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Scientific WritingScientific Writing
http://www.astro.uni-bonn.de/~izzard/writing.html
Robert Izzard
Argelander Institute for Astronomy
University of onn
!. "ow #and why$ to write
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Robert Izzard
izzard@astro.uni-bonn.deClass 1: Why and how to write
What's Coing !odayWhat's Coing !oday
1 How and why to write
2 Presentation of data
3 Plagiarism
This is just a small
selection from the
full course!
There is no substitute for being curious and
learning on your own!
Read, read and read more.
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izzard@astro.uni-bonn.deClass 1: Why and how to write
Resources: "oo#s 1Resources: "oo#s 1
The Elements of Style
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#on$eniently free %http://www.cs.vu.nl/~jms/doc/elos.pdf
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izzard@astro.uni-bonn.deClass 1: Why and how to write
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Oxford English Dictionary
and &owler's
Modern English Usage
Eloquent Science
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izzard@astro.uni-bonn.deClass 1: Why and how to write
Resources: WebResources: Web
http://www.astro.uni-bonn.de/~izzard/writing.html
)*T you are +uite caable of searching for
resources yourself!
This is the 21stcentury and the internet is your
friend . . .
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Please as +uestions!
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izzard@astro.uni-bonn.deClass 1: Why and how to write
Why learn to write well&Why learn to write well&
-f you want to be a scientist
/ou ha$e to write a reort0thesis and ublish aers!
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To communicate with others scientists or not.
Richard M. Davis, Technical Writing: Its Importance in the Engineering Profession and
Its Place in the Engineering Curriculum, AFIT TR 75-5
(Wright-Patterson AFB, Ohio Wright-Patterson Air Force Base, !"75#.
ur$ey of engineers
245 of time sent writing
315 of time sent woring with written material
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Robert Izzard
izzard@astro.uni-bonn.deClass 1: Why and how to write
Why learn to write well&Why learn to write well&
ace shuttle Challenger
Thus the engineers, who were $ery concerned
since they new the conse+uences of 6the
failure mechanism>, did not resent the data in
a way that showed the trends or that could be
e7lained to a scetical senior 899 manager.They thought they were communicating but
missed one of the fundamental rules of good
communication which is to e7ress your
osition in a way that your customer can
understand.
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Prof. Daniel astings! M"T Engineering Systems Di#ision
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izzard@astro.uni-bonn.deClass 1: Why and how to write
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Robert Izzard
izzard@astro.uni-bonn.deClass 1: Why and how to write
Why learn to write well&Why learn to write well&
Dnjoyable astime!
o$ you communicate affects others.
%e considerate&
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'riting is an essential (art of research.
)our su(er#isor $ill not al$ays *e there for you...
- send about 2E5 of my time roofBreading %
- would refer to send that time doing research!
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Robert Izzard
izzard@astro.uni-bonn.deClass 1: Why and how to write
*ow luc#y you are...*ow luc#y you are...
haeseare Foethe
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*ow luc#y you are...*ow luc#y you are...
Ganell indgren
trindberg
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izzard@astro.uni-bonn.deClass 1: Why and how to write
*ow luc#y you are...*ow luc#y you are...
iterature is difficult!
/ou do +)&ha$e to learn to write literature!
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Robert Izzard
izzard@astro.uni-bonn.deClass 1: Why and how to write
Scientific WritingScientific Writing
cientific writing
-s not literature no more difficult than research!
:ften has a secialist readershi
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Robert Izzard
izzard@astro.uni-bonn.deClass 1: Why and how to write
"e clear"e clear
Io not force your reader to guess what you mean Present logical argumentscon$incingly
/ou job is to informand edu1atethe reader
Food style hels Food Dnglish hels too
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izzard@astro.uni-bonn.deClass 1: Why and how to write
"e +recise"e +recise
There is no room for ambiguity!
)e careful with technical words e.g.
The un $eighs1KL33 g.
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what you mean&
&or our binary models we must also assume a
distribution of stars o$er the binary arameter sace.
&or binary stars we assume a flatBq distribution for mass ratios and a flatBlna
distribution for searations.
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"e concise"e concise
Use as few words as possible but as many as you need
The largest assumtion with the theoretical redictions of the ratios is that we
must assume a constant star formation rate and a certain initial mass function
=-G&@, we use the -G& of Jroua, Tout and Filmore =1>>3@.
"e assume the Jroua, Tout and Filmore =1>>3@ initial mass function and a
constant star formation rate.
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/ou are 8:T aid by the number of words you write!
/ou must learn to edit your own wor
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izzard@astro.uni-bonn.deClass 1: Why and how to write
!hin#ing and Writing!hin#ing and Writing
"riting and thining well use the same sills
/ou can already thin M otherwise you would
not be here. o... writing is the ne7t ste.
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These are the +ualities associated with scientists!
i.e. YOU!
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Class 1: Why and how to write
,ercise 1,ercise 1
ist the inds of writing a scientist is re+uired to roduce
and for $hom.
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,ercise 1,ercise 1
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rticles are linearly +resentedrticles are linearly +resented
Probably alsolinearly edited and
assessed!
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Reading is non-linearReading is non-linear
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