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Before handing in your paper, usethis PPT Checklist!
the rubricthe rubric
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Hi!Like, you wannause this PPT to
check your paper,like, cuz… youwanna do good andstuff? Cool.
Click YESto begin.
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Got your paper infront of you?
YESNO
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PRINT OFF YOUR PAPER.
My PAPER is now in
front of me.
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Okay.Now, let’s start with
the biggest deductions.
Because who wants toget smacked with those?
w long is your essay/paper/project?
Is it the required minimum?
YES NO
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ADD MORE WORDS.
I added MORE words.
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If you are confused by parentheticalcitations, click HERE.
If you have used parenthetical
citations correctly, click YES.
Now that the length is taken care of,are you required to use sources?
If so, are they cited in the essay withparenthetical citations? (Also known asin-text citation.)
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This is an in-text citation.
Back to Checklist.
The word dumb is defined as“lacking intelligence or good
judgment; stupid; dull-witted”(“dumb”). My sister bluntly defines
it as “characteristics of an idiot”(Priebe).
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How about your Works Citedpage?
Does it contain completed entries?
Is it alphabetical? To look at an example, check
HERE. To move on, check THIS.
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Works Cited
"dumb." Dictionary.com Unabridged (v 1.1).Random House, Inc. 21 Sep. 2009.<Dictionary.com
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/dumb>.
Priebe, Alisa. Personal Interview. 20 Sept 09.
Works Cited PageCheck
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Next, we would like to
remind you to handin your project ONTIME. Late projectsand papers typically
receive massive
deductions. Ick .Click YES to
handing it in ontime!
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Look at your topic sentences
(the first sentence in each
paragraph); does each topic
sentence flow into the next
one?YES NO
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CREATE BETTERTOPIC SENTENCES.
I added BETTER TOPIC SENTENCES.
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To further check for organization and flow,
look at eachparagraph – does itconnect back to the
thesis?
YES NO
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CONNECT BACK TOTHESIS MORE.
I made CONNECTIONS TO the THESIS.
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I may be a baby, but I know thesisstatements shouldn’t just be questions.Duh.
Also, if the thesis starts with, “In thispaper,” change that as well.
Click HERE for Thesis Help.
Click THIS to continue with the PaperChecklist.
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Good Thesis Examples:--- The true definition of “slut” is acombination of amount of partners
and length of time with eachpartner.--- At the age of 18, Americans areallowed to vote and buy cigarettes
(a drug); this age should also beallowed to buy and consume alcoholas well.
Not-So-Great Thesis Examples:--- In this paper, I’ll explain why drinking
is bad for you.--- The definition of “beautiful” isdifferent things to different people.
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Checking for transitions.
In between each
paragraph should be asentence (or two) thatconnects the previousparagraph with the onethat follows.
Click HERE for TransitionHelp.Click THIS to continue.
S l T iti
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From the time I was sixteen I ceased to say my prayers andceased to go to church or to fast of my own volition. I did notbelieve what had been taught me in childhood but I believed insomething. What it was I believed in I could not at all have said.I believed in a God, or rather I did not deny God - but I couldnot have said what sort of God. Neither did I deny Christ and histeaching, but what his teaching consisted in I again could not
have said.
Looking back on that time, I now see clearly that my faith - myonly real faith - that which apart from my animal instincts gaveimpulse to my life - was a belief in perfecting myself. But inwhat this perfecting consisted and what its object was, I couldnot have said.
Sample Transitions.
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EVIDENCE CHECK.We want to know if you havebacked yourself up in the paper
with evidence (sources orexamples, etc.)?
Click HERE for help.
Click THIS to continue.
S l E id
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Currently, the American way is the Hypocriticalway. We view sex and violence and political
bashing and religious wars on TV, but the minutethose subjects are in print, particularly sex, Bam!,letters to the editor come pouring in. We can’thandle those topics in our paper, but we’ll surelygo shop at Abercrombie where naked peopleare used for advertisements or purchase
magazines where half the ads use sex to sell ussomething. Like one of the latest ads on MTVdemonstrates, we’ll let our kids watch ahead get blown off on TV, but the minutesomeone fondles someone on TV, the wool
comes over the eyes. We’ll fight openly aboutpolitics in our kitchens with 8-year-oldsnearby, but we have parents that won’t telltheir sons that it’s a “penis” and not a“pee-pee.”
Sample Evidence:
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So, you’ve checked the
big items in your paper.Now to look at thesmaller things can makeor break anessay/paper/project.
Spelling. Don’t just usespell-check either!Proofread with human
eyes or read it aloud.Click YES once you have
completed this.
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Now, let’s look at
punctuation.---Do all completesentences end with aperiod or semi-colon?Click HERE to check on
punctuation issues.
Sample
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This is why I teach; this is why I am in graduateschool. I want to learn more, and I want toencourage others to learn/discuss/write aboutsubjects they are ignorant in. I’ll deal withbeing pushed and shoved because I want tohave discussions, even if they’re“uncomfortable” ones.
This is why I teach, this is why I am in graduate school. Iwant to learn more and I want to encourage others tolearn/discuss/write about subjects they are ignorant inand I’ll deal with being pushed and shoved because Iwant to have discussions, even if they’re“uncomfortable” ones.
SampleSentences:Which oneis correct?
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My title is interesting.Is yours? No, Mine isn’t.
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Like, Duh: The Controversy of LIKE.
Swearing with Acronyms!
A Definition Essay.
My Academic Narrative.
Who Let the Language Out?
Paper 1.Sample
Titles:Which ones
are the best?
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Now thatyou’ve
takenyour paper
throughthe checklist,
it shouldbe ready togo…
(If not, click this
.)Save it as a
.doc or
.rtf file
and upload it orprint it off
Have a nice day.
The End.
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Click here if you understand how to Save As .rtf, etc.
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UNTIL THE NEXT PAPER IS DUE…
STOP LOOKING AT ME.
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