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Keep it short! The more there is to read, the less your audience will want to read it. Make sure your writing is short. 20 Keep sentences to 20 words or fewer 5 Keep paragraphs to 5 sentences or fewer Visit for more info Become a better writer: www.cdc.gov/nceh/ClearWriting CS3039776A
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Keep it short! will want to read it. Make sure your writing is short. · 2019-08-21 · CS3039776A Use Active Voice! Passive voice is wordy, but active voice is concise and direct.

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Page 1: Keep it short! will want to read it. Make sure your writing is short. · 2019-08-21 · CS3039776A Use Active Voice! Passive voice is wordy, but active voice is concise and direct.

Keep it short!

The more there is to read, the less your audience will want to read it.

Make sure your writing is short.

20 Keep sentences to 20 words or fewer

5 Keep paragraphs to 5 sentences or fewer

Visit for more info

Become a better writer:www.cdc.gov/nceh/ClearWriting

CS3039776A

Page 2: Keep it short! will want to read it. Make sure your writing is short. · 2019-08-21 · CS3039776A Use Active Voice! Passive voice is wordy, but active voice is concise and direct.

Chunk it!

No one wants to read a wall of words.

Most readers skim documents instead of reading every word. Help your readers get your main points.

1 Include a short, clear main message at the top of your document

7 Use short paragraphs and bulleted lists. Keep lists to fewer than 7 items, and don’t use sub-bullets.

1-3Use a relevant and specific heading for every 1–3 paragraphs

For example: “ATSDR Study Looks at Lead Contamination” Instead of: “Overview”

Visit for more info

Become a better writer:www.cdc.gov/nceh/ClearWriting

CS3039776A

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CS3039776A

Use ActiveVoice!

Passive voice is wordy, but active voice is concise and direct. Passive voice is formal, but active voice sounds more like speech (making it easier to under-stand).

Use passive voice only when the subject is unknown or of less importance.

Passive Voice: “About 500 homes were left without water as a result of the chemical spill.”

Active Voice: “The chemical spill left 500 homes without water.”

Strengthen your sentences further by keeping the subject and verb close together.

Visit for more info

Become a better writer:www.cdc.gov/nceh/ClearWriting