© Prentice Hall, 2008 Business Communication Today, 9eChapter 5 - 1 Writing Business Messages.

© Prentice Hall, 2008 Business Communication Today, 9e Chapter 5 - 1

Writing Writing Business MessagesBusiness Messages


Three-Step Writing Three-Step Writing ProcessProcess

• Planning

• Writing

• Completing


Adapt to the AudienceAdapt to the Audience

• Sensitivity

• Relationships

• Style and tone


Audience SensitivityAudience Sensitivity

• Adopt a “you” attitude

• Demonstrate business etiquette

• Emphasize the positive

• Use bias-free language


Using the “You” AttitudeUsing the “You” Attitude

• Focus on your audience

• Practice genuine empathy

• Be sensitive to situations

• Keep criticism professional


The “You” AttitudeThe “You” Attitude

• Instead of this: To help us process this order, we must ask for another copy of the requisition.

• Use this: So that your order can be filled promptly, please send another copy of the requisition.


The “You” AttitudeThe “You” Attitude

• Instead of this: You should never use that type of paper in the copier.

• Use this: That type of paper doesn’t work very well in the copier.


Business EtiquetteBusiness Etiquette

• Practice courtesy

• Be diplomatic

• Respond promptly


Emphasize the PositiveEmphasize the Positive

• Instead of this:– Cheap merchandise– Toilet paper– Used cars– High-calorie foods– Elderly person– Pimples and zits

• Use this:– Bargain prices– Bathroom tissue– Resale cars– High-energy food– Senior citizen– Complexion

problems


Bias-Free LanguageBias-Free Language

• Age

• Gender

• Disability

• Race or ethnicity


Build Audience Build Audience RelationshipsRelationships

• Establish your credibility

• Promote your company’s image


Establish Your CredibilityEstablish Your Credibility

• Honesty and objectivity

• Awareness of audience needs

• Credentials, knowledge, expertise

• Endorsements

• Confidence and performance

• Communication style

• Sincerity


Build Company ImageBuild Company Image

• Be a spokesperson

• Promote company interests

• Follow company guidelines

• Observe experienced colleagues

• Ask for assistance


Controlling Style and Controlling Style and ToneTone

• Use a conversational tone

• Write in plain English

• Select active or passive voice


Use a Conversational Use a Conversational

ToneTone• Business messages

– Avoid obsolete or pompous language

– Avoid preaching or bragging

– Be careful with intimacy

– Use humor carefully


Write in Plain EnglishWrite in Plain English

• Straightforward

• Easy to understand

• Conversational


Use the Right VoiceUse the Right Voice

• Active voice

– Subject + verb + object

• Passive voice

– Object + verb + subject


Composing the MessageComposing the Message

• Choosing strong words

• Writing effective sentences

• Crafting coherent paragraphs


Functional and Content Functional and Content WordsWords

• Correctness

• Suitability

– Denotation and connotation

– Abstraction and concreteness


Finding Words Finding Words that Communicate Wellthat Communicate Well

• Select powerful words

• Choose familiar words

• Avoid clichés and buzzwords

• Use jargon carefully


Effective SentencesEffective Sentences

• Simple

• Compound

• Complex

• Compound-complex


Coherent Unified Coherent Unified ParagraphsParagraphs

• Paragraph elements

– Topic sentence

– Support sentences

– Transitional elements


Paragraph DevelopmentParagraph Development

• Illustration

• Comparison and contrast

• Cause and effect

• Classification

• Problem and solution


Using TechnologyUsing Technology

• Style sheets and templates

• Autocompletion and autocorrection

• File merge and mail merge

• Endnotes, footnotes, indexes and tables of contents

• Document wizards

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