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Kathy PageKathy PageNorth Star Writing ProjectNorth Star Writing Project
• Write to express, develop, reflect, and problem solve (15A/TAKS 1)
• Write to entertain such as to compose poems or stories (15C/TAKS 1)
• Exhibit an identifiable voice in personal narriative and in stories (15E/TAKS 1)
Grammar/Usage
• Employ standard English Usage in writing, including subject-verb agreement, pronoun referents, and parts of speech (18C/TAKS 2,5)
• Use adjectives and adverbs appropriately to make writing vivid or precise (18D/TAKS 2,5)
• Use prepositional phrases to elaborate written ideas (18E/TAKS 2,4)
Writing Processes
• Develop drafts by organizing paragraphs, and blending paragraphs within larger units of text (19B)
• Revise drafts by adding, elaborating, combining, and rearranging text (19C/TAKS 1,3)
• Edit drafts for specific purposes such as appropriate word choice (19E/TAKS 2,4,5)
Evaluation• Apply criteria to evaluate writing
(20A)
Connections• Collaborate with others to compose
and revise various types of text (22A)
“Although it is true that students learn many things inductively through meaningful
literacy experiences, instruction is important. Effective teachers do teach
strategies and skills.”
“Carefully planned instruction may be especially important for minority students. Many students who grew up outside the dominant culture are at a disadvantage when certain knowledge, strategies, and skills expected by teachers are not made explicit in their classrooms. Explicitness is crucial because people from different cultures have different sets of understandings.” Tompkins, 2004 (PP. 103, 104)
“You’ll find that students can become good fixers of their own material…if you work on one skill at a time.”
“How do you work them into the business of buildiing writers?
Here are a few ways I like… 1. Visit separate writing skills within regular language lessons… 2. Re-visit those language skills during
writing sessions… 3. Sneak little lessons into individual
writing conferences…and 4. Plan mini-lessons on specific writing skills…”
Marjorie Frank, 1995 (PP. 129, 130)
Students write…Students write…
The fish was slimy.The rainbow fish felt like
slippery, slimy goo squirming through my small hands.
Cianna and Kendyl
The dolphins kept jumping as we got to the dock.The dolphins looked like small,
gray sausages leaping effortlessly as we approached the dock.
Seri
I felt very happy.I felt like a golden wrapper swirling and floating
in the clear sky on a summer day. Mary Ann
“Teaching students to add specific details begins with helping them to see image qualities in two of the simplest grammatical structures: nouns and verbs… Yet ironically, professionals with years of writing experience find these simple structures to be the overlooked engines that power good writing…When students discover this truth, their writing is transformed into vivid photography.”
“Prepositions link additional noun images. These noun images, in turn, bring adjectives.
The combination provides more details, color, sound, and so on.”
“Metaphors and similes generate an image webbing pattern in the reader’s mind,
where added power comes from one image linking to another to another.”
Harry Noden, 1999 (PP. 26, 32, 34)
Before teaching the Before teaching the ‘Super Sentence’ process…‘Super Sentence’ process…
• Color code and use the Sentence Building patterns in How to Teach Students to be Fluent Writers (Ross).
• Time and time again, identify strong verbs, adjectives, and figurative language in rich, read-aloud text.
• Always have students log all strong verbs, adjectives and figurative language into their ‘Write-Stuff’ folders as a personal writing source. These can be identified by teachers, the students themselves, or at home with parents.
• During writing conferences, challenge students to revise their work using stronger verbs, adjectives, and figurative language.
• Reward students who bring magazines, books, newspapers, or any other kind of printed text containing strong verbs, adjectives, or figurative language found outside of class.
After the process…After the process…
• Demonstrate the use of ‘super sentences’ in modeled, shared, and guided writing.
• Require the use of super sentences in independent compositions.
• Incorporate Noden’s Image Grammar strategies to enrich the ‘Super Sentence’ structure.
• Allow the students to experiment with vatieties of their own, which might include, rearrangement or additions.
• Apply these learned strategies to poetry.
“(Revision) changes that significantly influence meaning
occur at three levels:
word-phrase level, sentence-paragraph level,
and whole composition level.”
Ronald Cramer, 2001 (P. 108)
Students then write…Students then write…I felt like a golden wrapper rolling down a
long, sparkling hill.” Mary Ann
A butterfly is an angel flying quietlythrough the whispering wind andwaving her flattering wings through the colorful flowers. Ryan
My face was as red as a rose, it felt like a flaming fire, and the coach
zoomed over to help me. Chris
Venus Fly Trapprickly, fast
sticking, protecting, attackingdry area plant
EATER
Kyler Cinquain based on science lesson
My loving mother sounds like a chorus of little, chirping birdies in a stick and grass nest at the top of the giant oak tree. Michael
Free Verse inside a Mother’s Day card
“Even though revising is complex,
I have no doubt children can handle it.
Move them beyond a surface view of revision. Teach them that revision
is the heart and soul of writing.”
Ronald Cramer (2001), P. 108
What about extensions?What about extensions?• Use appropriate grade-level composition and
grammarTEKS to build imitation structures, especially in elementary and middle levels.
• For higher levels, use sentences from literature, have students identify the structure, and them imitate this in their own examples and compositions, for example…
What separates Poe from the phrenologists, who were right in conceiving of a divided brain
but wrong in labeling its parts, is his keen understanding region of the mind.