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598 Unit 20 Punctuation
Using Semicolons and Colons
Write each sentence adding semicolons or colons as needed Write correct ifthe sentence needs no changes
1 Large automobile clubs aid travelers these travelers often write to the clubsfor information
2 I wrote to one of these organizations last month it promised to send me apacket of information
3 Within a week the organization sent me the following items a road map aguidebook and a car manual
4 I plan to leave next Saturday at 530 AM5 For possible emergencies I am taking these items a flashlight a first-aid kit
and a spare tire6 I also have a set of flares with instructions in case I have an accident7 It will take approximately nine hours for me to reach my destination I plan
to stop every two hours to rest during the trip8 When you drive long distances itrsquos important to stay awake stay alert and
drive safely but itrsquos easy to get tired and bored on long trips9 I have taken everything I need in my suitcase including the following a
bathing suit a pair of sunglasses and a good book10 On the return trip I will leave at 830 AM and expect to be home by 800 PM
Exercise 6
Using Semicolons and Colons in a Letter
Add semicolons or colons if needed to punctuate the following numbereditems
1Dear Sir or Madam
2I am planning a trip I am therefore seeking information about VirginiaTennessee and North Carolina 3I would like to visit the following citiesRichmond Raleigh and Atlanta 4Please send the following a road map anda guidebook and hotel information 5 If I leave my home in BaltimoreMaryland at 800 AM at what time will I arrive in Richmond
SincerelyAgtn-Mei Cho[
Exercise 7
Using Quotation Marksand Italics
Quotation marks signal a personrsquos exact words as well as the titlesof some works Italic typemdasha special slanted type that is used inprintingmdashidentifies titles of other works You can show italics on atypewriter or in handwriting by underlining
206 Using Quotation Marks and Italics 599
206206
RULE 1 Use quotation marks before and after the exact words ina direct quotation
rdquoFor centuries people dreamed of flyingldquo Iris said
RULE 2 Use quotation marks with both parts of a divided quotation
rdquoLeonardo da Vincirdquo said Ray ldquodrew plans of flying machinesldquo
RULE 3 Use a comma or commas to separate a phrase such as he saidfrom the quotation itself Place the comma inside closing quotationmarks
Chan said rdquoOrville and Wilbur Wright invented the airplanerdquo
ldquoIt was a great advance for civilizationldquo Lou said
RULE 4 Place a period inside closing quotation marks
Ed said ldquoAn Air Force captain made the first supersonic flightldquo
RULE 5 Place a question mark or an exclamation point inside thequotation marks when it is part of the quotation
Amy asked ldquoWhen did jumbo jets begin carrying passengersldquo
RULE 6 Place a question mark or an exclamation point outside thequotation marks when it is part of the entire sentence
Did I really hear Sam say ldquoJumbo jets are just big airplanesldquo
RULE 7 Use quotation marks around the title of a short story essaypoem song magazine or newspaper article or book chapter
rdquoArabyldquo [short story] rdquoTreesldquo [poem]
RULE 8 Use italics (underlining) for the title of a book play filmtelevision series magazine newspaper or work of art
The Pearl [book] Seventeen [magazine]
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Using Quotation Marks and Underlining for Titles
Write each item adding quotation marks or underlining for italics whereneeded
1 Through the Tunnel (short story)2 Denver Post (newspaper)3 Dream Variations (poem)4 Much Ado About Nothing (play)5 Kilimanjaro (essay)6 Nova (television series)7 Hook (film)8 Newsweek (magazine)9 Stardust (song)
10 The Budget Amendment Riddle (article)
Exercise 8
Using Punctuation Marks
Write each sentence adding quotation marks italics and other punctuationmarks where needed
1 Dolores said Supersonic planes travel at great speeds2 Only spacecraft added Randy travel faster than these airplanes3 Is it true supersonic transports cross the Atlantic in three hours asked
Ms Chu4 Dolores shouted What an exciting ride that must be5 Randy asked Is that plane a supersonic transport6 Ms Chu answered Yes a supersonic transport appeared in the film Airport7 Isnrsquot that plane called the Concorde asked Akira8 Yes said Ms Chu it flies between New York and Paris9 How fast does the Concorde travel asked Randy
10 Dolores looked up the information in The World Book Encyclopedia11 The article in Time explained why no American company built such a plane12 Roberto did you say That surprises me13 Some countries Ms Chu continued have very fast trains14 The article Japanrsquos Bullet Trains talks about the fast trains in Japan15 Randy exclaimed Riding on a train like that sounds terrific16 The ride is very quiet and smooth on the bullet train Ms Chu said17 Then Ms Chu said I have been on such a train18 Have you ever been on Francersquos fast trains Dolores asked19 Peter asked Do you know why train travel in America is not popular20 The article states Most Americans seem to prefer traveling by plane
Exercise 9
Using ApostrophesAn apostrophe can show possession It can indicate that letters are
missing within a contraction It can also signal the plurals of lettersnumbers or words when they refer to themselves
207 Using Apostrophes 601
207207
RULE 1 Use an apostrophe and an s (rsquos) to form the possessive of asingular noun
James + lsquos = Jamesrsquos nation + lsquos = nationlsquos
RULE 2 Use an apostrophe and an s (rsquos) to form the possessive of aplural noun that does not end in s
men + lsquos = menlsquos geese + lsquos = geeselsquos
RULE 3 Use an apostrophe alone to form the possessive of a pluralnoun that ends in s
boys + lsquo = boyslsquo Thompsons + lsquo = Thompsonslsquo
RULE 4 Use an apostrophe and an s (rsquos) to form the possessive ofan indefinite pronoun such as everyone everybody anyone no oneand nobody
anybody + lsquos = anybodylsquos someone + lsquos = someonelsquos
Do not use an apostrophe in a possessive pronoun such asmine its yours his hers ours and theirs
That car is ours Is that cat yours
The bird flapped its wings This cassette is hers
RULE 5 Use an apostrophe to replace letters that have beenomitted in a contraction
it + is = itlsquos I + will = Ilsquollwe + are = welsquore is + not = isnlsquot
RULE 6 Use an apostrophe to form the plurals of the names ofletters figures and words Underline the name to show its specialuse Do not underline the rsquos
three blsquos five 4lsquos iflsquos andlsquos or butlsquos
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602 Unit 20 Punctuation
Using Apostrophes in Possessive Forms
Write the possessive form of each word or group of words below Use anapostrophe and an -s (rsquos) or an apostrophe alone (rsquo)
1 teacher 7 country 13 Gladys 19 Thomas2 teachers 8 countries 14 dessert 20 wind3 Ms Sandoval 9 dog 15 friends 21 tents4 adults 10 Celia 16 dress 22 people5 deer 11 women 17 islands 23 youth6 man 12 heroes 18 mice 24 teeth
25 teams
Exercise 10
Using Apostrophe Items
For each sentence write any words that require apostrophes Insertapostrophes where needed Write correct if the sentence needs no changes
1 The friends bicycles are ready for the long trip2 Ada has made sure shes prepared3 ldquoIm ready to startrdquoAda said4 ldquoWere ready when you arerdquo replied Jess and Kim5 ldquoIs the bicycle with the basket yoursrdquo asked Kim6 The friends stopped cycling to watch two soccer games7 ldquoWhy do all the shirts have Ts on themrdquo asked Isamu8 ldquoIts anyones guessrdquo said Inez9 That shirt is hers
10 A train went by with its horn blaring11 Theres more food for everyone in the kitchen12 The picture book on sale in the store next door is perfect for teaching your
cousin her ABCs13 ldquoWe should take umbrellas with usrdquo Jack said ldquosince it looks as if its raining
outsiderdquo14 The tickets date seems to be incorrect15 The jackets all had large Js on the back16 The coach gave rings to the girls17 According to Jon its yours18 Its clear that the people in charge of the event planned carefully19 Claudias watch broke when she fell off her bicycle20 His parents told him to watch his ps and qs
Exercise 11
Using Hyphens Dashesand Parentheses
208 Using Hyphens Dashes and Parentheses 603
208208
RULE 1 Use a hyphen to show the division of a word at the endof a line Always divide the word between its syllables
Astronauts operate spacecraft and conduct engi-neering medical and scientific experiments in space
RULE 2 Use a hyphen in compound numbers from twenty-onethrough ninety-nine
seventy-six twenty-three
RULE 3 Use a hyphen to spell out a fraction
Some astronauts receive one-half pay upon retirement[modifier]
One-half of all astronauts have a masterrsquos degree[noun]
RULE 4 Use a hyphen or hyphens in certain compound nounsCheck the dictionary to see which ones need hyphens
great-grandmother sister-in-law attorney-at-law
RULE 5 Use a hyphen in a compound modifier when it precedesthe word it modifies
She is a well-trained astronaut She is well trained
RULE 6 Use a dash to show a sudden break or change in thoughtor speech If the sentence continues use a second dash to markthe end of the interruption
Dr Owensmdashhe lives nearbymdashteaches astronomy
RULE 7 Use parentheses to set off words that define or helpfullyexplain a word in the sentence
Flight training for the space program consists of trainingin simulators (devices that reproduce the conditions ofspace flight) and in other special equipment
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604 Unit 20 Punctuation
Using Hyphens
Write the items below using a hyphen or hyphens where needed Writecorrect if an item needs no changes
1 one half interest 8 three fourths 14 ninety five2 great uncle majority 15 red haired girl3 thirty five 9 forty two 16 twenty story4 Anglo Saxon 10 high powered building5 well liked leader speaker 17 soft boiled egg6 merry go round 11 first lady 18 sight seeing7 thirty two 12 forty minute class 19 two thirds vote
missions 13 English speaking 20 five mile walkactor
Exercise 12
Using Hyphens Dashes and Parentheses
Write each sentence adding hyphens dashes and parentheses where neededWrite correct if a sentence needs no changes
1 Astronauts undergo a six month training course2 Most astronauts are pilots they already know about flying3 At first no civilians could be astronauts only military men were selected4 Now men and women both scientists and other professionals can fly into
space5 Astronauts must follow a low fat diet as part of their training6 The astronauts and cosmonauts in the Apollo Soyuz Test Project visited each
otherrsquos countries7 The astronauts familiarized themselves with the equipment with the flight
plan with but you know that8 The space travelers participated in joint rehearsals of the mission9 Dr Ilych he is a fine teacher led the sessions
10 As a scientist Dr Ilych is well regarded in Russia11 He trained two thirds of the participants12 Russian scientists sometimes schedule four week missions13 American space trips these are space shuttle flights are fairly short14 The crew is well trained to carry out scientific experiments15 Thanks to much improved technology we can watch them on television16 Itrsquos possible to speak directly to the astronauts they can answer directly too17 Astronauts study distant stars some in other galaxies18 Space flights have resulted in income producing inventions19 Only one accident a very tragic one has occurred with the space shuttle20 The shuttle lifted off one half hour late
Exercise 13
Using Abbreviations
209 Using Abbreviations 605
209209
Punctuation
RULE 1 Use the abbreviations Mr Mrs Ms and Dr before namesAbbreviate professional or academic titles that follow names
Mr Carl Baird Jr Vivian Huang MD Ana Elias PhDMs Leona Wilson MA James Nichols RN
RULE 2 Use all capitals and no periods for abbreviations that arepronounced letter by letter or as words Two exceptions are US andWashington DC which do use periods
NHS National Honor Society PDT Pacific daylight time
NATO North Atlantic Treaty Organization
PIN personal identification number
RULE 3 With exact times use AM (ante meridiem ldquobefore noonrdquo)and PM (post meridiem ldquoafter noonrdquo) For years use BC (beforeChrist) and sometimes AD (anno Domini ldquoin the year of the Lordrdquoafter Christ)
845 AM 630 PM 30 BC AD 476
RULE 4 Abbreviate days and months only in charts and lists
Mon Tues Wed Apr Aug Sept Oct Nov Dec
RULE 5 In scientific writing abbreviate units of measure Useperiods with abbreviations of English units but not of metric units
inch(es) in pound(s) lb gallon(s) galcentimeter(s) cm gram(s) g liter(s) l
RULE 6 On envelopes abbreviate words such as Street Avenue RoadBoulevard Court Drive and Circle Spell out these words everywhereelse
St Ave Rd Blvd Ct Dr CirLetrsquos meet at the corner of First Avenue and Elm Street
RULE 7 On envelopes use the US Postal Service two-letterabbreviations for state names
AL Alabama MO Missouri WA Washington
KY Kentucky ME Maine MA Massachusetts
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606 Unit 20 Punctuation
Using Abbreviations
Write the correct abbreviation for each underlined item
1 after Christ 1000 10 Internal Revenue 18 United Nations2 Mister Roosevelt Service 19 Fred Jackson Doctor3 76 Melrose Avenue 11 42 Bradford Drive of Philosophy4 Don Newell Junior 12 32 feet 20 Blake Road5 Wednesday 13 November 23 21 October 246 1 inch 14 1100 before Christ 22 January 157 Atlanta Georgia 15 15 liters 23 Kansas City8 Lexington Kentucky 16 April 23 Missouri9 Tat Lam Medical 17 7 inches 24 Seattle Washington
Doctor 25 Portland Maine
Exercise 14
Using Abbreviations
Write the abbreviation for each underlined item Write correct if no abbrevia-tion should be used
1 Our new house is at 14 Laurel Street2 The letter from Gail R Momaday Registered Nurse contained information
about the public-health seminar3 It stated that a meeting will be held from 1130 in the morning until 445 in
the afternoon4 The meeting will be held on Monday August 175 Scheduled speakers include Doctor Hilario Reyes6 Carol McQuaid Master of Arts plans to speak on art therapy7 Write to the Environmental Protection Agency8 The nearest office is in Boston Massachusetts9 That office is twenty kilometers from my house
10 That large building houses the Federal Bureau of Investigation11 The mall is full of shoppers on Saturday and Sunday12 Our tour begins on August 13 and ends on September 413 The bus leaves from Newark New Jersey at 830 at night14 On Tuesday we will be in Baltimore Maryland15 That cathedral is a copy of one built in after Christ 100016 The students from Ohio State University toured with us17 The Central Intelligence Agencyrsquos headquarters are not open to the public18 [on an envelope] Doctor Amy Salazar19 6758 Bradley Drive20 Jackson Missouri 63755
Exercise 15
Writing NumbersIn charts and tables you always write numbers as figures However
in an ordinary sentence you sometimes spell out numbers and some-times write them as numerals
2010 Writing Numbers 607
20102010
RULE 1 Spell out numbers that you can write in one or two words
In the early nineteenth century stagecoaches traveled at aspeed of less than twenty-five miles per hour
RULE 2 Use numerals for numbers of more than two words
The first coaches traveled a distance of 392 miles
RULE 3 Spell out any number that begins a sentence or rewordthe sentence so that it does not begin with a number
Three thousand one hundred coaches existed inEngland by 1836
RULE 4 Write a very large number as a numeral followed by theword million or billion
Did these coaches carry more than 25 million passengers
RULE 5 If related numbers appear in the same sentence use allnumerals
For a trip of 390 miles drivers changed horses every20 miles
RULE 6 Spell out ordinal numbers (such as first or second)
In America Wells Fargo amp Company ranked first for itscoach service
RULE 7 Use words to express the time of day unless you are writ-ing the exact time or using the abbreviation AM or PM
The journey began at six orsquoclock in the morningIt ended at 915 PM
RULE 8 Use numerals to express dates house and street numbersapartment and room numbers telephone numbers page numbersamounts of money of more than two words and percentagesWrite out the word percent
July 19 1832 15 Summit Road Apartment 6E 40 percent
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608 Unit 20 Punctuation
Writing Numbers
Write the correct form for the underlined numbers in the followingsentences Write correct if a sentence needs no changes
1 The first stage line came into existence in England in about sixteenhundred seventy
2 This stage line covered a distance of six hundred and fifty-one kilometers3 Did coaches in England travel at least fifty-five million miles before the
rail-ways replaced them4 200 years ago the United States Congress began mail service by stagecoach5 For a trip of 360 miles eighteen drivers each traveled about twenty miles6 Some trips from Philadelphia to Ohio began at six-thirty am7 The 1st stagecoach lines were established in colonial America in seventeen
hundred fifty-six8 Horse-drawn coaches rode along at ten miles per hour9 Now Americans can fly to London in the Concorde jet at nearly fourteen
hundred miles per hour10 Before eighteen hundred seventy-five the streetcar (or tram) had replaced
the horse-drawn coach11 The 1st streetcars were called horsecars because teams of horses pulled the
wooden cars12 Four horses were needed to haul the cars up the steep hills of San Francisco
California13 The first trolley line in San Francisco was opened in eighteen hundred
seventy-three14 A trolley line in Portland Oregon was the 2nd steepest ever built in the
United States15 Most of the trolley lines in San Francisco had been abandoned by the
beginning of the 20th century16 American cities were growing quicklymdashfifty cities had more than one
hundred thousand inhabitants17 By nineteen hundred and ten electric streetcars had replaced horsecars18 In the 1920s and nineteen thirties car travel made streetcars obsolete19 It costs one dollar and twenty-five cents to buy one token for the bus or
subway20 The new subway system built recently in the city carries forty percent
of all commuters
Exercise 16
Grammar Review 609
P U N C T U A T I O N
Time travel is one of Jack Finneyrsquos favorite subjects In the storyldquoThe Third Levelrdquo Finneyrsquos narrator believes there are three levelsat Grand Central Station the monumental railroad station locatedin the heart of Manhattan Finney writes however that ldquothe presi-dents of the New York Central and the New York New Haven andHartford railroads will swear on a stack of timetables that thereare only twordquo The passage has been annotated to show some ofthe rules of punctuation covered in this unit
Literature Model
from ldquoThe Third Levelrdquoby Jack Finney
I turned into Grand Central from Vanderbilt Avenueand went down the steps to the first level where you
take trains like the Twentieth Century Then I walkeddown another flight to the second level where the subur-ban trains leave from ducked into an arched doorwayheading for the subwaymdashand got lost Thatrsquos easy to doIrsquove been in and out of Grand Central hundreds of timesbut Irsquom always bumping into new doorways and stairsand corridors Once I got into a tunnel about a mile longand came out in the lobby of the Roosevelt HotelAnother time I came up in an office building on Forty-sixth Street three blocks away
Sometimes I think Grand Central is growing like atree pushing out new corridors and staircases like rootsTherersquos probably a long tunnel that nobody knows aboutfeeling its way under the city right now on its way toTimes Square and maybe another to Central Park
Period at theend of a
declarativesentence
Hyphen in acompound number
Apostrophe ina contraction
Comma beforebut that is joining
main clauses
UNIT 20UNIT 20 Grammar ReviewGrammar Review
(continued)
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Review Exercise 1 Using End Marks
Write the correct end mark for each sentence Then write whether thesentence is declarative imperative interrogative or exclamatory
1 The narrator a young man named Charley claimed that there were threelevels at Grand Central Station
2 What a crazy idea3 His friends didnrsquot believe him4 Would you believe him5 Think of when your friends didnrsquot believe you6 If you think Grand Central Station is complicated you should see the train
stations in Tokyo Japan7 Some stations have as many as twenty-five exits to the street8 Did you know that you can do all your shoppingmdashfrom groceries to shoesmdash
in the train station9 Buy your ticket before you get on the train
10 Do you need a map of the transit system
Review Exercise 2 Using Commas
Write each sentence adding commas where needed
1 The main waiting room at Grand Central Station unbelievably is largeenough to hold a football field
2 Many large cities have an underground transport system a bus system andstreetcars
3 Public transportation as you can tell is often ignored and not well funded4 Washington and Los Angeles two large cities have just built public transit
systems to make commuting easier5 Did you know Dr McFarlan that France and Japan have trains that operate
much faster than ours
And maybe mdash because for so many people through theyears Grand Central has been an exit a way of escape mdashmaybe thatrsquos how the tunnel I got into But I nevertold my psychiatrist friend about that idea
Dashes to showan interruption
in thought
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Review Exercise 3 Using Commas with Introductory Wordsand Phrases
Write each sentence adding commas where needed Write correct if asentence needs no changes
1 For centuries people have dreamed about space travel2 On October 4 1957 the first artificial satellite was placed in orbit3 For the Russians in the 1950s the launch of Sputnik was a major
achievement4 Staying in orbit for twenty-three days Sputnik relayed information to Earth5 At the age of twenty-seven Yuri Gagarin became the first person in space6 At first unfortunately many of Americarsquos rocket tests were unsuccessful7 Blasting off in May 1961 Alan Shepard became Americarsquos first astronaut8 America was finally able to claim it had entered the space age9 Orbiting the Earth three times John Glenn found the view magnificent
10 Unfortunately accidents have marred the American space program
Review Exercise 4 Using Commas in Compound Sentences
Write each compound sentence adding commas where needed If a sentenceneeds no commas write correct
1 Some ferries just carry people and some transport people and vehicles2 Oil tankers load oil in one port and pump it out at its destination3 Oil tankers are very efficient for oil but they cannot transport other
cargoes4 Tugs help push big ships into position and turn ships around5 A cruise can be very relaxing and many cruise lines offer a wide variety of
trips for vacationers6 Most cruise ships offer several restaurants and provide a range of activities7 The ship can dock at a deep-water port or passengers can be ferried ashore
in small boats8 You can cruise for a few days or sail for up to a month9 Iron ships played a role in the Civil War but they were soon replaced with
ships built of steel10 Outdated warships are mothballed or they are sold for scrap
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Review Exercise 6 Using Commas
Write each sentence adding commas where needed If a sentence needs nocommas write correct
1 The game will be played in Stanford California at Maples Pavilion2 The last time the team won was February 19913 Will Roy Williams MD travel with the team4 The date of the championship game is March 4 2005 at eight orsquoclock5 Address the ticket request to 231 North Ridge Road Palo Alto CA 943016 Parents will be traveling with the team too7 Along with shoes shirts and jackets were donated by the booster group8 The award ceremony on March 10 2005 will be held in San Francisco9 Bands from Sacramento California and Reno Nevada will be playing
10 Instead of rings scholarships will be given to the winners
Review Exercise 5 Using Commas with Introductory Adverb Clauses
Write each sentence adding commas where needed If a sentence needs nocommas write correct Remember that an adverb clause is a subordinateclause that tells how when why or where an action takes place
1 The Pony Express is very famous even though it lasted just eighteen months2 Before it was founded mail was transported to California by ship3 When a ship docked in California everyone rushed to hear the latest news
and pick up mail4 Delivering mail overland was difficult because winter weather was harsh5 Even when a southern route was used the trip across the country by stage-
coach took more than three weeks6 When it was proposed the Pony Express promised a ten-day crossing7 The Pony Express used stagecoach stations wherever it was possible8 Other stations were built so that riders could get fresh horses9 Although hundreds applied to be riders only eighty were chosen
10 When the first run was completed the riders were hailed as heroes
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Review Exercise 7 Using Commas with Direct Quotations
Write each sentence adding commas where needed
1 ldquoThe first around-the-world nonstop flight took place in 1986rdquo Mark said2 ldquoThe pilotsrdquo Jessica stated proudly ldquowere Dick Rutan and Jeanna Yeagerrdquo3 ldquoIn order to make the trip without refuelingrdquo Mark explained ldquothe plane had
to carry its own fuel supplyrdquo4 ldquoThe planersquos long narrow wingsrdquo he said ldquowere designed to carry fuelrdquo5 ldquoThe trip took nine daysrdquo Jessica added6 ldquoThis was so different from Charles Lindberghrsquos flight across the Atlanticrdquo
Mark said7 ldquoLindberghrsquos flightrdquo Jessica stated ldquotook thirty-three hoursrdquo8 ldquoHis plane was called the Spirit of St Louisrdquo she said9 ldquoLindbergh was hailed as a hero when he landed in Francerdquo stated Mark
10 ldquoHe was revered in Americardquo Jessica added
Review Exercise 8 Using Commas and End Marksin Direct Quotations
Write each sentence adding commas and end marks where needed
SAMPLE ldquoWhen did man first step on the moonrdquo Jamie askedANSWER ldquoWhen did man first step on the moonrdquo Jamie asked
1 ldquoHow long did the astronauts train for their missionrdquo Sam asked2 ldquoThree astronauts were on the Apollo 11 flight to the moonrdquo Jamie explained3 ldquoNeil Armstrong you knowrdquo Mark announced ldquowas not a military manrdquo4 Jamie exclaimed ldquoI found Neil Armstrongrsquos words so inspiringrdquo5 Sam asked ldquoWhat exactly did he say when he stepped on the moonrdquo6 ldquoI wonderrdquo Sam said ldquowhat he expected to find on the moonrsquos surfacerdquo7 Peter asked ldquoDoes anyone remember the name of the second man to walk on
the moonrdquo8 Who heard Armstrong say ldquoThe Eagle has landedrdquo9 Sam said ldquoMillions of Americans watched the landing on televisionrdquo
10 Jamie asked ldquoWhat happened to the rock samples they brought backrdquo
Punctuation
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Review Exercise 9 Punctuating Direct Quotations
Write each sentence adding quotation marks commas and end markswhere needed
1 Juan asked How many interstates are there in the United States2 Theresa explained The major roads are all numbered3 With interstates she said the highways that go east-west across the country
are given even numbers4 The interstates that go north-south she continued are given odd numbers5 Todd asked Is Interstate 90 in the north or the south of the United States6 Interstate 90 Juan answered runs from Massachusetts to Seattle7 Where is Interstate 5 Theresa asked8 Juan exclaimed Thatrsquos one of the newest roads in the country9 Did I hear you say that itrsquos easy to find your way around Boston
asked Juan10 I like to navigate when my parents drive Theresa said as long as I have a
good map to follow
Review Exercise 10 Using Apostrophes
For each sentence write any words that require apostrophes Insertapostrophes where needed Write correct if a sentence needs noapostrophes
SAMPLE Its snowing hard right nowANSWER Itrsquos
1 Whats it like to ride on a monorail2 Some monorails hang down from a single rail3 In Disney Worlds monorail system the car straddles the track4 Is their system like yours in Seattle5 Its a transportation system that has not been very popular in
America6 My seat is here but theirs is on the other side of the car7 The womens packages were accidentally left on the train8 Only tickets marked with As and Bs are accepted for the ride9 The conductor said that it was someones seat
10 Dr Adamss invention will make train travel more comfortable
Grammar Review 615
Grammar ReviewGrammar Review
Review Exercise 11
ProofreadingThe following passage is about Russian artist Simon Faibisovichwhose work appears on the next page Rewrite the passage cor-recting the errors in spelling capitalization grammar andusage Add any missing punctuation There are ten errors
Simon Faibisovich1Simon Faibisovich a russian painter who lives in Moscow 2Trained
as an architect he teached himself to paint 3His work was nevershown publically before American gallery owner Phyllis Kind discov-ered him in 1987 4There have been several shows of his work in NewYork New York since then
5Mister Faibisovich paints large pictures of ordinary people doingordinary things such as standing at a bus stop or waiting in line for food6His portraits are more better than snapshots 7The faces of the people hepaints reflects a yearning for something else in their lifes 8Just as Charleyviews a train station as an opportunity to escape the boy in the paintingon the next page is clearly longing for something besides a bus ride
Review Exercise 12
Mixed ReviewWrite correctly the sentences with spelling and punctuation errors Thereare twenty errors in all If the sentence contains no errors write correct
1When a person lives in a big city with a large population its easyto feel lonely sometimes 2Trucks and buses speed by on the roadsand crowds jam the sidewalks 3Are you ever afraid of just crossingthe street 4Getting away may mean going to the country or it may meantaking a walk in a big park
5In Central Park in New York City you can forget that youre in themiddle of one of Americas biggest cities 6The parks trees shade peopleon summer days you can take long walks on a five mile path through thewoods 7You can even go boating if you want 8On Sundays people arentallowed to drive their cars through the park
9Imagine what an escape a space trip must be 10Looking down on(continued)
Punctuation
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Simon Faibisovich Boy 1984
Earth from a spaceship you would have the most magnificent view 11Its soquiet out in space no one would bother you 12When Buzz Aldrin landed onthe moon he looked around and said Beautiful beautiful beautifulmdashamagnificent desolation
Writing ApplicationWriting Application
Punctuation
Writing Application 617
Quotation Marks in WritingIn this passage from The GatheringVirginia Hamilton brings her charac-ters to life by presenting their exactwords She uses quotation marks andcommas to clearly identify wherethose words known as dialogue beginand end Note the punctuation marks
ldquoWow Magicrdquo said DorianCelester hummed a comic toningentertaining them with the light
ldquoWhatever it was it got hotrdquoThomas said He eyed Celester sus-piciously
ldquoA property of light is heatrdquotoned Celester ldquoHe who puts handin fire will singe his fingertipsrdquo
ldquoI get the messagerdquo Thomasmuttered
ldquoCelester you have powerfulgiftsrdquo Justice said
Techniques withQuotation MarksTry to apply some of VirginiaHamiltonrsquos writing techniquesas you write and revise your own work
Make your characters vivid bycapturing their exact words Usequotation marks before and aftereach direct quotation Comparethe following
BLAND VERSION Dorian was surprised
HAMILTONrsquoS VERSION ldquoWow Magicrdquosaid Dorian
Keep your dialogue clear by usingcommas to signal the shift from aquoted sentence to surroundingtext
INCORRECT VERSION ldquoA property oflight is heatrdquo toned Celester
HAMILTONrsquoS VERSION ldquoA property oflight is heatrdquo toned Celester
2
1
Try out these techniques by revising the following passage using a separatepiece of paper Decide which information might be better presented as dialogue inquotation marks Use commas as necessary to separate that dialogue from other text
Nanrsquos toes felt frozen She looked around in wonder at all the snow Seeing her dis-may her father told her about the Blizzard of 1888 He explained that cities had beenburied under several feet of snow People were stranded on trains and at work Nan sug-gested that it might have been interesting to see that much snow It might help her feelhappier about living in Tucson where it never snows Her father laughed at her sugges-tion and headed back inside
PracticePractice
For more aboutthe writingprocess see TIMEFacing the BlankPage pp 97ndash107
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