Exposition Writing
Jan 13, 2015
Exposition Writing
What is exposition?
• Longer works:
• Memoir
• Biography
• Autobiography
• History
• Research report
• Newsletter
• Brochure
• Shorter works:
• Essay
• Speech
• Letter
• Memorandum
• Note
• Advertisement
• Instructions
• News or feature article
Why?
• The overall purpose of writing exposition has two parts:
• You state your assertion (your opinion, perspective, your point of
view, or how you’re going to treat your subject).
• You support or back up your assertion with evidence.
Specific uses
• To inform/To explain
• To clarify
• To persuade
• To entertain
• To compare or
contrast
• To show cause
and/or effect
• To report
How do you do it?
• First, figure out who your audience is -- that will affect what
you say and how you say it.
• Second, figure out what your purpose is -- that is the end
result, the reaction you want to get from your audience.
Then what?
• You need to generate as many
pieces of support (evidence)
as you can to help back up
your assertion.
What is evidence?
• Personal experience or
observation
• Typical situations
• Hypothetical situations
• Generalized situations
• Facts
• Names
• Statistics
• References to authorities• Experts
• Documents
• Anecdotes
• Explanations and
interpretations
• Extended or brief
• Quotations
Evidence must be:
• Accurate
• Supportive, not contradictory
• Relevant
• Specific, detailed, precise, vivid
• Interesting
• Clear and easy to understand
• Representative (not the exception)
• Cited, if necessary.
Choose a point of view
• First person P.O.V.
• Uses “I” as the
narrator.
• Is personal, which may
be an advantage or
disadvantage.
• Third person P.O.V.
• Uses “She,” “He,”
“They,” or “It” to relay
information.
• Is more distant, which
may be an advantage
or disadvantage.
Thesis statement
• A good thesis statement is clear, opinionated, and specific.
• It relays:
• The topic of discussion.
• How you will treat that topic.
• Perhaps the focus of the discussion about that topic.
• It includes every major idea in the essay.
A special note on structure
• An exemplification essay is usually highly structured.
• It has a stated, clearly identifiable thesis statement.
• Alas, if I cannot identify your thesis, the highest grade the paper
will receive is a “D,” so this is important!
Ways to organize
• Chronological
• Spatial
• Emphatic
• Moderate-Weak-
Strong
• Simple to complex
• You need:
• Strong thesis
• Clear topic sentences --
that support the overall
thesis.
• Evidence that supports
each topic sentence
• A clear conclusion
Transitions
• Use suitable transitional words and phrases.
• For instance
• For example
• To illustrate
• A classic example
• Also
• In addition
• Additionally
• A case in point is
• Avoid unimaginative transitions like “My first example is…”
Never!
• Never write the following types of sentences:
• “In this paragraph, I will explain…”
• In this essay, I will discuss…”
• Those are fine, even expected, in a scientific or mathematical
paper, but for the typical English paper they are simply
terrible, absolutely horrible!
• Additionally, you never really need to write:
• “I feel…” “I believe…” or “I think…” If it’s your paper, then the
reader already knows they’re your thoughts, beliefs or feelings.
Significance
• Good essays have importance; they answer a need, a question
or problem that has been posed.
• The reader never puts down the essay and says, “So what?”
• You need to convey to your reader why your essay is
important to read.
Possible essay beginnings
• Broad statement narrowing to a limited subject (end
introduction with thesis statement)
• Brief anecdote leading up to thesis
• Comparative or opposite ideas leading up to thesis
• Series of short questions leading to thesis
• Quotations leading to thesis
• Refutation of a common belief leading up to a thesis
• Dramatic fact or statistic leading to thesis
Possible essay endings
• Summary of information presented
• Prediction based on information presented
• Quotation leading to concluding statement
• Statistics leading to concluding statement
• Recommendation or call for action
• Echo of the introduction
• Please do not write, “In conclusion…”
Some additional thoughts
• Exposition is very descriptive and uses many of the same
techniques as fiction.
• Be aware of the tone you convey.
• Vary sentence structure.
• Vary sentence length.
• Vary paragraph length.
Some final thoughts
• I assure you your first draft will be lousy.
• Subsequent drafts improve your writing.
• You make your writing worth reading by revising:
• Adding
• Subtracting
• Reorganizing
• Substituting
The end of the process
• First, concentrate on your message -- what you have to say.
• Second, concentrate on your organization -- how you say it.
• Third, concentrate on surface features -- spelling, grammar,
mechanics, usage.
• Always do your best work -- every draft.