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Comparison/ contrast essaysComparison/ contrast essaysWindy Freska, Ns. SkepWindy Freska, Ns. Skep

Comparison/ contrast essaysComparison/ contrast essaysWindy Freska, Ns. SkepWindy Freska, Ns. Skep

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CompareCompareCompareCompare

tell what is the same about two tell what is the same about two or more thingsor more things

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Oranges and BananasOranges and BananasOranges and BananasOranges and Bananas

You eat both of them.They are both fruits.You have to peel both of them.

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ContrastContrastContrastContrast

tell what is different about two tell what is different about two or more thingsor more things

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Oranges and BananasOranges and BananasOranges and BananasOranges and Bananas

Oranges are orange. Bananas are yellow.

Oranges are round. Bananas are long.

Oranges have seeds. Bananas don’t have seeds.

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Do I want this car … ?

Do I want this car … ?

… or do I want that

other car?

… or do I want that

other car?

Instructions for the Instructions for the Comparison or Contrast EssayComparison or Contrast Essay

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Do I want this guy … ?

Do I want this guy … ? … or do I

want that guy?

… or do I want that

guy?

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Do I want to visit Egypt on my next vacation

… ?

Do I want to visit Egypt on my next vacation

… ?

… or do I want to go to Las

Vegas?

… or do I want to go to Las

Vegas?

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Do I want to eat something

healthy… ?

Do I want to eat something

healthy… ?

… or do I want something

bad?

… or do I want something

bad?

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Understand what comparison or Understand what comparison or contrast requires you to do.contrast requires you to do.Understand what comparison or Understand what comparison or contrast requires you to do.contrast requires you to do.

Always choose two Always choose two equalequal items—two cars, items—two cars, two vacations, two sports stars—two vacations, two sports stars—notnot two two unequal items, like a car and an octopus.unequal items, like a car and an octopus.Next, decide if you want to Next, decide if you want to comparecompare or or contrastcontrast as your primary strategy. The essay as your primary strategy. The essay should be 80/20 in favor of one strategy, not should be 80/20 in favor of one strategy, not 50/50.50/50.Your job is to Your job is to interestinterest the reader. Choose the reader. Choose points to discuss that are points to discuss that are not immediately not immediately obviousobvious. .

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Now let’s test Now let’s test your your

understanding .understanding . .. ..

Now let’s test Now let’s test your your

understanding .understanding . .. ..

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A baby is like a vacuum cleaner.A baby is like a vacuum cleaner.A baby is like a vacuum cleaner.A baby is like a vacuum cleaner.

WRONG!WRONG!

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Even though my little brother Fred Even though my little brother Fred is 20 years my junior, he and I have is 20 years my junior, he and I have much in common.much in common.

Even though my little brother Fred Even though my little brother Fred is 20 years my junior, he and I have is 20 years my junior, he and I have much in common.much in common.Yeah, Yeah, baby!baby!

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My sister and I look alike, have My sister and I look alike, have common hobbies, and enjoy the common hobbies, and enjoy the same foods.same foods.

My sister and I look alike, have My sister and I look alike, have common hobbies, and enjoy the common hobbies, and enjoy the same foods.same foods.

Boring!Boring!

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Even though Venus and Serena Williams are Even though Venus and Serena Williams are both professional tennis stars, they differ in their both professional tennis stars, they differ in their opinions about men, movies, and music.opinions about men, movies, and music.

Even though Venus and Serena Williams are Even though Venus and Serena Williams are both professional tennis stars, they differ in their both professional tennis stars, they differ in their opinions about men, movies, and music.opinions about men, movies, and music.

Excellent!Excellent!

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Make the comparison or contrast Make the comparison or contrast interestinginteresting..Make the comparison or contrast Make the comparison or contrast interestinginteresting..

Be sure that your essay has a Be sure that your essay has a purposepurpose. Ask . Ask yourself this important question: Why would yourself this important question: Why would anyone want to read this comparison or anyone want to read this comparison or contrast?contrast?

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Format the Format the Pattern APattern A outline outline correctly.correctly.Format the Format the Pattern APattern A outline outline correctly.correctly.

I.I. Point XPoint XA.A. Subject ASubject A

1.1. Detail 1Detail 1

2.2. Detail 2Detail 2

3.3. Detail 3Detail 3

B.B. Subject BSubject B1.1. Detail 1Detail 1

2.2. Detail 2Detail 2

3.3. Detail 3Detail 3

I.I. Point XPoint XA.A. Subject ASubject A

1.1. Detail 1Detail 1

2.2. Detail 2Detail 2

3.3. Detail 3Detail 3

B.B. Subject BSubject B1.1. Detail 1Detail 1

2.2. Detail 2Detail 2

3.3. Detail 3Detail 3

Roman numerals Roman numerals address the address the XX, , YY, and , and ZZ from the thesis from the thesis statement.statement.

Capital letter ACapital letter A is is always for the always for the first first subjectsubject; ; capital capital letter Bletter B is always for is always for the the second subjectsecond subject..

A A detaildetail for Subject A for Subject A must correspond to a must correspond to a detaildetail for Subject B.for Subject B.

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Pattern B Outline Topics:Pattern B Outline Topics:Expectation vs. RealityExpectation vs. Reality

Pattern B Outline Topics:Pattern B Outline Topics:Expectation vs. RealityExpectation vs. Reality

VacationVacation

ClassClass

DateDate

CarCar

FriendFriend

PetPet

JobJob

ComputerComputer

SchoolSchool

ScholarshipScholarship

ChurchChurch

ConcertConcert

Sports eventSports event

MembershipMembership

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Your two movie options:Your two movie options:Your two movie options:Your two movie options:

Title:Title: CinderellaCinderella

Directors:Directors: Clyde Clyde Geronimi, Wilfred Geronimi, Wilfred Jackson, and Jackson, and Hamilton LuskeHamilton Luske

Studio:Studio: Walt Walt Disney PicturesDisney Pictures

Year:Year: 1950 1950

Title:Title: Snow White Snow White and the Seven and the Seven DwarfsDwarfs

Director:Director: David David HandHand

Studio:Studio: Walt Walt Disney PicturesDisney Pictures

Year:Year: 1937 1937

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Your two author options:Your two author options:Your two author options:Your two author options:

Authors:Authors: Jacob Jacob Grimm and Wilhelm Grimm and Wilhelm Grimm Grimm

Title:Title: “Cinderella” “Cinderella” or “Little Snow or “Little Snow White”White”

Website:Website: National National GeographicGeographic

Author:Author: Anne Anne SextonSexton

Title:Title: “Cinderella” “Cinderella” or “Snow White and or “Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs”the Seven Dwarfs”

Website:Website: Miami Miami University University or or Poets.orgPoets.org

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Comparison TransitionsComparison TransitionsComparison TransitionsComparison Transitions

in the same wayin the same way

in a similar wayin a similar way

and, also, in additionand, also, in addition

as well asas well as

both, neitherboth, neither

each ofeach of

just as…sojust as…so

similar tosimilar to

moreovermoreover

similarlysimilarly

likelike

tootoo

the samethe same

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Contrast transitionsContrast transitionsContrast transitionsContrast transitions

AlthoughAlthough unlikeunlike

WhereasWhereas different fromdifferent from

ButBut in contrast within contrast with

howeverhowever

converselyconversely

on the other handon the other hand

on the contraryon the contrary

in contrastin contrast

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The End.The End.The End.The End.

Look, I don’t have time for this. I’m

going to get to work.

Look, I don’t have time for this. I’m

going to get to work.