store, I saw an old woman carrying

bags and crossing the road. I ran up to her and helped her carry the bags

to walk across the road.

Mum finally came out from the store. I told her what happened. Mum

said, “You’re such a kind boy.” I was very happy that Mum praised me.

Ethan Wong 27 A


Champion Name:_______________ ( ) Class: P.3 ___

Last year, I joined a flag selling activity with Mum and Dad.

We went to Mong Kok MTR station by bus. The weather was cold and

windy. I did not want to go out because it was very cold.

First, I was shy so I did not want to ask people to buy the flag. Mum

said, “Don’t worry. Be brave.”

Then, I asked a man, “Would you buy a flag, please?” After that, the

man gave me one hundred dollars. I felt happy.

In the end, we went home at five o’clock in the evening. I was glad

because it was a meaningful activity.

Kanna Leung 14 E


1st runner-up Name:_______________ ( ) Class: P.3 ___

One day, I went home after school. When I was waiting at the traffic

light, I saw an old woman. She looked like she was over seventy years old.

Her hair was white, her back bone was bent. She wore old clothes and old

slippers.

She was pushing a big trolley. It was full of paper boxes, paper and old

furniture. It was very heavy. I helped her to push the trolley and we

crossed the road together. She said thank you to me.

I felt happy because I helped a person in need. I hope more people can

help the people in need.

Jonathan Wong 30 B


1st runner-up Name:_______________ ( ) Class: P.3 ___

One day, my grandma and I went to a mall. I saw a boy crying. I

immediately asked him, ‘Why are you crying?’ The boy said, ‘I lost my mum.’

I took the boy to a staff member. I said, “The boy lost his mum. Can

you help him?” The staff member said, “Of course, what is the boy’s

name?” The boy said, “My name is Xiao Ming.” The staff member took us to

a broadcasting station and said, “Xiao Ming’s Mum, please go to the

broadcasting station.”

Half an hour later, Xiao Ming’s Mum came and said thank you to the

staff member and me. Xiao Ming said thank you to me too. I did a good

deed. I felt happy.

Sandy Zhou 30 C


2nd runner-up Name:_______________ ( ) Class: P.3 ___

Last Monday after class, I went home by bus. When the bus came to

the People Square bus stop, an old woman got on the bus. Her hair was all

grey and she had a walking stick in her hand. I stood up at once and said

“Grandma, sit here, please.” The grandma said kindly, “Thank you! Thank

you, little girl! I saw the people around me, looked as if to say that I did a

good deed.

I felt very happy when I got off the bus and walked home.

Janet Leung 13 D

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2nd runner-up Name:_______________ ( ) Class: P.3 ___

Last Saturday, I went to school with my father. When we crossed the

road, a little girl with her mother asked us, ‘Can you help me buy a flag?’

Then we bought a flag from her. She was very happy. I was very happy too

because I could help her.

After school, when I went home with my father I saw an old woman

who wanted to cross the road. I gave her a hand and crossed the road with

her. She thanked me and said goodbye to me. I was very happy because I

helped her.

I feel very happy when I help people!

Cherry Chu 7 E


Champion Name: ( 25 ) Class: P.4

Last Sunday, my friend, Mick and I went to the park together. We went

there by bus. We helped two people on the way to the park.

On the bus, we saw two old men standing because there were no seats.

We gave our seats to them. They were happy and said thank you to us.

When we got off the bus, we helped a blind man to cross the road.

Then, we went to the park and played on the slide. Suddenly, we saw a

little cute girl crying under the slide. ‘What’s wrong with you? Can I help

you?’ asked Mick. ‘I want to buy an ice-cream but I cannot find my mum!’

said the little girl. So Mick bought an ice-cream for her. She ate the

ice-cream quickly and we brought her to the police station and waited for her

mum. At last, her mum came to the police station to pick up the little cute

girl.

In the end, we went home happily because we helped the people who were

APierre Tsui


Champion Name: ( 4 ) Class: P.4

It was an evening rush hour. Many people were crossing the road

when the pedestrian green light started flashing. An elderly lady couldn’t

cross the road because her eyesight was poor. She was nervous.

Luckily, Ada was going back home after school at that time. She

saw an old lady standing uneasily at the light junction. Ada walked to the

lady and asked her whether she needs any help. The elderly told Ada

about her problem. Then Ada held the old lady’s hand and they crossed

the road together. They reached the other side safely. The elderly

lady felt thankful and said, ‘You are a helpful girl.’

Ada felt delighted. I should learn from her. I appreciated her

kindness. Helping people can make us feel joyful.

Edwin Chiu D


1st runner-up Name: Yuki Huang ( 7 ) Class: P.4

Mandy is a good girl. She likes helping people very much.

Last Saturday, I went to the park with Mandy. On the way, we saw a

poor man in front of the MTR station. Mandy said, ‘Yuki, let’s help the poor

man.’ I said, ‘ok, I will give him ten dollars. How about you?’ ‘I will give fifty

dollars to him,’ replied Mandy. Mandy was more generous than me. We all

could fit the action to the word.

Then I asked, ‘Mandy, why did you give him so much money?’ Mandy

replied, ‘Because I can help others in need, and helping others gives me

happiness!’ replies Mandy.

Finally, I learnt that helping people can make me happy. I will help a

lot of people like Mandy did.

B


2nd runner-up Name: ( 17 ) Class: P.4

Last week, I went to Japan with my family in the Chinese New Year

holiday.

When we arrived at the airport, I saw a very wretched girl crying. I

asked her what I could do to help her. Then she said, ‘I lost my mum. I

can’t find her at the airport. Can you help me?’ I said, ‘Yes!’

After that, I took her to the information counter. The staff in the

counter helped the girl to find her mum in the shopping mall near the

airport.

I felt so happy and joyful because the girl could find her mum

eventually. Moreover, my parents praised my behaviour.

Ariel Lo A


2nd runner-up Name: ( 1 ) Class: P.4

Last month, when I was going back home, I saw an old lady and a man on

the street. They looked poor. I brought them to my house and asked, ‘Are

you hungry?’ ‘Yes, we are very hungry!’ They both replied.

Suddenly, Mum came back home and asked, ‘Who are they?’ ‘They are

homeless people.’ I told Mum everything. Then Mum cooked noodles with

vegetables for them.

After they ate the food, they felt very happy and said, ‘Thank you! You

are so kind. But we need to go now. See you soon!’

I felt great after helping them. Later on we were also very surprised

to find that the old man and woman were very famous in another country.

Mandy Chau A


Merit Name: Terry Wong ( 27 ) Class: P.4

Last Sunday, when I was walking in a shopping mall, I saw a pretty

girl crying and she looked unhappy. I asked her, ‘Why are you crying?’ The

girl said, ‘I can’t find my mother.’

Then I took her around the mall to find her mother and comforted

her too. We also went to the food court, the bookshop and the shoe shop

to find her mother. At last, we found her mother in the supermarket. Her

mother thanked me for my help. I felt wonderful and fantastic because I

could help the girl.

D


Champion Name:_______________ ( ) Class: P.5___

Yesterday was my birthday. I went to Mim Mim Cake Shop to buy the

birthday cake. On the way, I saw a wallet on the street. I opened it and it

had ninety dollars in it. I wanted to take the money. I knew if I keep this

wallet, the owner of the wallet would be extremely worried. Therefore, I

took it to the police station.

When I arrived at the police station, the police found a card in the

wallet. It had ‘Your Office’ and its address on the card. The police said,

‘You follow this address and find this man. Maybe he is the owner of this

wallet.’

So, I followed the address and found the ‘Your Office’. I arrived at the

office and said, ‘May I see Tony Wong?’ ‘I am Tony Wong. What Can I do

for you?’ a man replied. I found a wallet on the street. It has your name in

it. Is it yours? ‘He said, ‘Yes, it is mine. I was worried about it.’

At that time, my friend Sally came to me and said, ‘Hello,

Vicky! I know it is your birthday today. Happy Birthday!’

Tony Wong said, ‘Oh! Today is your birthday.’ And he

bought a chess from the nearby toy shop. He said, ‘This

Vincy Chan 5 C

is a present for your birthday.’

From that day, I learnt a friend in need is a friend

indeed.


1st runner-up Name:_______________ ( ) Class: P.5_____

I had a chance to visit an elderly home two years ago and till today I

can still remember it clearly.

It was New Year’s Day. It was quite cold and windy. I went to an elderly

home to visit the old people with my friends, Emma and Coco. The old

people were very happy because of our visit.

We played some games with the elderly. After that, we performed a

dance and sang songs to them. Coco did some magic. After our

performances, all the people clapped their hands loudly. However an old

woman looked unhappy. I asked her, ‘Why are you so unhappy?’ ‘Because I

have cancer but I have no money,’ she replied. I cried at that moment.

After two days, a nice rich man helped her. And she has recovered. She

was full of happiness and I was happy again.

I felt happy. Although I did not have money to help her. I did

something that made her feel happy. And I learnt that

helping others can help me to be more responsible and

happy.

Joyce Fong 5 D


2nd runner-up Name:_______________ ( ) Class: P.5____

Last Sunday, I went to the park to play with my friends. It was

wonderful. Suddenly, I saw an old man walking across the road. He

carried too many things. I thought it must be very heavy.

Suddenly, the old man’s bag dropped many oranges. “Oh no!” The

oranges were rolling down the street. The old man screamed loudly. I

ran to the old man as fast as a flash. Luckily, I had another bag. I

helped him to put the oranges into my bag. “Thank you!” The old man

said. “You’re welcome,” I said. We went to the old man’s house. He lived

in an old building. When I got inside the building, there’s no lift! I felt

very surprised.

At last, I helped the old man to carry his things and walked

upstairs to his home. His home was on the sixth floor. I was exhausted.

Finally I got to his home. I put down his things in his house. “Bye bye,” I

said. “Thanks a lot!” the old man replied. I discovered that helping

people makes us very happy. I will keep helping people!

James Poon 21 B


Merit Name:_______________ ( ) Class: P.5_____

One day after the recess break, we had to go back to the classroom to

attend class.

Halfway up the stairs, I saw a beautiful water bottle on the floor but

the owner didn’t write her name on the bottle. I looked at my watch and

the school bell was about to ring. I was anxious. I thought I would be late

for the English class if I brought the bottle to the school Administration

Office at that time. But if I didn’t bring it to the school Administration

Office, the owner couldn’t get it back. At last, I decided to take it back to

the school Administration Office.

On the way, I saw a little girl who was anxious to find something. ‘Is

this your bottle?’ I said slowly. ‘Yes, thank you!’ The girl said. She took it

back and ran fast to her classroom.

I felt tired but happy because I could make other people happy again. I

learnt that helping other people was a source of happiness.

Cathy Wong 25 A


Merit

Name:_______________ ( ) Class: P.5____

Last Sunday, it was a good day.

In the morning. My friend and I decided to go to Tsuen Wan shopping

by bus. We were excited.

We needed to cross the road. ‘Oh! We miss the bus. Let’s run!’ But

when we were crossing the road quickly, we saw an old lady who was

crossing the road too. Suddenly she fell down on the ground. We helped

her to stand up immediately. The old lady said, ‘Thank you very much. You

are good children.’ We were happy about that. Although we missed the bus,

but we were happy, that the woman didn’t get hurt. When we were on the

bus, I saw a lady with a baby standing. They looked exhausted, so I gave up

my seat to them. She said, ‘Thank you. You are a good girl.’

From the above experiences, I found happiness after helping others.

Therefore, I will try to care more about others and offer a helping hand.

Cherry Li 15 A


Merit Name:_______________ ( ) Class: P.5_____

Last Tuesday, it was English exam at school. Before the English exam,

I studied my work seriously. I felt very nervous because this was the last

English exam in the first term. I must do my best.

After a while, I heard my friend James shouting, ‘My goodness! I

forgot to bring my rubber to school!’ He asked a few classmates to borrow

one from them, but each of them only had one rubber. They couldn’t lend it

to him. He was so disappointed and upset.

When I saw him getting back to his seat sadly, I asked him, ‘Do you

need my help?’ He answered, ‘Of course! I need a rubber so much!’ I said, ‘I

only have a rubber but I have a good idea. I can use my ruler to cut the

rubber into two pieces. In this way, I can lend one rubber to you. We both

can use the rubber in the English exam.’ He said gratefully, ‘This is a great

idea. Thank you so much for your help, Herbert.’

In the end, I learned when some people need our help,

we should offer generous help to them.

Herbert Lau 15 C

SKH St. Clement’s Primary School 2016-2017

Good People Good Deeds Writing Competition

Champion Name: Lucy Chan ( 1 ) Class: P.6

My neighbour is a lonely old woman. She doesn’t have a family or a

husband. I think she is very upset everyday because no one talks to her.

Before the Chinese New Year, my brother and I decided to visit the

old woman. We bought some fruit for her. The old woman let us come into

her house but she sat silently on the chair. She didn’t look at us. My

brother said, ‘Hello! We are your neighbors. Nice to meet you!’ She didn’t

answer us. She kept looking at a box when my brother asked her.

We were very curious about the box. I asked her, ‘Can I open it?’ She

nodded. We were very surprised as soon as we opened the box. There was

a sick dog. It was very weak. My brother ran to ask our mum to take it to

the vet. My mum came and she took the dog to the vet as fast as she could.

I comforted the old woman.

Luckily, the dog was fine. We were all relieved. Since then, we

started to look after the dog. Sometimes we tell some jokes to the old

woman. The old woman always smiles and laughs. We also help

her with the housework. We even play with her dog every weekend.

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At Chinese New Year Eve, we invited her to have a reunion dinner.

When she came to our home, she gave us a turnip cake. She taught us

how to make a turnip cake. We failed many times but ‘Failure is the

mother of success.’ Finally, we made a turnip cake.

I think that helping people is the greatest thing to do. I hope

more people will help the lonely old people.

SKH St. Clement’s Primary School 2016-2017 Good People Good Deeds Writing Competition

1st runner-up Name: Cynthia Poon ( 19 ) Class: P.6

I always think that helping people is the best gift for me in my life.

Although I won’t receive anything, I really enjoy it.

One day I was looking at some photos on my phone. I saw a photo of

an old woman and me. The memory of that floated to my mind.

On that day, I had to perform in a concert. I was almost late.

On the way to the show, I saw an old woman fall down in the street. The

bus was coming to her but no one noticed. I put the music show aside and

ran to help the woman immediately. I saved her from the bus accident.

When I arrived at the music show, my band’s mate, Caleb, felt very

worried and asked, ‘Cynthia, why are you so late?’ I told him all the things

that had just happened. He felt very surprised and told the host about it.

The host told the audience about it and they clapped loudly. I felt very

proud.

D


1st runner-up Name: Kelvin Cheung ( 5 ) Class: P.6

In our community, Uncle Wong is the most helpful person. Every

time I meet him, he is protecting the environment.

Last Thursday afternoon, on my way home, I saw Uncle Wong holding a

bucket and a shovel. ‘Uncle Wong, what are you doing?’ I asked, ‘The

pieces of advertising paper on this wall are too much. They are damaging

our city. There are a lot of tourists in Hong Kong every day. When

tourists see that, they will think that Hong Kong is a dirty city,’ Uncle Wong

said angrily while he was clearing the pieces of advertising paper. ‘Uncle

Wong, I want to help you too,’ I said. ‘You are a good boy,’ Uncle Wong

praised me.

Uncle Wong’s behaviour let many people in our community also become

enthusiastic about protecting the environment. Let’s learn to save our

environment.

D


2nd runner-up Name: Rachel Chung ( 8 ) Class: P.6

Last weekend, my mum had a fever and she felt very sick but she also

did all the housework and fed my naughty baby brother. Therefore I helped

my mum to do the housework and looked after my brother.

First, I cooked some congee for lunch. This was my first time to cook

congee. Although I made a big mess in the kitchen, I could cook some yummy

congee.

Then, I fed my brother but he didn’t eat my congee, he shouted at me

instead. I was very angry but I didn’t shout at him. Finally, Mum fed him and

he ate quickly.

After that, I was so busy doing all the housework. The clothes were

washed. Then, I swept the floor and helped my brother have a short shower.

I got wet because he splashed water at me but we were happy playing

together.

Next day, Mum recovered and she thanked me for helping her. I felt

very busy last weekend. I think my mum is very busy everyday so

I have to respect her and help her more often.

A


2nd runner-up Name: Jordan Chiu ( 5 ) Class: P.6

Last Sunday, I went to my sketching school. On the way, I saw a poor

old beggar at the corner of the street. I wanted to help him but I was

almost late for the class, so I rushed to my school quickly.

During the lesson, when I was looking for my sketching pencils in my

bag, I remembered the poor beggar. After the lesson ended, I ran to a

convenience store to buy a sandwich. Then I ran back to the street and

saw the old beggar again. I said happily, ‘Here is a sandwich for you. ‘Then

he said excitedly, ‘Thank you! You are so kind and generous.’

After this experience, I learnt that it is better to give than to get.

B


Merit Name: Rebecca Ng ( 18 ) Class: P.6

I believe that a lot of people have helped people before, including me. I

have also done many ‘Good People Good Deeds’. There were some ‘Good People

Good Deeds’ which were unforgettable.

When I was in Primary Five, I went to a charity with my mother. The

charity keeper needed us to help poor people. We could have one hundred

dollars after running 1 km. While we were running, I said, ‘Can I give up

running because I feel tired?’ My mum said, ‘There are a lot of poor people in

the world. We need to help them. Some of them are even homeless.’ Then we

kept on running because we wanted to help poor people.

I remember that I also visited an elderly centre when I was in Primary

Six. I went there with my classmates. We chatted happily. We gave them

some gifts which included some cookies. They were made by us. We felt very

exhausted but happy.

Now, there are fewer people who like helping people. I hope they will do

more ‘Good People Good Deeds’ in the future.

B

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