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E1 book 17

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Gerson Moura

An unique perspective of how the ideal world would be in my perspective.
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... In my ideal world, there wouldn’t be people suffering...

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... In this dream world, people would be free...

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...free from any discrimination based on race, color, religion or any other kind...

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... There be no violence and no thieves...

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... And so, this is what my ideal world would be like... How about yours?

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THE ENDAuthor: Guilherme SilvaEditorial Supervisor: Teacher: Gerson A. MouraIllustrator: JuliusTanPublisher: www.storybird.comDate: II Semester - Summer 2014

A project from ‘Cilc’s Writing Club’: “Café Literário”

CILC: Centro Interescolar de Línguas de Ceilândia

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