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AN ANALYSIS OF STUDENTS’ PROBLEM
IN WRITING RECOUNT TEXT AT THE FIRST GRADE
OF MAN KEBUMEN 1 IN 2013/2014 ACADEMIC YEAR
THESIS
Submitted in Partial Fulfillment of the Requirements
to Acquire Sarjana Pendidikan Degree in English Education Program
of Teacher Training and Education Faculty of Muhammadiyah University of Purworejo
KHANIFATUL HIKMAH
102120226
ENGLISH EDUCATION PROGRAM TEACHER TRAINING AND EDUCATIONAL FACULTY
MUHAMMADIYAH UNIVERSITY OF PURWOREJO 2014
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APPROVAL SHEET
AN ANALYSIS OF STUDENTS' PROBLEM
IN WRITING RECOUNT TEXT AT THE FIRST GRADE
OF MAN KEBUMEN 1 IN 201312014 ACADEMIC YEAR
KHANIFATUL IDKMAH
102120226
This Thesis has been approved to be defended in front of the Team ofThesis Examiners
The Consultant I The Consultant II
APPROVED BY:
Tusino. M.Pd.B.I. Juita Triana. M.Pd.NIDN. 0616088201 NIDN. 0622017702
The Head of English Education
Program
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RATIFICATION SHEET
AN ANALYSIS OF STUDENTS' PROBLEM
IN WRITING RECOUNT TEXT AT THE FIRST GRADE
OF MAN KEBUMEN 1 IN 2013/2014 ACADEMIC YEAR
KHANIFATUL HIKMAH
102120226
This thesis has been defended in front ofthe team Thesis ExaminersTeacher Training and Edncation FacultyMuhammadiyah University ofPurworejo
On the date of July 14tb,2014
The Board Examiners Signature
First Examiner : Abdul Ngafif, M.Pd.B.I
Second Examiner : Ismawati Ike N, M. Hum
Third Examiner : Tusino, M. Pd., B.I.
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STATEMENTS
The student who sign in the following:
Name : Khanifatul Hikmah
Student Number : 102120226
Department : English
Faculty : Teacher Training and Educational Sciences
States that the thesis entitled “An Analysis of Students’ Problem in
Writing Recount Test at the First Grade of MAN Kebumen 1 in the 2013/2014
Academic Year” is absolutely her own work and the content of the thesis are not
written by someone else except in the certain parts that have been taken as
reference. If the statement is not true, it fully becomes her responsibility.
Purworejo, July 2014
The researcher
Khanifatul Hikmah
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MOTTOS
So remember Me; I will remember you. And be grateful to Me and do not deny
Me. O you who have believed, seek help through patience and prayer. Indeed,
Allah is with the patient.
(Al Baqarah 152-153)
If you can imagine it, you can achieve it.
If you can dream it, you can become it.
(William Athur Ward)
Do nothing means get nothing (Anonymous)
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DEDICATIONS
With a great of love, this thesis is especially dedicated to:
My beloved father (H.M.Solahudin Afandi) and my beloved mother
(H.Tumiatun), thanks for your love, motivation, and all of you have done for
me. I will never forget you have given to me. You are my everything.
My beloved sisters Hesti Ardiyanti, Febrianti Rahmadani Rahma, Nur Atika
Bazla and Ghoziantun Setya Ningsih. Thanks for your pray, love, laughter,
and all you have done for me. You are my best sisters.
My nice and cute nephew, Muhammad Ahsan Abdilah (acan) who always
gives me smile and makes me smile.
My best friends, amy, mita, esti, septi, nita, widya and others that I could not
mention one by one who accompany me in happiness and sadness. Thanks for
your spirit, help, and friendship.
All of my friends in English Department 2014.
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ACKNOWLEDGEMENT
First and for most, the researcher says Alhamdulillahi Rabbil ‘alamin to
express her high gratitude to Alloh who has given the researcher blessing,
guidance, and strength in completing this thesis. This thesis was written to fulfill a
requirement for obtaining the Sarjana Pendidikan Degree in the English
Department of Teacher Training and Educational Science Faculty of
Muhammadiyah University of Purworejo.
In this occasion, the researcher would like to express her greatest gratitude to
several people who participated in finishing this thesis. She extends her sincere
gratitude and appreciations to:
1. Drs. H. Supriyono, M.Pd, as the Rector of Muhammadiyah University of
Purworejo.
2. Drs. H. Hartono, M.M, as the Dean of the Teacher Training and Education
Faculty of Muhammadiyah University of Purworejo.
3. Semi Sukarni, M.Pd as the Head of English Education Program of the Teacher
Training and Education Faculty of Muhammadiyah University of Purworejo.
4. Tusino, M.Pd.B.I as the consultant who with all his patience has given ideas,
advice, and valuable time in correcting every part of this thesis.
5. All the lecturers of Muhammadiyah University of Purworejo.
6. The Big Family of MAN Kebumen 1, especially the first grade students of
MAN Kebumen 1 in the 2013/2014 academic year as the object of the thesis.
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7. All of the researcher’s friends in English Department on 2013/2014 academic
year of Muhammadiyah University of Purworejo.
8. All of friends who always help in doing this thesis.
Last but not least, the researcher would welcome comments and criticism for
this thesis. However, there is a hope that this thesis will be useful for the English
teaching and learning improvement, especially in the English Department of
Muhammadiyah University of Purworejo
Purworejo, July 2014
Khanifatul Hikmah
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TABLE OF CONTENTS
Title ..................................................................................................................... i
Approval Sheet ................................................................................................... ii
Ratification Sheet............................................................................................... iii
Statement .......................................................................................................... iv
Motto .................................................................................................................. v
Dedications ........................................................................................................ vi
Acknowledgement ............................................................................................ vii
Table of Contents .............................................................................................. ix
List of Table ..................................................................................................... xii
Abstract .......................................................................................................... xiii
CHAPTER I INTRODUCTION
A. Background of Study............................................................................. 1
B. Identification of the Problem ................................................................. 3
C. The limitation of the Problem ................................................................ 5
D. The Formulation of the Problem ............................................................ 5
E. The objectives of the Problem................................................................ 6
F. The Significant of the study .................................................................. 6
G. Organization of The thesis..................................................................... 7
CHAPTER II REVIEW OF RELATED LITERATURE
A. Previous Study ...................................................................................... 9
B. Writing ................................................................................................ 11
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1. Definition of Writing ....................................................................... 11
2. The Purpose of Writing .................................................................. 12
3. Writing Skills .................................................................................. 13
5. Problem in Writing .......................................................................... 15
6. Scoring Method for Writing............................................................. 18
C. Text ..................................................................................................... 28
1. Definition of Text ............................................................................ 28
2. Kind of Text .................................................................................... 29
D. Genre .................................................................................................. 30
1. Definition of Genre ......................................................................... 30
2. Kinds of Genre ............................................................................... 31
E. Recount Text ....................................................................................... 32
F. Conceptual Framework ........................................................................ 33
CHAPTER III RESEARCH METHOD
A. Type of Research ................................................................................ 35
B. Place and the Time of Research ........................................................... 36
C. Subject of the Research ....................................................................... 36
D. Unit of Analysis .................................................................................. 36
E. Research Instrument ........................................................................... 37
F. Technique of Collecting Data.............................................................. 37
G. Technique of Analyzing Data .............................................................. 38
CHAPTER IV RESEARCH FINDING AND DISCUSSION
A. Research Finding ................................................................................ 43
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B. Discussion ........................................................................................... 51
CHAPTER V CONCLUSION AND SUGGESTION
A. Conclusion ......................................................................................... 65
B. Suggestion........................................................................................... 66
Bibliography .................................................................................................... 68
Appendices ....................................................................................................... 69
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LIST OF TABLE
Table 1 The Students’ Score in Writing Recount Text ............................. 43
Table 2 The Classification of the Students’ Writing Ability ..................... 44
Table 3 The Frequency Distribution of Students’ Score ........................... 44
Table 4 The Area of Students’ Problem ................................................... 47
Table 5 The Frequency of Students’ Problem .......................................... 48
Table 6 The Discussion of Research Finding ........................................... 64
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ABSTRACT
Hikmah, Khanifatul. 2014. An Analysis of Students Problem in writing Recount Text at the First Grade of MAN 1 Kebumen in the 2013/2014 Academic Year. A Thesis. English Department, the Faculty of Teacher Training and Educational Science, Muhammadiyah University of Purworejo. Consultant: Tusino, M.Pd.B.I Keywords: Writing, Problems in Writing, Recount Text.
The objectives of this research were to know how was the students’ ability in writing recount text, what were the students’ problems and the most dominant problem in writing recount text. The research was conducted on 5th April 2014 at the first grade of MAN Kebumen 1 2013/2014 Academic Year. In this research, the researcher took one class (X10) as the subject. The class consisted of 22 students. The researcher used writing test as the instrument of this research.
This research was presented using descriptive qualitative method. The instrument the researcher used to collect the data iswritten test. In collecting the data, the researcher did some steps. They were: preparing the research instrument, giving test to the students, collecting data in written form, reading and analyzing the result of students’ writing which was written by the students on April 5th, 2014.
To analyze the result of the test, the researcher used descriptive analysis. The result of this research shows that the mean score of students was 60.36. It means that the students’ ability in writing recount test at the first grade of MAN Kebumen 1 in the 2013/2014 was sufficient. The students’ problems in writing recount text were grammar (34.10%), vocabulary (29.54%), contents (22.72%) and organization (13.64%). Based on the result of the research, it is suggested that the first grade students of MAN 1 Kebumen should be given more explanation and exercise in writing recount text.
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CHAPTER I
INTRODUCTION
A. Background of the Study
Language as means of communication has important position in the
world. English as one of the languages in the world is considered and applied
as International Language. Therefore, English has become a very popular and
powerful language in the world. Most of people in the world use English in
communication. In Indonesia itself, English is the most important foreign
language because English has influenced many aspect of life. The
development of science and technology is also mostly transferred through
English. Consequently, English becomes one of the compulsory subjects
taught in Junior High School (SMP), Senior High School (SMA), and
University.
Based on English curriculum, there are four language skills that the
learners should master. The four language skills are listening, speaking,
reading, and writing. Listening is an active activity that involves receiving,
deciphering, and perceiving a message with intent to respond. Speaking is an
interactive process of constructing meaning that involves producing,
receiving, and processing information. Reading is the process of extracting
meaning from a written or printed text. Then, writing is a skill that learns about
how to express the writer idea in written form that involves the mastery of all
elements in the target language namely are grammar, content, organization,
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vocabulary, punctuation, spelling, and mechanics. Writing needs a complex
process. Consequently, the students may have difficulties to do so.
Most of people know, recently, there is much information which is
transferred using discourse or article from the Internet. It becomes a fact that
writing skill has crucial role. The students should be given many exercises
and practices by writing sentence, essay, paragraph, and so on. So, to support
the language skill especially writing skill, the process of English teaching in
Senior High School is focused on genre. The students are introduced by kinds
of genre in the texts. Those genres involve: Recount, Report, Narrative,
Procedure, Description, News Item, Analytical Exposition, Spoof, Hortatory
Exposition, Explanation, and Review.
For some Indonesian students, learning genre and its writing is
difficult. It is caused by the complication of its rules. Each genre is
characterized by a distinctive schematic structure, social function and
grammatical features. Each schematic structure of genres has a distinctive
beginning, middle, and end structure. The content or the social function of
each genre is also different. The grammatical features of genres also have
their own rules. For example, if students make a recount text, they have to use
past tense. But, if students make a procedure text, they have to use present
tense especially imperative sentence. As we know, there are many student
who still do not understand tense and aspect of it correctly and the teacher
cannot ignore the fact. Consequently, if the teacher does not explain the
schematic structure, grammatical features, and the social function in detailed,
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the students will have a lot of problem in writing genre and they will easily
make an error.
From the explanation above, it can be conclude that learning genre is
complicated for students, because it has language complex rule. In this
research, the researcher chooses recount text because it mostly tells past
experiences by retelling events which students happened. It also can be used
to attract, motivate, inform, and entertain the students. As a result, the
students would be interested in studying English in order to increase their
mastery in writing.
Based on those backgrounds above, the researcher is interested in
analyzing the students’ problem in writing recount text. Thus, this research is
entitled "An Analysis of Students’ Problem in Writing Recount Text to the
First Grade of MAN Kebumen 1 in 2013/2014 Academic Year ".
B. Identification of the Problem
As anyone knows, the students have many problems in learning
English as foreign language. One of the general problems faced by students is
when they explore their idea in written form like writing genres. There are
many areas encountered by the students when they are ordered writing
genres.
From the researcher’ observation, the common problems appear in writing
genres at least five areas; they are problems in content, organization,
vocabulary, grammar, and mechanic.
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The first is content. There are many students who still have difficulties
in producing longer paragraph. When they wrote a text, they also could not
produce an effective paragraph. It is because they have limited knowledge to
develop a topic and have difficulties to express their idea in writing form. So,
it makes the content of their writing is not clear and sometimes are weak.
The second is organizing. An effective paragraph of text is easily to
understand. The good paragraph of the text appears in the topic of the text and
it describe specifically in details. A good organizational pattern of texts can
help the reader understand the author’s message easily. The ideas contained
in genre of texts can be organized in many different ways. If the students
ignore the organization pattern in writing, they cannot make a good writing.
Their writing is also difficult to understand.
The third is vocabulary. Vocabulary has an important role in creating
a good paragraph. By choosing appropriate words, the writer will be able to
communicate their ideas clearly. The problems of vocabulary happen since
the lack of reading. So, the students have limited vocabulary which makes
them cannot easily expressing their idea. Sometimes, the students also use
inappropriate word which makes their writing difficult to be understood.
Those problems can be solved by reading more and practicing writing more.
The fourth is grammar. Having strong skills in grammar allows
writers to get their message to their readers in a clear and understandable
way. It is important to know the rules of grammar and how to use them
properly. However, for some Indonesian students, learning grammar
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especially tenses is difficult because there is no tense in Indonesia. Although
tense has been though since Elementary school, the students still cannot apply
a tense rules. Many of them still have difficulties on it.
The fifth is mechanic. Mechanic word is referred to punctuation,
spelling, and capitalization as well as guidelines to use them in sentences.
Briefly, we can understand its asset of rules to be followed for making a
perfect sentence. A good mechanic makes a paragraph easy to read, and that
will attract more readers. Some students still make errors on it.
C. The limitation of the problem
To avoid misunderstanding to the problem, it is necessary to make the
limitation. Based on the background of the study and identification of the
problem above, the researcher is interested in analyzing the problem at the
first grade students of MAN Kebumen 1 in writing recount text. The
components of writing text include organization, content, vocabulary, and
grammar. The problems are taken from students’ writing.
D. The Formulation of the Problem
Based on the problems above, the researcher would like to formulate
the problems as follows:
1. How is the students’ ability in writing recount text?
2. What are the students’ problems in writing recount text?
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3. What is the most dominant problem done by the first grade students of
MAN Kebumen 1 in writing recount text?
E. The Objectives of the Study
Considering the fourth of problems above, the study is oriented
towards the following objectives:
1. To know students’ ability in writing recount text of the first grade students
of MAN Kebumen 1.
2. To analyze kinds of students’ problems in writing recount text of the first
grade students of MAN Kebumen 1.
3. To find out the most dominant problem did by the first grade students of
MAN Kebumen 1 in writing recount.
F. Significance of the Study
The researcher hopes that the result of her thesis will be valuable for:
1. The teachers
The result of the research not only can be used as the description and
information about how far the students catch what the teacher teaches from
the process of the study. By knowing the most students’ problem in
writing genre, it also can be used as a reference when the teacher wants to
improve students’ writing skill.
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2. The students
After knowing the result of the students’ writing, they will know
how far their ability in writing recounts text. It also can be used as
information about what problems do they have in writing genre especially
in writing recount text. By knowing their problem, the students can
improve their writing and they can make an effective and good text.
3. The other researchers
The result of this research might become a reference for other
researchers who want to conduct the further research on then similar
problem. This research also can help the other researcher in improving the
knowledge about the analysis of students’ problem in writing genres and
getting more useful experience and information in order to be the best for
the future.
G. Organization of the Thesis
This thesis contains five chapters. Each chapter will explain different
topics. There are the following:
Chapter I is introduction. In this chapter, the researcher states
background of the study, identification of the problem, limitation of the study,
formulations of the problem, objective of the study, significance of the study,
and organization of the study.
Chapter II is review of related literature. This chapter gives the readers
underlying theories of the research. This part tries to place the problems into
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theoretical framework which consists of previous of the study, the definition of
writing, purpose of writing, writing skills, problems in writing, scoring method
of writing, definition text, kinds of text, definition of genre, and definition of
recount text. The researcher also presents the definition of syllabi and
conceptual framework of the thesis.
Chapter III is research methods. This chapter contains type of the
research, place and time of the research, subject of the researh, unit of analysis,
research instruments, technique of collecting data, and technique of analyzing
data.
Chapter IV is research findings. In this chapter, the researcher presents
the descriptive analysis and discussion.
Chapter V is conclusion and suggestion. In this chapter, the researcher
puts forward the research conclusion and suggestion.
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CHAPTER II
REVIEW OF RELATED LITERATURE
A. Previous Study
The researcher took some previous studies as inspiration and
consideration in conducting the study. There are two studies about writing
problem which have been conducted and have been becoming inspiration. The
first study was conducted by Doni Ramli (Teacher Training and Education
Faculty Tanjungpura University Pontianak, 2013) entitled “An Analysis on
Students’ Errors in Writing Recount Text of the Tenth Grade Student of
SMAN1 Siantan in Academic Year 2012/2013”. The method used in this
research is a descriptive where the researcher explained the result of research
by describing the data gained. The techniques used for collecting data are
measurement technique and direct observation technique. The tool of
collecting data is written test. The objective of this study is to find out the
students’ problem in writing Recount Text. Based on the finding in this
research, there are 275 errors made by the students in writing recount text. The
error are 95 or 34,54% errors at the writing content of the text, 21 or 7.63%
errors at vocabulary, 123 or 44.74% errors grammar, and 36 or 13.9% errors at
mechanic.
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The second study was conducted by Ellaneri Karani (The Faculty of
Teacher Training and Education of University Palangkaraya, 2008) entitled
“An Analysis of Students’ ability and Problem in Writing Recount Text at the
Eight Grade of SMP N Palangka Raya”. The study applied descriptive
method in order to gain the data needed. The data were gained by using
writing test as instrument. The objectives in this study are to find out the
students’ ability in writing recount text and the students’ problem in writing
recount text. Based on the finding in this research, the percentage of problem
encountered by the students in term of content was 56,6%. The next problem
in term of organization was 59.2%. The problem in term of vocabulary and
spelling was 56.6%. The highest of the percentage of the problem appeared
when the students wrote recount text were in the area of grammar, it was
89,5%.
The similarities among those previous studies and this study are the
objective is to find out the students’ problem in writing recount. And the
differences both of the previous studies are there are five component of
writing were evaluated. They are content, organization, grammar, vocabulary,
and mechanics.
Based on those previous studies above, the researcher is interested in
conducting a research entitled “An Analysis of Students’ Problem in Writing
Recount Text at The First Grade of MAN Kebumen 1 in 2013/2014 Academic
Year”.
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B. Writing
Based on English curriculum, there are four language skills that the
learners should be learned. The four language skills are listening, speaking,
reading, and writing. In this chapter, the researcher tries to explain the
definition of writing and purpose of writing.
1. Definition of Writing
Some definitions are given by linguists about writing according to
Boardman & Frydenberg (2002: 11) define writing as a continuous
process of thinking, organizing, rethinking, and recognizing. It means
that writing is a process by drawing something based on writer
background knowledge and organizes their knowledge into a good
paragraph. So, the students have to read a lot of books to get inspiration
and write a lot to increase their capability.
For students, writing is usually thought to be the most difficult skill
to acquire. In fact, writing is more complicated than the other skills. It is
because writing needs more aspects not only grammatical and vocabulary
but more. It is as Lindstrom in Westwood (2006:57) said that writing is a
complex skill involving multiple processes and abilities that problems
can arise for some students. There is reason to suppose that the number
of students with writing difficulties is even greater than the number
experiencing difficulties in reading with understanding. It can be
concluded that writing is complex activities that every students have
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different difficulties to do it. This skill is more difficult than the other
skill.
Considering the definition above, the researcher concludes that
writing is complicated activities which need of knowledge about what we
are going to write. However, the students can learn writing by much
practicing and reading a lot to get inspiration. The students hopefully can
convey their ideas, feeling, and desires, and knowledge by writing.
2. The Purpose of Writing
There are some purposes given by some linguist in writing.
According to Ur (2003:163) the purpose of writing, in principle is the
expressing the people ideas, the conveying the message to the reader, so
the ideas themselves should arguably be seen as the most important
aspect the writing. It means the purpose of writing is to express writer
idea to the reader in written form.
Meanwhile according to Diestch (2003:4-5) the general purpose of
writing may be primary to inform, to persuade, to express and to
entertain. The specific purpose involves responding to certain need in
writing” From the statement, we know there are two purposes of writing:
the general and specific purposes. The general purpose is to inform,
persuade, express and entertain the reader. The specific purpose is
depending on someone who writes the written.
From both definitions above, the researcher can conclude that the
purpose of writing is to express someone’s idea to the reader in written
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form. It can persuade something, give information, and express
someone’s feeling. Hopefully the students can express their idea in
written form.
3. Writing Skills
According to Brown (2001:357) there are five indicators of writing
skill as follows:
a. The pupils are able to produce writing with the high degree of
organization in the development of ideas and information.
b. The pupils are able to produce writing with the control of content.
c. The pupils are able to use the complex grammatical devices for focus
and emphasis (syntax).
d. The pupils are able to use correct spelling, punctuation, and
capitalization. (mechanic)
e. The pupils are able to use careful choice of words (vocabulary).
Brown (2004:221) says that there are two categories of writing
skills. They are micro and macro skills. Micro skills and macro skills
assist us in defining in the ultimate creation of an assessment procedure.
Micro skills of writing are appropriately applied to imitative and
intensive types of writing task, while macro skills writing are essential
for the successful mastery of responsive and extensive writing.
a. Micro Skills
1. Produce graphemes and orthographic pattern of English
2. Produce writing at an efficient rate of speed to suit the purpose.
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3. Produce an acceptable core of words and use appropriate word
order pattern
4. Use acceptable grammatical systems (e.g. tense, agreement,
plural), patterns, and rude.
5. Express a particular meaning in different grammar forms.
6. Use cohesive in written discourse.
b. Macro Skills
1. The rhetorical forms and convention of written discourse.
2. Appropriately accomplish the communication the communicative
functions of written texts according to form and purpose.
3. Convey links and connections between events, and communicative
such relation as main idea, supporting idea, new information, given
information, generalization, and examplication.
4. Distinguish between culturally specific references in the context of
the written text.
5. Develop and use a battery of writing strategies, such as accurately
assessing the audience’s interpretation, using paragraph and
synonym, soliciting peer and instructor feedback, and using
feedback for revising and editing.
From the explanation above, the students should be able to produce
writing with the high degree of organization in the development of ideas
and information; the content of context; the use of grammatical devices
for focus and emphasis (syntax); the correct spelling and punctuation,
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and capitalization (mechanic); and the careful choice of words
(vocabulary).
4. Problems in Writing
Developing clear and accurate expression through writing presents
major problems for most students with learning difficulties. Sturm and
Koppenhaver in Westwood (2008:57) told us that the composing for
writing involves complex thinking that must integrate multiple
components including the topic of the theme, choice of words,
organization, purpose, audience clarity, sequence cohesion, and
transcription. From that statement, we know that writing is complicated
activity which the competence in writing in different purposes relies
heavily on possession of adequate vocabulary, knowledge of syntactical
structure, and appropriate strategies for planning, composing, reviewing
and revising written language which the problems can arise for some
students.
According to Westwood (2008: 60-62), there are some areas
encountered by the students when they are ordered to write a text. The
main problems appear in at least four areas. They are problems in
content, process approach, mechanics, and spelling.
The first problem is content. Weak writer produce a much smaller
amount of work than a proficient writer. It means that the students have
difficulty in expressing their idea in written form or producing longer
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written test. Hess and Wheldall in Westwood (2008: 61) said that weak
writers spend little or no time thinking and planning before they start to
write. It means that lack of planning is one of the reasons why some
students write very little, and why their ideas are not pretended in logical
order.
The second is process approach. Weak writers usually reluctant to
review, edit, and polish a first draft. Wojosinski and Smith in Westwood
(2008:61) acknowledge that students with learning difficulties are often
resistant to going through the stages of process writing preferring instead
to write quickly to get the job done. Graves in Westwood (2008:61) said
that process approach to writing helps young writers understand that a
first attempt in writing rarely produces a high-quality finished product. It
can be concluded that process approach is very important in writing but
some students do not aware about that so it makes their writing are poor.
The third is mechanics. Weaker writer tend to be preoccupied with
the mechanical aspects of writing. According to Graham and Harris in
Westwood (2008: 62) said that mechanics has been identified as one of
the mean characteristics of students with a specific learning disability in
writing; it is also a common problem with almost all weak writers too.
He also stated that it is reported that 23 percent of students have
significant difficulties with handwriting and that poor handwriting and
spelling interfere with the composition process by draining too much
cognitive effort away from the creative and expressive component.
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The last main problem is spelling. Weaker writer have a problem
with spelling. Learning to spell in a language like English is not an easy
task, and many students have difficulties generating the correct spelling
of the words. They invent to use in their writing. Thomson and snow in
Westwood (2008:62) said learning to spell, like learning to read, is not a
natural language process so students need instruction that equips them
with effective strategies for analysis and decoding words. Spelling
difficulties are present not only in students who exhibit general problems
in writing but also in some students who are otherwise very good reader
or writer.
Meanwhile According to Sadler in Westwood (2008: 58) said that
poor writer typically exhibit major difficulties at two levels, namely
copying with grammar, spelling, punctuation, and hand-writing (lower
level) and generating ideas, sequencing the content and revising (high
level). The content of students writing is less coherent than that of
proficient writers and lacking necessary elaboration of main points.
While Ngabut (2003:20) said that there are many general areas
encountered by the students when they are ordered to write a text. The
common problems appear in at least four areas. They are problems in
content, organization, vocabulary, and grammar.
The first problems in writing appear in content. When the students
were encountered with the problems of identifying main ideas and
supporting sentences, they could not produce an effective paragraph of
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text. This happens since they are not able to formulate main ideas and
supporting sentences into a paragraph.
The Second is organizing. An effective or good paragraph of text
describes all the things in the paragraph logically, clearly, and easily to
understand. The good paragraph of the text appears in the topic of the
text and it describe specifically in details.
The third is vocabulary. Vocabulary plays a very important role in
constructing a good paragraph. By choosing appropriate words, the writer
will be able to communicate her/his ideas, opinions even disagreements
smoothly. By selecting appropriately and writing smoothly linking
words, the writer can deliver so many things gently to the readers in
terms of ideas, opinions even disagreements.
The fourth is grammar. A good grammar of a text describes the
sentence structure comprehensively covers the pattern of sentences
construction and the good order of the words in sentence sequence.
From the explanation above, the researcher will analyze four
common problems in writing made by the students. They are content,
organization, grammar, and vocabulary.
5. Scoring Method for Writing
According to Brown (2004: 242-245) there are three major
approaches to scoring writing performance are commonly used by test
designers: holistic, primary trait, and analytical.
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Holistic Scoring
Holistic Scoring is a method of scoring which each point in holistic
scale is given a systematic set of descriptors, and the reader-evaluator
matches an overall impression with the descriptors to arrive at a score.
Descriptors usually (but not always) follow a prescribed pattern. For
example, the first descriptor across all score categories may address the
quality of task achievement; the second may deal with organization, the
third with grammatical or rhetorical considerations, and so on. Scoring,
however, is truly holistic in that those subsets are not quantitatively
added up to yield a score.
Primary Trait Scoring
According to Weigle in Brown (2004:240) said that Primary Trait
Scoring is a method of scoring which focuses on “how well students can
write within a narrowly defined range discourse “. This type of scoring
emphasizes the task at hand and assigns a score based on the
effectiveness of the text’s achieving that one goal. It means that the
students’ score for their writing would rise or fall depends on their
effectiveness to accomplish the goal of the texts.
The advantage of this method is that it allows both writer and
evaluator to focus on function. In summary, a primary trait score would
assess the accuracy of the account of the original (summary), the clarity
of the steps of the procedure and the final result (lab report), the
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description of the main features of the graph (graph description), and the
expression of the writer’s opinion (response to an article).
Analytic Scoring
Brown and Bailey in Brown (2004:243) designed an analytical
scoring scale specified five major categories (organization, content,
vocabulary, syntax, and mechanics) and a description of different levels
in each category, ranging from ‘unacceptable” to “excellent”.
An Analytic scale for rating composition tasks by Brown and
Bailey will be explained as follows:
1. Organization
Organization consists ofIntroduction, Body, and Conclusion.
There are five levels in this scoring:
a. Excellent to Good (20-18)
Appropriate title, effective introductory paragraph, and
topic is stated, leads to body: transactional expression used;
arrangement of material shows plan (could be outlined by
reader); supporting evidence given for generalization;
conclusion logical and companies.
b. Good to Adequate (17-15)
Adequate tittle, introduction, and conclusion; body of essay
is acceptable, but some evidence may be lacking, some ideas
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aren’t fully developed; sequences logical but transactional
expressions may be absent or misused
c. Adequate to fair (14-12)
Medicare or scant introduction or conclusion; problems
with the order of ideas in ‘body; the generalizations may not be
fully supported by the evidence given; problems of organization
interfere.
d. Unacceptable (11-6)
The criteria of this level: Shaky or minimally recognizable
introduction; organization can barely be seen; severe problems
with ordering of ideas; lack of supporting evidence; conclusion
weak or illogical; inadequate effort at organization.
e. Not college level work (5-1)
Absence of introduction or conclusion; no apparent
organization of body; severe lack of supporting evidence; writer
has not made any effort to organize the composition (could not
be outlined by reader.
2. Content
a. Excellent to Good (20-18)
Essay addresses the assigned topic; the ideas are concentrate
thoroughly developed; no extraneous material; essay reflects
thought
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b. Good to Adequate (17-15)
Essay addresses the issues but misses some points; ideas
could be more fully developed; some extraneous material is
present.
c. Adequate to Fair (14-12)
Development of ideas not complete or essay is somewhat off
the topic paragraphs aren’t divided exactly right.
d. Unacceptable (11-6)
Ideas incomplete; essay does not reflect careful thinking or
was hurriedly written; in adequate effort in area of content.
e. Non college-level work(5-1)
Essay is completely inadequate and does not reflect college-
level work; no apparent effort to consider the topic carefully.
3. Grammar
a. Excellent to Good (20-18)
Native–like fluency in English grammar, correct use of
relative clauses, prepositions, modals, articles. Verb forms, and
tense sequencing; no fragments or run-on sentence.
b. Good to Adequate (17-15)
Advanced proficiency in English grammar; some grammar
problems don’t influence communication, although the reader is
aware them; no fragments or run-on sentences.
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c. Adequate to Fair (14-12)
Ideas are getting through to the reader, but grammar
problems are apparent and have a negative effect on
communication; run-on sentences or fragments present.
d. Unacceptable (11-6)
Numerous serious grammar problems interfere with
communication of the writer’s ideas; grammar review of some
areas clearly needed; difficult to read sentences.
e. Not college level work (5-1)
Several grammar problems interfere greatly with message;
reader can’t understand what the writer was trying to say;
unintelligible sentence structure.
4. Mechanics
a. Excellent to Good (20-18)
Correct use of English writing convention: left and right
margins, all needed capitalist, paragraphs, indented, punctuation,
and spelling; very neat
b. Good to Adequate (17-15)
Some problems with writing conventions or punctuation;
occasional spelling errors; left margin correct; paper is need and
legible
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c. Adequate to Fair (14-12)
Uses general writing conventions but has errors; spelling
problems distract reader; punctuation errors interfere with ideas.
d. Unacceptable (11-6)
Serious problems with formal of paper; parts of essay not
legible; errors in sentence punctuation and final punctuation;
unacceptable to educate readers
e. Not college level work (5-1)
Complete disregard for English writing conventions; paper
illegible; obvious capitals missing, no margins, severe spelling
problems.
5. Vocabulary
a. Excellent to Good (20-18)
Practice vocabulary usage; use of parallel structures; concise;
register good
b. Good to Adequate (17-15)
Attempts variety; good vocabulary; not wordy, register OK;
style fairly concise
c. Adequate to Fair (14-12)
Some vocabulary misused; lacks awareness of register; may
be too wordy
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d. Unacceptable (11-6)
Poor expression of ideas; problems in vocabulary; lacks
variety of structure
e. Not college level work (5-1)
In appropriate use of vocabulary; no concept of register of
sentence variety
In this research, the researcher uses analytical scoring. Based on
Brown and Barley analytical scoring, there are five categories were
given, but in this research, the researcher modifies into four categories
because the common problem encountered by the students when they are
order to write a text appear at least four areas namely organization,
content, vocabulary, and grammar. The scoring as follows:
1. Organization
a. Excellent (25-22)
Using appropriate title, the major point of the text are
supported by effective and relevant orientation, events and
reorientation in detail.
b. Good (21-16)
Using adequate title, the major points of the texts are
supported by acceptable orientation, events and reorientation.
c. Fair (15-9)
The major points of the texts are supported by less relevant
orientation, events, and reorientation.
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d. Poor (8-1)
The major points of the texts are supported by unrelated
orientation, events and reorientation.
2. Content
a. Excellent (25-22)
The ideas are concrete and thoroughly developed. Event
explicitly stated clearly.
b. Good (21-16)
The ideas could be more fully developed. Events fairly
clearly stated
c. Fair (15-9)
Development of idea is not complete. Events rally sketchy.
d. Poor (8-1)
The ideas incomplete, no recognizable events
3. Grammar
a. Excellent(25-22)
Correct use of simple past tense, subject-agreement, article,
conjunction and pronoun. No fragment or run-on sentences.
b. Good (21-16)
There are still few grammar problems in simple past tense
subject-agreement and article. no fragments or run-on sentences.
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c. Fair (15-9)
There are frequent grammar problems in using past tense,
subject agreement, article and conjunction and have a negative
effect on communication. Run-on sentence or fragment present.
d. Poor (8-1)
The paragraph shows that the writer does not master the
numerous serious grammar problems interfere with
communication of writers ideas.
4. Vocabulary
a. Excellent (25-22)
Precise vocabulary usage; use of parallel structures;
concise; register well.
b. Good (21-16)
Attempts variety good vocabulary; not wordy; register OK;
style fairly concise.
c. Fair (15-9)
Some vocabulary misused; lacks awareness, may be to
wordy.
d. Poor (8-1)
Poor expression of ideas, problems in vocabulary; lacks
variety of structure.
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C. Text
1. Definition of Text
According to Knapp (2005:30) said that a text means language as a
system of communication’s organized as cohesive units. In another
words, he also said that a text is any complicated act of communication
such as a greeting between friends in the street, a television
advertisement, a novel, or a film and so on.
Meanwhile Oxford Advanced Learner’s Dictionary stated that text
is the main written or printed part of a book or page, contrasted with
notes. Creating a text requires us to make choices about the words. They
use and how they put them together. If they make the right choices then
we can communicate with others. Our choice of words will depend on
our purpose and our surroundings (context). In other references also state
at the same point that text is a discourse or composition on which a note
or commentary is written; the original words of an author, in distinction
from a paraphrase, annotation, or commentary. And Longman Dictionary
of Applied Linguistics stated that text is a piece of spoken or written
language. A text may be considered from the point of view of its
structure and / or its functions.
Thus from the explanation above, the researcher concludes that text
is a passage that has composition on which a note is written, also it has
structure and function.
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2. Types of Text
According to Knapp (2005: 31-32) there are three types of the text,
they are:
a) Lliterary Texts
Literary texts are the broad range of texts that reflect and
interpret individual andsocial life, whether real or imaginary. These
texts can deal with everyday experience in a way that lifts readers
beyond the everyday. Literary texts often use figurative language
(metaphor, rhythm, repetition) and poetics (language for the sake of
language) to create images in readers’ minds. Text types in this
category: novels, epics, poems, dramas and sagas.
b) Factual Texts
Factual texts are texts that have the primary aim of
communicating knowledge. They present information or ideas and
aim to show, tell or persuade the audience. In the everyday sense they
include all of the texts that weuse from day to day to ‘get things done’.
The text types in these categories are descriptions, explanations,
essays, reviews, and arguments, are more rhetorical and take time to
position and persuade readers.
c) Media Texts
Media texts are any texts (whether literary or factual) thatare
used in channels of mass communication such as print,
broadcastingcable, film and video. Depending on the media, these
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texts can use different modes of communication: writing, speech,
pictures or sound or all of these. The shape of media texts is
determined to some extent by the technology employed by the
particular media.
D. Genre
1. Definition of Genre
There are some definitions given by some linguist about genre.
According to Hyland (2007:4) stated that genre is a term for grouping texts
together, representing how writers typically use language to respond to
recurring situations.
Meanwhile according to Richard and Schmidt (2002:549) genre is a
type of discourse that occurs in a particular setting that has distinctive and
recognizable patterns and norms of organization and structure, and that has
particular and distinctive communicative functions.
According to Knapp (2005:21) genre is:
1. Genre is an organizing concept for our cultural practice;
2. Any field of genres constitutes a network of contrasts according to a
variety of parameters;
3. Genre is place occasion, function, behavior, and interactional
structures, it is very rarely useful to think of it as a kind of ‘text’;
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4. Cultural competence involves knowing the appropriateness principle
for any genre, knowing the kind of margin you have with it, being
able to vary it, knowing how to shift from one to another and how
many factors would be involved in any such shift.
In addition, genre is specific text which has its own characteristic such
as generic structure, language feature, purposes that make it different
among each of genre.
2. Kinds of Genre
According to Hyland (2007:29), There are some example genres, they
are:
a. Recount
To recontstruct past experiences by retelling events in original
sequence
b. Procedure
To show how something is done
c. Narrative
To entertain and instruct via reflection on experience
d. Description
To give an account of imagined or factual events
e. Report
To present factual information, usually by classifying things and then
describing their characteristics
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f. Explanation
To give reasons for a state of affairs or a judgment
g. Exposition
To give arguments for why a thesis has been proposed
E. Recount Text
Knapp and Watkins (2005:223) state that recount is the simplest text
type. Formally, recount is a sequential text that does little more than sequence
series events. It is a kind of genre or text type that has been taught in first
grade student of senior high school. Recounts and stories are typically written
in the past tense form, unless quoting direct speech. Like others stories,
recount has an orientation. In simple recounts, the orientation can be just a
sentence. In a recount there must be a characters, time, and place.
Furthermore, Knapp and Watkins (2005:228) explain that there is a
predominance of an action verbs and temporal conjunctions in recount.
Recount also has the structural features, which described as follow:
1. Starting with the orientation stage, which indicates the people involved,
place, and time.
2. The sequence of events stage, which sets up the sequence of events in time
and circumstance.
3. The evaluation stage, which provide writer’s interpretation of the event or
what has happened. (Knapp and Watkins, 2205:234)
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Example of Recount Text
F. Conceptual Framework
To sum up this chapter provided some of the explanation about
theoretical framework relate the study. The definition of writing is complicated
activities which need of knowledge about what we are going to write. Writing
has a purpose as a media to express someone’s idea to the reader in written
Mt. Bromo
On Saturday I went to Mt. Bromo. I stayed at
Nisa’s house at Cemara Lawang, Probolinggo. It has
a big garden with lots of colorful flowers and a
fishpond.
On Sunday Nisa and I saw Gunung Batok and
went on the scenic ride on horseback. It was scary.
Then we went to get a closer look at the mountain.
We took pictures of the beautiful sceneries there.
On Monday we went to the zoo at Wonokromo.
We saw cockatoos having a shower. In the afternoon
I went home.
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form. There are many general areas of problems in writing encountered by the
students when they are ordered to write a text. The common problems appear
in content, organization, vocabulary, grammar, and mechanics.
The next is about the definition of text and genre of text. Text is a
passage that has composition on which a note is written; also it has structure
and function. Genre is kind of text, defined in terms of its social purposes; also
level of context dealing with social purpose. There are many kinds of genres.
They are recount, description, report, etc. In this research, the researcher took
recount text to be analyzed because it mostly tells past experiences by retelling
events which students happened. This text also has more complex rules
especially in linguistic features then the other texts.
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CHAPTER III
RESEARCH METHOD
A. Type of Research
This study belongs to descriptive qualitative analysis in form of
Qualitative Research about analyzing and describing the students’ problem in
writing recount text at the first grade students of MAN Kebumen 1 in the
academic year of 2013/2014. The researcher took from Arikunto’s note that
descriptive study is a research which is conducted to investigate a condition
or other phenomenon of which the result represented in a report. This study is
called analysis because it tries to analyze objectively about students’ problem
in writing recount text.
This study was aimed at describing and analyzing about (1) how is the
ability of the first grade students of MAN Kebumen 1 in writing recount text,
(2) what are kinds of problems made by the first grade students of MAN
Kebumen 1 in writing recount text, and (3) what is the most dominant
problem done by the first grade of MAN Kebumen 1.
To avoid bias, the researcher evaluated the real condition as
objectively as possible. The researcher took a position as an outsider who saw
the objective condition of MAN Kebumen 1.
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B. Place and Time of the Research
The research was held at MAN 1 Kebumen which is located at JL.
Cincin Kota no 44, Kebumen. This research was carried out on April 5th
2014. The researcher took the first grade students of Madrasah Aliyah Negeri
Kebumen 1 in the Academic Year of 2013/2014 as the subject of research.
C. Subject of this Research
The research subject of this research was the first grade students of
Madrasah Aliyah Negeri Kebumen 1 in the academic year 2013/2014. The
researcher just took one class, X 10 which consists of 22 students.
D. Unit of Analysis
In this research, the researcher analyzes the students’ ability and
problem in writing recount text which focused on the component of writing.
There are five components of writing, namely content, organization,
vocabulary, grammar, and mechanics. But in this research, the researcher
only evaluates four components of writing. They are organization, content,
vocabulary, and grammar. Arikunto (2010:187) states that unit of analysis is a
certain unit that is measured as the subject of the research. The unit analysis
in this research includes what are the student problems and the most dominant
problem did by the first students in writing recount text. The researcher found
them by analyzing the writing made by the students.
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E. Research Instrument
An instrument plays an important role in collecting the data. Research
instrument is a tool which is used to measure the natural phenomenon that is
observed. Arikunto (2010:203) states that research instrument is a tool or
facility used by the researcher when collecting the data in order to be easier in
doing her or his work to get a good result.
The research instrument which is used for this study is written test.
The test is used to know how well the students have already understood in
writing recount text and their problems in writing text. The test focused on
writing past experience.
F. Technique of Collecting Data
Data collection is one of procedure in systematic research. In
collecting the data, the researcher used test method. By using the test method,
the researcher takes all the students’ writing in the printed form. The steps of
data collection are described as follows:
1. Preparing the research instrument.
2. Giving test to the students. The test was given once.
3. Collecting the data in written form.
4. Reading and analyzing students’ writing which was written by the students
on April 5th, 2013
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G. Technique of Analyzing Data
In analyzing the data the researcher applied descriptive method. In doing
the analysis, the researcher goes through the following steps:
1. Scoring the students’ writing
To compute the result of students writing, the researcher use
Brown and Bailey analytical scoring. Based on that writing, there were
five categories given. But in this research, the researcher modified into
four categories that will be evaluated. The scoring as follows:
The item to be
evaluated
Description Score
1. Organization
Excellent, using appropriate title, the
major point of the text are supported by
effective and relevant orientation,
events and reorientation in detail.
25-22
Good, using adequate title, the major
points of the texts are supported by
acceptable orientation, events and
reorientation.
21-16
Fair, the major points of the texts are
supported by lest relevant orientation,
15-9
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events, and reorientation.
Poor, the major points of the texts are
supported by unrelated orientation,
events and reorientation.
8-1
2. Content Excellent, the ideas are concrete and
thoroughly developed. Event explicitly
stated clearly events and personal
comment.
25-22
Good, the ideas could be more fully
developed. Events fairly clearly stated
21-16
Fair, difficulty in expressing idea,
formulating main idea and supporting
sentence, and producing small
paragraph.
15-9
Poor, the ideas incomplete, no
recognizable events.
8-1
3. Grammar
Excellent, correct use of simple past
tense, subject-agreement, article,
conjunction and pronoun. No fragment
or run-on sentences.
25-22
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Good, there are still few grammar
problems in simple past tense subject-
agreement and article. No fragments or
run-on sentences.
21-16
Fair, There are frequent grammar
problems in using past tense, subject
agreement, article and conjunction and
have negative effect on communication.
Run on sentence and fragment present.
15-9
Poor, the paragraph shows that the
writer does not master the numerous
serious grammar problems interfere
with communication of writers ideas.
8-1
4. Vocabulary
Excellent, precise vocabulary usage; use
of parallel structures; concise; register
well.
25-22
Good, attempts variety good
vocabulary; not wordy; register OK;
style fairly concise.
21-16
Fair, some vocabulary misused; lacks 15-9
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awareness, may be to wordy.
Poor, poor expression of ideas,
problems in vocabulary; lacks variety of
structure.
8-1
2. Classifying the problems based on the category of the problem.
There are four categories of the problem. They are content,
organization, grammar, and vocabulary. In this research, there are also
four levels in writing scoring. The students who categorize have
problems if the students writing on fair or poor level in each categories.
3. Analyzing the data
The researcher also computes the percentage the student’s
problems and the dominant problem that students made in writing recount
text. In order to compute the percentage of problems made by each
student, the researcher uses the percentage descriptive analysis. The
researcher uses this formula:
Note:
P : Percentage
X : Total of each category
N : Total of the problem
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4. Discussing problems and dominant problem made by the students.
5. Drawing the conclusion and suggestion based on the data analysis.
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CHAPTER IV
RESEARCH FINDINGS AND DISCUSSION
A. Research Findings
In the research finding, the researcher identified the students’ ability
and problems by reading, analyzing,and describing the students’ writing
recount text. The objective is to know the students’ ability in writing recount
text, kinds of students’ problem in writing recount text, and the most
dominant students’ problem in writing recount text which focused on aspects
of writing.
The research findings of this research are described as follows:
1. Score of Students’ Writing
The data were collected after doing the research on April 5th, 2014
towards the first grade students of MAN Kebumen 1 in the academic year
2013/2014who became the sample in this research. The researcher only
took one class (X10) which consist of 22 students.
After giving test, the researcher collected some data concerning the
students’ writing test result. To compute the scoring of students’ writing
result, the researcher modified Brown and Barley analytical scoring which
being uses four aspect of writing. They are organization, content,
grammar, and vocabulary.
In table 1 below, the researcher shows the result of the students’
score in writing recount text as follows:
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Table 1. The Students’ Score in Writing Recount Text
Students Organization Content Grammar Vocabulary Total
S.1 14 15 17 14 60
S.2 16 15 12 12 55
S.3 16 16 12 12 56
S.4 19 22 20 20 81
S.5 16 12 10 12 50
S.6 15 15 16 14 60
S.7 16 16 12 16 60
S.8 16 14 12 16 58
S.9 16 14 10 12 52
S.10 15 16 12 16 59
S.11 16 16 16 16 64
S.12 17 16 12 16 61
S.13 15 17 16 16 64
S.14 17 16 16 16 65
S.15 14 15 8 12 49
S.16 16 16 14 13 60
S.17 19 17 17 17 70
S.18 15 15 15 14 59
S.19 16 15 13 15 59
S.20 16 16 16 15 63
S.21 16 16 13 15 60
S.22 17 15 14 17 63
∑ : 1328
Mean : 6036
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Based on table above, it could be seen that the student (S.4) belongs to the
highest score with the score is 81. The student (S.15) belongs to the lowest
score with the score is 49. The mean score of students are 60.36.
Moreover, the researcher also categorized the result of the students
score based on the level ability. The level of ability was defined based on
the creation referenced scale ( Arikunto, 2006:245). They are as follows:
Table 2. The Classification of the Students’ Writing Ability
Value Grade Level of achievement
80- 100 A Excellent
66- 79 B Good
56- 65 C Sufficient
40- 55 D Fairly Sufficient
<39 E Poor
In table 2 below, the researcher shows the frequency distribution of
students’ score. The table is as follows:
Table 3. Frequency Distribution of Students’ Score
Score Category Frequency Percentage
80- 100 Excellent 1 4.54 %
66- 79 Good 2 9.10%
56- 65 Sufficient 15 68.18 %
40- 55 Fairly Sufficient 4 18.18 %
<39 Poor 0 0%
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From table 2, the researcher concludes that the students who are
included in the first level (excellent) were 1 student. The students who are
included in the second level (good) were 2 students. The students and the
students who are included in the third level (sufficient) were 15 students
and the students who were included in the fourth level were 4 students.
From table 3, the researcher concludes that the percentage of the
students who belong to the highest level (excellent) was 4.52%, for the
students who belong to the good level was 9.10%, for the students who
belong to the sufficient level was 63.63% and for the students who belong
to fairly sufficient level was 18.18% . There was no student includedinto
poor level.
2. The Classification of Problems
After scoring the students’ writing, the researcher classified the
students’ problems based on the item of specifications. There were four
classifications of problems, namely organization, content, grammar, and
vocabulary. The researcher classified the problem based on Brown and
Barley writing assessment which was modified by the researcher. In this
research, the students will be classified having a problem if they are on fair
or poor level.
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The classification of students’ problem based on Brown and Barley
(2004:243) which was modified by the researcher are described as follows:
1. Organization
a. Fair, the major points of the texts are supported less relevant by
orientation, events, and reorientation. Problems with the order of
ideas in paragraph
b. Poor, the major points of the texts are supported by unrelated
orientation, events, and reorientation.
2. Content
a. Fair, have difficulty in expressing idea, formulating main idea and
supporting sentence, and producing small paragraph.
b. Poor, the ideas incomplete, no recognizable events
3. Grammar
a. Fair, there are frequent grammar problems in using past tense,
subject agreement, article and conjunction and have a negative
effect on communication. Run-on sentence or fragment present.
b. Poor, the paragraph shows that the writer does not master the
numerous serious grammar problems interfere with communication
of writers ideas.
4. Vocabulary
a. Fair, some vocabulary misused; lacks awareness, may be to wordy.
b. Poor, poor expression of ideas, problems in vocabulary; lacks
variety of structure.
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In this table 4 below, the researcher shows the area of students’
problem in writing recount text. The table is as follows:
Table 4. The Area of Students’ Problem
Students Organization Content Grammar Vocabulary
S.1 Fair Fair Good Fair
S.2 Good Fair Fair Fair
S.3 Good Good Fair Fair
S.4 Good Good Good Good
S.5 Good Fair Fair Fair
S.6 Fair Fair Good Fair
S.7 Good Good Fair Good
S.8 Good Fair Fair Good
S.9 Good Fair Fair Food
S.10 Fair Good Fair Fair
S.11 Good Good Good Good
S.12 Good Good Fair Good
S.13 Fair Good Good Good
S.14 Good Good Fair Good
S.15 Fair Fair Poor Fair
S.16 Good Good Fair Fair
S.17 Good Good Good Good
S.18 Fair Fair Fair Fair
S.19 Good Fair Fair Fair
S.20 Good Good Good Fair
S.21 Good Good Fair Fair
S.22 Good Fair Fair Good
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After computing the students’ problem, the next thing that the
researcher did was finding out the problems and most dominant problem
made by the students. The table 4 above shows that not almost students
made problems. There were only 3 students who did not have problem.
They were the students with students’ code (S.4), (S.11), and (S.17). There
were also two students who made problems in all aspect of writing. They
were the students with students’ code (S.15) and (S.18). And there were 17
students who made problem in two or three aspect of writing.
The table 4 also showed that the students who has problem in
organization are 6 students. The students who has problem in content are 10
students. The students who has problem in grammar are 15 students and the
students who has problem in vocabulary are 13 students. From the table
above we can conclude that the dominant problem made by the students
were on grammar aspect.
In the table 5 below, the researcher shows the frequency distribution
based on the area of students’ problems. The table is as follows:
Table 5. Frequency Distribution of Students’ Problem
No Problem Total Percentage
1 Organization 6 13.64%
2 Content 10 22.72%
3 Grammar 15 34.10%
4 Vocabulary 13 29.54%
Total 44 100%
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The table 5 above showed the problems made by the students. The
students made problem in organization, content, grammar, and vocabulary
in different percentage. Based on the table above, it was clear that the
grammar was the most dominant problem made by the students. It has the
highest percentage, namely 34.10%. It indicates that the students have
problem in using simple past tense, subject agreement, conjunction, and still
have difficulties in making a complete sentence.
The second rank of problems made was on vocabulary. The
percentage of problem in vocabulary was about 29.54%. It means that when
students write a sentence, their writing have poor expression of ideas, some
vocabulary misused and wordy. It showed that the students still have
difficulties in attempting a good vocabulary, not wordy and simple sentence.
In this research, the vocabulary problem appeared when they create wordy
sentence.
In this research, content was on the third rank. The percentage of
problem in content was 22.72%. Based on students writing shown that the
students still have difficulty in producing effective idea and formulate main
and supporting idea. Students also have difficulties in expressing their idea
in written form. So it makes their writing weak and not clear.
The less frequent problem that the students made was in
organization. It had the lowest percentage among the item of problems
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namely 13.64%. It means that there were only few students who still
supported their orientation, events and reorientation mediocre.
B. Discussion
After showing the research finding, the researcher is going to discuss
about the result of students’ writing ability and problems analysis. The
discussion of students’ writing ability and problem analysis is described as
follow:
1. Analysis of Students’ Writing Ability
In this section, the researcher discusses the students’ writing
ability in writing recount text by analyzing students’ written test.
Based on research finding, the mean score of students’ writing was
60.36. It means that the students were on sufficient level. The interval
score of sufficient level is 60-65. The discussions of students’ ability
in detail are as follows:
a. Excellent level
The student (S.5) got the highest level which score of her
writing is 81. It came up because the students can fulfill one
excellent and three levels of good in aspects of writing. The major
points of the student’s recount text are supported by acceptable
orientation, events and reorientation. The ideas are concrete and
thoroughly developed and events clearly stated. There is only few
grammar problems in simple past tense and no fragment run on
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sentence present. The students attempted variety good
vocabulary, not wordy and style fairly concise.
b. Good Level
There were two students who in good level. They were
student (S.14) with the score 66 and student (S.17) with the score
70. Both of them could reach the good level in all aspect of
writing. Both of the texts are supported by acceptable orientation,
events and reorientation. The ideas could more fully develop and
events fairly clearly stated even if there are still few grammar
problemsin simple past tense, pronoun but there is no fragment
and run-on sentence. The students attempt good vocabulary and
the style not wordy.
c. Sufficient Level
There were 15 students who in sufficient level. The student
(S.13) and (S.11) got the highest sufficient level which the score
is 64 and the student (S.3) got the lowest of sufficient level which
the score is 56. Most of students who were in sufficient level have
one or more than one fair level in aspect of writing.
d. Fairly Sufficient Level
There were 4 students in fairly sufficient level. The student
(S.15) had the lowest score of this level with the score is 49. The
student got three fair levels in organization, content and
vocabulary and one poor level in grammar. The students got poor
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level in grammar because the paragraph showed that the writer
does not master the numerous serious grammar problems and the
problem had a negative effect on communication.
2. Analysis of Students Problem
In this section, the researcher discusses the students’ problem.
The researcher takes the problem from the students writing test. The
following is the example of students writing which has problem in
aspects of writing.
To specify the students problem that the students made in
writing recount text, the problems classified into four aspect of
writing, namely organization, content, grammar, and vocabulary.
The analysis of the students’ problem based on the aspect of
writing is presented as follows:
a. Organization
1) Interpretation of Orientation Analysis
Based on the students writing, the orientation analysis
of students’ works in writing recount text was still less
relevant. Some of students did not understand how to write
orientation correctly. Few of them write the series of events
in orientation paragraph. It can be seen from the example
below:
Formely . . . time I still sit in bench MTs, I once similar
to gift my mother, for follow to Somalangu. That actually
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already routine quality gift in habitant my village. This is one
year two river. Because I no wish disappointed my mother,
Final I shall for accompany my mother to Somalangu. I’m
leave fromhous possibly strike 14.30 WIB.(Text. 15).
“On the first id day I wake up at 5 clock. I made my bed
was neatly, then I had Pray Subuh and I got take a bath, the
clock was 06.30 time to IdulFiti pray. After pray idulfitri, I ate
with my family.” (text.18)
Both paragraph above not only refer to a background of
information about who, what, when, and where the experience
happened, but also tells about series of events. So, it can be
concluded that the orientation of student writing in recount text
is still less relevant because a good and relevant orientation
should only tell about the background information by
introducing the participant and the setting of the past
experience.
2) Interpretation of Events Analysis
In this part, the events analysis of students’ works in
writing recount text was relevant. Most of students know that
the function of the second schematic structure of recount text is
to retell series of events which happened in the past. It can be
seen from the example below:
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Point in road to Somalangu my bike ran out of petrol and
fortunately, I was close to the gas station, because I fear that I
will add, at the end, I ran out of gas again when already in full
fill my contens walked through the exit. Suddenly, I was in hit
by a bike that runs from the back untul I was throuwn about 3
m from my bike. Luckily, I use so I do not what heim only
scratched the thighs but my bike was broken and bent
proseneing profit gas station attendant would help me.
(text.15)
I and my friends started at 05:00 am O’clock and arrive
in there at 06.00 am. The first, we looked sunrise. After that we
played football together and then we swimmed in the sea . We
were very happy. At 08.00 am we back to home and in the trip
back to home we bought some sea food. It is very fasty. (text.8)
Bothparagraphs above show that the students know the
function of second schematic structure in recount text is to
retell series of events which happened in the past. So, it can be
conclude the event is relevant even if there is still some
problem in content, grammar, vocabulary and spelling.
3) Interpretation of Re-orientation Analysis
The Re-orientation analysis of students’ works in writing
recount text was still less relevant. The function of stage of re-
orientation is to express personal opinion regarding the events
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described. But the students still tell some events in re-
orientation. It can be seen from the example below:
Finally, be able to wolk my bike again and was
gratefullfo the same gas station attendant and I went on a trip
to Somalangu, I thank good up to Somalangustill in good
health. (text.15)
At 21.15 pm we went to our school. We felt so happy
although we were tired because of monkey make us afraid and
run away and at bus we were sleepy. At 22.30 we arrived to
our school. This is the best experience during I was junior high
school. (Text.1)
From the research finding and discussion above, it can be seen
that some of students still make mistake in organizing recount text.
Few of them are on Fair level. It is because the students still wrote
less relevant orientation and reorientation. So, it can be conclude if
the students still have a problem in organizing a recount text.
b. Content
The descriptions of content problem in fair level are the
students have difficulty in expressing idea and only producing
small paragraph. The descriptions in poor level are the ideas of
writing incomplete, no recognizable events. The example of
students’ problem in content as follows:
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Holiday to Jakarta
Last Holiday I went to Jakarta. I went to Jakarta in the
morning. I went to Jakarta with my father. I went by bus.
First Day at Jakarta, my hearted beated. Last time I and my
father to cousin home. I went by Bajaj, arrive in the home, I rest,
Last day I wolked around Jakarta. Fulday I walked around
Jakarta with my father. I rest in the causin home. Last day I
went to back in the Kebumen.
I think very happy in the Jakarta. Jakarta is amazing city.
Unfortable experience. (Text.5)
From the students’ writing above, we know that the student
has difficulty to formulate main idea and develop supporting
idea. It is still very difficult to students to create an effective
paragraph. The students writing still was on fair level.
c. Grammar
The most difficulties that the researcher finds were grammar.
The descriptions of grammar problem in fair level are error in
simple past tense, subject-agreement, pronoun, punctuation,
fragment or run-on sentence present. The problem explained as
follows:
1) Problem in past tense
The problem in this case was related to the use of to be
was/were, auxiliary verbs, regular, irregular verbs etc. The
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following examples of past tense problem are the ones in bold
typed taken form some text, for instance:
1. We were happy and we can took the picture. (text.1)
2. We are very happy (text.3)
3. I help the farmers to planted and harvested the
garlic.(text.14)
4. I and my friends following a competition of footsal. (Text.8)
All sentence above, the students failed to recognize the
use of auxiliary in their sentences. In the first sentence, they
should have used ‘could’ after subject ‘We’ because it should
have been used the form of S + aux + V1 + object. The second
sentence, the students should use ‘was’ after subject ‘We’
because the students talk about past experience. The students
should use form S + was/were + Adjective. The last sentence,
the students should use ‘helped’ after subject ‘I’, and they
should use ‘plant’ and ‘harvest’ after to infinitive. The students
should use form S + V2 + Object + to + V1. So, the sentence
should have been:
1. We were happy and we could take the picture.
2. We were very happy.
3. I helped the farmers to plant and harvest the garlic.
4. My friends and I followed a futsal competition.
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2. Problem in Pronoun
The following examples of pronoun problem are the ones in
bold typed taken form some text, for instance:
1. I picked up she with motorcycle. (text.17)
2. First, me enter to into Vander wick entrancement.(text.16)
3. When my still in bench SMP, I follow to study tour to
Jakarta. (text.19)
All sentence above, the students failed to use appropriate
pronoun in their sentences. In the first sentence, the pronoun
‘she’ should be changed into ‘her’ because the word has a
function as object. In the second sentence, the word me should
be changed into ‘I’ because the pronoun has a function as a
subject. The last sentence, ‘my’ should be changed into ‘I’
because in this sentence the pronoun has a function as a
subject. So, the sentence should have been:
1. I picked up her by motorcycle.
2. First, I entered to Vander wick entrancement.
3. When I was Junior High School, I had study tour to Jakarta.
3. Problem in Punctuation
The following examples of past tense problem are the ones in
bold typed taken form some text, for instance:
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1. When I was third of Junior High School. I and my friends
following a competition of footsal which be held at the
regency.
2. I and my younger sister went to Suwuk beach. To Attenda
Market Night.
3. I very happy,because we could win the competition.
4. After pray I with my family went to my house
grandmother’s in Cirebon City (Text.18)
In the first sentence, the students should put comma
not a full stop because the bold type in the first sentence is
not sentence but that is a subordinate clause. It is because
there is a word “When” before subject “I”. In the second
sentence, the students should not put punctuation mark
because the sentence does not finish yet. In the last
sentence, the student should not put a comma before word
‘because’.So, the correct sentences are:
1. When I was third grade of Junior high school, my friends
and I followed a competition of futsal which held at the
regency.
2. My younger sister and I went to Suwuk beach to attenda
Market Night.
3. I was very happy because we could win the competition.
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4. After praying, my family and I went to my grandmother
house in Cirebon.
4. Run on and Fragment present
The following examples of fragment and run-on are the
ones in bold typed taken form some text, for instance:
1. I very happy (text.9)
2. I felt happy, satisfied and shamed. Unforgettable
experience. (text.11)
3. I wanted to rode a horse although I very afraid with horse.
(Test.12)
In the first sentence, the students present fragment because
there is no predicate in the second sentence. The students
should add to be ‘was’ after subject ‘I’. In the second
sentence, there is no subject and predicate so it also called
fragment sentence. So, the sentence should have been:
1. I was very happy.
2. I felt happy, satisfied, and shamed. It was Unforgettable
experience.
3. I wanted to ride the horse although I was afraid with horse.
2) Vocabulary
The descriptions of vocabulary problem in fair level are some
vocabulary misused; lacks awareness, may be to wordy. The
problem explained as follows:
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1. Some vocabulary misused
The following examples of misused of vocabulary are the ones
in bold typed taken form some text, for instance:
1. Holiday Yesterday, I and my family had holiday to Ambal
beach. (text.11)
2. Time I still sit in bench MTs, . . . (text.15)
3. Finally, be able to walk my bike again. (text.15)
4. She school in SMK Batik 1 Kebumen. (Text.17)
The sentences above showed that students still have
difficulties to choose appropriate vocabulary. They just
change Indonesian word into English. The students are still
not familiar with common phrase in English. So, the correct
word and phrase are:
1. Last holidaymy family and I had holiday to Ambal beach.
2. When I was still junior high school, . . .
3. Finally, I could drive my motorcycle again.
4. She studies in SMK Batik 1 Kebumen.
2. Style wordy and not concise
1. Last week, my parent and I went to Brebes. We went there
by car. (text.14)
2. Last Holiday I went to Jakarta. I went to Jakarta in the
morning. I went to Jakarta with my father. I went by bus.
(text.5)
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3. That experience, really not to can forgot. I very happy when
study in Jakarta.
The sentences above shown that he students wrote their
writing too wordy and not concise, the effective sentence
should be:
1. Last weekmy parent and I went to Brebes by car.
2. Last holidaymy father and I went to Jakarta by bus in the
morning.
3. I was very happy. It was unforgettable experience.
From the explanation above, we know if the students still
have difficulty in attempting variety good vocabulary; not
wordy; and concise. So, it can be conclude that the students
were on fair level and have a problem in vocabulary.
3. The Most Dominant Problem
From the research finding, it could be seen that grammar was the most
dominant problem made by the students in writing recount text. There are
14 students from 22 students who have grammar problem in writing
recount text. The aspects of students’ grammar problem in writing recount
text were in using simple past tense, pronoun, punctuation, and some
fragment present.
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Table 6 below, the researcher shows the conclusion of the description
of research finding. The table below is as follows:
Table 6. The Discussion of Research Finding
No Aspects Problems Example
1 Organization The major point of the texts are
supported by less relevant
orientation, events, and
reorientation. Problem with the
orderof ideas in paragraph.
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2 Content Have difficulty in expressing
idea, formulating main idea and
supporting sentence, and
producing small paragraph.
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3 Grammar Past Tense
Pronoun
Punctuation
Run on & Fragment
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4 Vocabulary Vocabulary misused
Style wordy and concise
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CHAPTER V
CONCLUSION AND SUGGESTION
A. Conclusion
The objectives of this research are to analyze the students’ ability,
kinds of students’ problems, and the most dominant problem in writing
recount text by the first grade students of MAN Kebumen 1 in the 2013/2014
Academic Year. There are four categories which were evaluated. They are
content, organization, grammar, and vocabulary.
Based on previous research findings and discussion, the researcher
concluded that:
1. The mean scores of the students were 60.36. It means that the ability of
first grade students of MAN Kebumen 1 were in the sufficient level.
2. The research findings also showed that the students still have problems in
writing recount text especially in aspect of organization (13.64%), content
(22.72%), grammar (34.10%), and vocabulary (29.54).
3. In this research, the aspect of grammar is the most dominant problem
made by the first grade students of MAN Kebumen 1 in the 2013/2014
Academic Year in writing recount text with the total percentage is 34.10%.
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B. Suggestion
In line with the research findings previously, here are some
suggestions that can be given related to the researcher conclusion and
hopefully can take the benefit to anyone who read this “thesis”. The
suggestions are as follows:
1. Teacher
a) The teacher should give more explanation of grammatical rule in
English, especially in simple past tense. So, the students will more
understand about how to write recount text especially in
grammatical feature.
b) The teacher should give more writing exercise to make the students
more familiar with English writing form.
c) The teacher should give more attention to the weak students in
comprehending the lesson.
2. The students
a) The students should read more and practice to write more to
increase their ability in writing especially recount text.
b) The students should learnt more about grammar and do not
hesitate to ask the teacher if they have difficulties on it.
c) The students should have motivation in learning English.
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3. Other researcher
The researcher hopes that after reading this thesis, the other
researcher can take the information inside it and improve this thesis
to be better, so that the English teaching and learning in senior high
school will be more successful.
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Judul Penelitian
Pendidikan Bahasa Inggris
An Analyisis of Students' Problem in Writing Recount
Text at the First Grade of Madrasah Aliyah 1 Kebumen
in 201312014 Academic Year
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THE LIST OF RESEARCH SUBJECT
NO NAMA GENDER
1 Afi Zahrotul Khanan F
2 Aliza Azka Masih Puji Lestari F
3 Asih Puji lestari F
4 Bina Urrizgiyatish S F
5 Fajar Bogi A M
6 Fajar Musofa M
7 Farah Nadia Alkhusna F
8 Fikri Al Jauhari M
9 Gilangadi P M
10 Indri Muflikhatul Kh F
11 Laeni Khasanah F
12 Muhammad Samsurido M
13 Nida Farhani M F
14 Noni Ashiki F
15 Prawito M
16 Riki Aswar M
17 Robiah al Adawiah F
18 Siti Ngismah Solihah F
19 Supriyanti F
20 Tia Sulastri F
21 Tri sukma Setyana F
22 Uly Fikriyah F
F: FEMALE = 14
M : MALE = 8
TOTAL = 22
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NameStudent NumberFaculty
Title
UNIVERSITAS MUHAMMADIYAH PURWOREJOFAKULTAS KEGURUAN DAN ILMU PENDIDIKAN
Alamat :Jalan K.H.A Dahlan 3 Telepon 1Fax (0275) 321494PURWOREJO
CARD OF A THESIS GUIDANCE
: KhanifatulHikmah: 102120226: English Depertment of the Teacher Training and
Educational Sciences Faculty of MuhamrnadiyahUniversity ofPurworejo.
:An Analysis of Students Problem in Writing Recount Textat the First Grade Students of MAN I Kebumen in the2013/2014 Academic Year.
No DateMaterial
consultationResult Consultant Student
1. March, 6'" 2014 Proposal Revised ~ h II'-
2. March,19"' 2014 Chapter I Revised f-" ~
3. March,22"' 2014 Chapter I Revised ir' (' ff}fv4. April, 2'" 2014 Chapter I Accepted V \~
5. April, 12'" 2014 Chapter 2 Revised tI ~ (r;]n V
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7. May, 7"'20I4 Chapter 2 Accepted ....- (" ne--8. May, 17'" 2014 Chapter 3 Revised V- or/)-
9. June, 4'" 2014 Chaptt:r 3 Revised :-- (7O-r10. June, II'" 2014 Chapter 3 Accepted (V- ~ I dln---
II. June, 17"'2014 Chapter 4 Revised 1-:- en12. June, 19m 2014 Chapter 4-5 Revised I--- ~
13. June, 23'" 2014 Chapter 4-5 Accepted l-' ( ;r~
14. June, 25'" 2014 Chapter 1-5 Accepted ~ ~
IPembimbing,
Tusino, M.Pd.B.INIDN.0616088201
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NameStudent NumberFaculty
Title
UNIVERSITAS MUHAMMADIYAH PURWOREJOFAKULTAS KEGURUAN DAN ILMU PENDIDIKAN
Alamat :Jalan K.H.A Dahlan 3 Telepon 1Fax (0275) 321494PURWOREJO
CARD OF A THESIS GUIDANCE
: KhanifatulHikmah: 102120226: English Depe11Jnent ofthe Teacher Training and
Educational Science"s Faculty of MuhammadiyahUniversity ofPurworejo.
:An Analysis of Students Problem in Writing Recount Textat the First Grade Students of MAN I Kebumen in the2013/2014 Academic Year.
Material ~
No Dateconsnltation
R~nlt Consnltant Stndent
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14. June, 2Sm 2014 Chapter I-S Accepted v.?\ prrr-~
Pembimbing II,
Juita Triana, M.Pd
NIDN.0622017702