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Mastering Genres with Inside Writing

Nigel A. Caplan ([email protected])

Assistant Professor

TESOL 2015

Toronto

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Agenda

• Understanding Genre

• The Teaching/Learning Cycle in Inside Writing

– Deconstruction (Analyze models)

– Joint Construction (Collaborative writing)

– Independent Writing

• Inside Writing Resources

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Understanding Genre

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What do you write?

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Understanding Genre

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Writing is transitive

We don’t just write

We write something to someone for some purpose

We write in genres

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Understanding Genre

• easily recognized by members of a community

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So, what is a genre?

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Understanding Genre

• easily recognized by members of a community

• a social purpose

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So, what is a genre?

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Understanding Genre

• easily recognized by members of a community

• a social purpose

• recurring way of using language

(Hyland, 2007)

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So, what is a genre?

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Understanding Genre

Teachers need to create opportunities for students to write

different types of texts and help them focus on how those

texts are most effectively constructed so that students can

extend their repertoires and make register choices that

realize new and more challenging genres.

(Schleppegrell, 2004)

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Teaching genres

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Understanding Genre

Rhetorical Mode Genres in Inside Writing

Description Company profile

Observation report

Information pamphlet

Architecture review

Narrative Personal narrative

Research paper (methods section)

Movie synopsis

Argument Fundraising letter

Business proposal

Argument essay (thesis-driven)

Discussion

Challenge

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Not all essays have five paragraphs

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Understanding Genre

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But you do teach the 5-paragraph essay, right?

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Understanding Genre

Yes, we teach lots of essays!

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But you do teach the 5-paragraph essay, right?

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Understanding Genre

Yes, we teach lots of essays!

But they don’t all have five paragraphs!

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But you do teach the 5-paragraph essay, right?

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Understanding Genre

• Argument essay

• Persuasive essay

• Challenge essay

• Discussion essay

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But you do teach the 5-paragraph essay, right?

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Understanding Genre

And the elements of essays:

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But you do teach the 5-paragraph essay, right?

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Understanding Genre

And the elements of essays:

• Thesis statements

• Introductions, conclusions

• Paragraph development, cohesion, and unity

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But you do teach the 5-paragraph essay, right?

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The Teaching-Learning Cycle

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(Martin, 2009;

Rothery, 1996)

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The Teaching-Learning Cycle

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Inside Writing

• Deconstruction

(Analyze Writing)

• Joint Construction

(Collaborative Writing)

• Independent Writing

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The Teaching-Learning Cycle

Genre-Based Writing Instruction – Nigel Caplan – October 24, 2014 18

Inside Writing

• Deconstruction

(Analyze Writing)

• Joint Construction

(Collaborative Writing)

• Independent Writing

+ Writing Skills

+ Grammar

+ Target Vocabulary (AWL)

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The Teaching-Learning Cycle

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(Martin, 2009;

Rothery, 1996)

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Deconstruction

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Analyzing Models: Genre

• What type of text is it?

• Who writes it? When? For whom? Why? Where is it used?

• What are the typical stages of the genre?

• Do writers always follow all the stages?

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Deconstruction

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Analyzing Models: Organization

• How are paragraphs structured?

• How are ideas logically connected?

• How are conjunctions and other cohesive devices used?

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Deconstruction

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Analyzing Models: Language

• How are clauses combined?

• What types of nouns are used?

• What types of verbs are used?

• How much hedging is used?

(da Silva Joyce & Feez, 2012)

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Jenny Bixby & Nigel Caplan, Inside Writing 2.

© Oxford University Press, 2014

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Deconstruction: Product Review

Stage

Title

Context

Description

Evaluations

Supporting Reasons

Recommendation

and stars

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Deconstruction: Product Review

Stage Purpose

Title Attract attention

Context Establish ethos

Description Inform readers

Evaluations Express opinions

Supporting Reasons Persuade readers

Recommendation

and stars

Call to action

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Deconstruction: Product Review

Stage Purpose Language

Title Attract attention Not a sentence

Context Establish ethos Present perfect verbs

Use of “I”

Description Inform readers Adjectives

Present tense verbs

Coordinating conjunctions

Evaluations Express opinions Evaluative language

Relative (adjective) clauses

Supporting Reasons Persuade readers Subordinating conjunctions

Recommendation

and stars

Call to action Adverbs

Modal verbs

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Deconstruction: Vocabulary Focus

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Deconstruction: Vocabulary Focus

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Deconstruction: Grammar

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Deconstruction: Grammar

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The Teaching-Learning Cycle

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(Martin, 2009;

Rothery, 1996)

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Joint Construction (Collaborative Writing)

• Opportunities for scaffolding

• Talk about the L2 in the L2 promotes acquisition of the L2

• Talk about the genre can lead to mastery

• Texts written collaboratively are better

• It’s fun

(Donato, 2004; Dreyfus, Macnaught, & Humphrey, 2011; Rose & Martin, 2012; Storch, 2013)

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Collaborative Writing Tasks

1. Write a short text in pairs/groups

2. Rewrite a bad paragraph

3. Put jumbled sentences in order

4. Write a text from notes

5. Information gap

6. Whole-class Joint Construction

(Feez, 1988)

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Let’s Write … Together!

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What happens during Joint Construction?

• Reviewing the genre stages

• Eliciting words, phrases, and sentences

• Recasting sentences

• Expanding on sentences

• Explaining language choices

• Developing strategies

(Caplan, MacArthur, & Phillippakos, 2014; Dreyfus et al., 2011)

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The Teaching-Learning Cycle

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(Martin, 2009;

Rothery, 1996)

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Independent Writing

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Writing Processes

• Brainstorm ideas

• Plan using the genre stages

• Integrate grammar and vocabulary

• Draft

• Peer review

• Revise

• Self-edit

• Review

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Independent Writing

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Academic writing can be creative, too!

• Company profile

• Fundraising letter

• Blogs and discussion boards

• Short-answer test questions (OK, less fun)

• Movie treatment

• Business proposal

• Editorial

• Public service announcement

• Case analysis

• News stories

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www.oup.com/elt/teacher/insidewriting

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“About the Genre”

Descriptions and

Worksheet

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Sample Units

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My essay about

genre-based

pedagogy

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Inside Writing Competition

… and the winner is …

Thao Tran

Bac Lieu University, Vietnam

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Cupcake House Small Cake – Big Joy

Cupcake House is an energetic and dynamic company which specializes in foodservice retailer serving approximately 7 million customers. Founded in 2010 it has gone from strength to strength with an increase in bottom line profits of $1.2 m over the past 12 months and a growth of 32% within the past 4 years. Our long-term vision is to bring delicious, healthy, and fast foreign cuisine to Vietnamese people. Cupcake House is a foodservice retailer with over 3 locations serving approximately 7 million customers each day. More than 80% of Cupcake House’s bakeries in Ho Chi Minh City are owned and operated by independent local business men and women. Our goal is to become customers' favorite place and offer the best quality products and services to convey the message that cupcakes are not only best-served for dessert, but also the way for people to express their feelings to the ones they love. Due to the demands of enjoying variety of food along with the excitement of experiencing new things in Ho Chi Minh City, Cupcake House was born to fully satisfy customers’ needs.

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Mastering Genres with Inside Writing

Nigel A. Caplan

[email protected]

www.oup.com/elt/teacher/insidewriting

http://nigelteacher.wordpress.com

Any questions?