Top admit toefl event beatoefl 20131025 (coupon code inside)

PRESS & CONFERENCESWon 1st place in Echelon 2013 Tokyo Satellite startup competition

Left: Charles (Top Admit) Right: Mohan Belani (Organizer)

PRESS & CONFERENCES

Participated in Echelon Conference

Singapore in 2011 and 2013.

Featured article in Taiwan’s business

magazine in 2011.

Featured article in Taiwan’s major business

magazine in 2013.

PRESS & CONFERENCES

Selected as one the the Top 6 Internet

Start-ups by Technode in 2011.

Featured article in Shanghai Morning

Post in 2009.

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