The Conscientization of the Zombie: Breaking free from oppressive structures by deconstructing cages of identity, privilege and power
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The Conscientization of the Zombieby Adeline Cooke
WORD COUNT 3287CHARACTER COUNT 18090
TIME SUBMITTED 03-DEC-2012 05:19PMPAPER ID 19743545
FINAL GRADE
70 / 0
GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
This is a very interesting deconstruction of the relation between power privilege anddifference with application to a very poignant and personal reflection on the construction ofself in the context of social constrcutions.It is clear that the student is able to make direct application in a non defensive, questioningreflective manner thereby demonstrating the capacity to digest very complex issues andscholarship and to use this in the construction of a complicated assignment.
i really liked the reframing of 'empowerment to use Freire's concept.
Be mindeful of using generalisation.
Be mindeful to keep up the use of refrerences consistently throughout the assignment
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1.1. actually lorde did not say power was the master's tool and she often used the concept of cpower in a positiveway
2.2. excellent
3.3. excellent - reference please
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4.4. not analyse this and link to theory to drive the point home / nail the point
5.5. and you point is - again you make excellent use of scholarship but then you need to draw it together -dismantle
6.6. excellent
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7 .7 . lack of references - increase the references
8.8. good
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9.9. good
10.10. it is more than a refusal to be put into a box it is the recognition that the intersectional experience is greater
11.11. well i am not so sure about this analysis
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12.12. excellent
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