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Pfaff_Online Actions in Writing

Jan 14, 2015

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Rubric:  3pts-­‐  Answers  no,  explains  35  ÷  7  =  5  or  that  you  cannot  multiply  6  by  any  number  to  get  a  product  of  35  ,  AND  uses  non-­‐negotiables  2pts-­‐  Answers  no,  explains  35  ÷  7  =  5  or  that  you  cannot  multiply  6  by  any  number  to  get  a  product  of  35  ,  OR  uses  non-­‐negotiables  1pt-­‐  Answers  no  (or  yes),  OR  explains  35  ÷  7  =  5  or  that  you  cannot  multiply  6  by  any  number  to  get  a  product  of  35  ,  OR  uses  non-­‐negotiables  

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Rubric:  3pts-­‐  Says  that  Jacob  sold  3  hats,  explains  how  to  find  the  answer  by  dividing  the  denominator  in  the  fraction  into  the  total  amount  of  hats  (15)  then  multiplying  that  answer  by  the  numerator  in  the  fraction  2pts-­‐  Says  that  Jacob  sold  3  hats,  explains  part  of  how  to  find  the  answer  indicated  above  1pts-­‐  does  not  give  correct  answer  for  amount  of  hats  sold,  Does  not  explains  how  to  find  the  answer  

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Rubric:  5pts-­‐  Explains  what  perimeter  is,  gives  an  example  of  perimeter,  explains  what  area  is,  gives  example  of  area,  uses  non-­‐negotiables  4pts-­‐  Explains  all  but  1  listed  above,  uses  non-­‐negotiables  3pts-­‐  Explains  all  but  2  listed  above,  uses  non-­‐negotiables  2pts-­‐  Explains  all  but  3  listed  above,  uses  non-­‐negotiables  1pt-­‐  Talks  about  area  and  perimeter  but  the  explanation  does  not  match,  uses  non-­‐negotiables  

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Rubric:  3pts-­‐  Explains  moving  down  one  week  means  7  days  has  passed  and  moving  to  the  left  or  right  means  you  are  moving  by  days,  gives  correct  answer  for  how  much  elapsed  time  has  passed,  uses  non-­‐negotiables.  For  Example-­‐  First  you  would  circle  March  3rd  on  the  calendar.  Then,  you  would  count  one  week  at  a  time  until  you  reach  the  week  with  the  next  circled  date,  March  25th.  Lastly,  you  would  count  on  by  days  to  March  25th.  3  weeks  and  1  day.  Explanations  may  vary.    2pts-­‐Tells  about  moving  down  and  moving  to  the  left  or  right  on  the  calendar  but  doesn’t  tell  you  what  it  means,  gives  correct  answer  for  how  much  elapsed  time  has  passed,  uses  non-­‐negotiables.    1pt-­‐  Tells  about  moving  down  and  moving  to  the  left  or  right  on  the  calendar  but  doesn’t  tell  you  what  it  means,  does  NOT  give  correct  answer  for  how  much  elapsed  time  has  passed,  uses  non-­‐negotiables.    

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Format  

Students  uses  3  paragraphs  to  explain  type  and  description  of  world  record  to  set,  uses  place  value  to  explain  how  large  of  a  record  will  be  set,  and  explains  how  to  put  that  number  into  3  different  forms  

Students  is  missing  one  paragraph  or  item  from  the  list  to  the  left.  

Student  is  missing  two  or  more  paragraphs  or  items  from  the  list  to  the  far  left.  

World  Record  Description  

Student  tells  what  world  record  he/she  will  try  to  set  and  explains  how  he/she  will  set  that  record.  

Student  tells  what  world  record  he/she  will  try  to  set  but  the  explanation  of  how  he/she  will  set  that  record  is  vague.  

Student  tells  what  world  record  he/she  will  try  to  set  but  the  explanation  of  how  he/she  will  set  that  record  is  lacking.  

Place  Value  

Student  explains  how  to  write  their  world  record  number  in  standard  from,  expanded  form,  and  word  form.  

Student  explains  how  to  write  their  world  record  number  in  2  of  the  3  forms.  

Student  explains  how  to  write  their  world  record  number  in  1  of  the  3  forms,  or  is  lacking.  

Non-­‐Negotiables  

Student  uses  complete  sentences,  correct  punctuation,  and  subject-­‐verb  agreement.  

Student  has  1-­‐2  errors  with  complete  sentences,  correct  punctuation,  and  subject-­‐verb  agreement.  

Student  has  3+  errors  with  complete  sentences,  correct  punctuation,  and  subject-­‐verb  agreement.  

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Rubric:  5pts-­‐  Letter  format,  discussion  about  part  of  the  plant,  how  plant  effects  the  environment,  how  plant  effects  people,    uses  non-­‐negotiables  4pts-­‐  Letter  format,  discussion  about  two  of  three  listed  above,  uses  non-­‐negotiables  3pts-­‐  Letter  format,  discussion  about  one  of  three  listed  above,  uses  non-­‐negotiables  2pts-­‐  Letter  format  (or  not),  discussion  about  three  items  above  lacking  support,  uses  non-­‐negotiables  1pt-­‐  NOT  Letter  format,  ,  discussion  about  three  items  above  lacking  support,  does  NOT  use  non-­‐negotiables  

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Rubric:  5pts-­‐  2  paragraphs,  explains  characteristics  of  reptiles,  explains  characteristics  of  amphibians,  2  examples  of  each  animal,  uses  non-­‐negotiables  4pts-­‐  2  paragraphs,  explains  characteristics  of  reptiles,  explains  characteristics  of  amphibians,  2  examples  total,  uses  non-­‐negotiables  3pts-­‐  2  paragraphs,  vague  explanation  of  characteristics  of  reptiles,  vague  explanation  of    characteristics  of  amphibians,  2  examples  total,  uses  non-­‐negotiables  2pts-­‐  2  paragraphs,  little  explanation  of  characteristics  of  reptiles,  little  explanation  of    characteristics  of  amphibians,  2  examples  total,  uses  non-­‐negotiables  1pt-­‐  1  paragraph,  little  explanation  of  characteristics  of  reptiles,  little  explanation  of    characteristics  of  amphibians,  2  examples  total,  uses  non-­‐negotiables  

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Rubric:  4  pts-­‐  Student  should  state  that  the  mass  of  Sun  is  larger  than  mass  of  Earth,  gravity  of  sun  is  stronger  than  gravity  of  earth,  this  is  why  earth  orbits  the  sun,  uses  non-­‐negotiables  3pts-­‐  Student  states  2  of  3  points  mentioned  above,  uses  non-­‐negotiables  2pts-­‐  Student  states  1  of  3  points  mentioned  above,  uses  non-­‐negotiables  1pt-­‐  Student’s  answer  lacks  clarity  or  support,  uses  non-­‐negotiables  

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Rubric:  4pts-­‐  2  paragraphs,  2  different  reasons,    explanations  match,  uses  non-­‐negotiables  3pts-­‐  2  paragraphs,  2  reasons  with  vague  explanations,  uses  non-­‐negotiables  2pts-­‐  2  paragraphs,  less  than  2  reasons,  explanations  match,  uses  non-­‐negotiables  1pt-­‐  1  paragraph,  less  than  2  reasons,  less  than  2  explanations,  errors  in  non-­‐negotiables  

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Pot  #1:  100°C  

Pot  #2:  0°C  

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Format  

Student  writes  an  informal  script  of  what  he/she  would  do  and  say  as  he/she  conducts  an  experiment  

Student  writes  an  informal  script  of  what  he/she  would  do  but  lacks  what  he/she  would  say  during  the  experiment,  or  vice  versa  

Student  writes  informal  script  of  what  he/she  would  do  and/or  say  during  the  experiment  but  lacks  clarity  and  structure    

Content  

Student  explains  3  states  of  matter,  how  temperature  affects  states  of  matter,  and  name  of  process  happening  at  each  temperature.  

Student  can  explain  two  of  the  three  items  mentioned  to  the  left.  

Student  lacks  explanation  of  states  of  matter,  temperature,  and  processes.  

Non-­‐Negotiables  Student  uses  non-­‐negotiables  without  errors.  

Student  has  1-­‐2  non-­‐negotiable  errors.  

Student  has  3+  non-­‐negotiable  errors.