Final Major Project Moving Image DV3440 Amy Pearson U1226896
Mar 30, 2016
Final Major Project
Moving Image
DV3440
Amy Pearson
U1226896
PRE -‐ PRODUCTION
For my Final Major Project I wanted to create a piece that would challenge me and allow me to expand my knowledge in each of the processes in filmmaking. This being said, I decided to create a short fiction piece as this allowed me to write my own script, develop my characters and work through each process. This allowed me to gain complete control over what I shot therefore allowing me to be more creative with camera shots and editing techniques.
I am hoping my piece will place emphasis on aesthetics therefore I have decided to incorporate the use of flashbacks within my piece which will help me achieve my goal of creativeness with camera and editing work.
After deciding what I want to achieve with making my FMP I went on to brainstorming ideas for a theme of my piece.
Content Research
After brainstorming some initial ideas for my project I researched and analysed other work which with the same underlying theme as mine which could help me generate ideas for my own film.
• Memento Synopsis
“After witnessing his wife’s murder, Lenny becomes afflicted with short term memory loss. If he’s distracted, he permanently loses the train of his thought, and, even if undistracted, his recent memories are wiped clean when he falls asleep. Bent on solving his wife’s murder, he tattoos clues on his body and is in search for a mysterious suspect named “John G.” At one point he discovers that he is being manipulated by a corrupt cop who has him perform various assignations, deluding Lenny that the target is John G. In response, Lenny sets in motion a series of events and clues that result in Lenny killing the cop. To allow the audience to experience Lenny’s problem, the scenes in the movie appear in reverse-‐ chronology – later events appearing first, and events scenes presented last”.
I learnt a lot from watching this film. It helped me to shape the direction that I want to go in with my film. It has a catching story line tangled with different twists which eventually come out at the end of the film. I am hoping to put some twists in my film and reveal a bit more of the story as it progresses. I particularly like the lighting used in the film. However, in terms of story line, due to time constraints and budget etc I will keep it more simplistic and centre it around the Therapist/Patient relationship and having a twist in terms of a personal aspect and following the journey of one main character.
• Apocalypse now
This film helped me generate ideas for the post production side of things. There are a few things I picked up on in this film which could be relevant to mine. In the opening he is laying on the floor looking up at the ceiling fan and then it switches to the helicopter. The use of montage and overlays is something that I can incorporate into my film particularly if I choose to go down the route of using objects to signify flashbacks.
• A beautiful mind
If I pursue the route of having the late wife there throughout there are subtle ways of showing that she isn't actually there without giving the twist away. In this film John Nash see's characters who aren't there however we are unsure of this until it is told to us. Although, it does give subtle hints which you think back to once it's been revealed for example: when they are outside and they are running past the birds and the birds don't fly away. This is clever because its subtle but obvious because birds are scared of humans therefore when you approach them they do fly away.
This film has given me things to think about if this is the route I take.
• Just like heaven
This is another example like the one above, however the women in the film is in a coma which we realize throughout the film.
After analysing the research taken from watching other films, I have decided that I am going to go down the route of not having the wife in the film. She will be there as a minor role, and will be in a couple of flashbacks but not there throughout. Although I think this would work well and be a good idea, I feel that it has been done very well in previous films it would be too hard to pull off in the time constraint therefore I don't feel the idea would be done as good as it could have been in a longer film.
Shooting Techniques
• Point of view shots
As I am thinking of incorporating voice-‐overs at the start and end of the film, resembling a diary entry type thing, I though I would take a look into point of view shots so the audience is able to relate and empathise with him more. However, some reviews of films that have used this have said that POV shots tend to be jerky etc. Due to the fact that I want my film to focus on creative camera shots, high aesthetics and emotions of the characters: I need my camera shots to be smooth. I have also shifted the focus of my film to being Nathan's journey and how the Doctor/Patient relationship helps him overcome his struggles therefore point of view doesn't fit my theme anymore but it was an area I explored.
• Structure and style
⇒ The pace of the piece will be slow for the most part. Crucial moments within the film will be faster.
⇒ The flashbacks will be short snappy clips with a sound track underlay. ⇒ Voice overs will be used within the piece. ⇒ The style in which I hope to capture the piece will be one that has emphasis
on the visual aesthetics. I will be using a different range of camera shots including the use of the dolly and track for tracking shots, switching focus to change the depth of field in order to achieve this.
⇒ I will use the use of blur within my piece to represent the ‘fog’ that people feel associated with the short term memory loss following the death of a loved one. Research As my piece is centred on the idea of memory loss I have been researching how severe memory loss caused by trauma can be so that I can portray this information accurately within my piece. I want my film to follow as near to the facts as possible without being unrealistic.
Facts about Memory Loss
• “After a death in the family, the first few week are usually spent in a ‘fog’, however, it is simply a symptom of extreme stress and grief. Your mind is overwhelmed with more than it can handle, being forced to ‘accept the unacceptable and believe the unbelievable’. You may be unable to sleep well, have no appetite and almost certainly out of your normal routine; all these things contribute to a sense of ‘losing it’ and being unable to function. (Carol A Ranney, 2009)
• About a quarter of widows and widowers will experience clinical depression and anxiety during the first year of bereavement; the risk drops to about 17% by the end of the first year and continues to decline thereafter. (Jacobs S, 1993).
• Bereaved people often try to avoid reminders of the loss and to suppress the expression of grief.
• • This website below gives personal case studies of people who have gone to
see counsellors due to bereavement. This was interesting to me the personal accounts and helped me script the conversation between the Doctor/ Patient.
• ( http://www.healthtalkonline.org/Living_with_dying/Bereavement_due_to_
traumatic_death/Topic/370 6/ ) Character Development This questionnaire is something I found online which I feel can help me developed and shape my main character who is experiencing memory loss. I can answer these questions and build a character around this. This will then help me when it comes to writing my script.
Memory Loss Dissociative disorder (not being able to remember a major, traumatic event). The memory loss may be short-‐term or long-‐term. A person with memory loss needs a lot of support. It helps to show them familiar objects, music, or photos. Questions may include: Type Can the person remember recent events (is there impaired short-‐term memory)? Can the person remember events from further in the past (is there impaired long-‐term memory)? Is there a loss of memory about events that occurred before a specific experience (anterograde amnesia)?
Is there a loss of memory about events that occurred soon after a specific experience (retrograde amnesia)? Is there only a minimal loss of memory? Does the person make up stories to cover gaps in memory (confabulation)? Is the person suffering from low moods that impair concentration? Time pattern Has the memory loss been getting worse over years? Has the memory loss been developing over weeks or months? Is the memory loss present all the time or are there distinct episodes of amnesia? If there are amnesia episodes, how long do they last? Aggravating or triggering factors Has there been a head injury in the recent past? Has the person experienced an event that was emotionally traumatic? Has there been a surgery or procedure requiring general anesthesia? Other symptoms Does the person use alcohol? How much? Does the person use illegal/illicit drugs? How much? What type? What other symptoms does the person have? Is the person confused or disoriented?
Script
Memory by Amy Pearson
Synopsis -‐
"Nathan was married for 2 years. His wife Sarah unexpected passed away due to an aneurism that went un-‐noticed. Unable to deal with the emotions of loosing his wife, Nathan blocked out her entire existence. Now, several months down the line, Nathan feels that something isn't quite right. After several sessions of getting nowhere with his Doctor, they are now starting to make progress"
FADE IN
EXT. Street Day A young man is walking down the street in the direction of a building.
V.O NATHAN Have you ever felt empty, like something is missing? You crave something yet you don't know what it is? Well lately that's how I've been feeling.
Nathan walks through the front door of the building. As the voice over finishes, we hear the sound from the door of the building shutting. INT. Office Day A small square room with a coffee table, chair and a couch. There are a few ornaments on the table as well as coffee mats. There is a book on the table nearest to the chair. DR. Afford sits on the chair. Nathan is sitting on one side of the couch.
NATHAN But this has been going on for some time now and no progress has been made
DR. AFFORD
What is it you are feeling Nathan?
NATHAN We've already been over this. It's the reason I'm here.
(Pauses) Nathan puts his hands on his head and sighs.
NATHAN I feel an emptiness, I feel so confused, Something's not right but when I think back, everything seems normal.
Dr. AFFORD What do you think back about?
FLASHBACK We see Nathan in his home. He is chopping vegetables in his kitchen, he is smiling and happy, then we see him drop the knife and walk out of the frame. In the next clip he picks up a cushion from the living room sofa and smells it then puts it back down, it then cuts into clip of him getting into a car, followed by a shot of the wheels as he drives away, then a clip of him in his car and him turning and facing the outside of his house.
V.O NATHAN Everything that has happened in my life over the last year. Me leaving town for a while and then returning back again.
DR. AFFORD Why did you leave?
NATHAN
I'm not sure. (Pauses)
I think at the time I was just bored in my life. At first the change was good, everything was going well, but after a while, I kept feeling that something
was missing, so I came home. A phone rings outside the office. DR. Afford excuses himself from the office to take the phone call. Nathan gazes around the office. He notices the book lying on the coffee table. He reaches out his hand and pulls the book towards him. He looks towards the director of the door again. He can hear muffled voices of DR. Afford talking on the phone down the hall from the office. He opens up the first page and sees his name written across the top. 'Nathan Stroud'. He brushes his hand over his name and begins to flick quickly through the pages. Two photographs fall out onto the table. He picks up the first photograph. It is of DR. Afford with a younger women and an older women -‐ Presumably Mrs Afford. He lays it back down on the coffee table. He pulls the second photograph towards him. He stands and has the photographs in each of his hands. He turns back and looks in the director of the door and tears are rolling down his cheeks. We hear a muffled voice of DR. Afford on the phone saying 'Bye, yes see you then' Nathan drops the photographs, turns and walks out of his office. Shot in the corridor. As Nathan walks one way out of the office, DR. Afford walks from the other direction towards the door of the office
DR. AFFORD Nathan, where are you going?
DR. Afford walks back into his office and picks the two photographs up off of the floor.
FADE OUT
FADE IN INT. Nathan's Bedroom Night Nathan is lying in his bed sleeping. There is light coming through his curtains from the light outside in the street. FLASHBACK of him holding the two photographs in his hand. We then cut back to Nathan tossing and turning in his bed. We go back to the Flashback of the two photographs. The camera zooms in on DR. Afford in the photograph and then zooms out as it has gone into a clip of a family dinner at the dining room table of a house. We pan around and see the young women, older women, DR. Afford and Nathan in this flashback. We go back to Nathan tossing and turning in his bed. The flashback zooms in on the girl in the image. We see a clip of Nathan and the girl on the sofa in his living room with Sarah the young women lying on the cushion that Nathan smells
in the first flashback at the start of the story. Each time we cut back to the present of him in his bed, the room gets lighter and the camera gets closer to him. Cuts back to Nathan as he sits up in his bed and turns on his side light. Tears are rolling down his cheeks.
FADE OUT
FADE IN
INT. Office Day DR. Afford is sitting in his chair while Nathan paces the room.
NATHAN How is it possible that I had a wife and for the past year who I never knew about.
DR. AFFORD What do you remember?
NATHAN That day
DR. AFFORD What happened?
NATHAN You already know what happened, you've known this whole time
DR. AFFORD Tell me what you remember Nathan
FLASHBACK Nathan is in his kitchen chopping vegetables on the work surface. Sarah walks over to the CD player and presses play on the CD player.
V.O NATHAN It was December 21st 2011. I was in the kitchen making dinner, Sarah was by the CD player
FLASHBACK
SARAH Remember this song?
NATHAN Of course, it was the best day of my life, how i could i forget?
SARAH Come dance with me
V.O NATHAN She asked me to dance, I dropped the knife, was walking over to dance with her, then she just fell.
FLASHBACK Clips of Nathan chopping the vegetables then Sarah just falling to the ground. He runs over to her shouting her name, no sound just see his mouth moving. He just holds her and leans over her.
V.O NATHAN I went over to her, she wasn't breathing, I just froze leaning over her. She was young healthy, I don't know what happened to her. I called 999 the ambulance came but it was too late.
Cuts back to a shot of Nathan sitting on the couch opposite DR. Afford.
NATHAN Maybe if I'd gone to dance with her sooner,
she would have been in my arms, she wouldn't have hit the floor. Tom I'm so..
DR. AFFORD
Nathan, Sarah passed away due to an aneurism, there was nothing you or anybody else could have done that day that would have saved her.
Nathan pauses then stands.
NATHAN All these months that I've been coming to see you, you never once thought you should tell me that your daughter, happened to be my wife who I'd somehow forgot about. All this being the reason I came to see you in the first place. The emptiness I've been feeling..
DR. AFFORD Nathan, we decided..
NATHAN How is that even possible?
DR. AFFORD The emotional trauma resulting from Sarah's death caused your brain to psychologically block out her existence. It was too painful for you to comprehend. You just walked out and left. It was painful for us too. We never knew when you would come home, or even if you ever would, so her mother and I
cleared out your flat. When eventually you did return, every reminder of her was gone.
NATHAN Why didn't you tell me, make me remember?
DR. AFFORD Nathan this is something you had to remember on your own. We didn't want your memories of your life with Sarah to be determined by our memories of her. It was something you had to find out for yourself.
Nathan sits down
NATHAN Why has it taken me so long?
DR. AFFORD
When Sarah died so suddenly, your brain simply couldn't deal with the loss and the grief; you left town. When you went you seemed to have left every part of your life here behind. A few months down the line you started showing signs that you were ready to deal with the pain: the emptiness, the confusion. It was decided that once this happened, you would be referred to me and that I would be the one to help you through it.
NATHAN
How do I deal with this now. Where do I go from here?
Tom Afford's wife walks into the room carrying a cardboard box.
SUSAN AFFORD
You should have this. Some of the things we took from your flat and kept until you remembered.
She walks over to Nathan and hands it to him. He smiles, take it from her and places it on the coffee table. He hugs her.
NATHAN (whispers) I'm so sorry
Susan looks holds Nathan at arms length, a tear in her eye smiles and nods her head. Nathan turns, hugs Tom Afford, thanks him then picks up the box and leaves. Shot from behind the Afford couple's heads as they are standing at the door. Nathan is out of focus in the background walking away with his box.
V.O NATHAN The confusion is over.
FADE OUT
FADE IN
EXT. Cemetery Close shot of flowers in a hand. Camera eases out into a wide shot as Nathan walks through a cemetery.
V.O NATHAN I've now realised what was missing. I had a wife. Her name was Sarah. She unexpectedly passed away at only 28.
INT. Nathans Flat Nathan in his home putting the photograph of him and Sarah on his table. His hand is touching the photo. The camera tracks in to the photograph.
V.O NATHAN The emptiness still remains, along with the memories.
FADE OUT
Shot List
Scene Location Shot NO.
Shot style Action/Dialogue
EXTERIOR 1 Street 1 Medium –
Tracking Walking down the street -‐ VO
1 Outside the building
2 Medium Walking towards building doors -‐ VO
1 Outside the building
3 Track back Presses Buzzer – Introduces himself
1 Outside the building
4 Wide Walks through doors – SE of door closing
INTERIOR -‐ OFFICE 2 Office 1 M – over dr.
shoulder “But this has been going on for some time now…”
2 Office 2 M – Over N shoulder
“what is it your feeling Nathan…”
2 Office 3 Wide “We’ve already been over this…” 2 Office 4 CU Nathan puts his hands on his head and
sighs 2 Office 5 Track from L
TO R Nathans line then Toms line
FLASHBACK – Nathan Leaving 3 Kitchen 1 CU in line w
worktop Nathan is chopping vegetables – VO
3 Kitchen 2 Zooms back Nathan drops the knife – VO 3 Living Room 3 Medium Nathan hugs cushion and smells it – VO 3 Pathway 4 LA Nathan dragging suitcase – VO 3 Road 5 LA Wheels of car as they drive away – VO
INTERIOR -‐ OFFICE 4 Office 1 Track R TO L Toms line then Nathans until he pauses 4 Office 2 Over Ts
shoulder “I think at the time I was just bored in my life….”
4 Office 3 Over T’s Shoulder
SE – Phone rings – Nathan turns to look at the door
4 Office 4 Wide Tom excuses himself and walks off frame
4 Office 5 LA File in focus – N looks around the room – walks to file then sits
4 Office 6 Medium from behind
N looks backwards towards door – SE Toms voice on phone
4 Office 7 CU – over N shoulder
N opens folder and sees his name
4 Office 8 Mid Shot of Ns body
Flicks through album – photos fall on his lap.
4 Office 9 Over Picks up photos
shoulder 4 Office 10 Over
shoulder Turns towards door. Tears on Cheeks – SE Tom saying Bye
4 Office 11 Medium Puts photos on Chair – walks out door 4 Corridor 12 Medium Behind Tom as N leave – “Nathan
where are you going” 4 Office 13 Wide T enters office 4 Office 14 CU on
images Toms hands reach down and pick up the photographs
INTERIOR – NATHANS BEDROOM 5 Bedroom 1 Wide N in bed sleeping 5 Flashback 2 N holding the photos 5 Flashback 3 CU On Tom in the photo 5 Bedroom 4 Wide Nathan tossing and turning in his bed 5 Flashback 5 CU Of Sarah in the image – cuts to scene in
living room on sofa 5 Flashback 6 Wide Outside – Family video in the garden 5 Bedroom 7 Zoom N in bed shuffling until he sits up and
turns on the side light. INTERIOR -‐ OFFICE 6 Office 1 LA N feet pacing 6 Office 2 M Over T
shoulder “How is it possible that I had a wife for the past year …”
6 Office 3 M -‐ Behind N
“What do you remember” and “That Day”
6 Office 4 M – Behind T
“What happened” and “you already know what happened….”
6 Office 5 CU Tom – “Tell me what you remember Nathan”
FLASHBACK 7 Kitchen 1 CU in line w
worktop Nathan Chopping vegetables
7 Living Room 2 Track Sarah Walks towards CD player 7 Living Room 3 CU She presses play on CD player –
“Remember this song” 7 Kitchen 4 Medium N looks at Camera “of course it was the
best day of my life…” 7 Living Room 5 Medium Sarah puts her arms out – “Come
dance with me” 7 Kitchen 6 LA Shot of Ns feet as he walks towards
sarah 7 Kitchen 7 CU Of N smiling – then changes to shock –
VO 7 Living Room 8 LA Sarah Falls 7 Living Room 9 LA From
other side See N running over – Sarah Lying there – Shakes her
7 Living room 10 HA Zooming out as he holds her INTERIOR OFFICE 8 Office 1 M of N(front
angle) “Maybe if id gone to dance with her sooner..” (both sitting)
8 Office 2 Tracks slightly right
T “Nathan, Sarah passed away..” Moves forward into frame
8 Office 3 Over T shoulder
N pauses and Stands “All these months that ive been….”
8 Office 4 Over T shoulder
T – “Nathan we decided….” T sits on arm of chair
8 Office 5 Over T shoulder
N “How is that even possible..” (N stands)
8 Office 6 Side angle facing T
“The emotional trauma resulting from sarahs death ….”
8 Office 7 Side Angle facing T
N sits “Why didn’t you tell me, make me remember”
8 Office 8 Over N shoulder
“Nathan this is something you had to remember on your…”
8 Office 9 CU “Why has it taken me so long” 8 Office 10 Wide “when sarah died so suddenly…” 8 Office 11 Side angle
facing N “How do I deal with this now…”
8 Office 12 Side angle facing N
Susan walks into room holding a box
8 Office 13 Wide – Behind Susan
“You should have this”
8 Office 14 Behind coffee table
“Some of the things we took from..” N Stands
8 Office 15 Behind coffee table
N takes box from susan and puts it on coffee table
8 Office 16 Behind Susan Head
N walks and hugs her “I’m so sorry”
8 Office 17 Wide Behind table
Tom walks over and hugs them too
8 Office 18 Wide behind table
N picks up the box. S and T smiling. N walks out door
8 Front of Building
19 Wide behind S and T
S and T heads are in focus – N walks down street – VO
EXTERIOR – CEMETERY 9 Cemetery 1 CU Flowers in N hands – VO 9 Cemetery 2 Tracks back Track back – VO
INTERIOR NATHANS LIVING ROOM 10 Living room 1 CU From behind. Nathan walks and puts
photo down – VO 10 Living room 2 Track Moves in to N touching photo. -‐ VO
Storyboards
Location
These two photographs to are my two main locations. The first is Nathans front room and kitchen. This is where Sarah is when she passes away although it will be a low shot. The second location is the Office where the therapy sessions are. This is an important location as it is where the bulk of my film happens. I was very lucky when finding my location as I am able to use this particular flat for all of my scenes. The front exterior will be where Nathan first enters and will be seen as tom and Susans house and the back exterior will be used as Nathans house. As the location I am using is currently not in use, there will be no time restrictions on when I can and cannot shoot so this will help me greatly when I am filming.
Casting After I had found my location and completed my script, the next thing I needed to do was look for actors to play these roles. I advertised the roles on ‘casting call pro’ and was surprised when I had so many response.
On Monday 4th February I held my auditions for casting the roles of Nathan and Tom for my F.M.P. It was a successful day and managed to find two actors with the same perceptions and understandings of the role as I have. 'Tom Afford' maintained a professional level at the start but once Nathan realised the personal connection, the chemistry between them completely changed as the relationship went from being Therapist/Patient to Father/Son-‐in-‐Law. The actors switched between this very well, and I was happy to see what I had down on paper coming to life.
After auditioning Ian and Warren on 4th Feb, I found it very difficult to find actresses for the women roles. This is because, they are very small roles and people were not willing (understandable) to travel down from London to my location in Bushey for such a small role. I was also unable to cover expenses so this affected this to. I then decided to get in contact with local theatre companies in Bushey/Watford areas and surrounding areas but unfortunately was unable to find anyone to play these roles due to other commitments. This resulted in me having to postpone shooting for a few weeks. Ian went on holiday for two weeks in March which put filming back further. The weekend before I was scheduled to shoot on the 18th March I started directly messaging actresses on casting call pro and managed to find Aimi and Denys who wanted to be involved in my project.
PRODUCTION Shooting Schedule After having to postpone and reschedule my shoots, when I finally had all four of my actors, I arranged a shoot for Monday 18th March. After preparing all through February and the start of March I decided that I would do a full day of shooting and would hopefully be able to complete it in a day – thankfully I did. Scene Location Cast 7 – Flashback Interior – Kitchen/living
room – Sarahs death Nathan, Sarah
3 – chopping vegetables Interior – Nathan kitchen Nathan 5 – Family day out Exterior Nathan, Sarah, Susan,
Tom 5 – Flashback Interior – Nathan and Sarah
on sofa Nathan, Sarah
BREAK BREAK BREAK 8 – Therapy session 2 part 2
Interior – office Nathan, Tom, Susan
8 – Leaving with box Exterior – Tom and Susans Tom, Susan, Nathan 1 – Nathan arriving to Therapy
Exterior – Tom and Susan Nathan
BREAK BREAK BREAK 6 – Therapy day 2 – part 1 Interior Office Tom, Nathan 4 – Therapy day 1 Interior Office Tom, Nathan 2 – Therapy day 1 Interior Office Tom, Nathan BREAK BREAK BREAK 9 – Cemetery Scene Exterior Nathan 10 – Puts photo on table Interior Nathans living
room Nathan
5 – Bed Scene Interior – Nathans bedroom
Nathan
I have scheduled to shoot this way because I am able to do all of Sarahs scene first thing in the morning, that way she isnt waiting around all day. The next person who’s scenes will be completed is Susan. This will work out more efficient because Nathan and Tom are the main characters therefore this way I am able to have the rest of the day to spend on their parts. I have left the Nathan only scenes till the end because theses can always be done the following day if we run out of time.
Test shots Prior to my shoot, I had a day with Warren where I was filming just his Nathan parts. In the past I have always shot on my Canon 550D DSLR camera and recorded audio separately. However, due to the fact that I was shooting individually I decided I would use at camera that recorded audio and video together. I used a Sony NX5. I took this to do my shoot with Warren. However, due to being inexperience using this camera my test shots came out grainy and poor quality therefore this will need to be re shot as it didn’t achieve the aesthetics I was hoping for. I am pleased with the way the audio turned out, and having the video and audio recorded into one made it a lot easy and a lot less time consuming when I was putting this rough cut of it together. These can be found via these links below: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3yxJBVWM3Zc http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aSjlMCJ5sXA http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UQir11JGPHk
POST PRODUCTION Rough Edit https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2UNXrm29WFg This is my link for my first rough edit. I am pleased with it however, there are improvements that I need to make. The second therapy scene is very grainy. This can be fixed in post by using a De-‐Noiser to remove the grain. The audio hiss can be removed using Abode Audition where I can select a section which will allow me to remove this. I feel that in the second therapy scene there needs to be more close ups, it is the more intimate therapy session when the relationship changes between Tom and Nathan from a doctor/patient relationship to a Father in Law/Son in Law. The cuts will need to be tighter but this is just the main layout of it. I am going to re shoot some of it to improve the quality. Final Film http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sAKyMBqPen8&feature=youtu.be My final film link. I am really happy with the way the film has turned out. The effects that I used on the bed scene was under Magic Bullet Looks. This was also applied to the second therapy scene using a warm present as I wanted the tone of the piece to match what was happening and as this is the more intimate scene I wanted the warm tone to it. I think the music (done by class 52 music LTD) fits very well matching everything that happens in the scene.