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WritingTask1:COVERLETTERAlumno Entregadaycorregida?
1. Gisela Martnez Ortiz SI2. Mara Cuerda Clemente NOentrega3.
Juan Carlos Martnez Modia SI4. Juan Manuel Garca Dujo SI5. Maite
Lorente Roda SI6. Silvia Mogena Fernndez SI7. Aitziber Latasa
Sorondo SI8. Alicia Snchez Ferro SI9. Virtut Ribalta Siles SI10.
Sandra Rueda Ayala SI11. Denisa Andrea Drideanu SI12. Mara Teresa
Prez Arias SI13. Alberto David Vidal Rodrguez NOentrega14. Sara
Fuerte Carrillo SI15. Jos Javier Cabello Burgos SI16. Mara Isabel
Vivas Martn NO entrega17. ngel Mariano Maas Prez SI18. Cristina
Alonso Gonzlez SI19. Ana Artero Hernando SI
20. Begoa Latre Espua
Entregaenelforoincorrecto:Writeityourself!Nosecorrige
Entregadascorrectamente,ycorregidas:16 Entregaincorrecta:1
Sinentregar:3
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Pacfico, 57 28007 Madrid
November 17, 2013 Director of Human Resources Adelfas Elementary
School Adelfas, 19 28007 Madrid Dear Sir or Madam, Ester Lpez, one
of the teachers at your school, told me that you are looking for a
French teacher for a maternity leave replacement. I am interested
in applying for this position. As a 2008 graduate of the
Universidad de Barcelona, I have teaching experience on the primary
and secondary level and have taught adult and immigrant students,
as well. My resume is enclosed for your review. I would like to
combine my knowledge with my ability to learn from this new
experience at your school. (and I would love doing it in your
school.)* I look forward to meeting you for an interview and hope
to hear from you at your earliest convenience. Sincerely, Gisela
Martnez
*You can use the clause in parenthesis, but it sounds a little
bit effusive for a cover letter.
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Dear Hiring Manager Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my
interest in the Teaching Assistant position as advertised in the
November 24 edition of The Times. Although my confidential resume
is enclosed for your review, allow me to introduce myself. I have
satisfied the requirements for a five-year Bachelor's degree in
Spanish language and literature from the Spanish National
University of Distance Education (UNED). Regarding to my first work
experience, I was a volunteer teacher for an international NGO in a
rural school in Guatemala for nine months That which was a
rewarding experience. Since then, I have been working in Spain for
six years at a private academy as a Spanish teacher for foreigners,
but the academy was (definitively) shut-down last September, and
(now) I a()m willing to take on new challenges. (I love them). I am
an enthusiastic about teaching and learning, and I have the passion
to get the most from your students. In addition to this, I feel
very committed to the student-centered learning, and I enjoy
teamwork. My experience involves I possess good communication
skills, technological knowledge and abilities practice in the area
of for blended learning. too. I would appreciate the opportunity to
meet with you and discuss how my qualifications could be guided to
meet your needs for this position in your leading bilingual
English-Spanish secondary school in London. Additionally, I am
available for A a web conference interview could also be possible
from Monday to Friday, in the evening, from 4 PM to 7 PM. Thank you
in advance for your time and consideration. (Yours faithfully) /
Sincerely, Juan Carlos Martnez Modia Enc. Resume
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C/ Cervera, 6 ATD Palencia 27th November 2013
Director of Human Resources Department
IT New World
7th Main Street
London
Dear Sirs,
I would like you to take some minutes reading enclose a copy of
my CV/resume. I think that my profile could be very interested
interesting to your company. I am a Telecom Engineer with an
important experience in management of companies, project management
and a big knowledge of technology.
I am applying for the position of IT manager that your company
has published in on the website Infojobs website. I think that I
have a qualifications and skills that fit in this position.
I would welcome an opportunity to meet you and discuss my
application, and I would like to explain my experience and my
possible career in your company.
Sincerely
Juan Manuel
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Dear Mr. Jones, (My name is Maite Lorente.)I am writing to apply
for the job of journalist. I saw your job offer in the want ads of
the newspaper, and I think that I am suitable for your position
because of my (great) experience and my qualifications. Actually, I
am working at a newspaper as a journalist assistant since 2000
(year). I have a degree in Journalism from UNED. You can examine my
experience as a journalist and my certificates of studies in the
attached documents. I am currently working as a journalist
assistant; however my ordinary assignments are as an interviewer. I
have interviewed several (a lot) (of) sports (iest) personalities
and singers, such as Jennifer Lpez, Madonna and Beyonce, which you
can find in my CV. (You can check in my CV.) (If you have any time
for me,) I would like to explain to you in greater (more)
detail(ed) my work experience in an interview,( we could have a
meeting when you can) at your convenience. Thank you for
considering my request. Sincerely, Maite Lorente
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C/ Martn Luther King, 36 November, 21st 2013
Director of Human Resources Mitsubishi Electric US, Inc. 5900-A
Katella Avenue, Cypress, California 90630, U.S.A. Dear Sir or
Madam: From the Mitsubishi website I read about your need for a
Civil Engineer for one of your local office, and believe that I
have the necessary aptitude for the position.
I worked as a Civil Engineer for the last four years, although
at this moment am unemployed. I designed electrical station and
loved my job. I consider that am a hard-working and perfectionist
woman and both of them are important qualities in this kind of job.
Attached is a copy of my resume, which more fully details my
qualifications for the position.
I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss a position with
you, and will contact you in a few days to answer any questions you
may have. Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely, Silvia Mogena Fernndez I have rephrased your
sentences. It doesnt necessarily mean that your letter is wrong,
though. November 21, 2013 Director of Human Resources C/Martin
Luther King, 36 Mitsubishi Electric US, Inc. (City/town/country)
5900-A Katella Avenue Cypress, CA 90630 USA Dear Sir or Madam, I
read about your need for a civil engineer at one of your local
offices from the Mitsubishi website, and I believe that I have the
necessary aptitude and qualifications. I have worked as a civil
engineer for the last four years; although, at this moment, I am
unemployed. I designed electrical stations and loved my job. I
consider myself a perfectionist and am a hard-working person/woman
-- both qualities being critically necessary for this type of
work/job. Attached is a copy of my resume which details my
qualifications for this position. I would appreciate the
opportunity to discuss possible employment with you and will gladly
answer any (and all) questions you may have. Thank you for your
consideration. Sincerely, Silvia Mogena Fernndez +There is no comma
after "and" if there is no clause with a subject that follows. +The
state and zip code are on a separate line. +Dates in letter
headings are simple cardinal numbers -- not ordinal. +The sender's
home address is complete with street and city names.
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November 26th, 2013
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you regarding an opportunity to work in your
company's legal department. I've sawn seen your online ad looking
for a full-time lawyer and I'm very interested in it the job.
As you can see in my attached resume, I've been working in the
area of labour and social security law for ten years, so I think
that my subject knowledge on this area and my experience in
judicial proceedings fit in the profile you need.
I look forward to having the opportunity to meet you soon and
arrenge arrange / schedule an interview. (this is redundant)
Sincerely,
Aitziber Latasa. +Dates in letter headings are simple cardinal
numbers -- not ordinal.
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Alicia Snchez Ferro
(address)
24th of November of 2013
Director of Human Resources
Data Analysis
Dear Mrs. Mara Lpez,
I saw in some online job search pages the offer of the job/job
offer of half-time Java programmer. I have the skills required for
it, so I would wish to apply for it and work in your company, which
I have seen find/consider very interesting.
For this job I am studying a Degree in Computer Science for this
job, so/therefore I have good qualifications for that job/it and
some skills as patience and work in groups/teamwork, also as
well.
I would wish to have an opportunity to make an interview in your
company and discuss with you these skills told before/I would
welcome the opportunity to meet you and discuss the possibility of
my working for your company.
Sincerely,
Alicia Snchez Ferro
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Catalonia Street, n 10
Cervera Lleida
27 November, 2013
Director of Human Resources
Ondara Auditors
Major Square, n 8
Cervera (25200) Lleida
Dear Sir,
I am writing to request information about the position of
full-time auditor that was advertised on Cerveras council website.
Unless Although your ad does(nt) not give many details about work
conditions, you specify that living in Cervera is essential.
My name is Virtut Ribalta and Im 24. Nowadays I live in
Barcelona but I would like to return to my village, Cervera. As you
can see in my CV, while I was studding studying my degree, I had a
grant that allowed me to work in Montreal for six months. I have a
year of experience as a consulter consultant in Faura Houses. After
that, I had the change chance to start working in Deloitte as an
auditor.
I consider that Im an organized, dynamic and a responsible
person. I love working in a team/teamwork and I have very good
computer skills. I would be very happy to meet with you and discuss
my qualifications further.
I hope to hear from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Virtut Ribalta
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Dear Mr. Baeza (Sir),
My name is Sandra R. I'm applying for a job of part-time
administrative assistant. (and) John G., one of your managing
managers, told me that your company are is looking for a part-time
administrative assistant and recepcionist receptionist and I think
that I have the skills you are looking for.
I'm attaching a copy of my resume which lists my work experience
as an administrative assistant. My qualifications for the position
include an ability to successfully write letters and correctly
answer calls. My attached resume gives you an idea of my
experience.
I would be very happy if you concede me an interview. I'd
welcome an opportunity to meet you and discuss the possibility to
work for your company and my qualifications for the position.
(Best regards).
Sincerely,
Sandra R.
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Rodrguez, Javier Sanitas Residencial Hospital RE: Enthusiastic
and Hard-Working Nurse Dear Director of Human Resources Sir/Madam,
Iam contacting you in regards to the Nurse nursing position at
Sanitas Residencial Hospital, as advertised on your website. I am
very interested in further particulars and in filling out an
application form. Ive studied to pursue the position of am a
trained professional nurse. I have (so) much to offer -- to helping
enrich clients lives as they live at home or while in the hospital
or to help providing them with comforting solutions to clients
while receiving in home-care. Beyond my enthusiasm and dedication,
I also have a background in nursing courses on at private
institutes and practice in multiple healthcare units. Id would be
happy to provide more detailed information greater detail about my
skills and experience during an interview. Please call me at your
earliest convenience. [this is redundant and somewhat
familiar...you have already asked to be called] (Looking forward to
hearing from you.) Sincerely, (Best regards) [redundant and a bit
too familiar], Denisa Andreea Drideanu (Your Phone Number)
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Director of Human Resources
Doxland Pharmaceutical
23LexingtonAvenue Hawthorne, NY 10532
Dear Sir,
Im writing in response to your job offer advertised on your
website, dated November 21th, where you need to hire a
pharmacist.
Im interested in that position because I think that I have the
skills you are looking for. As you can see in my resume, which is
attached to this letter, Im experienced as a pharmacist in this
field.
I worked for an important pharmaceutical company for four years
and Im currently part time working as a pharmacist three days a
week. Im also studying a masters degree in biochemistry which I
will finish next month.
(One of the reasons why Id like to get that position is because
Id rather have a full time work job from Monday to Friday)+.
Besides Im a responsible, hard-working and sociable person and I
have experience in working in teams/teamwork.
My resume contains additional details about my professional
accomplishments and academics. It would be a pleasure for me to be
able to have an interview to discuss my resume with you.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely
M Teresa Prez
+ I dont think you should mention this.
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C/ Constanti Ribalaigua, n 42
Zip Code City
24 November, 2013
Director of Human Resources
Gameloft
C/ Rossell, n 214,
Zip Code Barcelona.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Sara Fuerte, I am 27 years old and I would like to
apply for the position of 3D Environment Modeler. I saw your ad on
the website Infojobs and I think I have the skills you are looking
for.
I have over a year of experience as a 3D Artist in a creative
studio named El punto de vista. I also worked as a Graphic Designer
in different projects as you can see in my resume. I have a degree
in Audiovisual Communication from University of Seville. I have
successfully completed a course in Videogame Development at
Confederation of entrepreneurs of Andalusia, and a course in
Graphic Design at the school Ribera Cultural del Sur.
My qualifications for the position include skills in 3D high and
low poly modelling, as well as knowledge of videogame art
standards.
I am attaching a copy of my resume so that you can see my
experience and qualifications for the job. I would welcome an
opportunity to meet you and discuss the possibility of my working
for your company.
Thank you for considering my request.
Sincerely.
Sara Fuerte.
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Jos J. Cabello.
lamos Street, 19
Mlaga.
November 27, 2013.
Director of Human Resources:
Sur in English.
Larios Street, number 4.
Last week I saw your online ad for a full time job as a
journalist in your office in Malaga. I think I (could) have the
experience and the skills needed for that job. I have worked for
five years in La Opinin de Mlaga, as a part time journalist and two
years in on its website, writing about P politics.
I attach my Curriculum Vitae (resume), so that you can check my
work experience and my qualification. I wrote lots of articles
about P politics, both, N national and I international news. Before
that, I was a sport journalist, and I wrote about the weekend
football matches. I wrote also about the 2003 Football European
Champonist Championship. So, I could be adaptable to different
departments (and) as I am hardworking and responsible.
Although I (am working in) have a part time job right now, I
would like to change muy work job. Moreover, it would be a pleasure
to have an interview in the (next days) near future to discuss the
possibility of working in such an important company.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Jos Javier.
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New Education Magazine [applicant's name and address] Human
Resources Depart(a)ment Department 5th Main Street Manchester, NH,
etc. [name of state, abbreviated followed by zip code] November 25,
2013 Ref. 570 AF MARKETING Dear Sirs: [use plural only when there
is more than one addressee listed] I am writing to apply for the
position of Marketing Assistant which was advertised in the latest
edition of New Education Magazine. [use italics, if possible] I am
currently employed by a small school as a part-time teacher, but I
am keen to pursue a career in publishing, because I enjoy reading
and writing my own stories. As you will notice on the attached CV,
I (graduated) majored In Spanish Literature. At University I gained
considerable experience working on the student magazine; (so)
therefore, I am familiar with editing techniques. I work well under
pressure and enjoy working in a team. In addition, I speak French
and Spanish. I would be available for an interview (from)
beginning/anytime next week. Meanwhile, please do not hesitate to
contact me if you require further information. I look forward to
hearing from you. (Yours) Sincerely, Pablo del Rio
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C/Luxemburgo,4
Monday 18th November
Director of Human Resources
Mackenzie
Princesa, 2. Madrid
Dear Sarah / Madam,
I saw your online ad for the job full-time jewerely jeweler and
think that I have the skills you are looking for.
I am attaching a copy of my resume, wich lists my work
experience as a jewerely jeweler.
My qualifications for the position include dynamism and
organization.
I would be very happy to meet with you to discuss my
qualification further.
Sincerely.
Cristina Alonso.
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Ana Artero Hernando
C/Mlaga, 1
04638 Mojcar
Almera
Director of Human Resources
Mojcar Playa Asesores
Parque Comercial de Mojcar, Local 84 Planta 2,
04638 Mojcar
Almera
Dear Juan A.,
I am applying for the position of part-time accounting advisor
that was advertised in on your website.
My qualifications for the position include an ability to work
under pressure and to keep the accounts of all kinds of
companies.
I would welcome an opportunity to meet (with) you and discuss
the possibility of my working for your company.
Sincerely,
Ana.
The letter should be longer. Remember that a higher level of
complexity is expected for B1.
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