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This poem sums up the basic mindset one should have in life. This poem also does a great job of comparing a butterfly’s life to our lives. This whole poem is a comparison of the two. This poem does also follow a rhyme scheme. Life is so precious, and you can not take any day for granted. You may not live to see another day, that’s why you must enjoy every moment.

I loved this poem because it was so positive. It gave off such positive energy and made me want to almost live by these words. The writer made the reader almost feel a certain positivity after you read it. The writer created an effect on us by using the repeating phrase “Life is..”. This poem is words to live by. This is a free verse. This whole poem is a metaphor because it compared life to being all different kinds of things without using the words like or as.

This poem is a free verse and also uses a lot of personification. For example, the phrase says, “your heart sings.” By saying your heart sings, it is giving human characteristics to non living things. I liked this poem for many reasons, most of all because the title is titled ‘Happiness” which is exactly what everyone wants to feel in life. The poem explains emotions of life that everyone wants to feel. Everyone wants to be so ‘high’ on life that they are just in pure bliss. Happiness is the key to being a better you..

This poem is a free verse. The tone of this poem is serious. You get a feeling of strength after reading this poem. The mood is set by making us feel like we can accomplish anything. Life sometimes wants to knock us down, but we have to get back up. We have to keep fighting. The writer compares every negative notation she writes about with a positive comeback and I love that. You have to be positive to get through life.

Life is too short

-Anonymous

I like this poem so much because it is a free verse. This poem creates a certain mood and the writer gives off a hopeful tone and positivity. This poem is one of my favorites because it is everything you should live by in life. You have to believe and have faith. You must value life and everyone along with it. Life is not always easy, but will be worth it if you keep fighting.

ShineLife is something we all share, Just like oxygen, in the air The way we live it, is up to us, With a negative or with a plusLife is something, we should cherish, We never know, when we'll perish Live each and every single day, Smell the flowers, stop and playLife is something, we've been blessed, Choice is yours, choose your quest Follow your passions, and you'll be fine, With the right attitude, you will shine-Anonymous

This poem has a very nice rhyme scheme. The poem is a good example of imagery because it paints us a picture of how one should live their life. It gives off a rhyme with every line. It makes it that much better for the reader to read. It also reminds us that nothing in life should be taken for granted. We should feel blessed everyday. In life, you have to follow your heart.

Life

This poem stuck out to me in a good way because it demonstrates two things you can’t get through life with out; love and respect. We must respect each other and learn to love each other. The writer does a good job with explaining this basically by saying if you do these two things, you will never have a dull moment. This poem creates a serious mood because love and respect should be taken seriously. The writer does a good job of making the tone in this straight forward and serious.

The writer rhymes well in this poem. Also, this poem shows a different point of view that I believe you must follow in life. This point of view is the fact that no matter how bad you think you have it, the sun will always come up the next day. You have the opportunity to make the next day a better one. Through tears of joy and tears of sadness, you will not always be at your lowest low and you will not always be at your highest high.

In a world filled with changeseach and every day

I feel I'm being judgedfor what I do and say

I remember back to Barbiesand play days at the park

When I didn't worry about other people's remarks

Now looking in the mirrorI see to my surprise

A completely different personstaring in my eyes

The carefree little girlI saw at 4 and 5

Is now becoming a teen..Just trying to survive-Misti L. Green

Changing Life

I love this poem because it is about a teenage girl. She is young and is just trying to survive in the teenage environment, that at times isn’t always the easiest. The teenage girl kind of shows that she is just trying to get by and fit in with what she is “supposed to be.” She further says about how she remembers being little. She remembers this because things are more simple. This poem follows a certain rhyme scheme that makes it that much easier for the reader to read. It gives off a positive tone.

This poem has a nice rhyme scheme. This poem is very intellectual. The writer, Portia, does a really good job of stating how life isn’t always easy. The writer says, “there may be some thorns in the way, but there will also be flowers.” This shows that life isn’t always going to be bliss and happiness, but it will be worth it. The tone in this poem is almost a little of both positivity and negativity. It starts by saying how things can knock you down, but shows how to answer to negativity with positivity.

Aubrey’s Poems

Love is red and pinkIt tastes like an apple pieIt sounds like a soft breeze in the airIt smells like a dozen rosesIt looks like a happy, loving familyIt makes me feel alive like I never thought I could-Aubrey Lukacsko

What is love

I believe in the warmth of a smileThe importance of laughterThe love from the friendsThe support from my familyThe rememberence of those who died in war

But the belief that if you love people,To let them go is wrong

I believe that laughter is the best medicineI believe there is nothing stronger than loveI believe in respecting your elders,Loving, caring, smiling

And I believe everything happens for a reason-Aubrey Lukacsko

Believe

I am outgoing and lovingI wonder why our society is so corruptI hear laughterI see life in othersI want happiness for the rest of my lifeI am outgoing and loving

I pretend I do not care when someone hurts my feelingsI feel loveI touch lifeI worry about becoming distant from family in collegeI cry when I see someone get bulliedI pretend I do not care when someone hurts my feelings

I understand life is precious and is a giftI say everything happens for a reasonI dream I will be happy the rest of my lifeI try to always stay positiveI hope I can make others happy as myselfI am outgoing and loving-Aubrey Lukacsko

I am

Blondes have more fun

Just because I’m blondeDoesn’t mean I’m not smartDon’t call me stupidStill take me seriously

Just because I’m blonde It doesn’t mean you can make fun of meIt doesn’t give you the right to assume thingsIt doesn’t mean I’m stupid, I just have fun

Just because I’m blondeStill won’t let people make fun of meCan’t wait until people realize I’m smartJust because I’m blonde, I will still be happy

Life

Precious LifeLife can end, too soonDiseases, suicides, and murdersFamily hurts over their losesTrying to live every moment to the fullest