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Do’s & Don’ts of Successful Direct Mail Copywriting (& other related tips)
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Do’s & Don’ts of Successful Direct Mail Copywriting

(& other related tips)

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CALL: 913.341.1211 EMAIL: [email protected]: PatFriesen.com/articles

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Direct mail is NOT dead …but those who know how to

write for it are quickly disappearing.

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Appropriate

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40-40-20 Rule for Success or Failure

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Understand what motivates your audience to take action.

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Ed Mayer’s Checklist of Human Motivators

• Make money• Save money• Save time• Avoid effort• Be comfortable• Be healthy• Be popular• Be in style• Avoid criticism• Conserve possessions• Avoid pain• Satisfy curiosity• Avoid trouble

• Satisfy appetite• Protect reputation• Purchase wisely• Have beautiful possessions• Attract the opposite sex• Be individual• Enjoy life• Be clean• Be appreciated• Protect family• Emulate others you admire• Take advantage of opportunities

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Ed Mayer’s Checklist of Human Motivators

• Make money• Save money• Save time• Avoid effort• Be comfortable• Be healthy• Be popular• Be in style• Avoid criticism• Conserve possessions• Avoid pain• Satisfy curiosity• Avoid trouble

• Satisfy appetite• Protect reputation• Purchase wisely• Have beautiful possessions• Attract the opposite sex• Be individual• Enjoy life• Be clean• Be appreciated• Protect family• Emulate others you admire• Take advantage of opportunities

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When an attorney, compliance person, or approving manager

says, “You can’t say that,” your response should be …

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“So, what CAN I say?”

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The power of using the rightdirect mail format

to reach your audience with your message & offer

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SoloSelf-mailerCatalogMulti-mailerPostcardGram/Overnight Over-sized/odd-sizedTubesThe Unusual

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Focus on BENEFITS, not features. Your reader wants to

know,“What’s in it for me?”

(WIIFM?)

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Be Specific

• Save money• Save hundreds of dollars• Save an average of $478.22 annually• Save money to put your child through college

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The 3:33 Rule

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Write for scanners vs. readers

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Hot Spots

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Keep words,

sentences & paragraphs

short

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Start headlines, sentences, bullets & calls-to-action

with active verbs

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DiscoverLearnVisitReadSaveMailCall

ProtectBuy

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FREE is one of the two most powerful words in the

English language.

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Free quoteFree look

Free guideFree cost comparison

Free _________

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The other is …

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YOU

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Google the “WeWe Calculator”

It’s FREE. And it measures the customer-focus of your

copy and content.

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Tell people how to respond. Don’t assume they know WHAT you want them to do & HOW &

WHY to do it.

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Never end the first page of a multi-page letter

with end punctuation.

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Repetition works. Find multiple ways to

say the same thing and say it more than once…

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rates are affordable just $10.77/monthless than 36¢/day

less than a first-class stamp

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Use QR codes & shortened URLs to connect direct mail readers

with digital content

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Having trouble writing your letter opener?

Look for it buried in about the 3rd paragraph

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Use testimonials to diffuse buying objections

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Don’t write in a vacuum. The sooner you team up with

your direct mail designer, the better the end result.

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Make mailing components work together to encourage engagement & response…

starting with the outer envelope

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Look for creative ways totransform intangibles into something more tangible.

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Use charts, graphs & images to support key copy points

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P. S.

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Test. Test. TEST!

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Thank YOU for your attention, your interest,

and your questions!

[email protected]