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Writing Style – APA style

By: Husam M. BinSasiUniversity of Misurata, Faculty of Arts

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The prime objective of scientific reporting is clear communication. You can achieve this by presenting ideas in an orderly manner and by expressing yourself smoothly and precisely. Establishing a tone that conveys the essential points of your study in an interesting manner will engage readers and communicate your ideas more effectively.

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General Guidelines

1) Continuity in Presentation of Ideas2) Smoothness of Expression3) Tone4) Economy of Expression5) Precision and Clarity6) Linguistic Devices

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1) Continuity in Presentation of Ideas

Continuity in words, concepts, and thematic development from the opening statement to the conclusion can be achieved by using:

1. Punctuation marks, and2. Transitional words.

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1. Punctuation Marks:

They cue the reader to the pauses, inflections, subordination, and pacing normally heard in speech.

Use the full range of punctuation aids available. Neither overuse nor underuse one type of punctuation. Use punctuation to support meaning.

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2. Transitional Words:

These words help maintain the flow of thought, especially when the material is complex or abstract.

A pronoun that refers to a noun in the preceding sentence not only serves as a transition but also avoids repetition

Be sure the referent is obvious.

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Make sure to use transition devices, such as:

time links:(then, next, after, while, since), cause—effect links:

(therefore, consequently, as a result) addition links:(in addition, moreover, furthermore, similarly) contrast links(but, conversely, nevertheless, however, although)

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2) Smoothness of Expression

Setting up ambiguity; inserting the unexpected; omitting the expected; and suddenly shifting the topic, tense, or person—can confuse or disturb readers of scientific prose

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Therefore

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Try to avoid these devices and aim for clear and logical communication.

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Peer reviewing helps you :

spot contradictions; catch omissions; target irrelevances; consider “abruptness,” and Avoid noun strings

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“Abruptness”? What is that?!

(of a style of speech and writing) having many sudden changes from one subject to another; lacking in continuity or smoothness.

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How can you avoid abruptness?

By using verb tenses consistently, you can help ensure smooth expression, for example:

Past tense (e.g., "Husam showed") or present perfect tense (e.g., "researchers have shown") is appropriate for the literature review description of the procedure if the discussion is of past events.

Use past tense (e.g., "anxiety decreased significantly") to describe the results.

Use the present tense (e.g., "the results of Experiment 2 indicate") to discuss implications of the results and to present the conclusions.

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What are Noun Strings?

It refers to several nouns used one after another to modify a final noun, creating another form of abruptness.

Take an example

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“…commonly used investigative expanded issue control question

technique..”

ha? You speak English?? 😒

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This is a dense prose that can be gibberish to a reader unfamiliar with such studies. The reader is sometimes forced to stop to determine how the words relate to one another. Skillful hyphenation can clarify the relationships between words, but often the best approach is to untangle the string.

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Possible ways to untangle the string are as follows:

a control-question technique that is commonly used to expand issues in investigations

an expanded-issue control-question technique that is commonly used in investigations

a common technique of using control questions to investigate expanded issues

a common investigative technique of using expanded issues in control questions

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What has just happened?

• We untangled noun strings by moving the last word to the beginning of the string and filled in with verbs and prepositions.

• We chose synonymous with care. By using synonyms you may unintentionally suggest a subtle difference.

• We used pronouns carefully in order to avoid the dull repetition of a term without introducing ambiguity.

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3) Tone

Tone, in written composition, is an attitude of a writer toward a subject or an audience. Tone is generally conveyed through the choice of words or the viewpoint of a writer on a particular subject.

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Although scientific writing differs in form from literary writing, it need not lack style or be dull. In describing your research, present the ideas and findings directly but aim for an interesting and compelling style and a tone that reflects your involvement with the problem.

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You should present the ideas of others and of your own in an non-combative (non-aggressive) way. Spot the difference in the following example:

“Husam completely overlooked …” (not acceptable)✗“Husam did not address …” (acceptable) ✓

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One more thing about tone 😊 :

You should always imagine the reader when writing, because this will help you achieve the right tone.

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4) Economy of Expression

Say only what needs to be said!

Ok?

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Why do I have to care? Well, there are two main reasons:

1. Your manuscript will be more readable.

2. You’ll increases the chances that the manuscript will be accepted for publication, because the number of printed pages a journal can publish is limited.

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Ok, how can I accomplish this? You can tighten long papers by eliminating:

Redundancy; Wordiness; Jargon; Evasiveness; Overuse of the passive voice; Circumlocution, and; Clumsy prose.

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Not only that, but also take away any:

detailed descriptions of apparatus, participants, or procedures (beyond those called for in the reporting standards);

elaborations of the obvious, and; irrelevant observations or asides.

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RedundancyWriters often use redundant language in an effort to be emphatic. Use no more words than are necessary to convey your meaning. In the following examples, the words are redundant and should be omitted:

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WordinessUnconstrained wordiness lapses into embellishment and flowery writing, which are clearly inappropriate in scientific style. Spot the difference here:

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5) Precision and ClarityIn order to achieve the highest level of clarity and precision, pay attention to:

Word Choice; Colloquial expressions; Jargon; Pronouns; Comparisons, and; Attribution.

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Word ChoiceMake certain that every word means exactly what you intend it to mean. In informal style, for example, feel broadly substitutes for think or believe, but in scientific style such latitude is not acceptable. A similar example is that like is often used when such as is meant:

• Articles by psychologists such as Skinner and Watson ... (correct ✓)

• Like Watson, Skinner believed ... (correct ✓)• Articles by psychologists like Skinner and Watson ... (incorrect

✗)

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Colloquial expressions

Avoid:

• Colloquial expressions (e.g, write up for report), and;

• Approximations of quantity (e.g., quite a large part, practically all, or very few).

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PronounsPronouns confuse readers unless the referent for each pronoun is obvious.

• Pronouns such as this, that, these, and those can be troublesome when they refer to something or someone in a previous sentence.

• Eliminate ambiguity by writing, for example, this test, that trial, these participants, and those reports.

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Ambiguous or illogical comparisons result from omission of key verbs or from nonparallel structure. Consider, for example:

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“Ten-year-olds were more likely to play with age peers than 8-year-olds?”

• Does this sentence mean that 10-year-olds were more likely than 8-year olds to play with age peers? Or;

• Does it mean that 10 year-olds were more likely to play with age peers and less likely to play with 8-yeares Old?

who would care?! 😥 😳 😤

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AttributionInappropriately or illogically attributing action in an effort to be objective can be misleading. Examples of undesirable attribution include use of:

The third person;

Anthropomorphism, and;

The editorial we.

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The third person. To avoid ambiguity, use a personal pronoun rather than the third person when describing steps taken in your experiment.

We reviewed the literature. (correct ✓)The authors reviewed the literature. (incorrect ✗)

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Anthropomorphism. Do not attribute human characteristics to animals or to inanimate sources.

The staff for the community program was persuaded to allow five of the observers to become tutors. (incorrect✗)

The community program was persuaded to allow five of the observers to become tutors. (incorrect ✓)

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Editorial we. For clarity, restrict your use of we to refer only to yourself and your coauthors (use I if you are the sole author of the paper). Broader uses of we may leave your readers wondering to whom you are referring; instead, substitute an appropriate noun or clarify your usage:

• As linguists, we tend to dispute. (correct ✓)• We tend to dispute. (incorrect ✗)

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6) Linguistic Devices Use devices that should attract attention to the idea. Avoid heavy alliteration, rhyming, poetic expressions, and clichés.

Avoid:• Mixed metaphors (e.g., a theory representing one

branch of a growing body of evidence), and;• Words with surplus or unintended meaning (e.g.,

cop for police officer).

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Use figurative expressions with restraint and colorful expressions with care; these expressions can sound strained or forced.

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That’s it, good luck with your study 👍

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References

American Psychological Association. (2011). Publication manual of the American Psychological Association (6th ed.). Washington, DC: Author.

Oxford Dictionaries. (2011) Concise Oxford English Dictionary (12th ed.) UK: Oxford University Press.