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Page 1: Comma, comma, comma, comma, comma chameleon Comma workshop, 29 April 2015.

Comma, comma, comma, comma, comma chameleon

Comma workshop, 29 April 2015

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Welcome!• https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JmcA9LIIXWw

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Basic rules of comma usage• Commas seem like they should be easy, but they are actually

rather difficult because there are so many rules around them.

• However, if you can grasp the four general rules we’ll talk about today, you will go a long way toward using commas effectively.

• Remember, commas serve as dividers within sentences. Their function is to help clarify meaning. If you picture your sentence as a house, then periods serve as walls between rooms, and commas work as screens you may put up to divide a room.

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Rule 1: Use a comma in a compound sentence.

• A compound sentence consists of two independent clauses that are separated by a coordinating conjunction.

• Coordinating conjunctions can be remembered with the mnemonic device:

F(or)

A(nd)

N(or)

B(ut)

O(r)

Y(et)

S(o)

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Examples of Rule 1To do:

I went on a picnic, and the ants took my dessert.

I love all creatures, for I am a vegetarian.

My instinct was not to hurt the ants, but my desire to kill the ants took over, much to my distress.

Not to do:

I went on a picnic and the ants took my dessert.

I went on a picnic, and ate fried tofu.

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A side note on comma splices:• If you do not have a coordinating conjunction between two

independent clauses, you cannot use simply a comma to connect them. This results in a comma splice.

EXAMPLE: I went on a picnic, the ants took my dessert.

How can you fix the above sentence to remove the comma splice?

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Rule 2: Use a comma to set off introductory or nonessential information.

• Nonessential information is anything that could be removed from the sentence without significantly altering its meaning.

• If the nonessential information appears in the middle of a sentence, you must use commas around the information (before and after).

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Examples of Rule 2to do:

Because it looked like rain, I took an umbrella on the picnic.

The ants, black in color, made a try for my chicken too.

Maybe:

In spring, it often rains.

not to do:

I took an umbrella on the picnic, because it looked like rain.

The, black, ants tried to eat everything.

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A note about “that” and “which”• “Which” introduces nonessential information and therefore

needs commas.

• “That” introduces essential information and therefore does NOT need commas.

EXAMPLE: The picnic area, which was in a grassy meadow, was far from where I lived.

The chicken that I took to the picnic was from Safeway.

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Rule 3: Use a comma to separate items in a series

• This includes the serial comma!!

• The serial comma is the comma that comes before “and” or “or” and the final item in the series. It is also called the Oxford comma.

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Examples of Rule 3to do:

The dessert was a pie with cherries, berries, and apples.

I’d like to thank my classmates, Bob, and William Shakespeare.

not to do:

The chicken was tasteless, dry and cold.

I’d like to thank my classmates, Bob and William Shakespeare.

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Why is the serial comma so important?

• You may have been told that it is not necessary. But it is (the exception is if you are a journalist).

• Sometimes your sentence can be misread without it!

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Rule 4: • Use a comma before dialogue or a quotation.

• Do not use one after “that” because the dialogue or quotation is integrated into your introductory sentence (does not need to be divided from it).

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Examples of Rule 4 to do:

I said to the ants, “Give me back my dessert!”

According to Charles Darwin, “Ants are nature’s little scavengers.”

not to do:

The ants said “Never!”

I said that, “Ants are not my friends.”

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Final thought• Sometimes you want to use a comma for stylistic effect, to

make your reader pause.

EXAMPLE: By going on picnic I learned everything about ants, and nothing.

• Be very judicious in using this technique … you don’t know want to put multiple screens up in the living room!

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Questions?

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Activities and wrap-up• Look through comma section in different writing handbooks.

Which of the multiple rules discussed there fit into these four rules I’ve provided you?

• Comma quiz (open book and open note).

• Discuss answers to quiz.

• Are there any other aspects of commas that you wish we had talked about here today?

• Remember, the Writing Center can help you with all your writing needs!