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The Devil’s in the Details:

Best Practices for Writing Successful Direct Mail

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CALL: 913.341.1211 EMAIL: [email protected]: PatFriesen.com/articles

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Direct mail is NOT dead …but those who know how to

write for it are quickly disappearing.

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Direct Mail:

• Virus-free• 3-dimensional• Hard-to-ignore• Engaging formats• Easy to highlight, file, share, refer to

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Appropriate

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►Audience►Product/Service

►Objective

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Write for scanners vs. readers

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The 3:33 Rule

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Odd numbers vs. even(997 vs. 1,000)

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Numerals vs. numbers as words(1,000 vs. one thousand)

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$10,000 vs.

$10,000.00

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Sell BENEFITS, not features. Your reader wants to know,

“What’s in it for me?”(WIIFM?)

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Be Specific• Save money• Save hundreds of dollars• Save an average of $478.22 each year• Save money to put your child through college

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Keep words,

sentences &

paragraphs short

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Words: 5 characters or less (75%-80%)Sentences: 1 ½ lines or lessParagraphs: 6 lines or less

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How long should a letter be?

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Letters should be signed.Letters should be signed by a

person, not a company.

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Hot Spots

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Photo captionsBulletsHeadlines & SubheadsSalutationJohnson BoxFirst SentenceP.S.

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Don’t bury your call-to-action. Repeat it more than once.

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Looking for a strong first sentence to launch your letter?

.

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Never end the first page of a multi-page letter

with end punctuation.

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It doesn’t matter what’s inside your outer envelope

if it doesn’t get opened.

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►Teaser copy►Return address►Addressing ►Postage

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Google: Tension Envelope Free White Paper

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FREE is one of the two most powerful words in the

English language.

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Free quoteFree 30-day lookFree guideFree cost comparisonFree analysisFree white paperFree __________

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YOU

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Google the “We-We Calculator”

It’s FREE! And it measures the customer-focus of your

copy and content.

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Find creative ways totransform intangibles into

something more tangible …and also link your direct mail

to your digital assets.

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Repetition works. Find multiple ways to

say the same thing and say it more than once…

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rates are affordable only $10.77/month

pay less than 36¢/daythat’s less than a 1st stamp

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Don’t write in a vacuum. The sooner you team up with

your direct mail designer, the better the end result.

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Use testimonials & product reviews to diffuse

buying objections

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Use charts, graphs & images to support key copy points

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Test. Test. TEST!

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Writer’s Resources: White Paper: How to Create Successful Direct Mail

Online: We-We Calculator

YouTube Video: 4 Design Best Practices for Direct Mail

eBook: The Cross-Channel Copywriting Handbook

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Questions?????

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CALL: 913.341.1211 EMAIL: [email protected]: PatFriesen.com/articles