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  • 1C2 LISTENING-BASED SPEECH & CRITICAL REBUTTAL/DEBATE

    Winter 2015 Refresher Training(EC4-Giga & Eagle-Albatross+)

  • 2AGENDA

    Review

    Common Issues

    Practice Grading

  • 3LISTENING-BASED SPEECH RUBRIC

    Categories

    Opinion Statement

    Reason 1

    Reason 2

    Details

    Comprehensibility

    Presentation

  • 4CRITICAL REBUTTAL/DEBATE RUBRIC

    Categories

    Claim

    Support 1

    Support 2

    Details

    Rebuttal

    Comprehensibility

    Presentation

  • 5Presentation ScoringPauses Voice inflection Visual aids

    3 REF 893508 -Presentation (3)

    STUDENT USES RELEVANT PROPS THROUGHOUT THE RESPONSE

    2-3 REF 945462- Presentation (2-3)

    INCONSISTENT AND IMPROPER VOICE INFLECTION

    2-2 REF 933643 - Presentation (2-2)

    2-1

    INCONSISTENT AND IMPROPER VOICE INFLECTION

    1-2 STUDENT DOES NOT SHOW FACE / CAMERA BLOCKED / UNRELATED VIDEO / CEILING, WALL, ETC.

    REF 1032934 - Presentation (1-2)

    1-1 REF 1094875 - Presentation (1-1)

    Regardless

    0 STUDENT DOES NOT SPEAK BUT THERE ARE VISUAL AIDS

  • 6Common Issues in Critical Rebuttal

  • 7STANCES with a GRADE OF THREE

    Description Example

    Motion This House believes schools should require students to wear uniforms.

    Complete stance This house believes that students should not wear schooluniforms.

    Properly paraphrasedstance

    This house believes that we, students, must not useuniforms in school.

  • 8STANCES with a GRADE OF TWO

    Description Example

    Motion This House believes schools should require students to wear uniforms.

    Incomplete stance Students should not school uniforms.

    Prompt + short answer

    The speaker said that schools should require students to wear uniforms. I do not agree.

    SOT claim Uniforms are not good.

    Unclear claim I students school uniform.

    Incomplete stance Students should not school uniforms.

  • 9STANCES with a GRADE OF ONE

    Description Example

    Motion This House believes schools should require students to wear uniforms.

    Short answer I No, I am not agree.

    Short answer II I will rebut the speaker.

    Very unclear stance

    School uniforms.

    COT answer I like my dog. My dog is cute

  • 10

    COMMON ANSWER STRUCTURES IN CRITICAL REBUTTAL

    Situation Grading Scores

    Student agreed all the way

    Claim: AgreeSupport 1: AgreeSupport 2: AgreeDetailsRebuttal

    1112-10

    Claim agreed with the previous speaker, but supports rebutted the previous speakers main ideas

    Claim: AgreeSupport 1: DisagreeSupport 2: DisagreeDetailsRebuttal

    1NormalNormalNormalNormal

    Claim disagreed with the previous speaker but supports agreed with the previous speakers main ideas

    Claim: DisagreeSupport 1: AgreeSupport 2: AgreeDetailsRebuttal

    322NormalNormal

  • 11

    COMMON ANSWER STRUCTURES IN CRITICAL REBUTTAL

    Situation Grading Scores

    Claim agreed with the previous speaker, but supports both agreed and disagreed with the previous speakers claim

    Claim: AgreeSupport 1: DisagreeSupport 2: AgreeDetailsRebuttal

    223NormalNormal

    Claim disagreed with the previous speaker, but supports both agreed and disagreed with the previous speakers claim

    Claim: DisagreeSupport 1: AgreeSupport 2: DisagreeDetailsRebuttal

    323NormalNormal

  • 12

    IDENTIFYING SUPPORTS AND DETAILS

    The supports (rebuttals) are the statements that counter the arguments raised by the affirmative side.

    We also consider as supports (but not rebuttals) statements that counter the affirmatives stance even if they do not address a main idea of the affirmative side.

  • 13

    IDENTIFYING SUPPORTS AND DETAILS

    Case Example

    1 First, the speaker says that most math competition winners are of Asian descent. However, I strongly believe that most math

    competition winners are not Asians. (support only, without

    details)

    2 First, the speaker says that most math competition winners are of Asian descent. However, this is not true. (support). There

    are a lot of math competition winners from western

    countries. (detail)

    3 First, the speaker says that most math competition winners are of Asian descent. However, I dont agree with this. (support only, without details)

    4 First, I believe that most math competition winners are not of Asian descent. (support only, without details)

  • 14

    QUICK EXERCISES

    Motion Main Ideas

    Madam Speaker and fellow debaters, thank you for this opportunity to argue in favor of capital punishment.

    1. First, capital punishment has a long history in many countries across the world.

    2. Second, capital punishment is the best deterrent to prevent future crimes.

    3. Finally, it is cheaper to kill prisoners than to keep them in jail for their entire lives.

  • 15

    QUICK EXERCISES

    Grading Sample Response

    Ops I am now rebut the woman. She said capital punishment has a long history. I agree with that. In Korea kill criminals in the past. That is very good. And that is make good society, no criminals! And cheaper to kill prisoners. I dont like prisoners. So I think not favor of capital punishment. Thank you for listening!

    R1

    R2

    Det

    Reb

    Notes

  • 16

    QUICK EXERCISES

    Grading Sample Response

    Ops 3 I am now rebut the woman. She said capital punishment has a long history. I agree with that. In Korea kill criminals in the past. That is very good. And that is make good society, no criminals! And cheaper to kill prisoners. I dont like prisoners. So I think not favor of capital punishment. Thank you for listening!

    R1 2

    R2 2

    Det 2.3

    Reb 0

    Notes

    Structure This is an example of D-A-A structure. Supports are scored 2.

    Opinion We must count the proper one at the end.

  • 17

    QUICK EXERCISES

    Motion Main Ideas

    We on the affirmative side believe that hard work does not equal success.

    1. First, there are many products throughout history which became successful out of luck and not due to hard work.

    2. Conversely, throughout Coca-Colas history they have launched new products after lots of hard work to only encounter massive failure.

    3. Lastly, even if one works hard success is not guaranteed due to the variable of time.

  • 18

    QUICK EXERCISES

    Grading Sample Response

    Ops We, the opposition, strongly believe that hard work leads to success. First, hard work and not luck helps us learn how to succeed. When companies use hard work they learn more and they success. Second, I use hard work and succeed in school. I am not different from companies so they can copy me. Lastly, the speaker said Coca-Cola, they have launched new products. I agree with that. But Coca Cola is still develop and doing good. So we believe that hard work leads to success. I yield my time.

    R1

    R2

    Det

    Reb

    Notes

  • 19

    QUICK EXERCISES

    Grading Sample Response

    Ops 3 We, the opposition, strongly believe that hard work leads to success. First, hard work and not luck helps us learn how to succeed. When companies use hard work they learn more and they success. Second, I use hard work and succeed in school. I am not different from companies so they can copy me. Lastly, the speaker said Coca-Cola, they have launched new products. I agree with that. But Coca Cola is still develop and doing good. So we believe that hard work leads to success. I yield my time.

    Support 1 3

    Support 2 3

    Det 2.3

    Reb 1

    Notes

    Details The first and second details have no personal experience.

    Rebuttal The first support is a rebuttal of the first main idea.

  • 20

    Common Issues in Listening-Based Speech

  • 21

    OPINIONS with a GRADE OF TWO

    Description Example

    Prompt Would you like to have a *computer you can controlwith your brain?* the keyword computer can be substituted by the term BCI

    Improper opinion Would you like to have a computer you can control with your brain? Yes, I like computers.

    Incomplete opinion

    I like to do BCI.

    Prompt + short answer

    Would you like to have a computer you can control with your brain? No, I dont think so.

    SOT opinion Computers are good.

    Unclear opinion BCI is technology for controlling brain.

  • 22

    OPINIONS with a GRADE OF ONE

    Description Example

    Prompt Do you like watching 4D movies?

    Short answer I Of course!

    Short answer II Maybe.

    Very unclear stance

    It is 4D movies.

    COT answer I like ice cream.

  • 23

    MISSING OPINION

    Sample prompts

    Giga (C2-Wk1) All stores want to make money. Many of them use different tactics to make more money. First, they use different tricks to get you to buy more.

    Mega (C2-Wk2) First, they predict the future.

    Mega (C2-Wk4) Many people think ADHD is a terrible disorder. They have trouble paying attention. And they have reported creativity in children with ADHD. Thank you for listening.

    Giga (C2-Wk5) Today, it is common to see people with tattoos. They have become popular. But do not let young people tattoos. Because think about the risks and may cause and an infection.

    Please read the topic guides first since many templates seem to be opinions themselves.

  • 24

    SCORING DETAILS

    Point Example

    2-3 First, we combine exercise and video game. Video game is fun so when we exergame we have fun. We need to have fun so we will exercise everyday. If we exercise everyday we will healthy. Also can play exergames with anyone. You can exergame with my family. I want to exergame with my family.

    Both reasons had relevant details but lacked personal experience.

    2-2 Can exercise indoors is good. We can exercise in room even when it is raining outside. We can exercise we do not want go out. Also, can play exergames with anyone. Thank you for listening to my speech.

    The second reason was not explained.

  • 25

    SCORING DETAILS

    Point Example

    2-2 More and more teenagers are getting plastic surgeries. Allowteenagers to get plastic surgery. If get plastic surgery, will make friends easier if they were good looking. And friends like boys are handsome and girls are pretty. Thank you for my listen.

    Only one reason was provided and explained.

    2-1 Teenagers should not do plastic surgery. First, teenagers should be aware of the health risks. Do you know Hyomin? Hyomin is singer of Tara. She is plastic surgery. Second, want to look like celebrities because people like their idols. I think food is good.

    The second reason has an unrelated idea.

    0 More and more teenagers are getting plastic surgeries. First, plastic surgery would make them beautiful. Second, many teens dont want to get bullied.

  • 26

    SCORING DETAILS

    Situation Resolution

    R1 with irrelevant details, R2 missing R1 = NormalR2 = 0Dets = 2.1

    R1 with personal experience, R2 missing

    R1 = NormalR2 = 0Dets = 2.2

    R1 with irrelevant details, R2 with personal experience

    R1 = NormalR2 = NormalDets = 2.1

    R1 with irrelevant details, R2 with relevant details but without personal experience, insufficient

    R1 = NormalR2 = NormalDets = 2.1

  • 27

    SCORING DETAILS FLOWCHARTDid the

    student

    explain

    both

    reasons

    sufficiently?

    Did the

    student add

    an SOT

    detail?

    Did the

    student add

    a personal

    experience?

    Were both

    reasons

    given a

    detail?

    Did the

    student add

    an

    irrelevant

    detail?

    Did the

    student add

    a detail to

    at least one

    reason?

    Start

    Yes

    No

    Yes

    Yes

    NoYes 6

    No 4.1

    Yes 4.2

    No 2.3

    No 2.2

    Yes 2.1

    No 0

  • 28

    I would want to live in a city. Because it's surrounded by

    tall buildings.

    There is a lots of people in the city and restaurant too. But

    living in a city can be sick because it has a bad air like a

    car, engine, or trucks like that.

    Being in inside the city, parks can be intersting.

    When you go out, you can see cars and bikes move and if

    you opened the car window you can hear birds chirp an

    motorcycle roaring. Moreover, I like eating ice cream, too.

    So, that's why I would want to live in a city.

    There is a lots of people in

    the city and restaurant too.

    But living in a city can be

    sick because it has a bad

    air like a car, engine, or

    trucks like that.

    Moreover, I like eating

    ice cream, too.

    Do you agree that living in a small town is better than living in a big city? Give two

    reasons to support your answer.

    PARTIALLY-RELEVANT VS IRRELEVANT DETAILS

  • 29

    QUICK EXERCISES

    Prompt Sample Response

    Do you think invisibility cloakswould be more*beneficial or more*dangerous?

    One day, people may be able to buy real invisibility cloaks. I think invisibility cloaks are dangerous. Because they are not safe. People cannot see you and may hurt you. And you are danger in bad places because no one is tell you that are bad place. Also, because they are not allowed by government. Thank you for listening.

  • 30

    QUICK EXERCISES

    Grading Sample Response

    Ops 3 One day, people may be able to buy real invisibility cloaks. I think invisibility cloaks are dangerous. Because they are not safe. People cannot see you and may hurt you. And you are danger in bad places because no one is tell you that are bad place. Also, because they are not allowed by government. Thank you for listening.

    R1 2

    R2 3

    Det 2.2

    Notes

    R1 The reason is a repetitive detail. Repetitive reasons are scored 2.

    Det The text in violet support the first reason.

  • 31

    QUICK EXERCISES

    Prompt Sample Response

    Which *tactic should stores use?

    All stores want to make money. Many of them use different tactics to make more money. I think yes store tactics. Place important items at the back of store and people go to there and people see the items and buy them.

  • 32

    QUICK EXERCISES

    Grading Sample Response

    Ops 2 All stores want to make money. Many of them use different tactics to make more money. I think yes store tactics. Place important items at the back of store and people go to there and people see the items and buy them.

    R1 2

    R2 0

    Det 2.2

    Notes

    Ops The opinion is unclear.

    R1The first reason does not support the students opinion that we should use store tactics.

  • 33

    QUICK EXERCISES

    Prompt Sample Response

    Do you think companies should be allowed to advertisein schools?

    Do you think companies should be allowed to advertise in schools? Of course! They provide materials and supplies. When advertise in school, companies get more money and materials. It is easy to studying. Also, companies need to get more money. In my school company sell foods. They advertise. They have a lot of money. I want to have a lot of money. How about you? Thank you for listening!

  • 34

    QUICK EXERCISES

    Grading Sample Response

    Ops 2 Do you think companies should be allowed to advertise in schools? Of course! They provide materials and supplies. When advertise in school, companies get more money and materials. It is easy to studying. Also, companies need to get more money. In my school company sell foods. They advertise. They have a lot of money. I want to have a lot of money. How about you? Thank you for listening!

    R1 3

    R2 3

    Det 4.2

    Notes

    Ops The opinion is improperly stated.

    DetBoth reasons have explanations and one has a personal detail, but some of the details are partially irrelevant (e.g. I want to have a lot of money. How about you?) to the students reason.

  • 35

    Practice GradingActual responses

  • 36

    Motion Main Ideas

    This house believes that the

    government should regulate all

    advertisements to verify the claims

    made about a *product or *idea.

    1. First, the government must verify the

    statistics used in advertisements.

    2. Secondly, the government must verify the

    claims made by the advertisers.

    3. Lastly, the government must verify the

    credentials of the experts and celebrities

    who shill for certain products or ideas.

  • 37

    Transcription

    886720 I think governments should not regulate advertisements for some

    reasons. Firstly, advertisements give people a lot of information.

    For example, they can sell something new for people and they can

    give tips in daily life. Secondly, they help make up people's minds.

    If people can't buy what they want, they lose credibility to buy

    something new. Lastly, you said they give misleading statistics and

    they make false claims. But when people watch or see an

    advertisement, they'll surely consider credibility and suspect an

    exaggeration. In this reasons, I think governments should not

    regulate advertisements.

  • 38

    Correct Rationale

    886720 Claim 2 Claim: incomplete. The

    student did not state all the

    keywords from the previous

    speaker's opinion.

    Supports 1 & 2: They are

    relevant to the opinion.

    Details: There are details for

    both supports.

    Rebuttals should be 1: The

    students third Support

    attempts to rebut the

    previous speakers first and

    second main ideas.

    Support 1 1

    Support 2 1

    Details 2-3

    Rebuttals 1

    Comprehensibility 3

    Presentation 3

  • 39

    Motion Main Ideas

    Mr. Speaker and fellow debaters. We

    on the affirmative side believe that

    fast-food advertisements should not

    be allowed on TV.

    1. the constant repetition of advertisements

    brainwashes children

    2. when children watch these commercials,

    they constantly nag their parents

    3. *fast-food contributes to child obesity and

    therefore the advertisements of this food

    should be banned to *prevent the continual

    rise of the child obesity rate and early death

    due to obesity

  • 40

    Transcription

    889895 No, fast... fast food can advertisements. First, fast/fat food is just

    customer's choice. For example, when I want to eat fast food, we

    can give money to them and eat. But that not companies' fault.

    They know fast food is bad but they eat it, so

    theres/theyres/theirs fault. Second, fast food can easy to eat. Its

    comfortable and it needs just short times. It is easy to eat. In

    conclusion, I talk about fast food advertisement should not be

    allowed on TV.

  • 41

    Correct Rationale

    889895 Claim 2 Claim: The student 's claim is just unclear, but it is not irrelevant.

    Support 1: This support is relevant

    to the idea that fast food can be

    allowed/should be allowed to

    advertise.

    Support 2: The support does not

    clearly relate to the idea that fast

    food should advertise. The student

    talks about fast food being

    convenient to eat.

    Details: The details do not have

    any personal experience.

    Presentation: Few pauses and no

    visual aids or voice inflection.

    Support 1 3

    Support 2 2

    Details 2-3

    Rebuttals 0

    Comprehensibility 3

    Presentation 2.1

  • 42

    Motion Main Ideas

    We on the affirmative side believe

    that success stems from the

    influence of ones family.

    This house believes that ones family

    history is the biggest factor for

    success.

    1. First, if we look at many successful people in

    the world, we will see that it was their

    nurturing families in early childhood which

    were the first to influence them and put

    them on the path to success

    2. Secondly, many people are successful due to

    the success their parents had before them

    3. Lastly, parents make decisions on behalf of

    their children which in turn can influence

    their success later in life

  • 43

    Transcription

    970316 ..dont think that family history is the biggest factor for the

    success. Because firstly, if you just try hard, we do not need family

    history. Because the family history exactly you don't need it. And I

    think try harder, trying harder is more important than family

    history. And also secondly, they says that family history equals the

    DNA but one's smarts, smartness is more important than the

    familys DNA.

  • 44

    Correct Rationale

    970316 Claim 3 Claim: The student was able

    to state the motion correctly.

    Please consider when students

    disagree with either the

    prompt/motion OR the

    previous speaker's opinion.

    Details: The details for the

    second Support is missing.

    Comprehensibility: The

    response is rather repetitive,

    so it is slightly hard to follow

    the ideas.

    Support 1 3

    Support 2 3

    Details 2-2

    Rebuttals 0

    Comprehensibility 2

    Presentation 2-1

  • 45

    Prompt and Template TRPs

    Do you think companies should be

    allowed to advertise in schools?

    Some people think companies

    shouldnt be allowed to advertise

    their products in schools.

    1. want kids to nag their parents to

    buy things

    2. think up new ways to advertise to

    kids

    3. use different marketing techniques

    at schools

    4. provide materials and supplies

    5. sponsor contests or programs

  • 46

    Transcription

    952604 People think companies shouldn't be allowed to advertise their

    products in school. I think companies should be allowed advertise

    in schools because I think they want kids to nag their parents to

    buy thing. Also they think of new ways to advertise to kids. And

    use different marketing techniques at schools. I know they provide

    materials and supplies. Last, they sponsor contest or programs.

    Thank you for listening.

  • 47

    Correct Rationale

    952604 Claim 3 Comprehensibility: The

    TRPs are not used in a

    logical manner.

    Reason 1 2

    Reason 2 2

    Details 2-2

    Comprehensibility 2

    Presentation 3

  • 48

    Prompt and Template TRPs

    Would you ever get a tattoo?

    Today, it is common to see people

    with tattoos.

    1. have become very popular

    2. may want to get a piercing or

    tattoo

    3. think about the risks

    4. may cause an infection

    5. do not let young people get

    tattoos

  • 49

    Transcription

    1020358 Today it is common to see people with tattoos. First, tattoos is

    look pretty. So tattoos have become very popular and many

    people may want to get a piercing or tattoo. Second, tattoo is

    very dangerous thing. Many people do tattoo. That people is not

    think about the risk. We can hurt because we erase tattoo, doctor

    use laser. Laser is very dangerous thing. My same class Harry is do

    tattoo but we say tattoo is funny. He doesn't know dangerous. So

    tattoo is very dangerous thing. Thank you for listening to my

    speech.

  • 50

    Correct Rationale

    1020358 Claim 0 Opinion: missing.

    Reason 1: The idea that

    tattoos are pretty could be

    relevant to the idea that she

    would not get a tattoo.

    Comprehensibility: The latter

    part of the response,

    especially the part where the

    student gave her personal

    experience, has some errors.

    Support 1 3

    Support 2 3

    Details 4-1

    Comprehensibility 2

    Presentation 2-2

  • 51

    Prompt and Template TRPs

    Would you ever get a tattoo?

    Today, it is common to see people

    with tattoos.

    1. have become very popular

    2. may want to get a piercing or

    tattoo

    3. think about the risks

    4. may cause an infection

    5. do not let young people get

    tattoos

  • 52

    Transcription

    1044144 Today it is common to see people with tattoos. It has become

    very popular but we think about the risks. People may want to get

    a piercing or tattoo. Piercing may cause an infection it is

    dangerous. Do not let young people get tattoos. Thank you for

    listening to my speech.

  • 53

    Correct Rationale

    1044144 Claim 0 Opinion: The student only stated the template. The last sentence at

    the end ("do not let young people

    get tattoos") was taken from the

    TRPs.

    Reason 1 (2): The first part of the

    statement It has become very

    popular but we think about the

    risks supports the idea that it is

    common for people to have a

    tattoo, but the last part about the

    risks make the reason partially

    irrelevant.

    Comprehensibility: The TRPs were

    not used in a logical manner.

    Presentation: There is no voice

    inflection.

    Reason 1 2

    Reason 2 0

    Details 2-2

    Comprehensibility 2

    Presentation 2-1

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