Pitch of Ideas

LOKE Main Task

Pitch

Task • Initial Planning Ideas• Basic Plot• Story Boards• Basic Script• Potential Shot Locations• Character Profiles

Initial Planning Ideas

As a group we spent a lot of time in the beginning of

our planning process putting large amounts of

detail into our initial ideas page

The detail put into this crucial stage of the pitch

creation proved very useful when carrying out the tasks that followed,

especially plotting.

Basic Plot

Story Board

Basic Script

Scene 1The scene is set at night, the mother and the daughter are at home sitting comfortably in the living room, the TV then shows immediate news alert of two men escaping prison, and dialogue then beginsDaughter: Mum!Mother comes rushing inDaughter: They’ve escaped, they are coming for me, Mum help me! As she points to the TV screen, the mother goes to comfort the daughterThe camera zooms onto the screen of the police cars, then a sound bridge occurs leading to the next scene when the police cars past by a bus stop looking for the escaped convicts.  

Scene 2Story now set at a bus stop where two other men are sitting waiting on the other sideConvict Two: We can’t be seen in this. Referring to their jail uniformConvict One: They’ve seen usBoth convicts look at each other complicity, knowing what they need to do.

Scene 3Story is now set outside the first victims house, still nighttime.Convicts act as worrying neighbors so that they can enter the house, however they end up breaking the door down to gain entry, both women scream when they try to gain entry.Convict Two: Hello again. Convict One makes his way across the living room to the frightened women.Mother: Please just leave us alone.Mother pleads.Convict Two grabs mother and starts to take her out of the room. Mother: No, stop, get off me, let me go..You can slightly hear the mother shouting to the daughter how she loves her as she is now out of sight.

Scene 4Still in the living room, scene is now set with re-arranged furniture.Convict One: You’re not going anywhereGirl struggles but fails to escapeGirl restrained tied to chair unable to escape, looks up to Convict One with a look of desperation. Convict One smiles in an usually comforting way, the scene is very uneasy and edgy.Convict One grabs girls face so she looks him in the eyes, then he kills her. Scene 5Convict Two: So where to next Boss? The End.

Potential Shot Locations

Looking out on the river Train tracks

Train Station

Woodland area

Open outside area

Character Profiles

Jake Smith

One of the main antagonists of the film, he grew up in a neighborhood considered to be ‘posh’. He grew up with his mother, father and older brother. He has achieved good grades, but had spent 3 years in jail after trying to kill Sophie. After almost completing their sentence, he and Oli decide to escape. They plan on going on a killing spree, and decide on Sophie being their first victim.

Costume: Orange jumpsuit, suit

Oli Mackley

Another antagonist of the film, he has grown up in the same neighborhood as Jake, therefore the two became best friends. He has grown up with his father and little sister, as his mother divorced him after having their youngest child. Also spending the same amount in jail as Jake, he also agrees to escape jail and join the killing spree. He mainly follows what Jake tells him to do.

Costume: Orange jumpsuit, suit

Sophie Green

The main victim of the film, she has grown up in a gated community. Sophie lives with her mum and their two cats. She is smart and achieves good grades, and volunteers to help at a homeless center on Saturdays. After being a victim of bullying for 2 years, she is still recovering after almost being murdered by Jake Smith and Oli Mackley.

Costume: skinny jeans, top

Lily Green

The mother of Sophie, she has been the main support for her after being bullied and almost murdered. She is now protective over Lily and worries about her whenever she is not at home. She is also one of the main victims after the two antagonists break into their home to find Sophie.

Costume: jeans, top and cardigan

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