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Dialogue
Action Notes
Camera zooms in.
Scene 1 Panel 1
Dialogue
Action Notes
People clapping. Camera zooms in.
Scene 2 Panel 1
Dialogue
Cheesecake: Thank you!
coming to our annual En
Action Notes
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Scene 3
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Cheesecake: And now the moment you've
all been waiting for.
Action Notes
Scene 3 (Cont) Panel 2
Dialogue
Action Notes
Scene 3 (Cont) Panel 3
Dialogue
Cheesecake: Professor M
Action Notes
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Scene 3 (Cont) Panel 5
Dialogue
Action Notes
Camera whips to.
Scene 4 Panel 1
Dialogue
Professor Muffin: Hi.
Action Notes
Scene 4 (Cont)
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Dialogue
Action Notes
People smile.
Scene 5 Panel 1
Dialogue
Action Notes
Professor Muffin leans forward.
Scene 6 Panel 1
Dialogue
Action Notes
People bow.
Scene 7
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Professor Muffin straights back up holding a microphone.
She wasn't bowing.
Scene 8 Panel 1
Dialogue
Action Notes
People roll their eyes.
Scene 9 Panel 1
Dialogue
Professor Muffin: Back
was-
Action Notes
Scene 10
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Professor Muffin continues rambling on.
Scene 11 Panel 1
Dialogue
Donut: Bo---
Action Notes
Scene 11 (Cont) Panel 2
Dialogue
Donut: -ringggg
Bagel: Shhhh
Action Notes
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Dialogue
Bagel: You are the one that wanted to
get this job.
Action Notes
Scene 11 (Cont) Panel 4
Dialogue
Action Notes
Scene 11 (Cont) Panel 5
Dialogue
Action Notes
Donut pulls out a bag of potato chi
pocket.
Scene 11 (Cont)
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Donut tries to open the bag without making noise.
Scene 11 (Cont) Panel 7
Dialogue
Action Notes
A puff of wind blows out as the bag opens.
Scene 11 (Cont) Panel 8
Dialogue
Bagel: What on earth ar
Action Notes
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Dialogue
Donut: Relax Bagel-san. Do you want a
chip? No? Oh well...
Action Notes
Scene 11 (Cont) Panel 10
Dialogue
Donut: Ahhhh
Action Notes
Officer Pudding leans in from screen right.
Scene 11 (Cont) Panel 11
Dialogue
Donut: Ahhhh
Action Notes
Officer Pudding steals potato chip
hole.
Scene 11 (Cont)
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Officer Pudding pulls his arm back while grabbing the
potato chip.
Scene 11 (Cont) Panel 13
Dialogue
Donut: Don't you dare-
Action Notes
Donut turns around.
Scene 12 Panel 1
Dialogue
Action Notes
Scene 13
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Dialogue
Officer Pudding: Dare what? Come on,
Donut.
Action Notes
Scene 13 (Cont) Panel 2
Dialogue
Officer Pudding: What's that hole
good for if not for "sharing".
That...
Action Notes
Scene 13 (Cont) Panel 3
Dialogue
Officer Pudding: Faaaaa
Action Notes
Scene 14
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Dialogue
Officer Pudding: -hoooooooole
Action Notes
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Donut blushes
Scene 15 Panel 1
Dialogue
Action Notes
Donut tries to speak up but doesn'
Scene 15 (Cont)
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Dialogue
Professor Muffin: (...) in
conclusion...
Action Notes
Donut gets distracted by ending speech.
Scene 15 (Cont) Panel 3
Dialogue
Donut: It's starting
Action Notes
Scene 15 (Cont) Panel 4
Dialogue
Donut: You're lucky it
otherwise-
Action Notes
Donut tries to eat another potato c
hand enters screen.
Scene 15 (Cont)
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Officer Pudding steals potato chip again.
Scene 15 (Cont) Panel 6
Dialogue
Donut: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
Action Notes
Scene 15 (Cont) Panel 7
Dialogue
Professor Muffin: (...)
how, after days of slee
cave with the wolf
Action Notes
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Dialogue
Professor Muffin: with nothing else
to eat but the remains of my copilot
Action Notes
Audience is exhausted
Scene 17 Panel 1
Dialogue
Professor Muffin: I decided to clean
my carpet.
Action Notes
Scene 18 Panel 1
Dialogue
Professor Muffin: But E
Action Notes
Professor Muffin turns suddenly.
Scene 18 (Cont)
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Professor Muffin walks towards the other end of the
stage.
Scene 18 (Cont) Panel 3
Dialogue
Action Notes
Scene 18 (Cont) Panel 4
Dialogue
Action Notes
Professor Muffin turns back toward
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Dialogue
Professor Muffin: It is with great
pleasure that I present you...
Action Notes
Scene 19 Panel 1
Dialogue
Action Notes
Scene 19 (Cont) Panel 2
Dialogue
Action Notes
Scene 20
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Camera starts to zoom out left to right while panning
down.
Scene 20 (Cont) Panel 2
Dialogue
Action Notes
Camera continues to zoom out left to right while panning
down.
Scene 20 (Cont) Panel 3
Dialogue
Professor Muffin: THE I
Action Notes
Camera continues to zoom out left
down.
Scene 20 (Cont)
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Dialogue
Professor Muffin: -OOOOON!!!
Action Notes
Camera finishes zooming out.
Scene 20 (Cont) Panel 5
Dialogue
Everybody: Wooooooooow.
Action Notes
Scene 21 Panel 1
Dialogue
Donut: Heh, silly name.
Action Notes
Scene 22
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Dialogue
Bagel: Yeah, yet the power it hold
is...
Action Notes
Scene 22 (Cont) Panel 2
Dialogue
Bagel: Immenseeeeee.
Action Notes
Scene 22 (Cont) Panel 3
Dialogue
Professor Muffin: "The
is immense" you might s
Action Notes
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Dialogue
Professor Muffin: Well, not truly.
Action Notes
Scene 23 (Cont) Panel 2
Dialogue
Action Notes
Light reflects off Professor Muffin's glasses.
Scene 23 (Cont) Panel 3
Dialogue
Professor Muffin: It is
Action Notes
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Dialogue
Everybody: Wooooooooow.
Action Notes
Scene 24 Panel 1
Dialogue
Professor Muffin: Hehe, yes yes
Action Notes
Scene 25 Panel 1
Dialogue
Professor Muffin: With
power our growing socie
Action Notes
Camera pans screen right.
Scene 26
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Camera continues to pan screen right.
Scene 26 (Cont) Panel 2
Dialogue
Professor Muffin: Forever!
Action Notes
Professor Muffin lifts up the arm holding The Infinatron.
Scene 27 Panel 1
Dialogue
Everybody: Bravo! Bravo
Action Notes
Everybody cheers, claps.
Scene 28
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Everybody abruptly stops cheering and gasps
astonished.
Scene 28 (Cont) Panel 2
Dialogue
Professor Muffin: Yes yes, and that's
why, it can never fall into the wrong
hands.
Action Notes
The Infinatron is gone.
Scene 29 Panel 1
Dialogue
Professor Muffin: That
catastrophic.
Action Notes
Camera pans up.
Scene 30
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Dialogue
Professor Muffin: Calamitous.
Action Notes
Camera continues to pan up.
Scene 30 (Cont) Panel 2
Dialogue
Professor Muffin: Cataclysmic.
Action Notes
Pretzel is hanging down in his ant-shaped machine from
one of the convention banners.
Scene 30 (Cont) Panel 3
Dialogue
Pretzel: Yes, very bad
Action Notes
Camera quickly zooms in.
Scene 31
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Pretzel laughing
Scene 32 Panel 1
Dialogue
Pretzel: Professor.
Action Notes
Scene 32 (Cont) Panel 2
Dialogue
Pretzel: Well, better k
Action Notes
Scene 33
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Dialogue
Pretzel: Bye bye
Action Notes
As he lowers down the hand holding The Infinatron, he
rises up his other hand and waves jerkily.
Scene 33 (Cont) Panel 2
Dialogue
Action Notes
His hand goes down at an even speed while his eyes are
fixed on the stage.
Scene 33 (Cont) Panel 3
Dialogue
Action Notes
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Scene 33 (Cont) Panel 5
Dialogue
Action Notes
As his arm passes in front of it, his face goes from
innocent to evil.
Scene 33 (Cont) Panel 6
Dialogue
Action Notes
Suddenly smiles madly.
Scene 33 (Cont)
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Donut and Bagel jump into screen.
Scene 34 Panel 1
Dialogue
Action Notes
Scene 34 (Cont) Panel 2
Dialogue
Pretzel: BOOM!
Action Notes
Scene 35
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Dialogue
Pretzel: Ha ha.
Action Notes
Scene 35 (Cont) Panel 2
Dialogue
Action Notes
Pretzel quickly turns around.
Scene 35 (Cont) Panel 3
Dialogue
Action Notes
Pretzel's ant-shaped machine also
banners from which he's hanging d
Scene 36
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Pretzel shoots the window.
Scene 36 (Cont) Panel 2
Dialogue
Action Notes
The window explodes.
Scene 36 (Cont) Panel 3
Dialogue
Bagel: Oh no
Action Notes
Fire reflects on Bagel's eyes.
Scene 37
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Scene 38 Panel 1
Dialogue
Action Notes
Pretzel in his machine starts to swing back and forth.
Scene 38 (Cont) Panel 2
Dialogue
Action Notes
Pretzel swings out of the window.
Scene 39
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Scene 39 (Cont) Panel 2
Dialogue
Action Notes
Scene 39 (Cont) Panel 3
Dialogue
Professor Muffin: Disas
Action Notes
Scene 40
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Scene 41 Panel 1
Dialogue
Donut: Bagel! Gear up, suit up, up up
Action Notes
Scene 41 (Cont) Panel 2
Dialogue
Action Notes
Donut crouches.
Scene 42
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Donut jumps.
Scene 42 (Cont) Panel 2
Dialogue
Action Notes
Donut spins.
Scene 43 Panel 1
Dialogue
Action Notes
The background glitters and glows
Scene 43 (Cont)
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Donut lands on his bike.
Scene 44 Panel 1
Dialogue
Action Notes
Camera zooms out. The background has stars, hearts,
and lighting bolts.
Scene 45 Panel 1
Dialogue
Bagel: Coming!
Action Notes
Scene 46
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Scene 47 Panel 1
Dialogue
Action Notes
Bagel walks in the air while her head remains in place.
The background resembles circuits.
Scene 48 Panel 1
Dialogue
Action Notes
Scene 48 (Cont)
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Scene 48 (Cont) Panel 3
Dialogue
Action Notes
Bagel lands on sidecar.
Scene 49 Panel 1
Dialogue
Action Notes
Camera zooms out. The backgroun
both Donut's and Bagel's backgrou
Scene 50
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Dialogue
Bagel: You too, Tiny Human!
Action Notes
Scene 51 Panel 1
Dialogue
Action Notes
Scene 52 Panel 1
Dialogue
Action Notes
Tiny Human reacts.
Scene 52 (Cont)
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Tiny Human runs towards the team in a non extreme
fashion.
Scene 52 (Cont) Panel 3
Dialogue
Action Notes
Tiny Human runs slowly in from screen down right. The
background continues shining.
Scene 53 Panel 1
Dialogue
Action Notes
Tiny Human approaches the bike. D
at him.
Scene 53 (Cont)
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Tiny Human climbs up his tiny sidecar.
Scene 54 Panel 1
Dialogue
Action Notes
Tiny Human sits down.
Scene 54 (Cont) Panel 2
Dialogue
Action Notes
Tiny Human thumbs up.
Scene 54 (Cont)
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Donut and Bagel look at him seriously.
Scene 55 Panel 1
Dialogue
Action Notes
Donut and Bagel thumb up.
Scene 55 (Cont) Panel 2
Dialogue
Action Notes
Donut and Bagel look towards the
Scene 55 (Cont)
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Donut accelerates.
Scene 56 Panel 1
Dialogue
Action Notes
They fly through the door.
Scene 57 Panel 1
Dialogue
Professor Muffin: Ruino
Action Notes
Scene 58
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Smoke still rises from the hole in the window.
Scene 59 Panel 1
Dialogue
Action Notes
Bagel types furiosly.
Scene 60 Panel 1
Dialogue
Action Notes
Laptop's screen shows GPS tracki
Scene 61
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Dialogue
Bagel: I got him. He's heading north
through Baker street.
Action Notes
Scene 62 Panel 1
Dialogue
Action Notes
Donut nods.
Scene 63 Panel 1
Dialogue
Action Notes
Scene 63 (Cont)
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Dialogue
Action Notes
They go faster. Camera follows them.
Scene 64 Panel 1
Dialogue
Action Notes
Scene 64 (Cont) Panel 2
Dialogue
Action Notes
The team shows on screen from be
Scene 65
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Pretzel realizes he's being followed.
Dialogue
Action Notes
Pretzel turns around and aims at them.
( )
Dialogue
Action Notes
Pretzel shoots.
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Dialogue
Action Notes
The beam hits Bagel's sidecar's wheel.
Dialogue
Action Notes
The bike and the team start to fly in
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Bagel's sidecar and Tiny Human's tiny sidecar detach
from one another and from the bike. Tiny Human flies off
screen.
Dialogue
Action Notes
Dialogue
Action Notes
Bagel lands behind Donut.
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Bagel's sidecar explodes in the background.
Dialogue
Action Notes
Tiny Human enters from screen up.
Dialogue
Action Notes
Tiny Human lands on Bagel's head
sidecar explodes in the backgroun
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Pretzel growls.
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Pretzel turns head slightly while thi
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Pretzel smiles madly.
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Camera follows Pretzel.
Dialogue
Action Notes
Pretzel's machine crouches.
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Pretzel's machine jumps off screen.
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Pretzel's machine jumps in from screen down.
Dialogue
Action Notes
Pretzel's machine attaches itself to
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Pretzel's machine crawls up the building.
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Donut: That was cool.
Action Notes
Donut and Bagel are looking up.
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Bagel looks ahead.
Dialogue
Bagel: Look out!
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Bagel points to the front.
Dialogue
Donut: Oh?
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A sign appears form screen left.
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The sign hits Donut in the face.
Dialogue
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Donut: Hey! I'm ok.
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Another sign hits Donut in the face.
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Donut: I'm ok.
Action Notes
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Bike's handlebar wiggles.
Dialogue
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Donut shakes injuries away. Bike's handlebar continues
to wiggle.
Dialogue
Action Notes
Donut still looks dazed. Bagel look
handlebar jerks uncontrollably.
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Bike's front wheel starts to come loose.
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Bike drifts.
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They are about to hit a guardrail.
Dialogue
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Donut's eye opens wide.
Dialogue
Action Notes
Donut's eye shuts.
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They hit the railguard. The bike explodes into pieces.
Dialogue
Action Notes
They start falling down a cliff.
Dialogue
Donut: Ahhhh!
Bagel: Ahhhh!
Action Notes
They are falling next to the bike's p
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Donut: Ahhhh!
Bagel: Ahhhh!
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Tiny Human enters from screen top right. He's wearing a
helmet and sunglasses.
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Action Notes
Donut and Bagel look at him.
Dialogue
Action Notes
Tiny Human opens a parachute.
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They approach the ground.
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They enter from screen top right.
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Dialogue
Action Notes
They brace themselves as they sta
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They hit the ground while spinning.
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They keep spinning on the ground.
Dialogue
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Action Notes
The remaining bike's pieces fall in from screen top right.
Dialogue
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The bike's pieces plus Donut and Bagel form a bike with
them as the wheels.
Dialogue
Action Notes
Tiny Human flies in from screen top
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Tiny Human detaches the parachute.
Dialogue
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Tiny Human spins. The parachute flies off to screen right.
Dialogue
Action Notes
Tiny Human lands like a gymnast o
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Tiny Human sits down and takes control of the bike.
Dialogue
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They accelerate off screen.
Dialogue
Action Notes
Team enters from screen right.
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Tiny Human drifts.
Dialogue
Action Notes
The drift makes Donut and Bagel fl
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Donut and Bagel hit a wall.
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Donut tries to catch his breath.
Dialogue
Action Notes
Bagel shakes while looking stunne
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Dialogue
Donut noise: (Barf)
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Dialogue
Donut: What's this?-
Action Notes
Donut speaks in a low voice.
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Donut: Wow!
Action Notes
Camera zooms out revealing Pretzel's ant-shaped
machine. Bagel comes back to herself.
Dialogue
Action Notes
Donut examines the machine.
Dialogue
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Action Notes
Camera zooms out revealing Pretzel on his way to enter a
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Dialogue
Pretzel: You?! Still?
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Donut clench his teeth.
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Pretzel runs away.
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Donut and Bagel run towards the building.
Dialogue
Action Notes
Donut and Bagel enter the building
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Donut: Stop!
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Dialogue
Pretzel noise: (Panting
Action Notes
Pretzel stops running and turns aro
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Pretzel: Ok.
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Pretzel pushes a button on the wall.
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Dialogue
Bagel: Ahhhh!
Action Notes
A sliding door closes behind Donut
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Bagel's is on the floor. Camera adjusts left.
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Bagel's foot is stuck between the door's blades.
Dialogue
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Bagel: Go!
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Dialogue
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Dialogue
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Dialogue
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Dialogue
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Donut and Pretzel fight, crawl, stand up, fall.
Dialogue
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Donut and Pretzel fight-crawl up the stairs.
Dialogue
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Dialogue
Pretzel: No, no! Wait!
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Dialogue
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Pretzel: Fool!
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Dialogue
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Pretzel kicks Donut in the stomach and he flies away.
Dialogue
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Dialogue
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The Infinatron's balls start glowing.
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The Infinatron's ball start hitting each other up and down.
Dialogue
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Dialogue
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The background turns red with a deep sound.
Dialogue
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Pretzel dustes off his tunic.
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Pretzel walks towards the console. Camera follows
Pretzel.
Dialogue
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A crooked painting appears from screen right.
Dialogue
Action Notes
Pretzel realizes the painting's crook
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Pretzel: No no no, like this, yes yes
yes.
Action Notes
Pretzel fixes the crooked painting's position.
Dialogue
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Dialogue
Pretzel noise: (Humming
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Pretzel: Hahaha!
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Dialogue
Donut: Why are you doing all of this?
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Dialogue
Pretzel: Why am I..
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Pretzel looks bewildered. His voice
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Pretzel: Why am I doing this?! Well
can't you see?!
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Dialogue
Pretzel: It's all a mess!
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Dialogue
Pretzel: Sandwiches spe
canelones!
Action Notes
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Pretzel: Sushi laughing with Nan!
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Dialogue
Pretzel: Donut & Bagel!
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Dialogue
Action Notes
Wearing sunglasses.
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Pretzel: I will bring order to this
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Dialogue
Pretzel: You'll see, DO-NUT!
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Dialogue
Pretzel: Hmmf...
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Pretzel turns angrily towards the co
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Donut: Wait!
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Dialogue
Pretzel: What?!
Action Notes
Pretzel turns towards Donut.
Dialogue
Donut: You can do that-
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Pretzel: Ok.
Action Notes
Pretzel turns towards the console.
Dialogue
Donut: Wait, no!
Action Notes
Dialogue
Donut: You COULD do tha
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Donut: What about us?
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Dialogue
Donut: What about you?
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Dialogue
Donut: Well, we'll neve
to stop you.
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Bagel: Donut, what are you doing?
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Dialogue
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Donut looks at Bagel.
Dialogue
Action Notes
Donut looks back at Pretzel.
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Pretzel: Hmmm... well.
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Dialogue
Pretzel: I guess I can solve that
right now
Action Notes
Camera zooms out as Pretzel lifts up his gun.
Dialogue
Action Notes
The gun starts charging.
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Bagel: What are you doing, dude?
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Dialogue
Donut: It's all right, dude
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Dialogue
Bagel: Please don't, I
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Donut: Donut fear.
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Dialogue
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Dialogue
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Donut turns back to Pretzel.
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Donut: Come on, Pretzel, bring it on!
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Camera zooms quickly.
Dialogue
Pretzel: Oh I am bringing it!
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Dialogue
Pretzel: Bye, bye!
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Pretzel: Face hole!
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Dialogue
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Dialogue
Bagel: Noooooooo!
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Dialogue
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The beam bounces off the wall beh
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The beam hits Pretzel in the stomach.
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Donut: Yay!
Bagel: Yay!
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Smoke rises from Donut's face hole
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Suddenly Pretzel's hand shows up from behind the
console.
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Pretzel activates the machine.
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Donut: No!
Bagel: No!
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Smoke continues to rise from Donut's face hole.
Dialogue
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Everything starts shaking.
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Steam blows from pipes on the wa
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Warning siren light rotates and flashes.
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Donut: Yi---
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Camera spins to the right.
Dialogue
Donut: ---
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Camera continues spinning to the r
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Donut: ---kes.
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Camera finishes spinning to the right.
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The door blades that trapped Bage
of the shaking.
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A booming sound stops Bagel as s
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Spoon-like devices emerge from the ground sorrounding
the building.
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Dialogue
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The devices hit the ground.
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The devices start vibrating.
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The vibrations crack the ground.
Dialogue
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The ground cracks towards the cam
zooms out.
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The ground cracks towards the camera. The camera
continues zooming out.
Dialogue
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The camera continues zooming out and starts moving
upwards.
Dialogue
Action Notes
The crack grows into the city. The c
zooming out and up.
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The citizen look at the crack.
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The ground rises and opens.
Dialogue
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The crack separates the districts.
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Omelette Man: Ahhhh!
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Dialogue
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A gigantic lid docks into the buildin
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Pretzel rises up dizzily. Donut and Bagel run into the
window.
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Pretzel realizes what's going on.
Dialogue
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The whole building leans forward.
Dialogue
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Hydraulic arms push the building up on a side.
Dialogue
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The building leans towards camera
from the lid.
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Huge amounts of coffee fall into the ground.
Dialogue
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The coffee flows through the cracks.
Dialogue
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Bagel: What have you done?
Action Notes
Dialogue
Pretzel: Brought order. Now things
are the way they should be.
Action Notes
Dialogue
Pretzel: The sweets wit
Action Notes
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Pretzel: The snacks with the snacks.
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Dialogue
Pretzel: Everything in
place.
Action Notes
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Bagel: No...
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Dialogue
Bagel: Hmm.
Action Notes
A splashing sound caughts Bagel's attention.
Dialogue
Cinammon kid: Look mom,
in my toes.
Action Notes
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Sandwich girl: Haha, this is great.
Action Notes
Dialogue
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The couple hugs on top of planks that make a bridge.
Dialogue
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Pretzel: NO! NO! Get back! NO!
Action Notes
Dialogue
Bagel: Well, it seems y
our sweet nature.
Action Notes
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Bagel: No more...
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Dialogue
Bagel: FOODing around!
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Dialogue
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Bagel: It means you're going to jail
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Dialogue
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Dialogue
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Donut: It's not that hard, I'd say
it's a... piece of cake.
Bagel: Ahhhh!
Action Notes
Dialogue
Action Notes
Fade to black.
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