Sophie
Sophie
Self Assessment – writing targetsTarget Mark Comment
Write with appropriate structure and organisation.
1 2 3 4 5
I think I organized my speech well. I could of practice a bit more and made sure I know what to say and not look down as much.
Use quality openings
1 2 3 4 5
I think I kind of caught peoples attention. I could of done better by speaking to them in the eyes.
Use paragraphs effectively
1 2 3 4 5
I think I used my paragraphs affectively but could of done better.
Write with detail 1 2 3 4 5
I think I wrote quite a lot of detail but also could of wrote a bit more to make it 2 minutes or more. I think more detail needed to be put in my work.
Set out arguments and draw them to a conclusion effectively
1 2 3 4 5
I think I could of improved on setting out arguments and draw them to a conclusion effectively.
Self Assessment – Speech Rubric
Self Assessment – Questionnaire 1. In what way(s) do you think you could have improved the
delivery of your speech?I think I could of improved on speaking clearly and louder.
I also could of used more expression in my voice. I think I could of also got peoples attention more.
2. After watching everyone’s speech, what were some things that stood out in your mind?
After I heard all of the other speeches I thought that I could of improved. I also thought they were a lot better at reading there speech out then I was and they put a lot of effort in.
2. How did you prepare for the speech?I prepared for the speech by making sure all the cards
were not mixed up. I also made sure I was going to speak loudly by practicing my speech before I went up. I tried to practice nearly every night.
Self Assessment - Questionnaire4. What were two things that you think were
‘fantastic’ about your speech?I think that I was pretty loud and that I
paused when I was meant to. I also thought I used expression and body move meant.
5. How do you feel about giving speeches?When I give speeches I fill excited about
saying them but scared at the same time. I also feel like I have done quite well when it is over. I like giving speeches it is fun.
Peer Assessment
Peer Assessment
Peer Assessment
From Mr Stanhope