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Advanced Higher ListeningCommentary

Exemplification

October 2007

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Advanced Higher Listening Commentary

Introduction

In Autumn 2006 SQA published the first of a series of three exemplificationcollections of Listening Commentaries, produced by Advanced Higher Musiccandidates. These were derived from previous assessment arrangements, but weremade available to provide some level of assistance towards understanding ofstandards.

Following the implementation of Reviewed Units and Courses in 2006-07 a smallnumber of centres has kindly made available a selection of candidate submissionsdesigned to meet the requirements of the current Listening (Advanced Higher) Unit.They are published here, and are accompanied in each case by the necessarysupporting assessment documentation (Assessor's pro forma and Assessor's ProcessObservation Checklist). Associated audio excerpts, although available as part of eachcandidate's completed submission, cannot be reproduced here for copyright reasons.The submissions are otherwise as submitted to SQA: they have not been edited, norhave they been subject to further verification.

SQA expresses its thanks to the candidates and centres that have made this secondstage of exemplification possible. In order to facilitate the next stage centres areencouraged to submit to SQA any suitable candidate materials. These, and otherCommentaries identified in the course of Unit verification in 2007-08, will be issuedas part of the exemplification pack in Autumn 2008.

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Candidate 1

Advanced Higher Listening CommentaryExemplification

Bourgeois - Fantasy Piece No.3Arnold - Fantasy for Trombone

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Name:

Candidate Number:

Advanced Higher Music

A Comparative Study of:

Derek BourgeouisFantasy Piece NO.3

And

. Malcolm ArnoldFantasy For Trombone

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Bourgeois - Fantasy Piece No.3 and Arnold - Fantasy ForTrombone

. .As a trombone player I chose two pieces I had experience of playing

and alreadyknew in somedepth for this study. I also thought I wouldchoose two pieces which I found technically challenging as studying them inmore depth would help me to understand more why they are difficultand beable to applythat new understanding of the pieces to my playing. Both arefrom the same period (20th Century) and are unaccompanied works butcontrast greatly in style.

The first piece I chose wasDerek Bourgeois' Fantasy Piece No.3which'is in a book of studies he haswritten for trombone and I have played thispiecefor a longtime. I hopeto get even more to grips with the piece, in thisstudy than I have in my personal practice of it. The second piece I havechosen to be in this study is by the very famous 20th century composerMalcolm Arnold and is his Fantasy for Trombone. This is Cltpiece I haveonlyrecently started to look at. It is a terribly difficult piece to play (as are all theFantasies he wrote for brass) and I wanted to break it down so Iwould beable to look at it in smaller sections and hopefully understand the musicbetter and eventually be able to play it in full.

I hope to show in this studywhat it is about these pieces that makesthem particularly tricky and Why. I would also like to highlight how thetrombone is a versatile instrumentand particuarly how a composer can makeuse of its wide range.

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Bourgeois

The First Piece I have chosen to write about is DerekBourgeois' Fantasy Piece No.3 for Trombone which is a piece forunaccompanied trombone from the zo" century. This piece is astudy for trombone which sets out to test and improve thetrombone players technique and has a huge range going from andF sharp 3 leger lines below the stave all the way up to a top B flatone leger line above the stave. As well as the players range thispiece also tests the players ability to deal with sudden and gradualchanges in dynamics, scale work, articulation and also intonation.This gives the trombone player a vigorous workout in almost allthe difficult aspects of playing. I shall refer to the notes thatappear on the page as they are iii treble tlef but When played themusic comes out a tone lower as the trombone is a B flatinstrument.

The piece is in simple triple time; three beats in a bar insimple timer and the trombone begins with an anacrusis meaningthe music begins before the first full bar. The theme is atonal,meaning there appears to be no fixed key which is signaJled rightaway by an interval of a diminished octave from a G down to a Gsharp (Q1). This interval is most definitely dissonant but is thencontrasted by the next two notes in the theme which create aconsonant sound, the melody goes from a E down to an B; aninterval of a Perfect 4th

• The whole of the main theme is indisjunct motion ( non - stepwise movement between notes). Themusic starts off at the dynamic level of mezzo forte (moderatelyloud) and at a tempo of Allegro Molto (very qUickJY)r with acrotchet marking of 152 meaning 152 crotchets are played perminute (a very quick speed indeed) keeping the music lively eventhough the main rhythms used in the theme are crotchets andminums.

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The next few bars of music are variations on the theme. Atbeat three of bar 2 the original idea is repeated except the F sharpwhich was previously a minurn has now become two staccatocrotchets, creating rhythmic contrast. The next phrase is simply arepetition of the first 4 bars but up a Perfect 5th

• Shifting the samepattern exactly like this is called areal sequence (Q2).

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On beat 3 of bar 8 there is a sudden and dramatic change ofdynamic to mezzo piano (moderately soft) and in bar 9 ana 10 aDiminished B flat chord is played in an ascending broken chordpattern and is followed in bars 11 to 12 with an F major r:crescendoing to mezzo forte with the return of the first disjunctidea, but this time without the anacrusis, shifting the accent andleaping a minor 10th (Q3).

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Although the piece has no fixed key there are many .distinqulshable scales, chords and patterns used. The firstrecognisable scale is in bar 15 and 16 and it is a whole tone scalefrom an G flat up to an F sharp (Q4). The whole tone scale isused mainly in zo" century music by composers such as Debussyand Ravel to create an Impressionistic style. Each note in thescale is a tone apart from the preceding note and there are nosemitone jumps as in major and minor scales. (

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The next section repeats the original theme again and yetagain it is varied in bar 21 to 25 (Q5) when the theme is played upa major 3rd and a triplet rhythm is introduced. This repetition ofthe theme here and at other places in the piece after contrastingsections suggests Rondo Form. This is when the theme keepscoming back in the music with contrasting sections of music inbetween the repetitions of the theme called episodes. The Form

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of this piece is ABACADA with a coda like section at the end. TheA's Stand for the repetition of the theme and other lettersrepresent the episodes.

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The next episode has an example of a tonal sequence in it(Q6). From bars 25 to 29 there are two whole tone scales next toeach other. The first starts on a C and goes on up to an E, this isidea is then shifted down a semitone and the same figure is playedexcept going from a B up to a D sharp.

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This is followed by another sequence of two short passageswhich both have the same rhythm (4 quavers then a crotchet)(Q7). This 5 note whole tone pattern drops (yet again like thesequence before) a semitone each time and finishes with yetanother whole tone scale but this time spans two octaves, is'all inquavers and begins on an anacrusis of two quavers starting on a Gflat (Q8), It reaches a top B flat on the last quaver of the scalewhich is very clever for linking back into the theme as it repeatsthe opening theme up a minor tenth (Q9).

The next episode starts with a more tonal sound. The firstscale passage is a scale of D major to the 7th Degree of the scalebut the 7th Degree has been flattened and on the way down from

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this note it goes through A and D sharp(QlO). This is an arpeggioof an A diminished chord. A diminished chord is very discordantas there are three semitones between each note. There is yetagain an example of sequence (but a tonal one) where the figureis shifted down a major 3rd to a B Major scale with flattenedseventh ending with another arpeggio of an F sharp diminishedchord (Qll). This section of the music is also very challenging forthe trombone player as they have to deal with both gradual andsudden changes in dynamic level. The D major scale starts atmezzo piano and crescendos through to mezzo forte in Bar 42 butthen suddenly in Bar 43 sinks back down to mezzo piano for thenext scale passage. This is very difficult to perform correctly asthe main worry in the player's mind is getting all the fast passagesof notes right and often you can be too eager to get-this correctand overb/ow and not get the correct dynamic at the start of thenext passage.

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After a rising sequence, steps 4 to 8 of a major scale, firstlyfinishing in E flat hitching up a semitone to finish in B then G thisepisode ends with a hemiola which makes two bars of 314 soundlike 3 bars of 2/4 (Q12)and this effect is helped by accents on thethird beat of the bar in bar 52, the second beat of the bar in bar53 and the first beat of the bar in bar 54. In 53 it is signalled for adiminuendo to start and as the music gets gradually quieter at Bar54 there is a bar of 2/4. When a time signature is changed withina piece frequently or if it happens on one or two occasions like inthis piece it is an expample of irregular metres.

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The last playing of the theme comes back with two pieces ofornamentation. The first is acciaccaturas, one is on beat three ofbar 56 and the other is on beat three of bar 57 (Q13) which arealso accompanied by glissandi. An acciaccatura is a crushed notebefore the actual note to be played and a glissando is a slidingsound which can be made easily on trombones from one note tothe next.

This piece finishes with a flourish; a run up on overlappingscales, steps 4 (the subdominant) to 8 (the tonic). They movethrough the keys C sharp major, G sharp major (enharmonicequivalent A flat major), Eflat major and B flat major (Q14).

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Arnold

The second piece I have chosen to look at in this study is MalcolmArnold's Fantasy for Trombone which is the more technically challenging ofthe two pieces. Uke the Bourgeois, this is also an unaccompanied trombonesolo from the 20th century but is in the style of a Fantasy and not a Study. AFantasy is supposed to sound like a improvised piece of music and thismaybe does just fit that description but when looked at in depth it is a verystructured piece of music indeed and not as free flowing and constantlychanging as an irnprovisation would be. This piece is dreadfully difficult as ithas many awkward slide changes caused by many of the techniques thatArnold uses which I shall describe in the study.

This piece starts slightly slower than the Bourgeois but still very quicklywith the speed marked at Allegro (very quickly) and with a dotted crotchetmarking of 112. Although slower than the Bourgeois this is still nearly goingat two beats per second. This piece is however in compound time with twobeats in the bar (6/8) and is in tenor clef which is the clef normally used forTenor Trombone in orchestral scores. Tenor clef indicates that middle C is onthe second top line of the stave. The key signature signals B flat Major andthe piece starts tonally with a small broken chord pattern on the tonic chordaccenting each time the first beat of the bar followed by staccato quavers andcreates a strong sense of the pulse. This broken chord pattern follows thesamashape as an Alberti bass. The piece also starts with a dynamic markingofforte (loud) (Q15).

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The next small phrase in the melody gives a the listener somethingnew and interesting in bar 3 in the form of some syncopation which is not atall featured in the Bourgeois apart from once, right at the end. There is a tiebetween two D's to create this feeling of syncopation. The other effect that isadded to the music is a sudden change in dynamics (which was also used togreat effect in the Bourgeois) in bar 3 to piano (soft)(Q16).

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Although the piece starts off tonally it is not long before Arnold addssome accidentals to make you wonder which key exactly we are in. In bar 4there is a tiny chromatic movement (A, B flat, B natural) followed by theintroduction of a C sharp in bar 5 and in bar 6 there is a broken chord of Fsharp major going 3rd

, 5th, root F sharp major chords B naturals and C

sharp's don't exist in B flat major and so it feels like we are shifting keyalready(Q17).

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In bar ten something very unusual happens for an unaccompaniedpiece, there is a full bar of silence. I think this is to contrast the passagebefore where there are lots of notes and is getting louder through a crescendoto forte (018). This previous passage sounds very much like a sequence butis not as it does not have the same intervals between all the notes, nor does itstay in the same key. I think this adds to the improvisational effect of thepiece.

At bar 11 there is an exact repetition of bars 1 to 6 followed by adifferent idea to round off the repetition of the main theme (019). This timethe music is tonal and stays in 8 flat major not wavering from the original key.This passage has a dominant 7th arpeggio in bars 19 and 20 followed by theroot of the chord played in 3 octaves (020). In the recording by MarkLawrence he plays this with a rallentando to help to really bring out theaccents on these notes and to emphasise the end of this part of the musicbefore it moves onto the new idea in bar 23. 0.1.q + 2--0

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At bar 23 Arnold now introduces a totally new section of music. This ismainly built up of broken chord patterns starting in the key of G minor. Thefirst two are in bars 23 and 24 starting with a 8 flat major chord (secondinversion) in bar 23 followed by a 8 Minor chord in bar 24 broken in exactlythe same way (021). The performance direction marked as well as piano isleggiero which means the music must be light and nimble. It is exceptionallychallenging for the player to make this section sound light and nimble assome very quick slide changes must be made and it starts to touch on thehigher range of the player going up to a top F sharp.

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This section ends with the idea seen in the first two bars of the piecebeing played up a diminished fourth, the idea spread over an E Major chord.This is then played again augmented two bars after with a diminuendo downto pianissimo. It is not exact augmentation of the idea but the way Arnold haswritten this music it gives the effect of augmentation. This gives the effect thatthe piece is slowly dying away (022). Mark Lawrence also helps to add to theeffect of the music dying away by yet again playing this with a slightrallentando.

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The effect of slowly dying away is quickly dispelled with the secondpart of the main theme coming back from bars 3 to 9 in bars. This time it hasdifferent articulation and is at the louder dynamic of forte, this creates a moredramatic ending to this section (Allegro section) of the music. The accents onthe first note of the bar in bars 41 and 43 (Q23) add force to the music and acrescendo up to fortissimo (bars 48 to 49) with a finishing pattern to the musicthat it didn't have before to bring the phrase to a more satisfying close (Q24).

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This feels like the end of this section of music but to fit in with theimprovisational style the composer throws in something unexpected also toyet again test the players range. There is a clef change to bass clef and thetrombonist has to play three pedal notes (8 flat, A, A flat) _ Pedal notes on abrass instrument are in the extremes of the low register and requires theplayer to apply some specific technique. The player must drop their bottomjaw and loosen their embouchure right off to get these low notes. Theserange from pedal E natural (first ledger line below the stave in bass clef)downwards to pedal F (forth ledger line below in bass clef) (Q25). In therecording Mark Lawrence breaks between each of these notes to helpemphasise the accents on these notes and makes the music have moreimpact as it creates a very powerful trombone sound.

This piece of music is broken up into movements and at bar 56wecome to the Andante (walking pace) movement. There is a time.change tosimple time (4/4) and a key signature change to C Major. This is far moreexpressive music than anything I have looked at in this study so far. Amoldhas signalled that music must be expressive right away with a performancemarking of cantabile (Q26). This means the music must seem like it is beingsung. Mark Lawrence makes sure this achieved by adding vibrato and on thequaver passages (Q26) plays them a bit faster adding rubato to the music.Arnold also adds in crescendos followed immediately by diminuendos whichmakes the music feel more expressive.

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The music has an example of a real sequence in it where the melodicidea in bars 56 and 57 is moved down a semitone in bars 60 and 61 (Q27).Another tool the composer uses in the music here to make it more expressiveis slurs over many of the notes (Q27).

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The last movement of this music is named the same as the first .movement (Allegro) but is faster with a crotchet marking of 126 bpm. It staysin simple time like the Andante but but goes back to two beats in a bar like thefirst Allegro. This keeps the same key signature as the previous movementbut because of the accidental marked (B flats and E flats) it feels like theorignal key of B flat major in the first few bars(Q28). Yet again a lot of brokenchords are used in the music e.g. Bar 75 - B flat major, Bar 77 - G Minor.

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Arnold also uses a lot of Chromatic movement in this second Allegro.The first example he uses is in Bar 82 through to bar 84. First the movementspans a Perfect 5th (8 to E) then the next spans a Diminished 10th (E flat to Csharp)(Q29). There is also a small chromatic idea that he brings back twicemore in the movement after its first playing and it is first seen in Bar 87 (Q30).

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Another theme that Amold seems to use in this movoment is therepetition of the same note lots of times after itself and it is always a C sharpplayed at forte or fortissimo using semiquaver and quaver rhythms. It seemshe is using it to contrast the the passages played before and after which areconstantly changing notes and are mainly played piano or pianissimo (Q31).

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In bar 94 Arnold does the same as he did in the first movement with hisoriginal idea and shifts it up an augmented 4th from a 8 flat Major brokenchord to an E Major broken chord (Q32). Here we are able to see a link in themusic between one section and another which helps us see how the style isnot entirely like an improvisation.

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In bar 104 there is an accelerando which helps to build momentum intoa big end to the piece. The accelerando leads into bar 106 where there is arepetition of the first idea at the start of this Allegro but with a marking of Piumosso: (Presto). This means that the music must have more movement andthe speed should now be very fast. This section has a repetition of the maintheme at the start and sets out to stretch the players range once more (033).Starting in bar 109 a G diminished 7th chord is played in an ascending brokenchord pattern until it hits a top D natural in bar 112. The finish of the piece isin B flat major. There is a descending broken chord pattern (on B flat Major)which then hits a fortepiano with a crescendo in bar 116 (034). This suddenchange in dynamics with the crescendo up to fortissimo helps to build up to adramatic climax. The same repeated note figure seen in bar 88 is playedagain but on B flat and the piece is finished on a pedal B flat after a beat ofsilence for maximum impact.

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Conclusion

. .Of the two pieces I studied I think I prefer the Malcolm

Arnold's Fantasy, due to the fact that it has more consonance in itthan the Bourgeois does. It also has nice little bits of tune that hecreates with broken chord pattems and the Andante section wherethe playing is less frantic and more expressive, with more scopefor the players own interpretation. I do hOWever find both pieces alittle difficult to enjoy listening to fully as it does just sometiimessound like scale and arpeggio practice.

I feel since studying these pieces I now understand themusic better and should have greater ease in playing them.Something I didn't expect to be brought out as much is the amountof detail I must pay to dynamic, contrast and also articulation. Iunderstand now that everything in the music must be payed closeattention to and I must try my best to play according to thesedramatic changes and effects the composers are trying to create.

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Bibliography

ScoresDerek Bourgeois Fantasy Piece NO.3

@ "Fanasy Pieces, Derek Bourgeois"" Published by Brass Wind Publications

Malcolm Arnold Fantasy for Trombone• "Malcolm Arnold Fantasy for Trombone"" Published by Faber Music

Recordings

Malcolm Arnold Fantasy for Trombone• From "Trombonolgy" compilation by Mark Lawrence• Tenor Trombone - Mark Lawrence• D'note Classics

Derek Bourgeois Fantasy Piece NO.3• Recording made using Sibelius music software.

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CD of Excerpts

Bourgeois

Track 1 - Bourgeois in FullTrack 2 - Quote 1Track 3 - Quote 2Track 4 - Quote 3Track 5 - Quote 4Track 6 - Quote 5Track 7 - Quote 6Track 8 - Quote 7Track 9 - Quote 8 and 9Track 10 - Quote 10Track 11 - Quote 11Track 12 - Quote 12Track 13 - Quote 13Track 14 - Quote 14

Arnold

Track 15 = Arnold in FullTrack 16 - Quote 15Track 17 - Quote 16 and 17Track 18 - Quote 18Track 19 - Quote 19 and 20Track 20 - Quote 21Track 21 - Quote 22Track 22 - Quote 23 and 24Track 23 - Quote 25Track 24 - Quote 26Track 25 - Quote 27Track 26 - Quote 28Track 27 - Quote 29Track 28 - Quote 30 and 31Track 29 - Quote 32Track 30 - Quote 33 and 34

Some quotes have been grouped together onto one track. This is becausesome of the excerpts a very short and difficult to catch when chopping up thetracks on computer. Most of the excerpts that have been grouped rantogether anyway but some were so short that the adjoining piece of musicwas really needed to make any sense of them. The sound of the Bourgeois isa little limited because of the sound card on Sibelius. It does however,manage to give an accurate overview of the piece.

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Invented in 1841 by Adolf Sax, the Saxophone has, over that past 150 years, beenused in a wide variety of musical genres. I play the Alto Saxophone, so in this"commentary" I wanted to explore the relationship between the Saxophone and its usein Classical music of the 20th Century, so I have chosen the two following works asthe basis of my commentary:.:. "Concertino Da Camera for Alto Saxophone and II other instruments"

By Jaques Ibert.:. "Rapsodie Mauresque for Alto Saxophone and Orchestra or Piano"

By Claude Debussy

Interestingly, both compositions were written during the first half of the 20th Centuryby French composers, although in entirely different styles. Jaques lbert, born in Parisin 1890, showed a keen interest in all forms of art, not just music - something whichgreatly influences his works. Ibert was clearly influenced by others, most notably IgorStravinsky, as the majority of Ibert's compositions show strong signs ofNeo­Classicism - which Stravinsky championed. Thus, a reliance of classical forms andthe use ofdissonance are found in "Concertino Da Camera" - I believe that thesequalities ensure that this work is undoubtedly one of Ibert' s finest.

However, 72 years earlier, another French composer, Claude Debussy, was born, in1862. He was a composer who I believe acted not only the bridge between 19thcentury Romanticism and 20th Century Neo-Classicism, but also invented, or at leastcame to symbolize another style of music: Impressionism. He sought to use lightinstrumental timbres - contrasting with the vast orchestral forces ofromanticism- andalso his instinct to direct his compositions. Contrary to the use of forms and harmonicstructure that were employed to guide composition through most of the previous 400years, Debussy made frequent use of "Through Composition" and dissonance to add anew dimension to his work, and of course, classic symbols ofImpressionism such asWhole Tone and Pentatonic Scales also feature heavily in "Rapsodie Mauresque".

"Rapsodie Mauresque" is a one-movement work, which displays ingeniousorchestration throughout and provides a platform for the saxophone to shine. Thepiece starts in AB form, however no overall defined structure is apparent in "RapsodieMaurcsque"- owing to Debussy's reliance on instinct to guide his compositions.Throughout the work, emphasis is placed on the integration of the saxophone withinthe orchestra, indicating that the composition was designed as an orchestral work thatemphasizes the versatility of the saxophone, rather than a showpiece or Concerto forthe instrument. In general, Debussy blends together the various section of theorchestra very well in "Rapsodie Mauresque", and uses numerous features typical ofImpressionism such as a reliance on various time signatures (often irregular) to createan enchanting atmosphere.

"Concertino Da Camera" is split into two movements; the first movement is inTernary form, reflecting the neo-classical interest in simplified classical features suchas Sonata Form, while the second movement is in binary form. Together, the twomovements form a complete concerto which I believe balances the requirements of atypical concerto - desigued1t9 demonstrate the instruments abilities - while alsocreating a wonderful piece that is accessible to both saxophonist and non saxophone

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playing listeners alike. Overall. the piece is a lively and exciting affair, with the useof defined and intricate sa, themes (supported by the strong orchestra!accompaniment) to entertain the listener and emphasize the brilliance of the AltoSaxophone. Numerous features ofNeo-Classicisrn such as dissonance are also foundin this work. allowing it to seem typical of this early 20th century composition.

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The first 2 excerpts I have chosen to compare come from the introductions of both"Rapsodie Mauresque" and "Concertina Da Camera", which I believe ultimatelyshapes the rest of the compositions. Despite these excerpts being geographicallyidentical, the sections are treated in entirely different ways, which enables these smallparts to represent the style of the entire works. During the introduction of"RapsodieMauresque" (bars 1-13) a pedal on B is used to ease the listener into the music andcreate an air of tension, leading up to the sax entry at bar 14. Within these 13 bars,other features are deployed, such as imitation between Strings and Horns (bars 10-14),to enhance the creation ofa mysterious atmosphere:

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However, the introduction and first theme of"Rapsodie Mauresque" are contrastedsignificantly by that of"Concertino Da Camera". In this work, Ibert wished to create alively and exciting atmosphere that would enable the sax to shine as a prominent soloistrather then use the saxophone as a typical.orchestral instrument. Therefore, theintroduction (bars 1-8) to "Concertino Da Camera" is much swifter and involves theuse of the fuII orchestra to create dramatic intensity. While the piece begins in 2/4simple time, the time signature changes during the introduction, and an irregular bar of5/8 is added to enable a sense of motion to be established. (This mix of 5/8 and 3/4allows the pulse of the music to sway around, which adds to the dramatic nature of theintroduction):

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Bars 1-8 of rConcertino Da Camera" also contain elements ofdissonance, whichbuilds up a sense of drama and excitement towards Theme A - where the dissonanceis resolved by a consonant melodic tune. In addition, it is clear that Theme A of"Concertino Da Camera" is very contrapuntal and polyphonic in texture, as is shownby the three lines of equally important instrument that occur in bars 29 and 30:

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Firstly, the sax plays a warm melodic figure using simple quaver rhythms, whileunderneath the upper strings and woodwind playa bar of descending quavers andsemiquavers, followed by a bar of ascending semiquavers. At the bass end of theorchestra, the opposite effect happens however, as the low stings play legatoascending semiquavers and then a staccato descending quaver bar. This effect ofplacing legato and staccato instrumental lines on to on one another creates a clearlycontrapuntal section of music, where there is certainly more than one distinct melodicline.

Therefore, I believe that the introductions and first themes in both compositions arerepresentative of the full works, as the subtle and subdued nature of the "RapsodieMauresque" introduction suggests an impressionistic piece to follow, while the livelyopening to "Concertino Da Camera" hints at the dramatic intensity of the whole work.

Moreover, one simple but extremely effective contrast that occurs between thecompositions is the use of different types of scales. In bars 48-51 of"Rapsodie

Mauresque", a Whole Tone Scale is used, first played on the sax and then imitated onthe flute; while in "Concertino Da Camera", during bars 111-116 ofMovement 2, aseries of chromatic scales are heard. The use of Whole Tone Scale passages, and inparticular the imitation ofthem on the flute, allows Debussy's music to meanderaround - an effect which appropriately enhances the mood of the section of music asdream-like and so thus, Impressionistic.

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By contrast, ascending chromatic scales in bars 111-1] 6 of "Concertina Da Camera"(Mov.2) act as a bridge passage between two themes, and their ascending nature alsocreates a build up of tension:

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This sustained tension is added to by Forte dynamics, therefore heightening thelisteners interest in the music and allowing the themes of the piece to seem seamless _one simply joins on to another without the sudden change ofcharacter that is oftenfound in "Rapsodie Mauresque". Therefore, the use of different scales within eachwork is important, since the Whole Tone scale enhances the Impressionistic qualitiesof "Rapsodie Mauresque" while the Chromatic Scales in "Concertino Da Camera"display more of a traditional approach to harmonisation and so assist the considerationof the piece as Neo-classical.

Bars 288-308 of"Rapsodie Mauresque" display antiphonal qualities, with theorchestral accompaniment playing J bar "question" phrases and the saxophone eitherplaying melodic "answers" or ascending chromatic patterns, such as is shown in bars299-302:

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In particular, the sustained use of duplets in compound time gives the music a forwardmoving motion, and I think that they also add a contemporary edge. During thisrhythmic ostinato (which recurs throughout the composition), the music often reachesperiods of climax, as demonstrated in bar 158, with dynamics being marked Forte.The articulation in both the orchestral and accompaniment parts is also important:While low brass instruments play the rhythmic ostinato as detached quavers (creatinga punchy accompaniment that provides movement), the sax part is carefully phrasedso as to add a legato feel to the music. Thus, this excellent use ofphrasingsupplements the rhythmic ostinato here, to create an exciting and lively theme.Indeed, another important and more detailed ostinato occurs in bars 249-250, wherethe repetition of three crotchets over 6/8 creates a hemiola effect, as shown below:

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This hemiola effect clearly adds syncopated feel to the music, however due to eachdotted crotchet beat being anticipated by a crotchet (a quaver early), a frantic sense ofmotion and excitement is envoked. Throughout "Rapsodie Mauresque", severalostinato themes occur and reccur, and this clearly makes the music familiar to thelistener so therefore more accessible, and in my view more enjoyable.

In "Concertino Da Camera" however, lbert wrote long, flowing and ThroughComposed accompaniment passa~s, such as between bars 79-83 of the work:

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As well as the omission of any ostinato, the orchestral accompaniment here playscarefully phrased running sequences - contrasting appropriately to the punchy bassaccompaniment of bars 156-160 in "Rapsodie Mauresque". Thus, the drama andexcitement of "Concertino Da Camera" is added to by lyrical and staccato sax solos ­again contrasting directly with the legato sax part of "Rapsodie Mauresque".Therefore, the exclusion of any prominent ostinato in "Concertino Da Camera"creates a composition where all the themes are separate units needing to be linkedtogether by bridge passages, whereas the inclusion ofrhythmic ostinato's in"Rapsodie Mauresque" adds a sense of familiarity to the music - therefore perhapsallowing it to appear more "audience friendly".

Finally, the use of syncopation within both works helps to create a modem feel to themusic, but it is interesting to note that both composers used this same element tocontrasting effect - as there are two distinct types of syncopated rythms. The first,syncopation through use of tied notes and unconventional note grouping, is usedheavily in "Rapsodie Mauresque", most notably in bars 271-273:

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Here, the time signature is 6/8, so it is expected that two groups of3 quaver notes andpossible 2 dotted crotchets will be found is each bar, but several other rhythmicgroupings and note values also appear. In bar 271, the low brass end ofthe orchestraplay 3 crotchets over 6 quaver beats, which is deliberately off beat from the dottedcrotchet nann - played by the low strings. Also, the sax plays two grouping of 4semiquavers over 6 quavers, which is out of sequence with everything else and soadds a syncopated feel to the music. In general, the use of cross rhythms andsyncopation here adds an air ofexcitement, while maintaining the polyphonic andlegato texture of the music. Therefore the syncopation is delivered through the use ofunconventional grouping contrasting directly with the use of syncopation in Ibert' s"Conccrtino Da Camera", as is shown in bars 116-118:

Here, accented offbeat syncopation is~loyed in the orehestral accompaniment, andis supplemented by the steady ascending crotchets played by the saxophone. The offbeat syncopation used here quickly Cf'eates a lively, exciting and intense climax in themusic, involving the entireorchestra, and so allows these few bars ofmusic to standout from the rest ofthe piece and~ its dramatic qualities. Various otherexamples ofsyncopation occur throughout "Concertino Da Camera", and althoughthese are not aliworth mentioning indMduaUy, one that is particularly important - dueto the presence ofother conceptual features to supplement the element ofsyncopation- occurs at bars 45-46:

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For the first time in the composition", the dynamic of Forte is heard and sustained here,dearly Iligillighting the importance of this phrase. Also, the combined rhythmicsyncopation and unusual use of very low tied notes on the saxophone helps to creates asudden sense of drama here, that further is embellished by the inclusion of a chromaticscale in tne oame phrase. Thus, this very short phrase acts as the climax for the entiresection of music concerned. and so helps to suitably end that particular theme veryshortly afterwards, at bar 51.In general, the use ofthe more subtle, cross rhythms syncopation in "RapsodieMauresque" allows the music to blend together - while adding a modern feel to themusic - which contrasts effectively with "Concertino Da Camera", where the use ofharsher, offbeat syncopation enables the music to seem more dramatic and lively.After the repeat ofsection A in bar 190 of"Concerfino Da Camera", a short "coda" isincluded to suitable close the composition. This codais found from bars 241-248 andcontains lots ofactivity from all areas ofthe orchestra - thus making it verypolyphonic:

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Tremolo is also used in bar 243 to ornament the already complex sequences that thesaxophone plays here, which adds to the great sense ofclimax - a climax whichdominates the entire work and stands out against the numerous "mini climaxes" whichfrequently occur at the end ofeach theme. Dynamics also play a key role in creatingthis immense climax, as they begin in bar 241 as Forte and a rapid crescendo ensuresthat by the final four bars they are Fortissimo.

Likewise, numerous climaxes occur throughout "Rapsodie Mauresque", however nonegreater than in the cadenza, which is found between bars 202-204:

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"Naturally this cadenza is unaccompanied and playedwith rubato, However, since thenotes used'tage from Low B to High F (the extreme ends ofthe instrumentscapabilities),andthe start ofbar 203 contains "Djrte leaps" - very difficultto play inquick succession due to the required cban~ ofembouchure - it is clear to me that Ibertincluded this section to demonstrate the sax1>Phones brilliant orchestral potential.During the last two phrases ofthe cadenza, harmonics are used to reach very highnotes (which are normallyout ofthe Alto Saxophones range) and thus I believe thatIbert wrote this section ofmusic to cball~the solo saxophonist concerned and thusdisplay their technicalbrilliance. This proves to me tlJatthe composer had clearlystudied the saxophone and its wod:ilIg befure embarking on this composition, a factorthat clearly contributes to the cotnposition's success.

Overall, I think that the elements! haveanalyzed and compared are essentialingredients in the both pieces that can therefu(e.he used to accurnteIy provide acaricature ofthe entire works. In addition, widIoutdoubt, they ceItainIy contributedgreatly to my enioymentofthe study ofthese works.

Luckily, "Coneertino Da Camera" was recognized as a brilliantcomposition at the timeofbeing published -in 1937. Infact, this masterpiecewas so successful that three yearsafter he wrote it, Ibert was appointed director ofthe Academie de France in Rome. Insharp contrast however,'~eMauresque" did not receive much attention at thetime, andis stilltragically unknown to many people outside the world ofprofessionalclassicalsaxophone playIDg. Despite this, I believethat it is a funtastic piece ofmusic.clearly displayingDebussy's talent for composition and more importantly, theversatilityofthe Alto Saxopboae. OveraD 1believe !hat the examination ofthese twDworks has provided me with a fascinating insight into the use ofmy instrument in the"Classical" music oft-he fast lOu years, and I know that it has cenainiv increased m:~

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My reasons for choosing these pieces

'Sicilierme' by Gabriel Faure and the 2nd two movements ofHandel's 'Sonata in F'

are two instrumental pieces for both flute and piano, which I found enjoyable playing.

I particularly liked the contrast in stylistic featores between the two pieces, which are

common differences in baroque and romantic music.

The historical background of the pieces

Georg Friederich Handel was born in Germany on the 23 February 1685. Bach as the

supreme masters ofthe Baroque Era in music. The 3mmovement of the sonata is a

Siciliana. The siciliana is a musical form often included as a movement within larger

pieces ofmusic startingin the Baroque Period. It is a dance in 6-8 time with a lilt.

Faure first conceived this Sicilienne as a work for cello/piano and published it as his

Op. 78. He later included an orchestrated version ofit as part ofbis Op. 80 incidental

music to Maurice Maeterlinck's play 'Pelleas et Melisande'. In this new arrangement

the accompaniment is based on thatofthe original, while the solo part closely follows

the flute part of the orchestral version.

Main Stylistic Features

The Handel is a baroque piece of which the main stylistic featores are the basso

continuo, sequence, especially harmonic, a sparse accompaniment and small range of

dynamics. Sicilienne is the French word for siciliana and it is in a slow 6/8 or 12/8

time with lilting rhythms making it somewhat resemble a slow jig.

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The Faure is a romantic piece ofwhich the main stylistic features are a large range of

dynamics and notes involving lots of chromatic sc!nes and accidentals but very few

examples ofsequence.

Handel Sonata in F

The 3mmovement ofHandel's sonata in F is the Siciliana It is in the key ofD minor,

which is the relative minor ofF the time signature is 12-8. The dynamic range is very

small, in fact the entire movement ispiano on both the piano and the flute. The

markings however are most likely to be editorial, as Handel probably would not have

included them in his original version. Neither does it have a large range ofnotes,

ranging from the lowest note, a C Sharp, to a D, only just over an octave above. This

is because it was originally written for recorder. The movement features a prominent

'dotted-quaver; semi quaver' rhythm right from the 1" bar which is typical of a

siciliana This is used frequently throughout but most noticeably in the 1,t two bars,

which demonstrate sequence.

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Audio excerpt! (bars 1-4)

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These first two bars are in harmonic sequence, which is typical ofa baroque piece.

Sequence is used multiple times e.g. bars 4 and 5, and again in bar 7. In both these

examples a quaver upbeat is used to introduce the main notes (anacrusis) but this time

it is melodic. In bar 4, there is a perfect cadence.

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(Bars 3-5)

There is also an interrupted cadencein the piano in bar 9.

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A trill is 1" used in bar 8, on an F and then again in the penultimate bar. It is on a G

and leads onto the final note, which is an A. This begins to create a sense of finality

about the piece but the final chord creates an imperfect cadence, significant as this is

only the end ofthe movement and not the piece.

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Throughout the piece the piano plays chords. The original would have had a flute part,

the basso continuo and chord symbols. These were given as numbers above the bass

part and are known as figured bass. The harpsichord would play this and possibly a

cello.

The allegro is the 4th

movement of the sonata. It is agigue in the key ofF major, the

relative major ofthe siciliana It is also in 12-8 compound time however the

prominent rhythm in this movement is groups of quavers. It is in binary form: AB.

The first section starts at bar 12 and finishes at the end of bar 19. It has a repeating

rhythm of quavers in groups of3. The 1" bar features repetition and nearly sequence

when followed by bar 13.

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Allegro

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Moresequence canbe seenin-bars 14 and 15 and throughout the entire section, this

time it is harmonic, Quaver upbeats are used at the end ofbars 13, 14 and 15, which

are followed first by a short sequence ofmore quavers. Anacrusis usually introduces

sequence throughout the piece.

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(bars 13-16)

Continuous quavers are 1henused in bars 16 right through to 19, arranged in groups of

3s wi1h a slur over the first 2 notes ofeach set. After the short ascending scale, these

demonstrate sequence in a descending pattern in bars 16 and 17, ascending in 18 and

the section finishes descending again.

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Like the previous movement, the piano part plays a modem version ofthe harpsichord

part In the few bars where the flute has a crotchet rest, however, the piano has a short

(Bar 13)

The piece modulates to the dominant at the end ofthe 1" section and the 2ad section

begins with arpeggios in the flute, still in the quaver rhythm, occasionally introducing

a slur over the 1" two notes in a phrase (not including the up beat). Bars 22-23 go

back to the original tune.

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At the end ofbar 24 and onto bar 25, short quavers on a B-flat introduce long dotted

crotchets on the A below. -In the middle ofbar 26 there is a ~~ct cadence, which

modulates to D minor, the relative minor.

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Audio Excerpt 3 (Bars 25-30)

This same rhythm is repeated in bars 27, 28 and 29 but on different notes, where both

parts are in harmonic sequence. In this 2nd section, the bass line begins with a fairly

simple rhythm of dotted crotchets before gradually introducing more quavers until bar

26 where it plays only quavers right through until bar 30. All this suggests the style of

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a gigue. This section contains the only part of the movement in which the dynamics!

are different. Overall there is hardly any range in dynamics. The upbeat in bar 30

followed by the quavers in bars 31 and 32 introduce the bars, which are like the

beginning ofbar 16. Here the piece modnlates back to the tonic and it returns back to

the pattern ofsequence and is identical to bars 14 and onwards until it reaches bar 37,

where it begins the coda to finish the piece offand uses a perfect cadence on the last

two chords.

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(Bars 38-39)

Faure's Sicilieune

The Faure Sicilienne is written in the key of G minor and has a ternary form, which

can be divided, intotbree sections; ABA:

Section1 - bars 1 to 43 (A)

SectionZ - bars 44 to 61 (B)

Section3 - bars 62 to 73 (A)

Coda- bars 74 to 86

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It has a time signature of 6-8 and features many of the same rhythms as the Handel

siciliana The first theme is in the flute for 9 bars before the instrumentation changes

and the piano takes over in bar 10, the flute accompanying.

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Audio Excerpt 4 (Bars 1-9)

It begins with a quaver upbeat (anacrusis, also common in the siciliana) followed by a

repeating rhythm of alternating crotchets and quavers before a dotted quaver-semi

quaver rhythm. In bar 8 there is a chromatic in the right hand of the piano. In bar 10

the flute plays just dotted crotchets as the piano takes over the main melody. Until this

point the piano is playing sustained arpeggios in a semi-quaver rhythm which relates

to its romantic style and it plays con Ped (with the pedal) creating a thick texture of

sound.

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• r-------

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There is another chromatic scale in the right hand ofthe piano in bar 18, as the

instrumentation changes again for 4 bars where the piano has the tune. There are lots

of chromatic scales and aceidentals used throughout the piece, due to its late romantic

style.

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(Bar 18)

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A rhythm of a dotted crotchet followed by a crotchet is introduced in bar 26 and can

be seen again in bars 28,30 and 32. In bar 26 there is a 9th chord in the piano. We can

also see a run of semi quavers in bar 29 to introduce the repetition in bar 30. This 1"

section ofmusic, which finishes in bar 41 after the main tune has returned, has a wide

range of dyoamics..~~ [ t

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Section B begins at bar 44 where the piece modulates to E flat.· Although the tune

changes completely here, the same dotted quaver-semi quaver rhythm is used.

Overall, the piece has a large range ofnotes, which ascend mainly in the first section

before the key changes and the notes have a descending pattern in the middle section.

A few examples ofsequence can be seen in bars 44 and 49 but being a romantic piece,

they are not as common as the Handel Siciliana

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(Bars 44 and 49)

Audio Excerpt 5 (Bars 44-51)

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Imitation between the flute and the right hand ofthe piano is demonstrated when the

piano plays solo in bars 58 and 59 and the flute repeats the same pattern in bars 60

and 61, much like the baroque piece. This does not happen in the Handel as the piano

is written as figured bass.

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(Bars 58-64)

In bar 62 the piece changes key back to the tonic, the flute returns to the previous

theme of the dotted crotchet followed by a crotchet with sf- p dynamics. A

rallentando is used with a hairpin diminuendo at the end of this section (Bar 69) to

finish it off.

The final section goes back to the original tune a tempo (bar 70) in the original key. It

then leads into a coda in bar 79 and finishes on a tied dotted minim, crotchet D.

Audio Excerpt 6 (Bars 78-86)

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Comparison between the pieces

The Faure 'Sicillienne' and the 2nd two movements of 'Handel's Sonata in F' are two .

very different pieces from two very different time periods although they do appear to

have some similar characteristics. Being from the baroque period, Handel's piece

demonstrates much sequence, especially harmonic but has a sparse accompaniment

and small range of dynamics, rarely straying from the key signature apart from simple

modulations. There is a small range ofnotes, having been written for recorder

originally. The basso continuo was written as figured bass so the editor has added a

right hand part for the piano, which was not in the original, meaning there is no

imitation in this part In contrast, the Sicilienne has much more of a sense offreedom

about it, with a large range of dynamics and notes involving lots of chromatic scales

and accidentals but very few examples ofsequence. They are both, however, set in

compound time and make frequent use ofthe typical siciliana dotted quaver, semi

quaver rhythms. Both the Faure and Handel's Allegro finish on a coda, which is an

alteration on the original tune.

Conclusion

In studying these two pieces I feel I have gained a much more detailed insight into the

stylistics features of these two time periods and have learned many ofthe differences

between the two styles ofpiece and their composers. This has helped me to play them

better as a I am much more aware ofhow they were intended to be played and how to

create an effective contrast in a performance.

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Candidate 4

Advanced Higher Listening CommentaryExemplification

Ravel- from Pictures at an Exhibition by MusorgskyVaughan Williams -Job: A Masquefor Dancing

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Assessor's pro forma

Unit Music: Listening (Advanced Higher)

Title of commentary II Vecchio Castello (Musorgsky) and Dance ofJob's Comforters (V Williams) Unit completed March 2007

Documentary evidence ,f/x CommentsAssessor's process observation checklist ,f

Commentary on two or more works or movements (1500- ,f

2000 words)Referenced music mss. excerpts ,f

Referenced audio excerpts ,f

Candidate evidence is presented clearly and is intelligible ,f Well informed and interesting. Neatpresentation.to the reader

Performance criteria/evidence reqnirements

Personal choice of work is explained, ,f

Chosen works are placed in context. ,f

Stylistic features of the music are identified, ,f

Compositional features of the music (melody, harmony, Comment is perhaps a little too detailed in the case ofthe V. Williams, but is neverthelessrhythm, structure, timbre, genre, form) are described by relevant,means of detailed comment. ,f

Notated music is referenced to the text, and is accuratelyrelated to audio excerpts. Music is notated correctly, ,f

Comparison is made between the chosen works,Comparison relates to style and use ofcompositionaltechniques. ,f

Candidate's findings are briefly and effectively Summary is to thepoint and well focused.summarised ,f

Pass,f

Snpplementary comments Candidate gained a great dealfrom the opportunitytoprobe in detail thefeatures ofthese two works,

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Assessor's process observation checklist

Unit Music: Listening (Advanced Higher)

Title of commentary R Vecchio Castello and Dance ofJob's Comforters

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Scottish Qualifications AuthorityNational Assessment BankIDV41 13/001Advanced HigherMusic: Listening February 2006

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Analytical Commentary

For my analytical commentary I will be comparing the Ravelarrangement of 'II Vecchio Castello' from 'Pictures at an Exhibition' byMusorgsky with 'Dance of Job's Comforters' from 'Job: A Masque forDancing' by R. Vaughan Williams.

Musorgsky was born in Russia in 1839 and educated at thePetropavlovsky school for guards cadets. Victor Hartmann, an artist whowas a great friend of Musorgsky died in 1872. After visiting an exhibition ofHartmann's work a year later Musorgsky was inspired to write 'Pictures atan Exhibition' for piano. It was published after Musorgsky's death in 1881.The chordal texture of the piece led many to arrange it e.g. Henry Wood(1915), Leopold Stokowski (1929) as well as Elagr Howarth (for brassensemble) and Kazuhito Yamashita (for solo classical guitar). Ravel'sorchestration, completed in 1922 is probably the most well known. It is thisarrangement that I will be looking at in detail.

Vaughan Williams was born in 1872 in England and educated at theRoyal College of Music and Trinity College Cambridge. His inspiration forJob came from William Blake's illustrations of the book of Job andpremiered in 1930.

I chose these pieces to compare as both are movements from largeorchestral works which make prominent use of the saxophone as a soloinstrument. There are not many examples of the solo saxophone inorchestral music and as a saxophone player these are of specific interestto me. Also the pieces are similar in that both composers were directlyinspired by works of art in writing them. I chose to look at Ravel'sarrangement of Musorgsky's work as it makes use of the saxophone and isvery faithful to the original music.

'II Vecchio Castello' - MusorgskylRavel

'II Vecchio Castello' is based on a painting of a medieval castle in frontof which a troubadour is singing the title translates as 'The Old Castle'.Musorgsky has written this movement as a 'song without words' stronglyinfluenced by Russian folk music.

The movement is in ternary form but it is easier to think of it as a'song' with an introduction, six strophes of irregular length and a codawhich gradually fades away.

The introduction is played on bassoon introducing the melody withina piano dynamic:

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This is in 6/8 and has a distinct sicilliano rhythm to give the impression ofthe southern European location of the painting.

Audio extract 1

The main melody enters on saxophone at bar 8. In this arrangementRavel uses the saxophone to represent the troubadour in the picture - thisis evident by the instruction on the score 'molto cantabile' which means ina singing style and also 'con dolore' which is with sadness attributing ahuman emotion to the melody. The saxophone is also instructed to usevibrato which will further imitate the human voice. This also exemplifiesRavel's renowned skills as an orchestrator.The first phrase of the solo:

is repeated approximately eight times with slight variations throughout thepiece.The cello plays a G sharp pedal this is used to symbolise the strumming ofthe troubadours guitar and also to keep up the sicilliano rhythm later on.This pedal note continues, mainly on cello throughout the piece.The saxophone leads the solo in the first strophe with the bassooncompleting the melody line:

Audio extract 2

This adds needed variation as the melody line is very repetitive and couldeasily become monotonous.The main melodic idea is then repeated with divisi violin accompanimentwhich helps to build up the harmony. The piece is in the key of G sharpminor which gives it in the rather plaintive sound of a lament, the key has 5sharps and is a very 'dark' key. However theharmony is quite simple and so takes nothing away from the melody in

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octaves.

Violin II

Viola

and this is then repeated with the addition of flutes also in octaves and inunison with the violins. The lack of harmony in the melodic line results ina very clear sound and reinforces the idea of it being 'sung'.The melody is then again taken up by bassoon and then passed back tothe flutes but this time adding in harmony with the clarinets in 3rds andintroducing another variation on the main melody.

Flute

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The tune is then taken up by oboe and bassoon in harmony and thenpassed to flute and clarinet. The original saxophone melody comes backin at 31 with string accompaniment which gradually diminuendos until twobars before the end. The saxophone comes back in fortissimo the note isheld over pizzicato chord in the strings and is held in a pause.

Audio extract 3

Ravel's choice to use the saxophone to represent the troubadour (amedieval minstrel or travelling musician) is due mainly to the fact that itlends itself well to imitating the voice, with use of vibrato and tone colour.The range is also approximately that of the voice and this is emphasised inthat Ravel keeps the saxophone in quite a limited range mostly within themiddle of the instrument. Also using the saxophone in orchestral musicwas quite unusual so stands out from other orchestral arrangements.

'Dance of Job's Comforters' - R. V. Williams

'Job: A Masque for Dancing' is a ballet and based on William Blake'sbiblical illustrations of the book of Job. In the Dance of Jobs ComfortersJob had just learnt of the deaths of his sons and daughters and the threecomforters are introduced to him by Satan. They appear sympathetic butgradually turn to accusing him. Described as 'Satan's Trinity of Accusers'by Blake and 'Three Wily hypocrites' by Williams.

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The scene starts off by introducing the start of the main saxophone melodyinterspersed by pizzicato strings:

Alto Saxophone(concert pitch)

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Violin II

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The falling minor and major thirds seem to represent the entry of the 3comforters as they are repeated 3 times before the melody continues.This is an idee fixee a theme which represents the comforters. The minorfeel of this melodic line conveys the sympathy and sadness of thecomforters while the pizzicato strings suggest they are being carefularound Job as though sensitive to his feelings or tiptoeing around him.The even rhythm of the strings also gives the impressing of footsteps.

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The tenuto marked crotchets accompanying it adds to the impression ofquiet sadness.The saxophone then continues with a series of falling thirds withaccompaniment from the clarinets, bassoon and strings it has a very minorfeel and so appears sympathetic. This is followed by a much densermiddle section where Jobs comforters show their true feelings of angerand reproach.

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The tempo is increased and the dynamic is gradually raised during thissection. It begins with repetition of a phrase from the bassoon part at thebeginning:

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At this point Job rises and curses God this is represented by a fortissimochord throughout the orchestra and descending movement and a roll ontimpani.

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The tempo is now slower (andante).This section is a sort of fanfare as though heralding the arrival of Satanwho appears later in the scene, there is repetition of the descendingchromatic movement which links back to the anger of the comforters asportrayed in the earlier section it also makes use of the thirds used in theorigional saxophone theme.

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This section gradually builds with repetition of the same pattern: longbrass chords followed by descending chromatic movement and ascendingbroken chords in the strings, oboes and clarinets. This builds to a fff chordat which point Satan stands, this is followed by more of the chromatictriplet movement Williams seems to use to represent 'evil' and a longtimpani roll. This gradually fades away as 'the vision disappears' and endswith the timpani roll and held notes in the cello and double bass at ppp.

Comparison

These two pieces have obvious similarities: they were both inspired by

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works of art and make use of solo saxophone within the orchestra. Bothhave a minor feel and a rather plaintive quality to the harmony.However there are also some very significant differences 'II VecchioCastello' uses the saxophone to represent the troubadour in the paintingand thus is written as a solo with accompaniment almost in the style of aconcerto, where as in 'Dance of Jobs Comforters' the saxophone hasimportant solo passages but is undoubtedly part of the orchestra. 'Danceof Jobs Comforters' is also a scene from a ballet so the music plays asthough there were something missing and I think you would need to seethe dancing in order to fully appreciate the piece. It is written in a veryprogrammatic style, some stage direction and quotes from the origionaltext are quoted on the score whereas 'II Vecchio Castello' is written tostand on its own so has a more complete feel. "II Vecchio Castello' is inthe form of a 'song without words' so flows throughout without any clearsections of repeats whereas 'Dance of Jobs' Comforters' has distinctsection relating to the action that is happening on stage. 'II VecchioCastello' is in 6/8 and this accommodates the siciliano rhythm andelements of russian folk music which are prominent throughout. 'Dance ofJobs' Comforters' is in 4/4 and has a distinctly English feel. Both use awide range of dynamics but whereas 'II Vecchio Castello' is very flowingand calm, V. Williams uses the dynamic contrast to build suspense andhighlight the changes of mood within the piece.Personally I prefer the Vaughn Williams piece as although it makes lessprominent use of the saxophone, I found it much more interesting to listento. While Ravel's orchestration added some variation to Musorgsky'soriginal piece it is still rather monotonous whereas in 'Job: A Masque forDancing' the differences in tempo and texture make it more varied. I alsoparticularly liked the saxophones main theme as I felt it lent itself wellto the instrument and portrayed the comforters mixed feeling well.

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Bibliography

Musorgsky: Pictures at an Exhibition - Michael Russ - Cambridge MusicHandbooks

Musorgsky: His Life and Works - David Brown - Oxford University Press

The Dramatic Works of Ralph Vaughan Williams - Frank Howes - Oxforduniversity Press

Full Orchestral Score: Job: A Masque for Dancing - R. Vaughan Williams­Oxford University Press

Full Orchestral Score: Pictures at an Exhibition - MusorgskylRavel - Booseyand Hawkes

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CD Track Listing

Track 1 - Audio extract 1 - Sicilliano rhythm in cello part.

Track 2 - Audio extract 2 - First phrase of melody.

Track 3 - Audio extract 3 - Ending.

Track 4 - Audio extract 4 - Triplet movement in saxophone melody.

Track 5 - Audio extract 5 - Climactic section.

Track 6 - Audio extract 6 - Fortissimo chord.

Track 7 - Audio extract 7 - Cymbol crash representing the exposure of satan.

Track 8 - 'II Vecchio Castello' - MusorgskylRavel.

Track 9 - 'Dance of Jobs Comforters' - R. Vaughan Williams.

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Mahler - Movement 3 from Symphony No.1Vivaldi - from The Four Seasons

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3 - und gemessen, ohne zu schleppen -Solemnly and measured, without dragging)

Gustav Mahler (1860-1911) the son ofJewish parents and the second oftheir fourteen children was an Austrian born composer. His manyachievements includes the rebirth of symphony with song, discoveringvarious new melodic, tonal, textural and formal methods to support the mostexpansive structures and new instrumental combinations to enlarge theresources of the orchestra. He also left a prominent impression on theVienna Opera with his style and musical presentation.Mahler began from the German tradition ofmusic which was rooted in themusic ofJohann Sebastian Bach, and the 'Vienna School' ofHaydn,Schubert, Beethoven and Mozart, and encompassed the Romantic era ofcomposers such as Schumann and Mendelssohn. In saying this however,the prominent influence ofRichard Wagner, who he greatly admired, left amarked impression on his work;Mahler's symphonies are generally divided into three periodsThe first, from which I will study the 3rd movement. was governed by hisreading ofthe Wunderhorn poems, and incorporated characteristic melodiesfrom his song settings of them, which includes the first four numberedsymphonies.

Antonio Vivaldi - The Four SeasonsConcerto No.4 in F Minor, Op 8.4 "Winter"

(Mvt 3 - Allegro)

Antonio Vivaldi was born in Venice on March 4th, 1678. Though ordaineda priest in 1703, within a year of being ordained, he no longer wished to 'continue celebrating mass due to his greater love for music and manyphysical complaints. It is said that he sometimes left the altar in order toquickly scribble down musical ideas which came to him during mass.Music describing the moods of the four seasons was always a popular ideawith composers such as Werner and Fischer, amongst other Baroquecomposers, but none were to do so in such precise and descriptive detail ofAntonio Vivaldi in his four seasons concertos.I have chosen to concentrate solely on "Winter" (M\1: 3- Allegro) As this ismy most favourite season and movement.

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I to these in mainly because I waswith them already and felt they complimented each other wonderfully asthey completely contrast one another in style, period and composer.

Mahler Symphony No.1(Mvt 3 - Feierlich und gemessen, ohne zu schleppen ­Solemnly and measured, without dragging)

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This movement throughout is in 4/4 simple time. There is no specific tempoindication marked by the composer, but he stated at the top ofthe page thatthis should be played "Solemnly and measured, without dragging." Belowthere is reference to this indication in German, which more or less states thatthis should be played as ifthere were soldiers slowly but precisely marchingin uniform to it. This work is for orchestra.The timpani begins playing in perfect 4ths (D and the A below) with thedynamic marking indicated as "pp" This adds to the funeral march effectand gives it a gypsy flavour.

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Throughout this first theme, there is a canonical treatment to "FrereJacques" (which contains repetition, and the D harmonic minor scale) as theclarinet and 1st bassoon emerges in bar 17 with the melody, and graduallyeach instrument in the orchestra emerges one after another playing thetraditional melody. This subsequently displays more repetition, perfectcadences and also imitation between each of the instruments.

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Whilst all ofthis is happening, there is also a noticeable accelerando asgradually the theme becomes more dance-like.

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This gives the music a more light hearted feeling from before and ties inwith the gypsy feeling.

Theme 2 is again repeated with exaggeration from the first and secondviolins using crescendo and diminuendo, along with a little ritardandostressing the 1st notes which come on the beat.

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Unlike the Mahler, this movement is in 3/8 compound time and in F minor.The tempo indication is simply Allegro.

From the outset, Vivaldi uses repetition within the violin solo part, byrepeating the notes C,A flat, G, F, E natural and F four times. Many of thenotes move by step and sequence is also used frequently.

At the same time, the basso continuo, which consists ofthe cello and thedouble bass, plays a pedal point - the note F

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There is a short example of a canon when the 2nd violin enters shortly afterthe solo violin and violin I in bar 22, the notes are kept simple, but at thesame time this feature adds interest for the listener. There are also examplesof ascending and descending scales in each ofthe violin parts. As the notesof the solo violin part moves upwards, the notes of the 2nd violin movedownwards, creating a clever and interesting effect. At this point, the violaplays a pedal E, however in bar 27, the idea ofascending against descendingnotes is continued as the violin parts move upwards and stepwise, the violam.oves downwards. ~ ~ /'D ~ ~ _., L Audio -exc.rvpl: ~

ill bar Bu, Vivaldi alternates between the minor and major chords ofF whennotating the violin parts, he uses the chords F natural and A flat, of coursesuggesting F minor, then in the next bar, F natural and A natural, suggestingthe tonic minor. This adds dramatic effect. Also in doing this, there is alsoa chromatic scale as the solo violin part moves in semitones, and in bar 33there is imitation ofthe solo violin part displayed in the 2nd violin part. Inkeeping with the general idea, the viola part moves stepwise, using theoccasional octave, but generally adding and harmonising the violin parts,while the basso continuo plays a pedal C (the dominant pedal)

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Up until bar 39, the articulation is slurred or tied for each instrument, tocreate a flowing l-in-a-bar effect and to emphasise the phrasing, however inbar 40, this abruptly comes to an end, creating a new idea.

Bar 40 displays separate bowings for the three violins, creating a stronger,more forceful and exciting effect. The solo violin part and the 1st violin playin unison, which makes the texture thicker and highlights the most\woortant part in those particular bars.

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In bar 80, triplets are used to create an impressive, mini cadenza for the soloviolin, there is more sequence used, and again the notes move stepwise,creating a busy, lively effect.

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In bar 10I, there is a contrast to the previous exciting and energetic themes.Bar 101 suggests a more peaceful, pleasant idea. As the upper strings moveby ascending (for the 2nd violin descending) by step, the viola has runningsemi quavers ascending by step and by bar 102, has modulated from minorto major.

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Bar 120 displays a fast and furious scale consisting of demi-semi quavers, itascends and descends several times. This creates great suspense and climaxas well as a feeling of anxiety and urgency. This cadenza also shows off theviolinist's impressive virtuosity and ability.

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tremolos together, adding to the tension and excitement.

In bar 151, the violins play in unison to the end, and the tremolos are passed to theviola and basso continuo, creating a dramatic and exciting fmish!

Comparison: Both of these works have a connection with poetry, Mahler had read theWunderhorn poems and Vivaldi's music is based on lines from poetry that he mayhave written with the Italian words included on the score. There is an element ofprogramme music in the Mahler as he uses the normally cheerful "Frere Jacques"theme as a solemn military march complete with clashing cymbals in the "MitParodie" section. Vivaldi is more obvious in his use of descriptive music as heoutlines some winter scenes. The Vivaldi has let me find out more about the Baroqueconcerto with its use of the string orchestra including the basso continuo part. TheMahler has let me contrast the texture of a much larger orchestra as used bycomposers in late 19th century symphonies. The violin writing in these two works isextremely contrasted, thinner in the Vivaldi but with a much richer sound in theMahler. Mahler makes much more of the contrasts in dynamics as he has detailed inthe score.

Conclusion: In analysing these two works in detail, and studying their musicalconcepts within, I feel I have gained a great deal from this exercise, as not only has itgiven me a chance to review two of my favourite works, it has also helped and givenme examples of concepts that I can relate to and remember for future reference.

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Handel- Sonata in FLinde - Marchen

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A comparative study of

George Frideric HandelSonata Number 4 In F major

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Hans-Martin LindeMarchen

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Handel Sonata in F major and Linde Marchen

As a recorder player I thought it would be a good idea to look at two contrastingrecorder pieces as I would have knowledge ofthe basic techniques used. I also thoughtthat studying recorder music would widen my knowledge ofwhat the recorder iscapable ofachieving.

I have chosen two pieces from periods when the recorder was in its prime. The firstis George Frideric Handel's Sonata Number 4 in F Major from the Baroque periodwhen the recorder was a major instrwnent in the orchestra. The second piece is a piececalled "Marchen" by a 20th Century composer called Hans-Martin Linde. The 20th

century has seen a revival ofthe recorder's popularity; the majority ofschool childrenlearnt the recorder and is often played as a solo instrument but is still not as popular asin its hay day ofthe Baroque period, though many composers like Antony Hopkinsand Edmund Rubbra have written recorder music.

I hope that by studying these pieces I will be able to appreciate the versatility oftherecorder further than I do now. I alsohope to learn more about the possible effects thatthe recorder can achieve.

George Frideric Handel's Sonata in F Major

The first piece I have chosen to write about is Handels Sonata in F major for TrebleRecorder and Basso Continuo. Basso Continuo (or Figured Bass) is where theHarpsichord player would improvise an accompaniment to suite the style ofmelodyby following numbers written on the bass line (often played by cello) indicatingchords. In Baroque period the Basso Continue was normally played by harpsichordand cello or lute but in this recording the Basso Continue is played on an organ. I haveplayed movements 3 and 4 ofthe Sonata for a practical exam so am very familiar withthe piece.

This Sonata is thought to have been first performed in 1735 making it a Baroqueperiod piece. Ithas many ofthe things you expect to hear in Baroque period music e.g.ornamentation like trills and Basso continuo. The Sonata has four movements in total.

The first movement is played Larghetto which is a slightly faster pace than Largobut not quite as fast as Adagio. It is in simple triple time (3 beats per bar in simpletime). The movement starts with a chord on the Basso Continuo line then the recorderenters. It moves mainly in conjunct motion using simple rhythms and minums. (Q1)

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It soon loses this less lively fee! with the introduction ofdotted rhythms. (Q2)

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On the score there is not much ornamentation and the first time we see it in the scoreis in bar 15 but on the recording, Pamela Tharby puts her own style on this piece byadding a lot of extra ornamentation which suit's the period ofmusic and would beexpected by a performer ofthe period. There is a repetition ofthe first theme but theending is changed so it leads to a perfect cadence in C major which is followed by acadencial trill which was very common in the Baroque period.(Q3)

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There is a repetition ofthe first theme but the ending is changed so it leads to aperfect cadence in C major which is followed by a cadencial trill which was verycommon in the Baroque period. The following bars are full ofornamentation which isnot indicated on the score. Later in the movement the melody develops sequentially.The melodic idea is first played in bar 20 and repeated twice but is starting down atone each time. The first ofthe repetitions is a real sequence meaning that the intervalsbetween notes are maintained exactly, the second repetition is a tonal sequence whichmeans that the intervals between notes change so that it sounds like it is in the rightkey.(Q4)

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level ofornamentation used. ornamentation includes uuls, mordents and adciifigin extra notes so that there is a run from one note to the next. Although it is notmarked on the score, in the recording the piece is giving more expression by the use ofcrescendos (getting louder), diminuendos (getting quieter) and many dynamicmarkings. There is also use ofrallentando at the perfect cadence at the end of themovement. As well as the trill the rallentando helps to create the feeling offinality.(Q5)

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The second ofthe 4 movements is marked Allegro (meaning fast) and is written insimple time with 4 beats per bar. Although on the score is looks like it is in binaryform, on closer inspection you see that the ideas in the first section are simplyrepeated in different pitches and keys with altered endings. This movement starts inthe key ofF Major and starts with and anacrusis in the recorder part. The first melodicidea is repeated in a sequence and after two bars a new idea is introduced.(Q6)

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In bar 6 we hear that the melody has got a new melodic idea using groups of semiquavers. At the end ofthis bar there is a modulation to the dominant key ofC Major.During the melody there are sequences using the groups of semi quavers. A new groupofrhythms are introduced and these are repeated till the end ofthe first section butthey are altered staying the key of C Major.(Q7)

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This section ends on a perfect cadence in C Major. This first section is then repeated.In the recording, Pamela Thorby has put a lot of ornamentation in to the repetition.She uses runs, trills and mordents to the extent where the simplicity ofthe melody is

lost.(Q8)

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The second section starts with an anacrnsis. It is a repetition of the very start of~emovement but is in the key ofC Major. After only a bar it modulates to the relative

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After this the rhythm goes back in to the groups ofsemi quavers. This could be a verydifficult passage to play with the speed ofthe movement and the semi quavers as it ishard to tongue every note. You would have to have been playing for a long time to beable to play that with ease. To make it easier to play you could tongue the first note ofevery group and slur the rest ofthe group. There are also scale like passages in thissection, and a wonderful rising sequence incorporating octave leaps and creating aninteresting tension leading the music to climax ofthe piece at bar 23 on top C's andD's before it reaches its completion with a perfect cadence. Once again this section isrepeated with heavy omamentation.(QlO)

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slow movement marked Alla Siciliana which means in tile style ofa Siciliano whichwas a type ofaria in the 17th and 18th centuries normally a slow dance in compoundtime. This movement has a time signature of 12/8 which is 4 beats per bar incompound time. This section starts in the key ofD minor with use ofC sharps and Fsharps. The movement is quite syncopated unlike the smooth feel of the previousmovements. There is use ofa real sequence in the first two bars ofthe movement withthe opening ideas being repeated starting 2 tones up.(Qll)

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Throughout this movement the Basso Continuo is found to be imitating the recorderpart except using different notes so that they are in harmony rather than unison. Onpaper there is little ornamentation, only a trill on the perfect cadence which ends themovement. In the recording there is ornamentation put in from the beginning with afew extra trills added but the further into the movement you get the more 'ornamentation is added. Pamela Thorby uses such ornamentation as runs, trills, turnsand mordents. So much ornamentation is used that we lose the simple melody ofthedance and end up with a much more complicated version. In the recording there hasbeen a change in one ofthe notes written seven bars in to the music to create adischord between the piano and recorder part. This movement ends on a perfectcadence.

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The fourth movement is the last movement in this Sonata. It is marked Allegrowhich means fast. We have stayed in compound time with a 1218 time signature. It isin two sections and is composed mainly of quavers. The movement is started withsequences and continues with these sequences and scales until the end ofthe section.This section is then repeated again with much ornamentation. The reordering also hasuse of staccatos and slurs which are not indicated on the score.(Q13)

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After this there is a modulation to D minor. There is now imitation ofthe recorderpart in the Basso Continuo part for a short while. There are more sequences and thepiece modulates back to F Major during this. These sequences are realsequences.(Q15)

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We then see the melodic ideas from the first section repeated, This second section isthen repeated. There is once again ornamentation added in to the repetition but not tothe extent that has beenheardin previous movements. As the movement draws to aclose there is a slight rallentando and the movement (and indeed the whole sonata)ends on a perfect cadence in F Major,

Handel has written this music in a simple way with no use ofdynamic markings orany indication ofornamentation except for a few trills. This leaves thesonata open forinterpretation by theplayer and Pamela Thorby has taken advantage ofthis fact Shehas added dynamics and ornamentation to make it her own and plays it in her stylewhile keeping in the Baroque period style.

Over all I like the way this Sonata has been presented but I do feel that PamelaThorby's use ofheavy breathing that the listener can hear spoils it slightly. I wasalways taught that ifthe listener can hear you breathe then you are breathing to loud.

Hans-Martin Lindes' Miirohen

The second piece I have chosen to write about is called Marchen, which translatedmeaus "fairy-tale". It was composed by Hans-Martin Linde. It is also for recorder butis written for four different recorders - bass, tenor, treble and soprano. It is a 20th

Century composition composed in 1977. The text used has beentaking from the fairytale "The Metaphysical Canary" written by Hans Von Flesch-Brunningen in 1919.

This piece is not what would usually be described as music and is not easylistening.It doesn't touch on the styles ofthe Baroque Period but instead has used ever otherpossibility. This piece is Atonal and has no constant beator pulse so you can't tapyour toe to it! In this way it can be described as free rhythm. It could also be describedas aleatoric music as the player has some control over what is happening in the piece.The things that are fixed are the dynamic markings and at times the pitches ofthenotes, certain ornaments and the words.

The piece starts with the voice speaking words to rhythms but the pitch is notspecified which is like sprechgesang - spoken song. There are 3 phrases used in this:first section and between each he makes banging noises like snapping his fingers,stamping his feet and clapping his hands. You could say that these noises are there torepresent him killing the Canary. There are clear crescendos and dinJinuendos in the:firstsection. He also used portamento - a glissando but on voice - on two ofthe wordswhich gives then a sweeping flying effect.(QI6)

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The second section is a duet for the tenor recorder and also voice but there is a twist_both parts are provided by the solo performer (and composer) Hans-Martin Linde. Itstarts with the recorder playing notes with the ornamentation offinger vibrato whichalters the pitch slightly giving microtones. Finger vibratos are quite simple to do. Theyare like doing triIIs but you only cover the edge ofthe hole and notthe whole hole. Inthis section there is use ofacciaccatora throughout, There is also use ofvibrato (notfinger vibrato like the previous) with changing the air pressure. In this section he startsto hum in to the recorder while he is playing. He does this at two different times. Thefirst he changes the pitch he is singing. Thenext time he does this he changes thepitch the recorder plays but he hums at the same pitch.(QI7)

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I have never tried this but I would think that it would be very difficult to do as youhave to keep the recorder in tune as well as your voice. There is alsouse offluttertonguing in this section but moves up and down from two notes giving a tremoloeffect.(QI8)

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To flutter tongue you simple "purr" (like a cat) in to the recorder. I have tried this andafter some practice, it comes quite easily. There is an interesting technique used in thissection. Linde breaks the air pressure in to the recorder to create a rhythm. In thissection Linde uses portamento which is a glissando on the voice. It is achieved bysliding from note to note. Later in the piece glissandos are heard on the recorder. Youdo this by sliding your fingers offthe holes ofthe recorder one by one.(Q19)

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P

I find glissandos on recorder fun to do and easy but the easiest glissandos to play (andmost common) is when you run your finger up the keys on a keyboard or piano fromthe bottom to the top. There is a great range of dynamics used in this section. Lindehas used everything from P to FF. has even used SFz, diminuendo and crescendo.

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The third section ofthis piece is, once again a duet. This time it is for treble r~corder

and voice. This section doesn't use the voice much. This section isn't as aleatonc as.some ofthe others as the pitches and rhythms are notated more. Right ~oughout.thlSsection leaps in the pitches is very common, this can be described as ~sJunct motion.A new technique of diminution is used in this section. It gives ~~ feeling that thepiece is getting faster but it isn't, the notes are .gettin~ shorter grvmg th.e effect ofspeeding up(Q20). Linde alsouses augmentation which has the opposite ~ect to .dinIinution. It makes it sound like the music is slowing down as the notes mcrease ill

length.(Q2I)

Q20

u'I(dii) (dii)

Small sequences are used throughout the section. Once again the use ofdynamics isrich. Linde goes to the extreme at one point and uses PPP. I have never seen anyrecorder music marked with this before and I haven't heard it either. I can onlyimaging that it would be extremely hard to achieve and stilI have a good tone andtuning. There is also quite a lot ofuse ofsuch techniques as crescendos anddiminuendos. It is also stated that the recorder should be played Legato (smoothly)and cantabile (in a singing style). There is ouly one short passage where the voice isused in this section and he uses the same techniques as in past sections. A newtechnique oftongue vibrato is used at the end ofthis passage. This is achieved using avoiceless repetition of~l". (Q22)

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Q2..2

Tnere is also usc ofanother type of vibrato whicn is achieved oy moving the lighthand over the labium ofthe recorder which is the hole in the neck ofthe recorder.There are pauses used but as there are no regular metres you don't really notice them.There is a passage in this section which sounds like bird song. It is achieved byputting acciaccatura before every note. I think this passage is very fitting as this piecewas inspired by a story ofa canary but it would be even more fitting in Lindes piece"Music for a bird".(Q22)

The fourth section has been written for bass recorder and voice. The first phrase ofthis section is truly aleatoric. The recorder and voice have been giving the range ofnotes which they should use and after that theyare :free to play any notes in that range

. with any rhythm they wish. At this point the voice and recorder are playing at theysame time as a duet. (Q23)

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There is a place in the section which has the recorder sustaining a not while the voiceis saying the vowels u, a, 0, e and i. At this time the player is allowed to vary thedynamics between PP and P at any time. There is use oftremolos between notes inthis section between notes that are a fourth apart, (Q24)

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More tongue vibrato is used throughout the section. A new technique is used in apassage of this section. Linde uses hard air pressure to over blow and cause a veryhigh harsh note; this is notated using a note head with a cross through it.(Q25). In thesame phrase there is yet more use ofacciaccatura and rich dynamics. There is also useofglissandos on the ending notes of this section.

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Section 5 is written for soprano recorder and voice as a duet but like section 3 thevoice isn't usedmuch. In fact it is only heard once. There aren't many new techniquesused in this section. We see the usual use ofdynamics and aleatoric nature to themusic and also vibratos. But in this section there is an introduction ofdoubletonguing.(Q26) This gives the effect that you are play separate notes very fast, Doubletonguing is easyenough to do. You simply tongue the note twice. Also for the firsttime there is use ofgracenotes that once again sound like birds siguing. (Q27)

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QL7

The nearer to the end of this piece you get the less new things are put in and sectionsix is an example ofthis. It is written for tenor recorder and voice. The sametechniques are used - acciaccatura, dynamics, siguing in to the recorder, tremolos,emphasis ofnotes using more powerful tonguing etc - but only a few new techniquesare added. For the :firsttime since the first section, Linde talks with out playing therecorder. There is also the use of trills. I find it strange that he has used a traditioualtechnique in such a piece that doesn't touch on them any where else. He also uses thetechnique ofslapping his fingers on the recorder to produce a sound. At the end ofthishe uses hand clapping brought back from the first section.

The 7th and final section of this piece is in my opinion one of the worst. It is not thatit has been badly written, it is simply that the techniques have beenused over andover. The only new things that have been added are the use ofa sung chromaticscale(Q28) at the end ofthe section and a different playing technique. This techniqueproduces a windier, breathy quality to the tone of the recorder. This is achieved byblowing over the hole in the top ofthe recorder (the aperture) like you do on a fluterather than covering the aperture with your mouth and blowing directly in to it. (Q29)

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There is a different notation for a similar technique by an arrow in stead ofa note headwi~a cross through it but they both mean that you have to produce the highest andnoisiest note you can(Q30). The same use ofdynamics is used with the sameexpressions but the use ofpauses has increased since the beginning ofthe piece.

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Over all I thought that Miirchen was a brave and interesting piece of"music". Ithought that the first few sections where brilliant and I just couldn't believe that therecorder could do such versatile things. I found it amazing and rather funny. But bythe time I had repeatedly listened to it, all the magic and amazement had gone. It hadbecome amazingly hard listening and I really began to hate it.

Since we are in the 20lh century, the time ofweird and wonderful music, it is onlyfair that the composer can explore every aspectofthe instrument they are writing for. Ijust think: that Hans-Martin Linde should have made this particular piece a littleshorter so that the listener wouldn't get bored by the tuneless "melody" and repetitivetechniques.

Like on the recording of the Sonata the breathing was really obvious. The differenceis Linde can get away with it due to the style of the piece.

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I have to admit that I much prefer Handels Sonata in F Major to Lindes Marchen, Ilike how you can sing along to Handels Sonata I prefer the old decorative style of theBaroque period music. Even though the notation ofHandels Sonata is very strict youstill have freedom ofdynamics and ornamentation, you can make it as decorative andexpressive as you like as thatwas the style ofthe period. Although you have muchmore freedom in Lindes Marchen, I feel that it is a bit harsh and can get unbearable.

By studying these pieces I have began to appreciate the recorders versatility more. Ihave learned some new techniques which shall be useful, like the different kinds ofvibrato. I have also learned thatyou don't have to stick with what is on the page toevery last line and dot. Having flexibility and freedom to express yourself in the wayLinde does is great, I just feel thathaving something to follow and stick to is a verygood thing!

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Bibliography

Scoreso George Frideric Handel Sonata Number 4 in F major:

- "The Complete Sonatas for Treble (Alto) Recorder & Continuo G.F.Handel"- Edited by David Lasocki and Walter Bergmann- Published by Faber Music

o Hans-Martin Linde Marchen- " Der Getreue Musik-Meister"- Edited By Walter Bergmann- Published by Schott

Recordiu@

• George Frideric Handel SonataNumber 4 in F Major- Treble Recorder - Pamela Thorby- Harpsichord/Organ - Richard Egarr- Schott and Company

• Hans-martin Linde Marchen- CD Hans-Martin Line Music For A Bird- Recorder and Voice - Hans-Martin Linde- Wergo

Other Sources

• Hans-Martin Linde Music For A Bird recording and score (as above)• http://www.nyu.edulclasseslgilbert/distancelbird.h1ml for back ground information

on Hans-Martin Linde• Virginia Tech Multimedia Music Dictionary:

http://www.music.vt.edu/musicdictiona..ry/

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Tape ofExcerpts

Side A - George Frideric Handel Sonata Number 4 in F Major

Movement 1

Excerpt 1 - Quote 1Excerpt 2 - Quote 2Excerpt 3 - Quote 3Excerpt 4 - Quote 4Excerpt 5 - Quote 5

Movement 2

Excerpt 6 - Quote 6Excerpt 7 - Quote 7Excerpt 8 - Quote 8Excerpt 9 - Quote 9Excerpt 10 - Quote 10

Movement 3

Excerpt II - Quote IIExcerpt 12 - Quote 12

Movement 4

Excerpt 13- Quote 13Excerpt 14 - Quote 14Excerpt 15 - Quote 15

Side B - Hans-Martin Linde Marchen

I have not picked out excerpt for this piece but instead have put in a recording on thefull piece as everything is easy to spot but it is hard to catch a few seconds on tape.

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Candidate 7

Advanced Higher Listening CommentaryExemplification

Holst - from St Paul's SuiteBizet -from L 'Arlesienne Suite No.2

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A comparative study of:

Gustav HolstDargason from St Paul's Suite

and

Georges BizetFarandole from L'Arlesienne Suite No 2

Candidate Number:

Advanced Higher Music

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Gustav Holst - Dargason and Georges Bizet - Farandole

For this comparative study I decided to choose two pieces that I have hadexperience of playing before.

The first piece I have chosen is the fourth movement from Holst's St Paul'sSuite, Dargason. I have played this as part of the Borders Chamber Orchestraso I know from experience the fairly high standard that the St Paul's girlsschool orchestra must have been to be able to play it. The second piece isBizet's Farandole from L'Arlesienne Suite Number Two, which I played onmarimba as part of the school percussion group. It begins as a simple tunethen gets gradually more and more complicated as the piece progresses.

I wanted to link the pieces in some way and found out that the Dargason andFarandole are both folk dances. The Dargason is English and the FarandoleFrench.

The two pieces are very similar in that both composers take fairly short,simple tunes and manage to turn them into intense, interesting pieces ofmusic. I am going to look at the different techniques the composers used todo this and try to incorporate some of these techniques into my playing tomake that more interesting.

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Dargason

St Paul's Suite is a composition for orchestra by composer Gustav Holst. Itwas written in 1912 but due to revisions wasn't published until 1922. Around1904 Holst was appointed Musical Director at St Paul's Girls School,Hammersmith. The St Paul's Suite for the school orchestra is the firstcomposition he wrote there. Originally written for strings, Holst added windparts to include an entire orchestra if necessary.

The suite has four movements: Jig, Ostinato, Intermezzo and Finale(Dargason). The Dargason very much has a folk music feel to it. It originatesin the 1t h century and was written as a country dance melody.

The Dargason is written for a full string orchestra comprising of the usual 2violins, viola, cello and double bass. This movement is in 6/8 time; compoundtime with two beats in a bar and is written in C major meaning there are nosharps or flats in the key signature. It is marked Allegro (fast).

The movement begins with an anacrusis from the solo first violins. To beginwith the tune moves by sequence. The third and fourth bars are a tonalsequence of the first and second bars. In bars five and six there is an octaveleap where the tune jumps from middle C to C an octave higher then barsseven and eight are a tonal sequence of that.

The se~ond violins then join in imitating the first violins while the first violinsplay an Inverted pedal note G above them with ornaments which even thoughthey do not look like it sound like mordents.

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At figure 1 the first violins take over the tune again and the cellos appearplaying a pizzicato note on the first beat of every other bar. The violas alsojoin in at this point playing notes that are tied over the bar line.

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The tune is then passed around between the violins and viola while the cellosplay a broken chordal bass line in sequence. A crescendo also begins hereshowing that something exciting is to come. This crescendo doesn't end untila forte marked at figure 2.

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Q4 r' r _JThe double basses, also pizzicato, then join in playing in unison with thecellos. This gradual addition of instruments adds to the build up that is createdtowards the climax of this piece.

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At figure 2 the first violins play the tune while the seconds playa version ofthe tune in harmony, mainly 3rds and 6ths, below it. The cellos play arco herefor the first time. The double basses take over playing the pizzicato bass lineon the note C, creating a pedal effect once more.

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There is a diminuendo over the final 8 bars of section 2 bringing the dynamicback to p once more.

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At figure 3 the first violins and cellos go into simple triple time while thesecond violins, violas and cellos stay in compound time. This creates a crossrhythm between the parts. The cellos play the well known melodyGreensleeves which is marked cantabile meaning 'in a singing style' while theviolas and second violins take it in turns to play the Dargason theme.

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At figure 4 we go back into 2 beats in a bar in compound time. The music ismarked pesante meaning heavily. Later in this section the violas and cellosplay four note chords which from my experience as a viola player are difficultto play in tune.

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Bizet makes use of trills on top of these chords at figure 5 to add to theexcitement of this section and this is repeated at figure 6 but an octave higher.The dynamic marking is now ff and the instruction non-legato is given carryingon the heavy, intense feeling of the music.

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More cross rhythms are created in this section with the first and second violinsplaying duplets against the rest in compound time. Each note of these dupletsis accented showing that Holst really wants us to hear this contrast inrhythms. This section is in the form of a kind of question and answer betweenthe first and second violins called antiphony but the answer is just thequestion repeated up an octave.

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Eight bars after figure 6 the volume suddenly drops to piano and is markedcresco poco a poco (gradually getting louder and louder) until it says fff atfigure 9. At this point the top line of the second violins and cellos play anascending chromatic scale tremolando while the lower seconds, cellos anddouble basses playa tremolando pedal note G.

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At 7 there are octave leaps in the bass line which move chromatically insequen?e. ~he tune stays in C major while there are some interestingharmonies gOing on around it.

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10 bars after 7.the violas, cellos and basses play heavily on the second beatof the bar creating a very offbeat feel to this section.

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By 9 the music has reached a really exciting level with the Dargason tunebeing played fff with Greensleeves being played over the top of it first by thefirst violins and cellos then repeated an octave higher in the violins.

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By figure 10 we have returned to a p marking and the texture of the music ismuch thinner with only one line of tune accompanied by chords

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The piece finishes with a solo violin playing pp one bar of the tune then beinganswered by the double basses playing a variation of the melody in 2/4 time.This is another example of antiphony. The ending is a chance for the soloviolinist to show off when a cadenza is written. It is an ascending C majorscale beginning on a low G and ending on a C two octaves above, quitetechnical for a violin player. There is a line underneath this in smaller typemarked ossia which is an alternative to playing the very high notes. Thedouble basses, still in 2/4 time, playa descending scale in contrary motion tothe soloist. The cadenza ends in the usual way with a trill then everybodyplays an accented, ff, C major chord to finish. The cadenza is marked pp soyou feel as if something more dramatic is coming next like you are often leftfeeling during this piece of music.

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Farandole

The L'Arlesienne suites are a series of musical works composed by GeorgesBizet. L'Arlesienne Suite Number Two was published in 1883, four years afterBizet's death. The suite, written for full orchestra, was written to accompany aplay by Daudet so Farandole is a piece of incidental music.

There are four movements in this suite: Pastorale, Intermezzo, Menuet andFarandole.

The Farandole is the movement that I have chosen to write about. I playedthis piece on marimba in our school tuned percussion group and I liked it solchose to write about it.

The farandole is an open chain community dance popular in Nice, Francewhich is similar to the gavotte. The gavotte is written in 4/4 or 2/2 time and isof moderate tempo. The distinctive feature of a gavotte is that the phrasesbegin in the middle of the bar. In 4/4, phrases begin on the third beat of the·bar giving a half bar anacrusis exactly like Bizet's Farandole begins.

The time signature of the piece has a letter C, meaning common time which isthe same as 4/4 (simple time with four beats in a bar). It begins in D minor butmodulates to D major later on in the tune. It is marked Allegro deciso (Tempodi Marcia) crotchet = 104 meaning it is to be played fast and decisively at thespeed of a march or 104 beats per minute.

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The piece is written for a whole orchestra. Two of each woodwind instrument.~Iutes,. o?oes,. clarinets and bassoons, four horns, four trumpets, 3 trombones:~o violIns,. viola, celio and double bass and percussion. The piece begins~It~ all the mstrument~ playing a D minor chord followed by an A minor chord~Ivmg us the Impression right away that it is a minor piece of music. All themstr~ment play basi?ally the same rhythm throughout the first eight barscre.atlng a homophonic texture. The tune begins with an interval of a fourthwhl~h contra.sts with the rest of the piece where the tune moves mainly byconjunct motion.

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Bizet makes use of double dots .uses half beat rest . b . on some of his crotchets and quavers andlike the rhythm to ~~:n~r:h2

and 3 to show how crisp .and accurate he wouldin bars 4 and 5 .. ese ar~ then contrasted with the straight quavers

giving more dramatic effect to the dotted ones.

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A.t letter A, the tun~ i.s played again by most of the instruments with the horns,violas and cellos JOIning In half a bar later in canon. Bizet makes use oforn~ments t~ ~ecorate the tune such as the acciaccaturas in the oboeclannet and violin parts at bar 9. '

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At letter B, the piece modulates into D major and is marked Allegro vivo edeciso meaning fast, lively and decisively. This section begins with a solotambourine playing straight quaver rhythms which carries on most of the waythrough this section of the piece. There is an accent on the first beat of everybar which gives some interest to what would be a very unexciting percussionline. This is marked pppp, something I have never seen written in musicbefore. This gives the impression that something very different is going tohappen to contrast with the very quiet.

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This contrast comes at letter 0 when ffff is marked also something I havenever seen written before. The ffff is the result of a huge crescendo from thepppp at letter B giving the whole piece a huge dynamic contrast which makethis piece exciting.

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A solo flute and solo clarinet start the new tune in D major at letter B playingin unison. This melody is mostly conjunct motion once again and makes useof a lot of repetition. They play lots of staccato quaver patterns with somemore legato semi quavers. The strings are the only other instruments involvedat this point and they play double stopped quaver notes on the first beat ofevery bar.

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At letter C, the piece continues with the flute and clarinet playing the tune andthe other instruments accompanying on the first beat of the bar but this isvaried with the violins playing on the second beat of each bar. They playa runof four notes before the quaver note on the second beat of the bar whichgives the effect of an ornament. They play the note F sharp over the range oftwo octaves before jumping two octaves from an F sharp 3 leger lines up toan F sharp in the second space. From my experience as a violin player this isa very difficult leap to get in tune.

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Four bars after letter D, the strings play staccato, double-stopped quavers inthe same rhythm as the tune. These are written in shorthand as a minim witha single line through the tail. This is continued through the whole of section Dstill getti~g gradually louder all the time. This helps to heighten the tension ofthe music and the crescendo throughout stops the repetitive patterns fromgetting boring.

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At letter G the tune modulates into the relative minor of D major which is Bminor.

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Then at letter H the first theme comes back again played by a solo flute Theflute is interrupted 8 bars later by the rest of the woodwind and the stringsreminding us of the first melody.

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At letter K the woodwind and upper strings play lots of repeated patternsgetting gradually louder as they go while the bassoon and cello plays adescending chromatic scale.

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By letter L the melody consists of lots of repeated semiquaver patternsaccompanied by chords on all the other instruments.

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The big crescendo throughout the whole piece comes to its climax at letter Mwhen we hear an example of countermelody where the brass play the firsttune and the upper woodwind and upper strings play the second tune at thesame time.

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From letter P to the end is a coda. The tune has returned to D major by thispoint. The coda uses lots of ideas used earlier in the piece such as staccatoquavers and conjunct motion.

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It also uses even more repetition of ideas to give us a big build up to the endand leads to a perfect cadence.

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Conclusion

Before I started this comparative study I was interested in how the composersmanaged to turn a simple tune into a larger scale piece like in the Dargasonand the Farandole. This study has shown.me some of the techniques thecomposers used to achieve this and I now aim to use some of thesetechniques in my playing to make it more interesting.

In both the Dargason and the Farandole, the composers use two tunes thateventually come together to be played at the same time towards the climax ofthe piece. These tunes are repeated many times throughout the pieces butthe composers use similar techniques to stop this repetition becoming boring.

Both composers make use of huge contrasts in dynamics throughout theirpieces. The Farandole especially, goes from pppp to ffff through a bigcrescendo which covers most of the piece. They both also make use ofdifferent groupings of instruments for different sections of the music.Sometimes the tune is just accompanied by chords while other times there ismore than one tune going on at once. The use of lots of repetition adds a lotof suspense to the music in the build up to the really loud sections of music.

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Bibliography

Scores

Gustav Holst - DargasonSt Paul's Suite for String Orchestra (Curwen Edition) by Gustav Holstpublished by G. Schirmer Inc.

Georges Bizet -FarandoleL'Arlesienne Suites Nos. 1 and 2 in full score, Georges Bizet published byDover Publications, Inc.

Recordings

Gustav Holst - DargasonEMI CD - Gustav Holst performed by Royal Philharmonic Orchestraconducted by Sir Malcolm Sargent

Georges Bizet - Farandole

Research

http://www.music.vt.edu/musicdictionary/http://en.wikipedia.org/wikilSt_Paul's_Suitehttp://en.wikipedia.org/wikilFarandolehttp://en.wikipedia.org/wikilL'Arlesienne

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Track 1 - Dargason in FullTrack 2 - Quote 1Track 3 - Quote 2Track 4 - Quote 3Track 5 - Quote 4Track 6 - Quote 5Track 7 - Quote 6Track 8 - Quote 7Track 9 - Quote 8Track 10 - Quote 9Track 11 - Quote 10Track 12 - Quote 11Track 13 - Quote 12Track 14 - Quote 13Track 15-Quote 14Track 16 - Quote 15Track 17 - Quote 16Track 18 - Quote 17Track 19 - Quote 18

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Track 20 - Farandole in fullTrack 21 - Quote 19Track 22 - Quote 20Track 23 - Quote 21Track 24 - Quote 22Track 25 - Quote 23Track 26 - Quote 24Track 27 - Quote 25Track 28 - Quote 26Track 29 - Quote 27Track 30 - Quote 28Track 31 - Quote 29Track 32 - Quote 30Track 33 - Quote 31Track 34 - Quote 32Track 35 - Quote 33Track 36 - Quote 34Track 37 - Quote 35Track 38 - Quote 36Track 39 - Quote 37

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Candidate 8

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Shostakovich - Festival OvertureSibelius - Symphony No.1

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Advanced Higher Music Commentary

The two pieces I have chosen are the Festival Overture by Shostakovich and Symphony Nr 1by Sibelius. I chose these pieces because I have played them in West of Scotland SecondarySchools Orchestra and I really enjoyed playing these two pieces in the orchestra. I am anoboist and the composers have written fantastic parts for the oboe which makes it for me moreinteresting.

Dmitry Shostakovich was born on the 12th ofSeptember 1906 in St Petersburg. He startedhis first attempts at composition between 1915 and 1917. In 1950 he won the Stalin Prize forfilm music. He travelled to Warsaw in Poland for the "world council for peace" and attendedfestivals in Leipzig commemorating the 200th anniversary of Bach's death. In 1952 he visitsBerlin, Leipzig and Dresden which are all in Germany. In 1953 Stalin died and a year later in1954 Shostakovich decided to compose the Festival Overture for a concert given incelebration ofthe 37th anniversary ofthe October Revolution. He died in Moscow on the 9th

ofAugust 1975.

Jean Sibelius was born in Hameenlinna, Finland, 8th ofDecember 1865. He was a lateRomantic composer. It was said that he was the greatest composer Finland has everproduced, and the most powerful symphonist to have emerged in Scandinavia Sibeliuswaited until he was perfectly sure ofhimselfbefore embarking on a symphony. Hissymphony No 1 in E minor was written after he visited Italy. Sibelius was in his middlethirties when he composed this piece. He was also a master ofthe orchestra who created asound world that was completely individual in its handling ofthe texture and layout ofhissymphonies. He died in Jarvenpaa, Finland on the 20th ofSeptember 1957.

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Shostakovich's Festival Overture is a fast flowing overture that is very typical fanfare likepiece. It is in sonata form and in the major key ofA.

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The opening of this overture uses a fanfare style, played by brass only, with a timpani roll. Itstarts by using triplets and augmented in each bar. Then it goes into accented crotchets and awalking bass in lower brass and bassoons and contra bassoon. At figure 1 the brass makes thesame use of triplets at the beginning but starts only with one trumpet then later with twotrumpets in the space ofthree bars. At figure 2 the woodwind and strings have the triplets butthe brass has arpeggio triplets. Then at figure 3 the triplets are getting closer together and itfeels getting faster and building up. At Ritenuto it slows down using chords with asuspension to the Presto.

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At figure 11 the runs and accents for woodwind and strings and use the same technique for awhile. At figure 12 the woodwind have accented" syncopated notes. The bassoon, cello anddouble bass have a sequence rising by a tone each time.

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Finally from figure 30 to the end he puts all his ideas together and uses minims to slow downand the ritenuto slows it down even more, He uses the same idea from the beginning forritenuto to presto.

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The structure of Sibelius's Symphony No.1, movement 1 is in sonata form and there aremainly two themes in it. It also doesn't do the same as a normal Symphony. It is not strictlytonal or atonic but it is somewhere in between by the way he uses accidentals and experimentswith major and minor. Sibelius used a very typical romantic feel in this piece and it isamazing how he managed to use variations in his piece to keep it interesting.

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Three bars before figure E the harpcomes in but with syncopation between right and lefthands to the second subject. Above it the flute melody starts with an acciaccatura and usesaccidentals to modulate in the major key and the oboes join in for antiphonal phrase with theflutes.

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Three bars before figure G the second theme starts.The oboe solo changes the mood again and gives us a middle-eastern feel to the music andrepeats it again. Some instruments use triplets that are carried out since the beginning. Theclarinet has diminished from quavers to triplets. At "Poco a poco piu stretto e crescendo" itstarts building up again by a crescendo and gradually getting faster with accented notes. Sixbars after figure K the woodwind and lower strings have chromatics with triple fortesforzandos to make it more tense. At figure L the solo changes from the oboe to the violinand uses variations on this.

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At figure P it changes to the minor key allover and the woodwind instruments dovetail witheach other over and over feeling like it is not going anywhere and bits ofprevious melodyreturn in the strings. The lower strings do the same chromatics but ascending.

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Four bars before figure X there is a change oftempo and he uses the Middle Eastern feelagain but this time the solo starts with the clarinet, then trumpet, and finally to the bassoon.

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At figure Z it slows down for a big finish with trills and loudness, but the movement finisheswith a timpani roll (the same note as the beginning). The effect of the big finish is somewhatsubdued because the chords in the strings are pizzicato.

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The two works were written around the same time as each other. They have both been writtenfor symphony orchestras but you can definitely tell the different styles of each composer. Forexample, Sibelius wrote in a very romantic and expressive way but Shostakovich has a verythick texture to his style. They both use syncopation in their own ways. Both are totallydifferent pieces because one is an overture and has fanfares in it and the other one is asymphony although they have similarities as they both use sonata form. They both modulatebetween major or minor, and the use oftriplets is evident in both, as is acciaccatura and theuse ofgrace notes. They both use the same ideas but develop them in variations. Thesymphony has more obvious solos than the overture because the solos in the overture aremore accompanied in a group. The clarinet solo at the beginning is more or less acappellaThe style shows by the country they come from for example, Shostakovich was Russian butSibelius was Finnish. At the end oftheir pieces they both have different styles of finishing itofbecause Sibelius repeats the beginning, for example the timpani roll, and is then very quietwith the pizz staccato strings. On the other hand Shostakovich's Festival Overture uses amore traditional approach by using loud chord crescendoing to the climax.

I have learned that Sibelius and Shostakovich both have similar styles even though they arefrom two different time periods. They both used the traditional way using sonata form andexperimenting with sections oftheir pieces. They both have an intro to their pieces even if itis a fanfare or a very expressive solo. I have really enjoyed listening to the pieces and thestyle ofthem. I would hope that the style ofthese pieces will continue in the future and ofcourse that the pieces themselves will be listened to and enjoyed by many others.