The qualita+ve-quan+ta+ve analysis of Fahrenheit 451°: mapping the linguis+c make-up of a literary text Marina Gorlach, Metropolitan State University of Denver
The qualita+ve-quan+ta+ve analysis of Fahrenheit 451°:
mapping the linguis+c make-up of a literary text
MarinaGorlach,MetropolitanStateUniversityofDenver
The text • Fahrenheit451°isalyricalan7-utopia,ordystopiathatreflectsthemassivea=ackofthe‘consumerciviliza7on’onthetradi7onalvaluesofsociety.
• Thesciencefic7ongenreisusedtodepictatotalitarianregimesacrificingindividualexpressionandembracingtoabolishindependentthinking.
• Plotinanutshellrevolvesaroundasingleideathatfirefighterssetfires.Themaincharacter,GuyMontag,afirefighter,goesalongwayfromburningbookstoanac7veprotestandfinallyjoinsagroupofHarvardgraduateswhomemorizedhundredsofbooks.HiswifeMildredandhergirlfriendsrepresentthesocietyMontagrebelsagainst.HisbosscaptainBea:y,awell-educatedman,isthemainproponentoftherulingideology.Thesocietycravingjustfunandfireisconsumedbytheatomicwarandfacesannihila7on.Montagand‘people-books’survivetorebuildtheworldandsavetheciviliza7on.
The message
Themainideaisinterpreted
differentlyevenbyBradburyhimselfatdifferent7mepoints.
Late1950s:aliena;onofpeoplebymedia.
1979’sedi7on:cri;cismofstate-
sponsoredcensorship
2007’sinterview:cri;cismofthe
effectsoftelevisionandmassmediaonthereadingofliterature.
Thequan7ta7ve-qualita7veanalysisofthetextpointsinaslightlydifferentdirec7on,though.
Word systems • Thewordsystemisamatrixofwordswithinaspokenorwri=entextwithacommondenominatorwhichmaybeseman7c,phonological,etymological,conceptualorassocia7ve(Aphek,Tobin1988:3).
WordSystemsinBradbury’sFahrenheit451°
1. Seman7cConceptualAssocia7veSystems2. dark–cold–empty
3. show–stage–circus-carnival4. fun–happiness
1. Syntac7cSystems2. telegraphiclanguage
3. tag-ques;ons
Stylis7cSysteminteriormonologue
PhonologicalAssocia7veSystem
soundsymbolism-[s]
MetaphoricSystemhandsandbodyparts
The seman+c conceptual associa+ve system ‘dark – cold - empty’
• Heopenedthebedroomdoor.Itwaslikecomingintothecoldmarbledroomofamausoleuma^erthemoonhadset.Completedarkness,notahintofasilverworldoutside,thewindows7ghtlyshut,thechamberatomb-worldwherenosoundfromthegreatcitycouldpenetrate.Theroomwasnotempty.(35)• Darkness.Withoutturningonthelightheimaginedhowthisroomwouldlook.Hiswifestretchedonthebed,uncoveredandcold,likeabodydisplayedonthelidofatomb,immovable...Theroomwasindeedempty.…Theroomwascoldbutnonethelesshefelthecouldnotbreathe.…So,withthefeelingofamanwhowoulddieinthenexthourforlackofair,hefelthiswaytowardhisopen,separate,andthereforecoldbed.Hestoodverystraightandlistenedtothepersononthedarkbedinthecompletelyfeaturelessnight.(36)
The seman+c conceptual associa+ve system ‘dark – cold - empty’
• Thewomanonthebedwasnomorethanahardstratumofmarbletheyhadreached.Goon,anyway,shovetheboredown,slushuptheemp7ness,ifsuchathingcouldbebroughtoutinthethrobofthesuc7onsnake.Diditdrinkdarkness?(38)• A^erthat,Clarissewasgone.…Thelawnwasempty,thetreesempty,thestreetempty…(51)• Thevoiceclockmournedoutthecoldhourofacoldmorningofas7llcolderyear.(52)• “Whoisit?”“Whowoulditbe?”saidMontag,leaningbackagainstthecloseddoorinthedark.Heheldhispantsoutintoanabyssandletthemfallintodarkness.…Hebalancedinspacewiththebookinhisswea7ngcoldfingers.…Hestumbledtowardsthebedandshovedthebookclumsilyunderthecoldpillow.(60)
The seman+c conceptual associa+ve system ‘dark – cold - empty’
• Helayfaracrosstheroomfromher,onawinterislandseparatedbyanemptysea.(60)• Andherememberedthinkingthenthatifshedied,hewascertainhewouldn’tcry…asillyemptymannearasillyemptywoman,whilethehungrysnakemadehers7llmoreempty.…Howdoyougetsoempty?hewondered.Whotakesitoutofyou?(62)• Thethreewomenfidgetedandlookednervouslyattheemptymud-coloredwalls.…Thethreeemptywallsoftheroomwerelikethepalebrowsofsleepinggiantsnow,emptyofdreams.(103-4)• Theroomwasblazinghot,hewasallfire,hewasallcoldness;theysatinthemiddleofanemptydesertwiththreechairsandhimstanding…Thenhebegantoreadinalow,stumblingvoice…andhisvoicewentacrossthedesert,intothewhiteness,andaroundthethreesigngwomenthereinthegreathotemp7ness.(107)
The seman+c conceptual associa+ve system ‘dark – cold - empty’
• Andheshotaboltateachofthethreeblankwallsandthevacuumhissedoutathim.Theemp7nessmadeanevenemp7erwhistle,asenselessscream.Hetriedtothinkaboutthevacuumuponwhichthenothingnesshadperformed,buthecouldnot.Hecutoffitsterribleemp7ness,drewbackandgavetheen7reroomagi^ofonehugebrightyellowflowerofburning.(120)• Hewascrushedbydarkness…Hefeltbackunderthebreakingcurveofdarknessandsoundandsmell,hisearsroaring.Thisdarklandrisingwaslikethatdayinhischildhood,swimming,whenfromnowherethelargestwaveinthehistoryofrememberingslammedhimdowninsaltmudandgreendarkness…(142)• Hestoodbreathing,andthemorehebreathedthelandin,themorehewasfilledupwithallthedetailsoftheland.Hewasnotempty.Therewasmorethanenoughtofillhim.Therewouldalwaysbemorethanenough.(144)
Quan+ta+ve data on the ‘dark-cold-empty’ system • Darkanditsderiva7ves(darkness,darker)-62tokens• Coldanditsderiva7ves(coldness,colder)-33tokens• Emptyanditsderiva7ves(emptying,emp<ness)-43tokens
The phonological associa+ve system:
sound symbolism [s] • Itwasa[s]pecialpleasureto[s]eethingseaten,to[s]eethings
blackenedandchanged.Withthebra[ss]nozzleinhisfi[s]t[s],withthi[s]greatpython[s]pigngit[s]venomous[s]kero[s]eneupontheworld…(29)• Later,goingto[s]leep,hewouldfeelthefiery[s]mile[s]7llgrippedbyhisfa[s]cemu[s]cles,inthedark.(29)• He[s]lidtoa[s]queakinghalt…Hewalkedoutofthefire-[s]ta7onandalongthemidnight[s]treettowardthe[s]ubwaywherethe[s]ilent,air-propelledtrain[s]lid[s]oundle[ss]lydownit[s]lubricatedflueintheearthandlethimoutwithagreatpuffofwarmairontothecream-7lede[s]calatorrisingtothe[s]uburb.(30)
The phonological associa+ve system:
sound symbolism [s] • On[s]ceasachildhehad[s]atuponayellowdunebythe[s]eainthe
middleoftheblueandhot[s]ummerday,tryingtofilla[s]ievewith[s]and,because[s]omecruelcousinhad[s]aid,“Fillthi[s][s]ieveandyou’llgetadime!”Andthefa[s]terhepoured,thefa[s]terit[s]i^edthroughwithahotwhi[s]pering.Hishandswere7red,the[s[]andwasboiling,the[s]ievewasempty.[S]eatedthereinthemid[s]tofJuly,withouta[s]ound,hefeltthetearsmovedownhischeek[s].(89-90)• TheMechanicalHoundwasgone.It[s]kennelwasemptyandthefirehou[s]estoodallaboutinpla[s]ter[s]ilen[s]ceandtheorange[S]alamander[s]leptwithit[s]kero[s]eneinit[s]bellyandthefire-throwerscro[ss]eduponit[s]flank[s]andMontagcameinthroughthe[s]ilen[s]ceandtouchedthebra[ss]poleand[s]lidupinthedarkair.(111)
The syntac+c system: telegraphic language
• Hiswifesaid,“Idon’tknowwhyIshouldbesohungry.”“You–““I’mhungry.”“Lastnight,”hebegan.“Didn’tsleepwell.Feelterrible,”shesaid.“God,I’mhungry.Ican’tfigureit.”“Lastnight–“hesaidagain.Shewatchedhislipscarefully.“Whataboutlastnight?”(41)• “Ihadaniceevening,”shesaid,inthebathroom.“Whatdoing?”“Theparlour.”“Whatwason?”“Programmes.”“Whatprogrammes?”“Someofthebestever.”“Who?”“Oh,youknow,thebunch.”(68)
The syntac+c system: telegraphic language
• “Youknow,thehigh-schoolgirl.Clarisse,hernameis.”“Oh,yes,”saidhiswife.“Ihaven’tseenherforafewdays–fourdaystobeexact.Haveyouseenher?”“No.”“I’vemeanttotalktoyouabouther.Strange.”“Oh,Iknowtheoneyoumean.”“Ithoughtyouwould.”“Her,”saidMildredinthedarkroom.“Whatabouther?”askedMontag.“Imeanttotellyou.Forgot.Forgot.”“Tellmenow.Whatisit?”“Ithinkshe’sgone.”“Gone?”“Wholefamilymovedoutsomewhere.Butshe’sgoneforgood.Ithinkshe’sdead.”(66)
The syntac+c system: telegraphic language
• "Doesn'teveryonelooknice!""Nice.“"Youlookfine,Millie!""Fine.“"Everyonelooksswell.""Swell!“"Isn'tthisshowwonderful?"criedMildred."Wonderful!"(102)
The syntac+c system: tag-ques+ons
• [Bea=y[:"Youlikebaseball,don'tyou,Montag?""Baseball'safinegame."Bea=ywentonasifnothinghadhappened."Youlikebowling,don'tyou,Montag?"(73)• [Bea=y]:"Askyourself,Whatdowewantinthiscountry,aboveall?Peoplewanttobehappy,isn'tthatright?Iwanttobehappy,peoplesay.Well,aren'tthey?Don'twekeepthemmoving,don'twegivethemfun?That'sallwelivefor,isn'tit?Forpleasure,for77lla7on?Andyoumustadmitourcultureprovidesplentyofthese."(75-76)
The syntac+c system: tag-ques+ons
• [Millie]:"Youaregoingtoworktonight,though,aren'tyou?"(79)• [Millie]:"They'dputyouinjail,wouldn'tthey?"(80)• [Millie]:"You'vegottohanditbacktonight,don'tyouknow?CaptainBea=yknowsyou'vegotit,doesn'the?"(88)
The metaphoric system ‘hands and body parts’
• Hefelthischestchoppeddownandsplitapart.Hefelthishandplungetowardthetelephone.Hefelthislipsmove,brushingthemouthpieceofthephone....Hestoodshiveringinthedark,andlethislipsgoonmovingandmoving.(37)• Montag’shandclosedlikeamouth,crushedthebookwithwilddevo7on,withaninsanityofmindlessnesstohischest.Montaghaddonenothing.Hishandhaddoneitall,hishand,withabrainofitsown,withaconscienceandacuriosityineachtremblingfinger,hadturnedthief.Hegazed,shaken,atthatwhitehand.Hehelditwayout,asifhewerefar-sighted.Hehelditclose,asifhewereblind.(57)
The metaphoric system ‘hands and body parts’
• Soitwasthehandthatstarteditall.Hishandshadbeeninfected,andsoonitwouldbehisarms.Hecouldfeelthepoisonworkinguphiswristsandintohiselbowsandhisshoulders.Hishandswereravenous.Andhiseyeswerebeginningtofeelhunger,asiftheymustlookatsomething,anything,everything.(60)• Montag'shandspickeduptheBible.Hesawwhathishandshaddoneandhelookedsurprised.…Hishands,bythemselves,liketwomenworkingtogether,begantoripthepagesfromthebook.Thehandstoretheflyleafandthenthefirstandthenthesecondpage.Montaglethishandscon7nue.(98)
The metaphoric system ‘hands and body parts’
• InBea=y'ssight,Montagfelttheguiltofhishands.…IfBea=ysomuchasbreathedonthem,Montagfeltthathishandsmightwither,turnoverontheirsides,andneverbeshockedtolifeagain;theywouldbeburiedfortherestofhislifeinhiscoat-sleeves,forgo=en.Forthesewerethehandsthathadactedontheirown,nopartofhim,herewaswheretheconsciencefirstmanifesteditselftosnatchbooks,andnow,inthefirehouse,thesehandsseemedglovedwithblood.(112)• Handsorhand–141token• Arms–17tokens
The stylis+c system: interior monologue
• Therearetoomanyofus,hethought.Therearebillionsofusandthat'stoomany.Nobodyknowsanyone.Strangerscomeandviolateyou.Strangerscomeandcutyourheartout.Strangerscomeandtakeyourblood.GoodGod,whowerethosemen?Ineversawthembeforeinmylife!(39)• ...andhewantedtocallouttoher,howmanyhaveyoutakentonight!thecapsules!howmanywillyoutakelaterandnotknow?andsoon,everyhour!ormaybenottonight,tomorrownight!(62)• Well,hethought,let'sseehowbadlyoffyouare.Onyourfeetnow.Easy,easy...there.(65)
The stylis+c system: interior monologue
• I'mnumb,hethought.Whendidthenumbnessreallybegininmyface?Inmybody?ThenightIkickedthepillboxinthedark.It'lltake7me,butI'lldoit,orFaberwilldoitforme.Someonesomewherewillgivemebacktheoldfaceandtheoldhandsthewaytheywere.I'mlostwithoutit.(89)• ...andhethought,inafewhours,therewillbeBea=y,andherewillbemehandingthisover,sonophrasewillescapeme,eachlinemustbememorized.Iwillmyselftodoit.(90)• Bea=y,hethought,you'renotaproblemnow.Youalwayssaiddon'tfaceaproblem,burnit.Well,nowI'vedoneboth.Good-bye,Captain.(123)• ....hethought,youareafool,adamnedfool,anawfulfool,anidiot,anawfulidiot;lookatthemess,andwhatdoyoudo?Afool,adamnfool,gogiveyourselfup!(123)• Hethought–26tokens
The seman+c conceptual associa+ve system
‘show – stage – circus - carnival’ • Alwaysatnightthealarmcomes.Neverbyday!Isitbecausefireis
pregerbynight?Morespectacle,abe=ershow?(58)• Lightsflickedonandhousedoorsopenedalldownthestreet,towatchthecarnivalsetup.(117)• ...thegreattentsofthecircushadslumpedintocharcoalandrubbleandtheshowwaswellover.(120)• ...thehouseburntlikeanancientbitofstage-scenery.(123)• Itwasavaststagewithoutscenery,invi7nghimtorunacross,easilyseenintheblazingillumina7on...(125)
The seman+c conceptual associa+ve system
‘show – stage – circus - carnival’ • Theboulevardwasascleanasthesurfaceofanarenatwominutes
beforetheappearanceofcertainunnamedvic7msandcertainunknownkillers.(127)• Thecircusmustgoon,evenwithwarbeginninginanhour.(134)• ...thebiggame,thehunt,theone-mancarnival.(135)• Theshow'sgottohaveasnapending,quick!(146)
The seman+c conceptual associa+ve system
‘fun – happiness’ • “Areyouhappy?”shesaid.…
“Happy!Ofallthenonsense.”Hestoppedlaughing.OfcourseI’mhappy.Whatdoesshethink?I’mnot?”heaskedthequietrooms.(34)• Darkness.Hewasnothappy.Hewasnothappy.Hesaidthewordstohimself.Herecognizedthatasatruestateofaffairs.Heworehishappinesslikeamask…(36)
The seman+c conceptual associa+ve system
‘fun – happiness’ • Shepausedandranherfingerunderalineinthescript.“’Ithinkthat’s
fine!’Andthentheygoonwiththeplayun7lhesays,‘Doyouagreetothat,Helen?’andIsay,‘Isuredo!’Isn’tthatfun,Guy?”Hestoodinthehalllookingather.“It’ssurefun,”shesaid.“It’sreallyfun.It’llbeevenmorefunwhenwecanaffordtogetthefourthwallinstalled...”(42)• [Bea=y]:“Whatdowewantinthiscountry,aboveall?Peoplewanttobehappy,isn’tthatright?Haven’tyouhearditallyourlife?Iwanttobehappy,peoplesay.Well,aren’tthey?Don’twekeepthemmoving,don’twegivethemfun?That’sallwelivefor,isn’tit?Forpleasure,for77lla7on?Andyoumustadmitourcultureprovidesplentyofthese.”(75)
The seman+c conceptual associa+ve system
‘fun – happiness’ • [Montag]:“…DidyouhearBea=y?Didyoulistentohim?Heknowsalltheanswers.He’s
right.Happinessisimportant.Funiseverything.AndyetIkeptsigngtheresayingtomyself,I’mnothappy,I’mnothappy.”“Iam.”Mildred’smouthbeamed.“Andproudofit.”(80)
• FaberexaminedMontag’sthin,blue-jowledface.“Howdidyougetshakenup?Whatknockedthetorchoutofyourhands?”“Idon’tknow.Wehaveeverythingweneedtobehappy,butwearen’thappy.Something’smissing.Ilookedaround.TheonlythingIposi7velyknewwasgonewasthebooksI’dburnedintenortwelveyears.SoIthoughtbooksmighthelp.”(93)
• “Clara,nowClara,”beggedMildred,pullingherarm.“Comeon,let’sbecheery,youturnthe‘family’on,now.Goahead.Let’slaughandbehappy,now,stopcrying,we’llhaveaparty!”(108-9)
• Funanditsderiva7ves(funny)–35tokens• Happyanditsderiva7ves(happiness,unhappy)–29tokens
Conclusion
Wepresentedtheanalysisofthephonological,seman7c,conceptual,syntac7c,andmetaphoricalsystemsusedtocreateatextualmessageinFahrenheit451°byRayBradbury.
Themessageofthetext–thesignificanceofintellectualandspiritualvaluesforthesurvivalofhumankind–isconveyedbythecommondenominatorsofvariouswordsystems.
Thetextisviewedisaninseparablejunc7onofthelanguagewiththemessageitnurturesandcreates,wheremeansisthemessage.